Ambition Episode 35!

[Mr.Sensation]

In response to "There better be a reason why we didnt get our match"

There is a good reason, Matsuda saw it fit to spare OCW and my sanity from watching a car crash. The sheer thought of my blood pressure rising to an uncontrollable level thus killing me instantly, which would then lead to the inevitable downfall of our organization as my credit card slowly depleted from my lifeless body. Maybe he wanted to spare you the trouble of having 40 people call you 3 an band of assholes in succession. Maybe he for saw the siesemic current of negativity that would wash upon your shores at such a degree that you house would float away to another continent.

 

Or maybe he made the judgement call that you 3 are without a shadow of a doubt in my last 8 years of service to this website, the 3 most socially inept, irresponsible, thoughtless, foolhardy, ass backwards, lowest common denominator set of walmart shopping, Cheesecake factory eating, piles of elephant shit I have ever had the displeasure of seeing.

 

Maybe he did you a favor by pointing out the glaringly obvious lack of mental fortitude needed on a basic level to function in this organization. So in short thank you for summing up my reservations in only a few words. Take your buddies, about fucking face, and ride off into the sunset like the 3 amigos, if the 3 amigos where born with a learning disability and sprinkled with Lou Gehrig s disease.

 

TNA got 3 slots for you. Fucking whelps.

 

As for the rest of you Greenhorns, the above is the fast track out of here. Learn from the mistakes of the stupid, ask questions watch shows, discuss and let your voice be heard. To be safe if you have a strong opinion word it in such a way you don't sound like a douchebag.

 

And lastly Don't fuck with my good nature, good day.

[Patolomai]

Loving Michael Hollwoods development... Each week he is adding little wrinkles that I hope stick... Hope you keep "The entourage" and I lulz at "The number 1 freak" good shit Hollywood.

 

Which brings me to another point only so many can take claim to that arrogant best there is gimmick. It seems like a few have gripped there teeth into this gimmick on Ambition... Not to discourage but Michael Hollywood pretty much has this locked up which is a good thing for the rest of you rooks.

 

Take this upon yourself to go in a fresh direction... Do something new... Something OCW doesn't have right now. Being different will draw you the right type of attention...

 

 

Oh yeah... Stop calling out Parker... You haven't earned a OCW contract yet... Work with eachother and build your "own" history... Ambition was the greatest time in my OCW career and the fellahs in my class are people I consider friends in and out of the community... Use this open world sandbox no other time will you and your classmates have "complete" control of a show... Don't waste it.

[Evan KnoXxX]

Maybe should call it the Pato Era, as he is the only motherfucker with any kind of common fucking sense and decency.

 

Pato reminds me off Nate! Everyone could learn a lot from him.

[Patolomai]

And just as I finish typing and read the next segment I get awesome sauce from Aiden Ryan and a debuting Bombshell who we in fact we find out is his girlfriend...

 

This is what I'm talking about Ryan and Hollywood obviously communicated prior to Ambition to link their RP's and appear to be building a nice little feud... Smart rooks... Pair up now the PPV Chill Faktor is right around the corner... Make yourselfs relevant if you want a shot at a PPV check...

[Michael Hollywood]

Loving Michael Hollwoods development... Each week he is adding little wrinkles that I hope stick... Hope you keep "The entourage" and I lulz at "The number 1 freak" good shit Hollywood.

 

Which brings me to another point only so many can take claim to that arrogant best there is gimmick. It seems like a few have gripped there teeth into this gimmick on Ambition... Not to discourage but Michael Hollywood pretty much has this locked up which is a good thing for the rest of you rooks.

 

Take this upon yourself to go I a fresh direction... Do something new... Something OCW doesn't have right now. Being different will draw you the right type of attention...

 

 

Oh yeah... Stop calling out Parker... You haven't earned a OCW contract yet... Work with eachother and build your "own" history... Ambition was the greatest time in my OCW career and the fellahs in my class are people I consider friends in and out of the community... Use this open world sandbox no other time will you and your classmates have "complete" control of a show... Don't waste it.

 

Thank you Pato. I have been working hard on my character development both inside and outside of the ring to hopefully become a very entertaining member of OCW and to help out in any way that I can and of course to hopefully one day make it to Riot.

[Mr.Sensation]

Report Card time

 

Damian Sebastian Kain

 

Entrance: B

Music ain't my cup of tea, feels like a RnB track but it's not just about me its what the people think. Also for some reason after the pyro for about 4 seconds it looks like you took a shit in your pants also get rid of the coloring, it goes from green to red to flickering, I don't have seizures but I almost did. Other than that nit pick, I like it.

 

Look: B+

Vast improvement, you look like a random but only cuz of the tattoos. That's not to say you don't fit in you do, it just doesn't feel like it's coming together as it should. So what you should do is keep an eye out on the CC for those custom logos for all the shit people do and snag one and hook up the caw. If you don't do that your still doing alright, I don't get the towel and the jeff hardy arm bad, but all in all great improvement. Keep it up.

Presence: B

Huge change, for the better. Your grasping the concepts quite well. I would say your nearly there ethically and FPR wise. I had some reservations as I was informed you still needed some work. But if you keep fighting good people you will pick up good habits.

 

Move-set:B

Nice set, actually can't complain. From what I've seen it's a nice assortment of power moves, but its not overbearing. I would add some old school hoss power moves though, like a tough looking scoop slam, and a suplex. I would probably lose the MMA punches, over used.

Closing Thoughts:

Great progression from a 1 show to another. Get some slick logos to use, keep fighting people you can learn from, keep learning and most of all don't up and flake and you'll do fine.

 

As for SHVY as thats what your looking for. At this time, no your guy looks hoss but not that hoss to me. You'll be fine as a Heavy for now.

[Patolomai]

Report Card time

 

Damian Sebastian Kain

 

[/color]Look: B+

[/b]Vast improvement, you look like a random but only cuz of the tattoos. That's not to say you don't fit in you do, it just doesn't feel like it's coming together as it should. So what you should do is keep an eye out on the CC for those custom logos for all the shit people do and snag one and hook up the caw. If you don't do that your still doing alright, I don't get the towel and the jeff hardy arm bad, but all in all great improvement. Keep it up.

 

If it were me I would go for a completely different look... I would shy away from the wrestling attires with your CAW look and back story... I would almost go with more of a biker sort of street attire look, almost like I do with Gibbs...

[Mr.Sensation]

Tanner Shelton

 

Entrance: A

The tapping ground entrance has been used now by 3 people, Hostile (also sXe) Dimsmore, and yourself. I'd be a trendsetter and get something new. My recommendation is the punk Clock Clobbering time thing, I mean you got the ring in move might as well use the start one. Digging the entrance, music and everything. As I type this I have a smile on my face Welcome To The Masquerade!

 

Look: A

You've made Grey The Tanner SHELDON, Shelton color. We learned before your Straight Edge, without much out of you and that's pretty much what its about. You need to spend some time and sort out the tattoos really personalize them or at least a sleeve.

Presence: B

Picking up the style quite nicely. I can't tell if your in Dm's a lot or if your really good at faking it till you make it. You still got a ways to go as you seem to get flustered quickly.

Move-set: B-

It seems to be evolving, not sure if you took my unorthodox comment to heart yet. Although that stomp roll over leg wrench if suitably sweet. As I mentioned earlier, lose the MMA punches (everyone is doing them), same with "Everybody Kiiiiiiiiicks sommmmmme times" (Danial Bryan Kick), same with Soda Twist (EEEEEEEEEEEVERY body is using it). I like the running shin kick sig, but I feel a bunch of these jerkoffs are using that as a standard move. Diamond Cutter seems odd for your build. Don't hate it don't love it.

Closing Thoughts:

Great stride moving forward, you def got a future here.

[Damien Kain]

arm band is basically for the clothesline sig. and ill work more on intro and add some old school moves also other sig is miltary press slam

[Mr.Sensation]

If it were me I would go for a completely different look... I would shy away from the wrestling attires with your CAW look and back story... I would almost go with more of a biker sort of street attire look, almost like I do with Gibbs...

 

I would be ok with this. We have like no one who uses street clothes, as its frowned upon. But if done right (Gibbs now, Rd Money Then) it helps set you aside as someone special. Something to consider.

 

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