Patolomai

Y'all better have fast fingers

I gotta agree with Dupree on this. This RP was as close to perfection as you can get. The RP effecively, drew the audience in,added character depth and pushed your storyline/angel while still leaving the audience anticipating what's next. Personally my favorite angel in Online Championship Wrestling is the Poe Dupree aunt dissapearance. Props as always Poe

Great piece. I wouldve liked to have seen this as a spotlight of some kind though.

PAGE 2 POINTS Smythe DaWonder The man with a million monikers makes his first appearance on Riot since Lution, bringing it fresh with a new entrance and theme song. The beat and lyrics are tight and a good fit for you. I hope you rock this track for awhile. Smythe starts off doing what he does best in OCW, drawing heat. It seems Smythe may have come to terms with missing the window of opportunity to become 51% share holder of Online Championship Wrestling. But being the cunning villian that Smythe truely is, he implies that he may be able to effect "The Sensational Family" in more diabolic more painful ways...Mainly Mr. Sensations daughter Tiffany and son in Law Nate Ortiz. Quality content as always. Tiberius Dupree Tiberius Dupree,fellow Riot rookie and my front runner for Rookie Of The Year makes his 2nd appearance on Riot. Following up a Sunday appearance on the birth place of "The Fire" Ambition where he earned a victory over the intellect of LOTUS, Illuminati. Dupree announces a new innovation to Dupree TV. There is no need for his long departed cameraman any more, instead he will be relying on his Dragon Flies to broadcast via any technological device available to them. I like this alot Dupree. Very creative and I am sure this will give us a new and unique look at Dupree in the future. Well played card. Dupree wants to introduce us to part of his family. A wrestling lineage that runs deep...MARIE PIERRE!....Marie Pierre looks an awful lot like Wesley Adams Poe... Wesley Adams Poe I normally wouldn't comment on my own work or peoples work that I am currently working close with but I couldn't help myself. This angle is FIRE!!! Sorry Dupree...But it is what it is. WAP drops some knowledge about LOTUS Law that I will not get into, that is for OCW to interpet. The question is...Where is Marie Pierre? Does WAP Know? LOTUS? A outside party? Im looking forward to watching this story unfold in the next several weeks. Dane "Middle Name Money" Xavier The money man put in work as usual. Dane runs down his slew of bad fortune that has befallen him the past several weeks from Nate to Parker to Trevor to Mayhem. Even his digital artist Justin Rockstar has failed and possibly cost him his focus and opportunity for riches at Lution. I am not sure if Dane felt he needed to test him self but proclaimed he wanted to bring the Monster out of Mayhem and it appears he may have his prayers answered evident by the performance and demeanor of Mayhem as of recent. Dane states he has a status quo and is saving Mayhem for last. I am interested to see where Dane takes us as he has opened a bag of problems as well as enemies as of recent.

PAGE 1 POINTS Luke S.Dimsmore First point of interest I would like to touch on is the evolution of Lucas into Luke S. Dimsmore (Im assuming the "S" is for schizophrenic at this point). Ive been fortunate enough to have a first hand perspective on Luke's growth from the scrubby face nesquhoneing to one of the more in depth characters in OCW. The conclusion of his marriage and the presumed promiscuity of his ex cause a mental collapse but also the birth of a much needed face in the ranks of Online Championship Wrestling. The assumed figment of his imagination Tigerman is the ying that out ways the yang of bad intentions. Every aspect of Luke S. Dimsmore has developed from his character,attire,entrance and ring skills. Keep doing your thing I really enjoy your work. Hazard It was nice to see Haz step out off the box and give us a different angle from what I have seen in my tenure in OCW. Hazard was able to remain humble with his punishment while still showing some balls and giving a few verbal barbs to Cash Creed and proclaim his place in the hunt for the Ex Championship that he feels should still be rightfully his. This RP was unexpected just like Al said and was much enjoyed as well. Good job Haz. K.Dangelo First and for most I would like to give props to KD. He has shown a dedicated effort on improvement. Each and every week I feel he has been setting a new bar for himself content wise. Good work KD. KD starts off with a nice heartfelt RP addressing the tragedy and the lost of many in his home state of Alabama further boosting his status as a up and coming face in the company. KD even further offers to donate his purse for the month of May to those in need and encourages the other employees of our fine company to do the same. The RD Money slight was a little out of left field in my opinion. After working hard improving his status with the fans as some one they can get behind and represent the good of the company he manages to tarnish that. I am assuming its for the good of the angle with the next series of events. Royce Bentley 1st Royce on Riot. Royce matches KD's face move with a shout out and condolensces to the state of Alabama and to those he knows at the University. This is the moment we have all been waiting for, Royce has finally got to his agenda... He is going to put every one in check that has disrespected the family "Greatness". Nope, Royce adds another wrinkle informing us that there are hired "representatives" that are handling that piece of family business. Royce has more important matters at hand...LOTUS, or so we thought. Royce makes it just as clear as KD that their priority is on a title thats whereabouts are unknown...The NA Title.

I agree with you Dupree, KD deserves a little more attention. We all know that KD is a beast in the ring. That's been proven time and time again. One word that describes KD is consistent. The only knock I've seen on KD was his RP'n, which has improved steadily the last few weeks. I feel that your push to become a face is a great decesion. Only suggestion if you want to keep your new theme music try and fix the animations of your entrance to go better to the music.

Touching back on the topic of Nate Ortiz. I have alot of respect for this mans decesion to come back. That's true love for OCW. This man has everything to lose and little to gain for his legacy. We all remember Jordan on the wizards. He is oviously coming back for all of us old and new and I for one am anxiously awaiting the next jewel he drops for us all.

Maybe I'm wrong but I figured there would be a little more fan fair around the return of Nate Ortiz. I have a feeling that were going to get swereved at some point. Smythe dropped a few new tidbits for us in his opening RP from TDot. I for one don't see things as over between Smythe, Sensation and Nate. I don't think Smythe brought up "The Million Dollar Princess" Tiffany Ortiz for nothing.

Any one else notice that Riot was referenced as the B show on multiple occasions? Looks like LOTUS isn't the only ones calling for LOTUS Law.

That was classic KD, you cant be mad at that

Vimes is a beast at booking, this card is stacked.

Wrestlution brought back alot of big names. This to me shows that things are healthy and in good hands for the future of OCW. We had apperances by legends almost every other page. Mr.Bentley, Sideshow,Nate Ortiz and now the Steve is putting out content in the promo room. For a green name like myself who missed out on a lot of great moments from these Hall of Famers,Wrestlution was able to give us all a little trip down memory lane.

I like the new format, looking forward to the Lution fallout.

It's Adapt or die, but in order to adapt you need to evolve.

I think Royce and Fausto stole the show. They have been working this angle for months and months and had the biggest pay off in my view. Another show of respect from a Legend to a rook. I really enjoyed it, great work fellahs.

Just wanted to drop a few thoughts on what I've seen so far of Wrestlution. •First things is the visual appeal of the layout of each page. Classy. •The show opener set the mood. Miami FL. One of the meccas of entertainment was the perfect selection for the epitomy of entertainment that awaited us. The pyro and Scaggs and Poiling really added and nice touch and helped build the electric atmosphere of the night. •Jookie Marley- is really stepping out of the shadow of his past with the darkside and establishing his own fan base and character depth. Like the new look as well jookie. I'm sure Jookie picked up a few fans with his smoke show with Jim Black. You could tell there was alot of thought put into this rp and you can always count on some comic relief from Jookie. Keep the goodness coming. •The Ambition Rookie Rush- I actually enjoyed this match. Sure it was hectic and there was lag ect...but that's the platform we have so be it. I enjoyed watching the young new faces on such a large stage. I feel the match type added to the intrigue aswell. This was the first over the top battle royal that i've seen in OCW and you never knew who was going to go and when. Was not expecting it to come down to Arnaud and Kain and it could have gone either way. Congrats on Arnaud on his #1 contendership for The Ambition. Let's make this title mean something. •DJax's RP- Good quality piece from the pirate. Was nice to get the personal perspective on the the emotional rollercoaster he has been on. I like the fact that the real life matters were entwined in the aspects of this RP. Looks like Jax is poised to right the ship with this piece and recapture what he never truely shouldve lost. •KD RP- I believe were witnessing a evolution of KD's character. This might be my favorite KD RP to date. What I got out of his content that he is trying to get over as a face which is refreshing. The beef with his running mates is still very much alive and seems he sill has his eyes on Smythe once he disposes of Jook. •New Ex-Division champ Judas Hallows. The new champ surprised me in a good way. I think were in for some new fresh things with the ex strap and hopefully the prestige the title deserves is returned. Congrats Judas. •Lucas Dimsmore RP- Lucas is insane manic depressive and probably bi-polar and I love it. The TigerMan gimmick/ angle whatever it is, is classic. Love your work Lucas, always adding another wrinkle to your character. •Tiberius Dupree RP- OCW's "face" of the present and future and fellow rookie slayed another great RP. This piece acomplished everything that is important in final thoughts culminating a nearly 2month boiling fued. The picture is painted of the the odds stacked against the shining light of OCW and now it's a HIAC match thanks to LOTUS's Illuminati. •Dupree vs Matsuda Hell In A Cell-These two have great chemistry and treated us all to a spot fest. Dupree was able to be the first to strike a major blow to LOTUS sending the Guchi man for a flight off the cell, Not to be out done by our Matsuda moment with his trademark kamikaze esque aerials from the cell. Great match from start to finish. That's all I got for now haven't had the chance to finish the card yet, but everyone really stepped up in the clutch and made the 2 week wait more then worth it.

Gratz Dupree. No one is more hard working, dedicated or deserving of this month accolade then your self. Thanks for always keeping us entertained Dupree and representing the class of 2011 with class.

Great RP. I don't know you from before but I like your work alot. Keeps you entertained the whole read. Looking forward to more of your work.

Wow, thank you vimes. Why the love for LOTUS this week. You put Pato and Matsuda together in a no DQ tornado with two of Ambitions faces that we love to torture. You just made it real difficult for Lucas and Dupree to make it to Lution.

This is true, no need to wonder where Pato got his bone necklace any more.

Like Tiberius said on Dupree TV, Pato probably ate Eden and Northgate.

Wow, big annoucment for us green names Bloom.

Hard work is paying off fellahs, 4 new blue names.

Lotus hasn't been in trouble yet, you never know what Guchi has planned.

If there's still room I gotta take Hollywood. No way he can't be represented in this.