Standing alone backstage....wondering what to do.

Xavier Everett:It's time,for change in OCW.For a new era to begin.The Era of Xtreme.The new face of OCW,will very well be me.But now,all I have to do,is prove it's true for this era to begin.Because.....when you're Xtreme.....you're unstoppable.

You get and E for effort, but that's about it.

 

Try to put more time and thought into your roleplays.

 

This isn't really a roleplay anyway, it's just a run on sentence.

 

You also didn't use the Morrison Method of roleplaying, check out the Rules and Regulations sub forum for how to write a proper rp.

 

Roleplays are the bread and butter of your character, half ass it and that's how your wrestler will be viewed, as a half ass busta.

 

Read other roleplays, watch past shows, and learn how others were successful.

You gotta start somwhere!! Far from perfect but keep pluggin away....Ive been here a year and my RPs have slowly gotten better so just keep writing.