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Big Ed

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  1. The Big Ed small review It was good to hear from hashtag homie and Sid. I hope we get something next week involving the hastags and the 5% elite, otherwise i'm not sure why this is a ppv match. They have only had one interaction. Don't get me wrong. that one scene was great, but it needs more of a build. Seb needs to make a Ginger alt and do a story line where the Ginger somehow gets forced to wrestle. Won't comment on my own ish. But Quinn is a trooper, with a good look and music. Zeb and Joe. I like Zeb's hat...that's might just be it. I can see him as an Extra in Ed's gang. Needed win for Joe and gives him some momentum into our PPV bout. Was hoping for a Seb win. I'm digging the stuff with Loki and Axton. It feels like we are slowly building up to a group vs group feud. The Orphanage taking on Loki, Axton...and...? They need some help. Otherwise it will be a quick feud. Jack had the best RP, male character wise, hands down. He's a treasure! Keep this guy around, bookers. With the wrestling not doing so well (not that I can talk. I'm just a big guy) I could see Jack as an on screen GM type character in the future, now that Bradley is missing? There's no showing due to out of character site drama... There's no showing due to schedules not matching up... Then there's no showing because your character had the life sucked out of him. The vampire strikes. I enjoyed the comedy nc-17 segment that led to a handicap match that the challenger STILL won! Which leads to a serious promo / semi shoot from the TV Champion's valet. Props to Trance, The Juggalos, Madison and caramel. Felt very TV like. The match is set with more reasons to care about the outcome. I don't see the juggalos as buried. This is how it would happen on any wrestling show. Trance just looked strong and the juggalos just looked like heels that came up short. Carlos and Sheldon. This confused me. Carlos was probably rusty? But to have a long promo last week and lose in his return is a bit rough. I did like the post match RP to recover though. Good shit. Malu makes a legit point, and really, that's all we the fans needed in regards to his title shot. Bill Ding....................................fat fuck. Great ending to the match with B17 and Jackson. Their rivalry overshadows the title match, and B17 isn't even in it. I still say a rematch of the three way would have been best. Three ways, suck I know. Maybe Jackson faces the winner of B17 and Kass...in the same night. I also know kass has been busy with real life. Something would have been nice tho, even if its from a cell. With this scene, I almost forgot Jackson was defending next weekend. I think next month, whatever the combination is of malu, Irv, Kass, and Jackson is, we need some more detail with the actual title feud. Like Gentleman Jack said last week in a polite way, the world title feud is falling behind the Dennis and Trance feud. Even more so this week with B17 and Jackson being focused on each other. I hope Kass and Jackson give us something big next week so we get real invested in the big belt match. I think Dennis and Trance need to dial it back next week. Your match is established. Myself and Joe. And Jackson and Kass have some catching up to do. Maybe just focus on the moustache match with Seb. I cant wait for. Is seb actually going to shave? I really cant see him beating caramel so close to savage lands. I know b17 ain't booked. But I hope he does a run in or something at savage lands. even if he just confronts his girl.
  2. Matches won't load very well from work. But I've read the whole show. The women carried the show, promo wise. Sophia, Wilow, and Madison dropping a bit of history knowledge. I'm looking forward to Sophia and Willow. But I think it needs to be at the ppv after savage lands, on the main card after it gets a good build. Did not see the betrayal coming. I liked them together. But I think the ending was a good way of keeping both strong, and will allow b17 to branch off. Maybe he'll even start beating women like Ed. Madison has some lungs on her, eh? Madi with the mic drop. Literally, dropped the mic. It was harsh as hell, but adds more to the feud. She was able to cause pain and pleasure to the lower region in one episode, she's a hard worker. I'll discuss the men folk later. Three cheers for the broads!
  3. Lol....best no show ever.
  4. Where's the stolen thunder! Only on Opening match. Btw. I dig Quinn's entrance. Though our ceo might make him change his entrance video.
  5. Don't worry about not getting booked, Kass. Jackson will be limping into Savage Lands after I'm done.
  6. Great stuff! Needs more Ed.
  7. http://poster.keepcalmandposters.com/52494.png
  8. And Ed! I can do the Nash TNA angle where he was champ of he X division. Or was it the Booker of the X division? Either way; it was an awful angle. Nevermind, my post is stupid and should be disregarded. But yes, bring it back.
  9. Redwood OG. Thanks man
  10. Not in my match with jacky boy. No early finisher. With Matsuda comments, I don't have much to say because I don't really disagree with you on most on the stuffs. We do have a lot of Biker looking guys, but I believe mine is the only biker gimmick, if that makes sense. I never considered Jackson, B17, or Joe to be bikers. Just a bunch of smaller white dudes that needed a leather jacket to look tough. So I do feel you that some standing out needs to be done. I've got some things in the work to change my look. To nightmare, As a fellow big guy that has lost to smaller guys, I can say that it can be hard to recover from unless you can write it well. Ed's only saving grace is that I had help writing the recovery, and then Dennis, Joe, and Madison (Sophia) really put me over in my loss to Dennis at Lution. I appreciate that more than they'll understand. Not everyone is going to do that for you. But maybe nightmare has the skill to back it up, we will see. I'm rooting for you. The only thing I really disagreed about was Joe. A lot of us feel that Joe has the look of a star, even with the leather jacket. He's got Sensation approval. Or he did at one point. A lot of us think Joe is a step or two away from being one of the big players on Turmoil. He's just had some things work against him. For starters, he started getting interested in the TV title when Dennis got hot, and lost to Dennis 3 times in a span of like 2 months. He didn't do well against Bray and then lost to nightmare this week. I think all he really needs is a style change. I think Joe needs to focus more on being a ground guy. While the high flying stuff is cool, I think it gets you in trouble. With your new finisher, take a week or two to perfect your style and become more of a technical guy? You've got the figure four now. with Jimmy gone, that spot as Turmoil's number two face is yours for the taking if you want it. As for the black and white match. I really like wat you wrote about the match being close, but I don't think it was as you close as your character thinks it was :( little black has a way of making his opponents look like stars. But now that he's training with Riot guys and chasing after the great white buffalo, that might stop and he'll return here with some savagery, and much less interested in looking out for folks. But I'm hoping your style of match appearance above all else doesn't change, caramel. Malu is a monster. And I like both Jackson and kass, but I feel like he molested and then put y'all over to prove sensations point about steel sharpening steel. Not dissing either of you; I think malu would have me in red before I got him in yellow. But those two matches show thaT turmoil has a long way to go. The ending should have been the beginning , to me. But maybe it was out there because kass and malu wrote nothing for post match? I hope we see more bombshell x as she looks for a midget under the ring. I know a lot of people on the site had doubts when turmoil started a women's division and that it would just be on playing local matches with Dennis and I. But she's proven that she's all about the division and wants to work with all. Leon last month, willow and bombshell x this month. While we may be the B show, hands down -The women are one of the few things Turmoil does better than the A show. Sophia carries the title well and represents Turmoil. But once I create a biker broad for Ed, all tatted up and shit, it's over, if willow don't beat you first. Last point. Rather than kass vs Jackson, I still think the money match is still a three way with B17. Like this episode, more of the feud was with b17 vs Jackson, yet Jackson is defending against kass. All we needed was a different match type for a three way. But maybe that's just me. Im very much old school. Title feuds should mostly be a face vs heel. While we all like these two guys as peeps, the story of one heel defending against a heel with even more locker room heat is hard to pull off. We still have two weeks to go, but as Jack said earlier, it's easier to be invested in TV title match, and the match ain't even official yet. Wow. Went longer than planned. Don't take any of dis personal, just Adding to he discussion.
  11. I know I mentioned this a few weeks ago, but why haven't we petitioned to put Dennis and Madison away in an institute? The sanity is fadin, homies. They named a belt and are treating it like a person. God forbid Seb steal it again. They'll call for an amber alert.
  12. Also.....Willow! Beat Sophia.
  13. Ed want Malu, ug ug! Size on size! We need some interracial masses of meat up in here. Ed and Malu, Ed and KD!
  14. lol!!!!!
  15. I'm pretty sure that was intended moustache homie. Just wanted to give Jack a shout out. Great guy, great attitude. Didn't want to re-record and tonight we put on a good story. The after math was all Joe Z, good stuff. A bit of recovery from my Lution loss. Just wanted to say I'm digging the insinuation that Dennis is being protected by the orphanage. Whether it was intended or not, this has maybe 9 characters loosely connected in one story, even if Dennis isn't really a main part of the story. Keep it up face paint homies. Still wanna put Sophia through a table. Really bummed Dustin didn't win. Will post more later. Will post mo
  16. Just saw it lol hilarious.
  17. Jack, you should try to do a different shirt every week.
  18. "why can't we be friends?"
  19. Pooing on Dennis in the first ten minutes....excellent. Great listen so far.
  20. We still waiting until page 2? Give some responses! Kwan your entrance is the ish. Baker...buddy...pal. Great look, but the entrance doesn't really fit :( :( :( maybe it the song, idk. Good show so far. Mvp of the show is Jack's bum. (Pause)
  21. This desk is more funny than probably intended. B17 sounded like he had a wet one. A fart so powerful it woke him up and livened up the cast.
  22. How did you get banned?
  23. Got it all wrong man. When is Alex coming back? Ed wants some.
  24. 6 man turmoil tag??????????
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