Mr.Sensation

Tanner Shelton/Grigori Branwen Entrance: B- I was aware your going for a faces of Tanner type gimmick and that's fine. As most people said Grigori essentially looks like Parker 2007, with Crowe's entrance. Song is great fits, Id change the ent, before Crowe tries to kill you. Look: B I am not a fan of the style of attire, but I get its a "FACE of" so it works, I also noticed you kept Tanner's color scheme so I don't hate it in that respect. I am not sure what to make of Grigori style wise but it isn't bad. Presence: B+ Just like I mentioned prior improving weekly. HARDcastle ain't no joke but you held your own. Again I am only reiterating what I did prior because I am treating Grigori as a different char. But as I mentioned your getting a good grasp on the OCW Style. Move Set: B Solid move set nothing really to complain about at this juncture. Closing Thoughts: Good writer, getting better in the ring, I think it's safe to say your next match your probably not going to get a report card as you are well on your way. Make the above changes and keep up the great work.

Cuz I am spanish :( http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/hall/Untitled.jpg

Jordan Rivera Entrance: C+ Lose the pyro, that's a given. Entrance itself ain't bad very moderate and to the point. The song choice is nice, but I am 100% sure it was either Fat Jacob Trance's or Brandon Hostile's I don't remember, so best to find another. Once you drop the pyro and fix the song its an Easy B+. Look: B- Attire isn't bad but face resembles default face 01. It looks like you spent zero time on the features of the caw, as such he looks inter changeable. To delve into the Attire it is simple and to the point, it has some nice accents, and the caw itself is very reminiscent of Randy Orton. I'd recommend a custom logo or 2 but if not attire once the face is changed is an easy B+ / A. Presence: C+ This would have been a B- but it is readily apparent you are not awful at the sticks. In fact you hit quite a bit clutch reversals, on that front I was impressed. The reason for the C+ is quite simply your grasp of the OCW Style is not quite there yet. You held your own no question but you also suffered from a mess of hovering and while aggression is never a bad thing its how you go about it. As such it forced Tigerman to play a certain style which is evident, in other words he went eye for an eye on you. You hit your finisher and you kinda just stood there. Watch your fellow rookies or watch a Dupree or Parker match and you will get an idea on how to pace yourself. I am confident in your second match you will relax and notice how much better you do. As I said the reversals are there so your nearly at the point you need to be. An easy B+ next week. Move-Set: B- Didn't see many chain grapples due to the game. But off the top of my head lose the headstand headlock, (Its over used). As for everything else the move-set is pretty solid, id add a few "Athletic moves" since your trying to emulate Randy Orton (What I am getting could be wrong). I dug your Rivera Clash as no one worthwhile has used that move so make it your own. Closing Thoughts: I was very impressed by your in ring skill. You look to be pulling ahead of the pack skill wise, or at least for your debut match. You just need to touch up on the OCW style and make some minor changes and you can easily be a staple of Ambition and then Riot.

Oh hey a spelling mistake, this is my moment this is my time, this is going to be my greatest achievement, I will quickly make a comment about it and everyone will laugh, I will be the bell of the ball and the world will love me! 60 mins later http://okayface.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/okay-face.jpg

http://www.ocwfed.net/recapshow/riot/2012-04-19/2zzoxtk.gif It's Team reliable vs Team Kinda Reliable vs Team Chocolate Time

This is Smythe hitting the 50% mark 50% spot on 50% bullshit. In regards to me, any Authority figure vs an uncooperative worker will be considered Austin McMahon, look at Dusty Rhodes, Roddy Piper, Horsman vs JJ Dillion, Punk vs Big Johnny, anything with the nWo etc. Shit just last summer I was getting ppl jumped. Parker's been essentially the same since I can't even remember. COLD STONE COLD STONE ME wasn't a work, Parker was summoning his Nate Ortiz, the sad part is the match looked fucking amazing, and yet Parker claimed "blah blah blerg blah" Just goes to show you don't need to plan to match look good, you just need to...wait for it...wait for it...wait for it....I've said it time and time again...wait for it.... BE GOOD AT THE FUCKING GAME!!

Graaaagghg pooo get to the locker!

I face palmed but to be fair, ENGLISH isn't his 1st lang. Best part it is speaks and writes better english than most fucking americans on this site. Go figure UHMERICA

I don't give a fuck about your alts, unless they are remarkable. Stop being an asshat and show some fucking respect. Granted if its someone like djack rip away, but if its someone with a history or legacy, you better respect the BADG...legacy. If not ima see how you feel when Our Hero is using your shitty moves as a normal moveset. I give thanks that most of you people are not that stupid, I give thanks I took my heart medication. I give thanks that I can temp ban people. I give thanks for yall not fucking with my good nature. Honestly it's a really shitty thing to do and it shows utter lack of common sense. I'd accept the practice if it was on a main and it was done as a homage, even. The Siren is the DBD "Dime Bag Drop" is the Modified "Nerd Cutter" You know what, I am not just going to book disrespectful alts, fuck it.

DATS DAT NIG,, white people please do not sing the chorus.

I mustache you to repeat the question, I couldn't hear you over the sound of how awesome I am.

Don't ever change War. May I call you War? Right then don't ever change.

This is why i hate people.

The opening segment with Reflex and Seth was pure gold. The Laz rp was probably my favorite of the night, for some reason i imagined Lilith talking like Harley Quinn, definitely the most original character out of the rooks. FUCKING WORD, i hate when people think like me.

2 thumbs up for 2 rookies, get off my back bro.

Aiden Ryan http://images.allposters.com/images/MMPH/232338.jpg Lose the bionic knees

Michael Hollywood http://payload11.cargocollective.com/1/1/41722/2526532/1_Thumbs-up-for-Kanye.jpg

Eric Scofield Entrance: C+ Lose the pyro, had in game music not sure if that's your theme, or all the recorder could come up with need another show to gauge. the actual entrance is quite nice baring pyro so you get a C+ instead of C- Look: C - You look like Our Hero, and its freaking me out, hit up the sliders just a tad. The idea is that Eric Reflex Scofield is a fighter. I see you kinda tried to use Brock's MMA WWE attire as a base idea. It didn't work, looks like your wearing flood pants and construction boots. You got quite a few examples of what you can do. Dan the beast Severen, Ken Shamrock, Daniel Puder, Anderson Silva, Mayhem Miller. You basically need to just fix the shorts and boots, maybe kick pads or something. Other than that you got your work cut out for you. You also look a little small, but that could work for you if your mostly striking. Presence: B You kept the pace with McGee who is overly aggressive. Your picking up the basics of FPR and your fairly competent when it comes to reversal. Move-Set: B Sean was on you like white on rice, but what I saw I liked your move set suited a guy who says he is a fighter. I'd add a few judo tosses, and maybe an arm drag or 2 to solidify. Or some submission work, like to add The Coast 2 Coast was a nice touch as no one uses it. In closing Hells Gate is great, just note you need to hit an impact finisher before you attempt a sub, that is paramount. Closing Thoughts: Cleanup the entrance music issue, and fix the attire and you are well on your way sir.

Trick is to go into detail on the attire. and it will stand out. I mean look at Gibbs, he has a shit load of nuances in his "Street Gear"

I would be ok with this. We have like no one who uses street clothes, as its frowned upon. But if done right (Gibbs now, Rd Money Then) it helps set you aside as someone special. Something to consider. http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ma1nqzX75Z1qjyhb7o1_400.jpg

Tanner Shelton Entrance: A The tapping ground entrance has been used now by 3 people, Hostile (also sXe) Dimsmore, and yourself. I'd be a trendsetter and get something new. My recommendation is the punk Clock Clobbering time thing, I mean you got the ring in move might as well use the start one. Digging the entrance, music and everything. As I type this I have a smile on my face Welcome To The Masquerade! Look: A You've made Grey The Tanner SHELDON, Shelton color. We learned before your Straight Edge, without much out of you and that's pretty much what its about. You need to spend some time and sort out the tattoos really personalize them or at least a sleeve. Presence: B Picking up the style quite nicely. I can't tell if your in Dm's a lot or if your really good at faking it till you make it. You still got a ways to go as you seem to get flustered quickly. Move-set: B- It seems to be evolving, not sure if you took my unorthodox comment to heart yet. Although that stomp roll over leg wrench if suitably sweet. As I mentioned earlier, lose the MMA punches (everyone is doing them), same with "Everybody Kiiiiiiiiicks sommmmmme times" (Danial Bryan Kick), same with Soda Twist (EEEEEEEEEEEVERY body is using it). I like the running shin kick sig, but I feel a bunch of these jerkoffs are using that as a standard move. Diamond Cutter seems odd for your build. Don't hate it don't love it. Closing Thoughts: Great stride moving forward, you def got a future here.

Report Card time Damian Sebastian Kain Entrance: B Music ain't my cup of tea, feels like a RnB track but it's not just about me its what the people think. Also for some reason after the pyro for about 4 seconds it looks like you took a shit in your pants also get rid of the coloring, it goes from green to red to flickering, I don't have seizures but I almost did. Other than that nit pick, I like it. Look: B+ Vast improvement, you look like a random but only cuz of the tattoos. That's not to say you don't fit in you do, it just doesn't feel like it's coming together as it should. So what you should do is keep an eye out on the CC for those custom logos for all the shit people do and snag one and hook up the caw. If you don't do that your still doing alright, I don't get the towel and the jeff hardy arm bad, but all in all great improvement. Keep it up. Presence: B Huge change, for the better. Your grasping the concepts quite well. I would say your nearly there ethically and FPR wise. I had some reservations as I was informed you still needed some work. But if you keep fighting good people you will pick up good habits. Move-set:B Nice set, actually can't complain. From what I've seen it's a nice assortment of power moves, but its not overbearing. I would add some old school hoss power moves though, like a tough looking scoop slam, and a suplex. I would probably lose the MMA punches, over used. Closing Thoughts: Great progression from a 1 show to another. Get some slick logos to use, keep fighting people you can learn from, keep learning and most of all don't up and flake and you'll do fine. As for SHVY as thats what your looking for. At this time, no your guy looks hoss but not that hoss to me. You'll be fine as a Heavy for now.

In response to "There better be a reason why we didnt get our match" There is a good reason, Matsuda saw it fit to spare OCW and my sanity from watching a car crash. The sheer thought of my blood pressure rising to an uncontrollable level thus killing me instantly, which would then lead to the inevitable downfall of our organization as my credit card slowly depleted from my lifeless body. Maybe he wanted to spare you the trouble of having 40 people call you 3 an band of assholes in succession. Maybe he for saw the siesemic current of negativity that would wash upon your shores at such a degree that you house would float away to another continent. Or maybe he made the judgement call that you 3 are without a shadow of a doubt in my last 8 years of service to this website, the 3 most socially inept, irresponsible, thoughtless, foolhardy, ass backwards, lowest common denominator set of walmart shopping, Cheesecake factory eating, piles of elephant shit I have ever had the displeasure of seeing. Maybe he did you a favor by pointing out the glaringly obvious lack of mental fortitude needed on a basic level to function in this organization. So in short thank you for summing up my reservations in only a few words. Take your buddies, about fucking face, and ride off into the sunset like the 3 amigos, if the 3 amigos where born with a learning disability and sprinkled with Lou Gehrig s disease. TNA got 3 slots for you. Fucking whelps. As for the rest of you Greenhorns, the above is the fast track out of here. Learn from the mistakes of the stupid, ask questions watch shows, discuss and let your voice be heard. To be safe if you have a strong opinion word it in such a way you don't sound like a douchebag. And lastly Don't fuck with my good nature, good day.

Rape, fathers, and perverted asses, and its only page 2. Unfortunately there was supposed to be a debut today, however Matsuda decided to go into business for himself again. I was made aware the match was an utter train-wreck, despite that fact and the two subsequent flame-bait threads I believed the matches would be submitted, they weren't. Now the reason they should have been submitted is so that all parties involved and especially the rookies in general could learn exactly what not to do. But instead we get passive aggressive threads, name calling and otherwise infantile behavior. It's a new gen thing, I am partially to blame as I am not anywhere near as vehement as I should be. So lets break it down, Matsuda was in the wrong for not acting like a leader, despite making an attempt in the beginning he should know better and rise to the occasion. I mean if I do it all the time why can't he. And Sir Trance has no right to belittle greenhorns to the extent he has no matter the circumstances, this aint xerox so cut the shit. This does not excuse the Bod folks. Since day one of week 1 or 2, you have all shown an utter lack of common sense. I am not sure if its an age thing, if its an upbringing thing, if its an internet thing, or if there is a genuine special needs type situation that I need to be aware of. Despite all of my vitriol, and all of the malarkey and sophomoric behavior that takes place in the shout box. OCW is a community first and foremost, I would gather to say over the years OCW has become a sort of commune for sociopath with a penchant for the written word, and pro wrasslin. But never the less it is a community, you people have shown an utter lack of disrespect to that community by not having the wear with all to conduct yourself in an even civil manner. OCW was created by me, with my time, after I joined League after league and ran into cheeseball scumbag, after cheeseball scumbag, after cheeseball scumbag. OCW was created so that we as a group can function away from these degenerated online and have our own little slice of the pie, without having to be bothered. You Bod folks have made ZERO effort to abide, conform, question or learn. You have not watched a show, you have not asked a question, you have not provided any substantial argument to anything that has been put forth. All you have done was waste Matsuda's time in that regard he decided to waste my time by not submitting the trainwreck for critique. OCW is about how you want to be treated. If you want to get a match done in a timely fashion you should project that to your opponent. The sheer fact that you read that 95 OVR was the standard is laughable. I should have known when the 1st day was marred with the same 3 names and 9 different accounts there was a problem with communication, and instant gratification, but I set my reservations aside because as an Administrator I have to be neutral and impartial. But the fact of the matter is this. You guys don't respect our time, or our effort. If this shit aint your cup of tea, that is fine, don't login or have me close your account or continue to act as inept and stupid as possible so that I can waste the time and ban the accounts. So in closing if you don't want to be here stop wasting our fucking time and go play with the run spammers, while calling each other faggot, ******s like the rest of the useless tripe you find on the web. As for the veterans, you need to step it up and set a fucking example instead of running to threads to show how stupid people are, or saying such awful things that go beyond the realm of our usual social dysfunctions. You guys want to say Ambition era this, ambition era that, Golden era isn't this , golden era isn't that. How about instead of that we say, this era lets help as many people as we can and lift each other up. Maybe should call it the Pato Era, as he is the only motherfucker with any kind of common fucking sense and decency. Get it together. P.S Ambition is pretty good, I like what im reading, will comment as soon as my asshole stops leaking (Bad Sushi, don't ask). Love Jay