B-17 Posted February 13, 2016 Posted February 13, 2016 I'm dropping a huge review later tonight and if you haven't posted in support of this awesome show by then I will pay sen to change all your names to Smythe. 1 "Amatuer cheat hunter, Resident OCWFED historian, Lover of spreadsheets, data and HOI, MASTER OF THE GOKART" *I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANGE MY PROFILE!*
B-17 Posted February 13, 2016 Posted February 13, 2016 -The opening promo was very strong work. Everyone involved looked better. Kass got to insult everyone and parade that he was the champion. He beat B-17, he beat Jackson. So he is the biggest heel on Turmoil, no doubt. Before breaking down the promo, I do feel there might have been too much humor injected from Jimmy and I'm not sure how I feel about Jackson saying "Fruity Booty Clan". That being said, Jimmy got a big rub, surrounded by three established guys and getting the nod from from B-17 is Kayfabe big deal. But as for his individual section I didn't feel that you accomplished much more than calling me and Jack Bert and Ernie. You just kinda added the "I'm gonna win" speech. I enjoyed being more serious in this promo. The beer in the back is fun to do but I enjoyed being able to remind people that I was (I believe) the last person to beat Kass on Turmoil. B-17 has a legit claim to facing Kass. Jackson got to play devil advocate. Don't really know what he is going to do. So we had the Heel (Kas) The Underdog (Jim) the Face (B) and the Tweener (Jack). That's some strong balance and I hope it remains......but more on that later. -Sid and Seb...I can't be the only person that got a bit confused. -Sophia I want to work with. You seem like you got some good ideas to run with and I've got divas to use. Just let me know. But that CAW was damn good, both of them are. -Joe, I love how humble you are. You wrote an rp where you looked a bit foolish. I'm cheering for you. I seriously see Jean Claude Van Damme in these promos. Have I seen your guy yet? Stacey might have a choice to make between you and Loki. Sadly Loki is too damn awesome for me to ignore. -I agree with a previous statement. Morrison is 1/2 beer money. I see it. I want it. I like how you used Turmoil's relevance at the last PPV in your material. It's organic it would never be the same thing again. Good thinking. Black, keep chugging along. It will stick, need some wins but they will come, I mean legit ones. Morrison, I've seen that skull on the front of your trunks everywhere. It's very popular. As for the match I liked the ending and overall it was ok. I hope Black comes back with something big for vengeance because that was a stone cold beat down that needs an answer. Lol #Blackmatchesdon'tmatter.....I hope that does not become a thing. -Here is my biggest issue with Jimmy. You came across as a Face these last few weeks.....but I see you as a heel. Coming out and stealing the entrance, genius. But I'm confused of the identity of Jimmy along with the placement of your RP. I mean you are in the main event, why even care about the Janitor, which I don't get? It felt out of place. Being face is not boring. It just means you need to limit yourself. And of course I could be misinterpreting your intentions. Sometimes people ask if I'm a heel. I'm not so I can understand how things can be misconstrued. Abbott v. Sid was a good match. Two bigger guys hitting hard. We really need to get Sid some wins. He has the look, he is a good sport. The character needs to be developed, right now he is just the mustache guy who likes to attack people. I get that he hit you, but it feels like I've seen you attacking people quite a bit anyways. I also want to see direction for Sid as the guy being the character is someone I like to speak with and knows what he is dong. But I hate leon and his return. No. I want your other character. -The B-17 C4 side story is something I'm enjoying working on. Now it might seem hypocritical to say that this promo was appropriate when I was talking about Jimmy's side adventures, but this is all about finding out who stole my opportunity to be Turmoil champ originally. And I'm loving it. Mugen has made this experience a great one. There are so many intriguing options to run with and while it is not the main storyline I still love it. -Turmoil is plenty welcoming of newcomers. We struggle with saviors. -Aries v. Kass was as expected. I like the look of Aries now and I continue to hate Kass (KF). Still that fat look on Aries needs to get fatter. I'm talking "I'm sorry, but we have to take the foot" fat. Still I love the designs you have and I'm happy you are back to working with us. -Hey I'm on board with what everyone has been saying. I didn't get the rookie promo. It felt convoluted. However, the backfiring car was funny. We've all been there. Shit car, no money, it's the OCW way. We don't get paid enough. How are we not friendly? Seriously have a beer with B and Jack (if we are still friends). I'm honestly rooting for all of you guys, but please avoid phrases like "Best in the World" "dominate" "save". Not because we have dibs on it but you put a shit ton of pressure on yourselves to win right away. And we don't know you. Build yourself first and then say you are going to kick ass. It's like seeing 02 Randy Orton tell people he is going to dominate the WWE. Yeah, ok generic tribal band. Build...then destroy. -I want feedback on Loki. I want to know what you guys think. I'm having fun with. The whole faceless man may have been a bit much, but it was fun to write. The main event was fun stuff. While the match could have been better, no one looked weak. I took most of the beating it seemed....and I was superkicked from behind by my best bud, speared, jumped on, piledriven...all by Jack and Jimmy got the victory....frick. But that is how it should have gone down. I've got history with Kass and I can pick that up whenever. Jimmy is the hot guy right now and Jack wants a rematch. The strongest part of the story is those two and it keep Jack and I from facing each other one on one. Congrats to Jim, but you stole that win and we will meet again. Good job all around. I'm looking forward to working with all of you. Except Dylan. Fucking asshole, crawl back up Kass's ass. 3 "Amatuer cheat hunter, Resident OCWFED historian, Lover of spreadsheets, data and HOI, MASTER OF THE GOKART" *I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANGE MY PROFILE!*
Bray Posted February 13, 2016 Posted February 13, 2016 Just my thoughts, but Chris Jericho still uses that phrase and he loses 80 percent of his matches nowadays. Plus, I changed it so I could have an edge, "At What Nobody Can Do Right", which is wrestle, and/or play the game (if we're breaking kayfabe here). "It's like the number zero...It's empty, but at the same time it holds infinite possibilities." - Igor
B-17 Posted February 13, 2016 Posted February 13, 2016 Just my thoughts, but Chris Jericho still uses that phrase and he loses 80 percent of his matches nowadays. Plus, I changed it so I could have an edge, "At What Nobody Can Do Right", which is wrestle, and/or play the game (if we're breaking kayfabe here). This post has too much truth. "Amatuer cheat hunter, Resident OCWFED historian, Lover of spreadsheets, data and HOI, MASTER OF THE GOKART" *I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANGE MY PROFILE!*
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