Riot 504: Begone THOT!

[Valkyrie]

So I've seen some comments in Discord about my Valkyrie comments which seem to have been taken the wrong way.

 

First off, yes, I know Valk's first language isn't English, and in that respect she writes really fucking well cos English is a confusing language if not your native tongue.

 

Secondly, it wasn't only the "I can do whatever I want" line by itself. If I remember correctly she had just KICKED A SECURITY GUARD IN THE DICK and then said that. Like "fuck you guys, I can kick you if I want to". That's just how it came across while reading it. Plus, hasn't she kicked some other staff members recently?

 

First off, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it as I always do :)

 

With this segment, our intention was to bring the rivalry to the next level with Stixx proving she is the "vicious showgirl" as she calls herself and Valkyrie showing a different, darker side of her that is coming out after weeks and weeks of bullying.

 

Selling Stixx was the easiest part, while giving Valk her cool looking moment proved to be a little be harder than expected. The security guard was supposed to be Cheryl's bodyguard so, you know, kinda like those crooked cops in GTA that you don't feel bad about shooting, if it makes any sense :D Even though I understand that looked heelish (Valk never kicked any other staff member though, if I remember correctly)

 

The Aerith's protection bit is where my English failed me. I now realize that the way it reads, it looks like Aerith is somehow influential in the locker room, but it's not the case at all. What I meant was that Valkyrie looks (looked?) at Aerith like a sort of guardian angel, that saves her when needed (Turmoil 200, for ex.)

[Justin Jehst]

First off, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it as I always do :)

 

With this segment, our intention was to bring the rivalry to the next level with Stixx proving she is the "vicious showgirl" as she calls herself and Valkyrie showing a different, darker side of her that is coming out after weeks and weeks of bullying.

 

Selling Stixx was the easiest part, while giving Valk her cool looking moment proved to be a little be harder than expected. The security guard was supposed to be Cheryl's bodyguard so, you know, kinda like those crooked cops in GTA that you don't feel bad about shooting, if it makes any sense :D Even though I understand that looked heelish (Valk never kicked any other staff member though, if I remember correctly)

 

The Aerith's protection bit is where my English failed me. I now realize that the way it reads, it looks like Aerith is somehow influential in the locker room, but it's not the case at all. What I meant was that Valkyrie looks (looked?) at Aerith like a sort of guardian angel, that saves her when needed (Turmoil 200, for ex.)

 

Thanks for clearing that up. I didn't realize they were Cheryl's protection force, if that's the case then go ahead and kick the other one in the bollocks too.

 

And with Aerith, I've been following the story, it must've just been the English thing that perhaps I didn't think about when reading through the segment as your writing is very good; I wouldn't be able to tell it was your second language if I was unaware.