A Chance To Shine

[Colt Starr]

Ronnie Darko paces backstage. His face his angered Jim Black, mic in hand, approaches him slowly.

 

[Jim Black]: Hello...Mr. Darko can I speak to you for a moment?

 

Darko glances at Black with a look of surprise and moves toward him.

 

[Ronnie Darko]: Yes indeed you can sir.

 

[Jim Black]: No matches on your record Ronnie Darko, and yet you have been at the forefront of controversy as of late with your decision to call out certain superstars in the back. What do you say to those who believe that you are taking a typical, run of the mill approach at making a name for yourself?

 

Darko begins to chuckle, his face becomes serious.

 

[Ronnie Darko]: That is an excellent question. The greatest crime ever committed was being ignorant when it really counted to be aware. I know that my approach was a little brash to say the least...

 

Jim Black looks at Darko sternly.

 

[Jim Black]: A little?

 

[Ronnie Darko]: Brash. Yes, but wrong? No. I respect all of the boys in the back, but I want my chance. I want to prove that I am a contender in this federation. No matter what it takes. Let me ask you a question James Black. What has no legs, no mouth, no breast, never nags and is still a bitch?

[Jim Black]: I think it....

 

Darko abruptly interrupts him.

 

[Ronnie Darko]: Life Mr. Black. Life. And a large portion of life is the acceptance of change....I will usher in a new era of asskickery. One where skill exceeds backstage politics and favoritism. One where debuts aren't met with 3 on 1 threats! This is my time. Just give me a match. It's time to show and prove in this federation!

 

[Jim Black]: You seem to be quite determined to prove your skill.

 

[Ronnie Darko]: Hell yes! What do I have to get a match around here? Piss on every superstar's lawn? Start a dogfight ring and bury the evidence in my backyard? Poor the GMs a cup of joe? Superman that hoe? What do I have to do!!!????

 

Ronnie takes the mic from Jim Black's hands. He tosses it in the air, about a foot from his body. Darko positions himself near the mic, cocks his foot back, and field goal kicks the it. It goes off of the screen as Black's eyes follow the mic. He nods his head in disappointment. Darko looks into the canera, puts his hands up, and mouths the words "It's Good!". The camera fades

[Parker]

nice promo but again, i feel these should be on the shows,you pace around back stage..backstage where? there is no show or arena...and as for your chance to shine?..hell.....i'll welcome ya to OCW...doggy style....but its up to the GM's.

[Brad Bauer]

This is a far cry better than your previous stuff. I agree with Venom, you need a better setting if you aren't going to submit for the show. An OCWFED.net interview set or something would have been more appropriate.

 

You've still got some ways to go, keep trying and I think eventually you'll have it.

 

The mic thing at the end was very good. Although, technically you punted it, not field goal kicked it. Second, it would have been funnier had you said :: Darko puts his hands in the air like an NFL referee :: "It's Good"

[Chris Ryder]

Nice to see a major improvement in your promo's, but as Brad and Venom said you need to get this kind of stuff on shows if it's set backstage.

 

Keep it up, you deserve some rep' for the improvement.

[Big Joe D]

After reading this headline one song came to mine.

 

"Shine.. Hey Hero time.. Hey...time to shine."

 

Rollins would not agree however.

 

But hey it was cool and progress not perfection

 

Stay Positive!