Ambition Episode 35!

[Damien Kain]

ok i'll make a couple street attires up i used to use a long time ago and changed pato get up with me.

[Mr.Sensation]

Trick is to go into detail on the attire. and it will stand out. I mean look at Gibbs, he has a shit load of nuances in his "Street Gear"

[Evan KnoXxX]

Not going to post a lot right now as getting late and got to be up early for work tomorrow.

 

However I do want to say well done to all the rooks that put in the work for Ambition. I am pretty excited for OCW right now. The shows just keep getting better and better. Seriously well done and will comment a lot more tomorrow when I get home.

[Tanner Shelton]

Tanner Shelton

 

Entrance: A

The tapping ground entrance has been used now by 3 people, Hostile (also sXe) Dimsmore, and yourself. I'd be a trendsetter and get something new. My recommendation is the punk Clock Clobbering time thing, I mean you got the ring in move might as well use the start one. Digging the entrance, music and everything. As I type this I have a smile on my face Welcome To The Masquerade!

 

Look: A

You've made Grey The Tanner SHELDON, Shelton color. We learned before your Straight Edge, without much out of you and that's pretty much what its about. You need to spend some time and sort out the tattoos really personalize them or at least a sleeve.

Presence: B

Picking up the style quite nicely. I can't tell if your in Dm's a lot or if your really good at faking it till you make it. You still got a ways to go as you seem to get flustered quickly.

Move-set: B-

It seems to be evolving, not sure if you took my unorthodox comment to heart yet. Although that stomp roll over leg wrench if suitably sweet. As I mentioned earlier, lose the MMA punches (everyone is doing them), same with "Everybody Kiiiiiiiiicks sommmmmme times" (Danial Bryan Kick), same with Soda Twist (EEEEEEEEEEEVERY body is using it). I like the running shin kick sig, but I feel a bunch of these jerkoffs are using that as a standard move. Diamond Cutter seems odd for your build. Don't hate it don't love it.

Closing Thoughts:

Great stride moving forward, you def got a future here.

 

Thank you, I apreciate (not even sure of the correct spelling) the comments and advice, im still putting those little touches on my entrance and move set, i contiplated the punk stage move but wasnt sure how well it would be recieved.and the kicks were more a place holder then aything. I know the diamond cutter is odd, thats why i was hesitant to use it, but didnt think to change it to another variation before the match, one again thank you for the comments and advice

 

Tanner "sheldon" Shelton

[Matsuda]

Ambition 2010 - Ambition hot shots Tiberius Dupree and Dimsmore feud over Dimsmores ex-wife.

 

Ambition 2012 - Ambition hot shots Aiden Ryan and Mike Hollywood feud over Ryan's soon to be ex girlfriend.

 

The more things change the more things stay the same! Not a bad thing. I blame society, in the absence of a title, men will fight over a woman.

[Mr.Sensation]

Eric Scofield

 

Entrance: C+

Lose the pyro, had in game music not sure if that's your theme, or all the recorder could come up with need another show to gauge. the actual entrance is quite nice baring pyro so you get a C+ instead of C-

Look: C -

You look like Our Hero, and its freaking me out, hit up the sliders just a tad. The idea is that Eric Reflex Scofield is a fighter. I see you kinda tried to use Brock's MMA WWE attire as a base idea. It didn't work, looks like your wearing flood pants and construction boots. You got quite a few examples of what you can do. Dan the beast Severen, Ken Shamrock, Daniel Puder, Anderson Silva, Mayhem Miller. You basically need to just fix the shorts and boots, maybe kick pads or something. Other than that you got your work cut out for you. You also look a little small, but that could work for you if your mostly striking.

Presence: B

You kept the pace with McGee who is overly aggressive. Your picking up the basics of FPR and your fairly competent when it comes to reversal.

Move-Set: B

Sean was on you like white on rice, but what I saw I liked your move set suited a guy who says he is a fighter. I'd add a few judo tosses, and maybe an arm drag or 2 to solidify. Or some submission work, like to add The Coast 2 Coast was a nice touch as no one uses it. In closing Hells Gate is great, just note you need to hit an impact finisher before you attempt a sub, that is paramount.

Closing Thoughts:

Cleanup the entrance music issue, and fix the attire and you are well on your way sir.

[Mr.Sensation]

Michael Hollywood

 

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[Michael Hollywood]

Than you. I take this as I'm doing good.

[Eric Scofield]

Eric Scofield

 

Entrance: C+

Lose the pyro, had in game music not sure if that's your theme, or all the recorder could come up with need another show to gauge. the actual entrance is quite nice baring pyro so you get a C+ instead of C-

Look: C -

You look like Our Hero, and its freaking me out, hit up the sliders just a tad. The idea is that Eric Reflex Scofield is a fighter. I see you kinda tried to use Brock's MMA WWE attire as a base idea. It didn't work, looks like your wearing flood pants and construction boots. You got quite a few examples of what you can do. Dan the beast Severen, Ken Shamrock, Daniel Puder, Anderson Silva, Mayhem Miller. You basically need to just fix the shorts and boots, maybe kick pads or something. Other than that you got your work cut out for you. You also look a little small, but that could work for you if your mostly striking.

Presence: B

You kept the pace with McGee who is overly aggressive. Your picking up the basics of FPR and your fairly competent when it comes to reversal.

Move-Set: B

Sean was on you like white on rice, but what I saw I liked your move set suited a guy who says he is a fighter. I'd add a few judo tosses, and maybe an arm drag or 2 to solidify. Or some submission work, like to add The Coast 2 Coast was a nice touch as no one uses it. In closing Hells Gate is great, just note you need to hit an impact finisher before you attempt a sub, that is paramount.

Closing Thoughts:

Cleanup the entrance music issue, and fix the attire and you are well on your way sir.

 

Thanks for the critiques. Both the entrance and the moveset was actually entire revamped after that match. I also didn't like them at all. I actually did land two finishers before the hells gate but it was such a basic judo throw that it didn't even look like it. That's all been fixed. New finishers, new signatures. As for the attire, I have no idea who Our Hero is or what he looks like, and I actually haven't seen Brock Lesnar in WWE, only in UFC, so it's entirely coincidental if I have similar attire. I think it's just that both Lesnar and my CAW are going for modern MMA-style fighters and that just happens to be basic MMA shorts. I'll see about how I can switch it up a bit though. Thanks.

[Mr.Sensation]

Aiden Ryan

 

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Lose the bionic knees