Damien Kain Posted December 4, 2012 Posted December 4, 2012 ** Scene opens inside a bar outside Delaware there are about 40 bikes lined up outside. We walk to the back of the bar where Damien Kain sits with a familiar women with her Hood up. Kain with a beer and shot in hand is talking as the camera moves in.+++ Kain: The show is running wild last week. I missed my match due to a death in the family. So I got home and turned the TV on to watch. Hollywood still messing with Aiden's head. Women: I saw. Kain: Aiden needs to man up and put his women in check. Dawg get a chain. +Women shakes her head+ Kain: I mean Grace raises my flag too but I'm not having a who got the biggest d*ck contest. He says he was pounding his balls into her endzone when actually he was pounding his balls in his hand. I seenhis type before. +Kain takes his shot and begins to ramble on.+ Kain: You got to mma fighters here. You ask yourself why I'll tell you Cuz they can't fight there way out a bag. Women: Woo Damien. Kain: You got Hazzard getting hit with like 20 finshers and still walking around. He should be a damn zombie. +Kain: takes another shot+ Women: Right Kain: Then you got these to Misfits beating the hell out each other. They should just make up and hold a concert somewhere. A Jap or Chinatown reject talking bout a ex title when he on the rookie show. +Kain lights a cigarette and lights the women's too and continues+ Women: thank you Kain: (nods) You got Mr. Snake in the grass trying to be a good Guy wtf is McGee thinking with his superhero logo there a snake right there. Women: Everyone changes. I see you made the ppv. Kain: Yes Against Ricky Martin wanna be half of the Misfits and OCW resident superhero. You will see Damien as his true bad ass biker form. Beating heads taking names. Kain: Enough OCW talk may I know your name since you been sitting listening to me ramble. Women: Yes it's Eerie... Eerie Sunshine. +Eerie removes her goodies unzips it and reveals herself. Kain: your Fu*cling beautiful Eerie: (smiles a evil grin) thank you Kain: I've seen u before? Eerie: Nope but there are some things I like to say to you. About how I can help with ya career and wheteits going. Kain: Aight lets go. (Stands to leave throws money on table) +Eerie stands grabs her goodies and grabs Kains arm Kisses his cheek and they start to walk out.+ 2 http://i53.tinypic.com/28ksp6g.png
Omar Gibbs Posted December 4, 2012 Posted December 4, 2012 Good shit Damien... Seen alot of progression in your rp work and on your caw formula. Awesome sauce working with Eeire.. There are a few minor things you could work on... Some basic typo's/ grammar and you kinda just missed on the Morrison Method. Put scenery, actions and character names in bold and leave out the odd symbols... An rp of this quality would have helped fill out a thinned out Ambition show last week. Hopefully you build on your momentum and looking forward to what you got next week. 2x OCW Hardcore Champion 2x OCW Tag Team Champion "Strong Street Style Son"-Mez Murdock If You Have A Problem, If No One Else Can Help, And If You Can Find Them,Maybe You Can Hire...The A-Team
Damien Kain Posted December 4, 2012 Author Posted December 4, 2012 Lol thanks Gibbs but done from cell. Not all opinions are here. And with moving and a aunt passing missed the show. http://i53.tinypic.com/28ksp6g.png
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