This cant be?? (open to chain feud. roleplay challenge)

[Madison Cox]

("IC") Don't be a bloody peasant!!

[Jacob Trance]

(OCC) DOES ANYONE PLAY IN CHARACTER HERE? i mean really if you dont want to be a part of the promo, then dont, i dont need kids being retarded...seriously if you want in the promo, then promo, if not then sit the bench and shut the f*ck up! thats me being nice "BTW"

 

It's not, it's you being butt hurt to fuck at someone giving a genuine piece of criticism on your writing.

 

 

Also, two people have already used your entrance music here "BTW."

[Troy Sharp]

(occ) im not butt hurt trust me. ive dealt with kids before, nothing new. using one line responses to a RP is weak and pathetic, especially for someone like a staff member who should be leading by example, not being a little snot nosed kid who thinks is one line answers really matter? wanna "try" to trash me, be creative at it...or are you unable to follow the content rules and stay in character? ill call you all out, at least i can promo, oh and wait till my ring debut. follow the rules. lol you can try to correct me but yet you cant read yourself lol...IN CHARACTER SECTION! Im done with OCC in this thread, either get some balls and promo me or stfu, those are your only options. your welcome

[Jacob Trance]

(occ) im not butt hurt trust me. ive dealt with kids before, nothing new. using one line responses to a RP is weak and pathetic, especially for someone like a staff member who should be leading by example, not being a little snot nosed kid who thinks is one line answers really matter? wanna "try" to trash me, be creative at it...or are you unable to follow the content rules and stay in character? ill call you all out, at least i can promo, oh and wait till my ring debut. follow the rules. lol you can try to correct me but yet you cant read yourself lol...IN CHARACTER SECTION! Im done with OCC in this thread, either get some balls and promo me or stfu, those are your only options. your welcome

 

 

I didn't trash buddy, but just so you know when you're talking in character it's usually in bold on random forum posts, saves the need do so some (OOC) tags at the end of it. I'd promo with you but you evidently have a chip on your shoulder, and to be honest, if I decided to critique your writing any further you'd probably continue with the insult rhetoric. I picked the easiest thing to fix, which is laziness, when you do dialogue it's as if you're speaking, so why would you go "btw, or brb" unless you're a hipster or 14 years old?

 

Also, you're on the completely opposite console so there would be no pay off.

 

 

Here's the good example you craved, it's from the guide you said you read and understood.

 

 

------ The Morrison Method ------

 

Designed, perfected and named after OCW Legend Mad Michael Morrison, the Morrison Method is a formatting guide for Roleplays and other segments that keeps the overall style of each show consistent and easy to read. All written content needs to follow the Morrison Method.

 

The Morrison Method works as follows:

Actions, and Names are in Bold:

Actions Example: Mr.Sensation throws a cup against the wall.

Name Example: Mr.Sensation: Well well well, if it isn't Paul Pugh, and the sissy express.

 

 

Full Role Play Example:

 

As the last match ends, the camera pans to the back. We find the CEO of OCW Mr. Sensation at his desk yelling into a phone. Just then Bobby Minio walks in.

 

Bobby Minio: Bossman!!!

 

Mr.Sensation: Not now Bob, can't you see I'm yelling!

 

Bobby Minio: Well you stink!

 

Bobby Minio quickly exits as he slams the door, Mr.Sensation is enraged!

 

Mr.Sensation: CHINLESS JERK WEASEL!

 

Mr.Sensation throws his phone at the door shattering it!

 

The Camera Fades to the next segment!

 

If you need any help working with the Morrison method, make a post in the Locker Room forum, or shoot Sensation or myself (Minio) a PM and we will help you get a better grasp of the system.

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[Nathan Carter]

This is how CyberSlam used to do it. You from there?

[Dustin White]

Ooh. Feisty.

[Troy Sharp]

i know you youngsters have never seen a chain promo before, you a bit too young to understand as i see. if you arent going to promo your comment will be deleted.

[Sophia]

Believe it or not, we are not all youngsters !

Also, didn't know you could delete others comments?

[Kassidy Hayes]

Believe it or not, we are not all youngsters !

Also, didn't know you could delete others comments?

 

you can't