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Jacob Trance

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  1. This is correct.
  2. But on that note, Smythe hitting you with the chair would be a way of saying "you need my help." Then if he brained you, boom, he's made his satement very clear.
  3. So you can drop it again?
  4. Okay... The ending of the WHC... Why? How does that make you the "one to stop the monster?" How does hitting the heel champion get you heat? Are you seriously that moronic? Heel about to hit finisher, gets hit with chair, and you expect a heel pop? Wow, should have had the face hit his finisher, then hit the face, but you obviously know NOTHING about structuring an angle. HIT THE FACE WHO IS ABOUT TO PIN THE CHAMPION, THAT IS HOW YOU GET FUCKING HEAT. THAT IS HOW YOUR PROMO WOULD HAVE MADE GOD DAMNED SENSE. You are going to disagree with me no matter what I say, but know this, you fucked up your own angle by having a heel target a heel.
  5. Hurry up and get to page two so i can comment on the ending of the mainevent.
  6. And you take things too seriously :D Anyway, why does Dee Jones have the same theme as Gaines?
  7. Black World Order... lol.
  8. Bastards, counting me out already :(
  9. I knew you'd say that :P It's just I used to do RP only feds, so I'm trying to write the way I did back then.
  10. Warning: The following roleplay does not contain the morrison method. A key shall be provided for the easily confused. Key: Epilogue Speech Description Jacob Trance ascended to the Bloodline throne, having struck a deal with Wonderful Wesley, whoms whereabouts are presently unknown. They ran roughshot over the EX-Division, Brandon Hostile, Hazard and Jacob. However, Aries was able to stop Trance at Wrestlelution, creating cracks within the unit. The first victim of self destruction would be Hazard, removed entirely from the company by the victorious Jacob Trance, then something happened. Jacob Trance began to groom Hostile towards his own sadistic thoughts, that everyone was against him, that everything belonged to him by god given right. Jacob Trance had created a monster, a monster prepared to go to lengths Trance himself would not stoop to. Fast forward to Riot, Nathan Gaines is mown down, and Trance is almost blown up entering his car. Then, the culprit would strike again, revealing his true, hostile nature. --- The scene opens, a camera looks out across the dusty landscape from a vantage point. It becomes apparent we are ontop of a multi-storey car park. The camera pans around, it's disused, and in a state of disrepair, providing a breeding ground for rats, pigeons and the homeless. A pigeon alights, flying across the view of the camera, a man begins to speak. "It's odd, I suppose it's fitting. They say that when a bird leads the nest, it doesn't need its parents anymore, that it's ready for its own journey. I was also taught to never bite the hand that feeds." The figure laughs, Jacob Trance walking into camera view. "I guess that's what I should have taught Brandon. All the years we've travelled together, back when both of us first started out. It was always 'which one of them's going to break out?' Or 'what one's going to make it?' Well it was me Brandon, it was always me. You were always there in the background, keeping your head down." "I stepped further ahead, I ran out in front and left you eating my dust. You didn't like that, all those smiles, all those hugs we've shared, was all a lie. I'm seeing that now. Nathan said 'Don't trust anyone' but you, you managed to make me think 'Dont trust Aries.' You turned me against my longest running true friend, you backstabbing piece of crap." "The past is done, and I can't change it. I wasn't able to save Nathan, he comes back from an injury, and you put him through a table. That's cool, I'll put you through a fucking coffin." The camera shakes a little, panning back out across the city scape. "I will light you up, and burn you down... I'll show you why you should have stuck to fucking baseball, you bastard. I'll show you WHY I'm the one that got everything, I'll show you why I'm the one you have never, NEVER, beaten when it matters." "I will stand in that ring, take everything you've got to throw at me, and I'll bring back more. Give me everything you've got, it will fuel me, continue to hurt people I respect, it'll be the wind beneath my wings as I crush your ribs, as I rip off your head... You like to preach about your straight edge lifestyle, about your endless hostility, but I know..." Trance laughs off of camera, rubbing his beard. "I know your one little vice..." The camera fades out for now...
  11. Epic Fucking Review
  12. Summercide card this evening boss?
  13. Didn't I retire you?
  14. Done reviewing, expect a surprise.
  15. IN DA MIX! Nice, I'm glad Dee Jones took my advice and came back, I don't care that it's a spoiler. I'm confused as shit by what Smythe's doing, is this the plan? Anyway, it builds on that news post. Rockstar's look is brilliant, everything suits him, then he goes and gets a good match out of KD. Probably KD's finest performance to date, recovering from an instant quick grapple to the ref, then a double team to him. Props on that guys, job well done.
  16. That was not a fucking pick your poison. I don't care about the storyline involved. What the fuck? Didn't you whinge about someone having their shit stolen ruining your storyline? Then you do that? SELFISH. The roleplays on page one were actually decent, seems like KD and Jookie are finally getting it, good work as always from Justin Rockstar.
  17. ... :(
  18. I marked for Justin Rockstar.
  19. Braddock = http://www.chocablog.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/09/flake%20wrapped.jpg
  20. I'd rise to your bait, but we both know what happened sir at 5am. If you care enough, pay for either of us to fly to see the other, and I'll gladly you call an egomaniac to your face.
  21. I don't belive his entire post was in referall to you, seeing as it was plain to see you put in effort.
  22. I think personally, we should engage in a taunt race, first person to get a finisher obviously wins. This would eliminate all problems. It'd also ensure main event stars always win over upper mid card, and obviously this trend continues down the card. Keeping everyone exactly where they are.
  23. I guess you've never seen a Kurt Angle match.
  24. I didn't mash, I timed it, in the "horrible delay."
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