Turmoil 222

[Lotus FloJo]

Yay!

[Quartz]

I hear there's another TURMOIL IN TOOOOWN:

 

- What a great RP from Aries off of the back of his big heel turn. Establishing himself and providing us all with a reason to hate him, but more importantly, establishing his motiv. Heel/Face turns don't make sense unless they have a reason and this long RP was perfect for that.

 

- Belle and Constance with a super fun match. It'll be underrated because of it's place on the card, but it was awesome. Belle's moveset is very good for her CAW. and as always, both women are TOP SHELF on the attire department.

 

- Good, vague intro from Solo Caine, introduces him as a randomly violent asshole heel, but also not too descriptive so as to hurt his possible flexibility.

 

- THRACE ARMOR!!! THRACE HAS NO CHANCE! Thrace does little flashy taunting, just looking to throw his man around the ring. Match looks to be all Loki early, but a great comeback from Thrace. Neither man seems interested in using backpays this game. Solid FPR from a newer guy too. Fun spot off the top rope turning that powerbomb into a snake eyes. In the end, the Thrace armor wasn't enough and I like the rookies fin. Short and sweet crucifix powerbomb. Nothing dumb.

 

-2 of my RPs. Only comment I have is Jehst is fun and easy to work with and I'm very picky about my writing when it comes to editing and verbiage and working with guys like Jehst make it very easy for me, because I very rarely need to make any changes.

 

- Ace vs Empress; Empress EASILY has one of the best themes in OCW right now. I kind with more was done with the entrance as a whole ,but it kicks my ass every time. Glad to see Bray/Ace doing more and more! Bray plays the psycho Ace role very well in-ring. Incoherent kicking and screaming early. In that same vein, both of these ladies have that same kind of energy. God damn Empress has learned spacing and timing quickly. Ace is a Mysterio mark. Match ran a little long, but that's okay sometimes. It was close throughout. Ace's spinning elbow missed like 5 times. The last 5 minutes was a struggle until KINSHASA!!... oh wait Ace kicked out. FPR break from Empress, reset 100% of the time after a pin or submission. Not a huge deal, just a heads up. Finally Ace lands the top rope fin! ... kickout again. Jesus these women are taking no prisoners. Roll up attempts! Desperation! BANNNNG. That's gotta be it.

 

OH SHIT ITS FLOJO. Using the 40 minute match to her advantage, she adds to the back and forth between Empress and herself.

 

- Corn's totally helpless and nonsensical RPs make me smile. Mission accomplished.

 

- Cort and Maxwale!? Who knew this would escalate? It never fails to amaze me how AC Cobra's comedic timing in RPs make me pop. "First of all, I'm working on it." Should be interesting to see this... super weird combo of Cort/Ac/Tre do tings.

 

- What are these borders on the TY Sparks ent? The Turmoil crowd is booing him into another dimension. Oh jeez, Cohle's got weird borders too. TTT 4 LYFE. Match randomly cuts into a move. TY Sparks is all over the place. He's got a powerbomb in his moveset. Rusty rushed a lot this match. All in all a solid 10 minute match, fun for both.. Haven't seen passed this part yet, but boy do I hope there's an RP waiting for me.

 

#1 way to look like a jobber: Don't RP/have representation on a show YOU'RE BOOKED ON.

 

- I don't think I've seen quite the level of hatred shown from one person to another as I've seen from Ashley to Valk. These two will not quit until one of them is dead, it seems. Necessary RP continuing a story with no holes.

 

- AUSTIN LEE YOU SON OF A BITCH!

 

- I used to hate Bray's entrance/theme but the damn thing has grown on me so much. I find myself singing it. The rising sun exclamation point is amazing for a T-shirt.

 

- I've done these kinds of video RPs, they're not easy. Hats off to Bray for adding a little variety into the mix. Villifying B17 and America works 2 fold. Very good. Holy shit!!! Where did he come from?! There are so many twists in this damn B community storyline. Great job from everyone involved.

 

- Very mysterious RP from ?. I'm actually interested to see where this goes from here. In the words of Drago, "That's deep." You see what I did there? I used quotation marks to quote someone else? Because context tells you that this is me, Jake, speaking to you, the reader.

 

What I'm trying to say is to ? and everyone else that does it... Stop using "" in the Morrison Method. We know you're talking, it's not necessary. Use "" when you're quoting someone or speaking sarcastically or something.

 

I did it when I first joined too, so I know it can be from habit, but you don't need these. Oh, also the ** around actions. Again - unnecessary. The Morrison Method was created and stated clearly in the handbook and we all understand it. You do not need these around actions. If they're separated without a bold name around them, we all know they're actions. I'm being nit-picky, sure, but here I am typing about this instead of being able to focus on your RP. That should tell you enough. Rant over.

 

- One of my most anticipated matches for various reasons. The return of Thomas Archer! We haven't seen him in a very long time. How do none of those $'s ever end up in the ring during his entrance? CARNIVORE FIRES ME UP B. Archer back to doing what he does best, working them legs! Even match throughout, Archer cut him from orange legs straight to dark red. Blacksmith seemed totally uninterested with engaging his opponent, just standing back away from him until Archer lunged. HOOK THE WORM. Lead to a finisher right as Archer hits red. How do you count to 3 in Italian?

 

- the #ShowLove movement continues! HUGS FOR EVERYONE, BUBBA!

 

- Otakru is fucking weird man. More developments in the strange feud coming up between Dragana and Ace.

 

- That... was dark. Jackman hates B17 the point of possible, probably murderous dreams... I HATE JACKMAN TOO! WHY DOES NOBODY SELL MY FINISHER!

 

Good match, good show, I hope everyone enjoyed the main event!

[Lotus FloJo]

Otakru may be weird but we ain't fuckin'.

[EMP]

Excellent review! Always look forward to reading everyone's . As for the show being a rookie I just really enjoy reading the rps and watching the matches even being a part of the ocwfed I just enjoy them as a fan rather then a member. So Excellent show in my book.