Rage

[Darin Rebel]

Is he ready? (asks the tall, strapping visitor)

 

Receptionist

Yes sir he is. Robert, please show this gentleman to the patients room in 314.

(The guard nods his head as he escorts the man through the

daunting hallways of Eastern Louisiana State Mental Institution)

 

 

Guard

I'll be right outside if you need me

 

The Man

That won't be necessary

 

Guard

Sir I really wou(gets cut off by the man)

 

The Man

That won't... be necessary.

 

(the guard acknowledges the request, but decides to disregard it as the man enters the soundless room)

 

The Man

Well, aint this a shame..heh heh

 

(The man smirks as mocks the patient)

 

Oh Xindane...., If only you had followed in the footsteps of your profound older brother... you wouldn't be lying here strapped to this table.

 

(Xindane stares deep into the eyes of his brother Zinestro as he circles the table)

 

Instead!......Instead you followed in the footsteps of your ol man, though he's rotting in prison somewhere. Not much different than this place though I assure you heh heh.

(Zinestro stops at the head of the table and looks deep into the eyes of Xindane)

 

ZinestroFace it you piece of crap. Your father was a failure, and you are a failure. I've out shined you in everything we've done since we were kids, and now I'm outshining you in the wrestling buisness....which is why you quit ***. You just couldn't stand living under my shadow! Haha you are pathet..

 

(Zinestro gets cut short as Xindane ruptures the leather harness and grabs him by the throat)

 

Zinestro

Yo-u-r!

 

(Xindane tightens the grip)

 

Zinestro

P- a -t - h e-tic

(Xindane places Zinestro between his legs, lifts him up, and powerbomber him through his table. The guard rushes in after hearing the abrupt crash, yet gets himself knocked out)

 

(Quickening his speed, Xindane sprints through the exit door)

[Brad Bauer]

I'm interested to see where this goes. Glad to see we kept the talents that came over from the other organization.

[Darin Rebel]

Yeah i was just trying to start some sort of character since i haven't really made any rps yet. Its been a while since I've actually made one...trying to practice to get better.

[Versus]

Well, this was definitely a good start then.

[Seth Morrison]

I'm interested to see where this goes. Glad to see we kept the talents that came over from the other organization.

 

Ditto.

 

Youve always had good ideas. Just make sure to keep them realistic as possible, and make sure the story sticks to your character as much as possible. My best advice is to read Recon, or Nathan Gaines RP's. Those guys are studs at it.

 

Very good start dude, actually nice to see you blossom from a tool into a douche.

[Ov Terror]

 

Very good start dude, actually nice to see you blossom from a tool into a douche.

 

Hahaha! They grow up so fast.

 

I keeed.

 

Seriously good RP Xin, I am also interested in seeing where this leads. Keep it up bro.

[Darin Rebel]

thanks guys. As time progresses, the story of Xindane will unfold more lol.

[Darin Rebel]

I just wanted everyone to know that my RP at asylum will be a follow up of this RP....so I'd like it if people who hasn't read this yet, to please do.

 

Thanks,

Xin

[Recon]

nice roleplay