Some insider peeks at what the OCW women's division should be on the lookout for! The official OCW entrance for Rachel Lochlan!

 

 

'tis an entrance video.  Very nice.  What song is that?

Dig the vibe and look.  Face and attire look solid.  

 

Because we rely on pre-existing entrance movements/animations, there's not much I can critique concerning that.  Mainly, you want the animations to fit your character's persona/gimmick/attitude, and in this case, it seems to do just that.

 

However, because of limitations on entrance visuals, the entrance theme is that much more important if you want to stand out.

I like the music and I believe it fits your character. The first few seconds are also very important, as this is what our brains/memory will eventually associate with your character.

 

Having said that, my only suggestion --and a minor one at that-- would be to add something right before your music hits, because it's so sudden and unrelenting.  Could be something as simple as the sound of wind; an extended musical note that rises right before your song kicks in.  Just something to give the actual "beat drop" some contrast.

 

You could even just time the drop with an image or your actual physical entrance, if you're good at lining up video and audio.  

Very nice entrance video. Keep up the good work. 

17 hours ago, Michael Morrison said:

'tis an entrance video.  Very nice.  What song is that?

Dig the vibe and look.  Face and attire look solid.  

 

Because we rely on pre-existing entrance movements/animations, there's not much I can critique concerning that.  Mainly, you want the animations to fit your character's persona/gimmick/attitude, and in this case, it seems to do just that.

 

However, because of limitations on entrance visuals, the entrance theme is that much more important if you want to stand out.

I like the music and I believe it fits your character. The first few seconds are also very important, as this is what our brains/memory will eventually associate with your character.

 

Having said that, my only suggestion --and a minor one at that-- would be to add something right before your music hits, because it's so sudden and unrelenting.  Could be something as simple as the sound of wind; an extended musical note that rises right before your song kicks in.  Just something to give the actual "beat drop" some contrast.

 

You could even just time the drop with an image or your actual physical entrance, if you're good at lining up video and audio.  

 

The intro could be the waterman AKA h2o AKA dirty Doc popping his cork because of the baby hairs