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Dont take it so personally man. If you're busy you're busy. Usually theres a bank of matches we can pick from as filler but we havent got any yet this season

Double post, but who gives a fuck. We don't no show in OCW anymore. If you can't make a match you find an alternative, or let staff know so they can arrange an alternative. Peace.

They don't listen Suda. They just do whatever they want. It's like leading an army of toddlers

As much as most people seem to believe it is, my opinion is not gospel. I feel like if you were HoFers, you'd have the instant OH I WANT TO SEE THIS MATCH momentum. Right now, you don't and you'll have to work hard to capture it. Like I say, just an opinion. Hopefully I'm proved wrong.

Thoughts: -Pato does his shit again. No dialogue, just nice writing. Enjoyable. -C4 doesn’t stand for the explosive, first of all. That’s just a happy coincidence. C4, the name, stands for the nothing in particular. We all have a different meaning. The only reference we could take is that it could be about the immediate effect of the explosion, the chaos etc. You’ll see it manifest itself over the coming weeks. Who knows? …and we’re not another heel group. We don’t have a heel group. Hell, we don’t even really have a top heel. Look at the roster for what it is, and it becomes clear where C4 will fit in the grand scheme. -Leon 2.0, while still a douchebag, fits what OCW requires right now. A leader to lead. With Our Hero inside, and Guy Fausto murdered, we need it. I still feel like the balance isn’t quite right between Leon’s own writing and his “proof reader”, but I understand why it is what it is. -Cool match, half expected Gibbs but was still nice to see him. The only issue I have with Gibbs is there’s not enough Mez. The tag division was alive, and now its only 2 teams deep again, so… anyone with alts, tag up. I hope Sid Harrison can beat me, and then obviously Parker going forward… but who knows. The HC title is harder to hold than any title, because EVERYBODY is eligible. Holding that title, to me, shows that you have ability. Maybe Harrison can go one better than me and main event Lution with it. -What started off as the worst idea out of all of them we had turned into perfection. Matsuda isn’t a heel, he’s OCW’s Invader Zim. He’s a cartoon villain and that’s why he’s over and you’re not. I really enjoy working with him when we get the chance. -Matsumoto you cannot be king of the Suplex. YOU ARE NOT THE KING OF THE SUPLEX -I’m not yet sure what Aries angle is, but having him back gives us another good writer, so I can dig it. Like I said earlier, the HC title is the toughest belt to defend due to the hunger of the people you have to defend it against. I dislike the Harrison character still, but maybe he’ll win me over. Maybe. -Espado is OCW’s El Generico only not generic enough. Work on your generic-osity please. -Minio. Wow. Minio. I really enjoy it when we get someone new who can write… I can’t wait to see his character and how he interacts with others on the basis of this RP…. Excited to say the least -Solid match, the running STO is awful, but whatever. -I hate Jessie. -Matsuda did it again. Pato being the calming influence is becoming more and more natural now. I like new Pato. “Arieth” is funny, even if I don’t fully understand the FF7 reference because it’s a pile of steaming bullshit. -Nice to have Hollywood back. Less nice to have Tiberius Dupree on the show, but I can deal with it. Hollywood. Kill. -I hate Jessie -Classic stuff from Mugen, who’s becoming the king of the pre-match hype. No matter who he’s duelling with, his insanity comes off good. DUPREE CAN SUCK A DICK -Cody is good at this game. Very good. I still think he needs the next level feud before he’s “ready” BUT, he’s as good as anyone on the sticks this year. -Valmont/Irving already feels like a “meh” feud. Realistically, right now, both of you need to re-earn your places. If you were two hall of famers, it’d be a different story but you’re not. I think BOTH of you should have had feuds with established roster members first, then worked this feud down the road. To me, its like Trevor Murdock and Ken Shamrock turning up on Raw and expecting people to care that they’re feuding… -WAR WERE DECLARED. -Arnaud dies, so Jim Black is the new Arnaud L -I will kill him. -Glad to see Jay back on a show. Always feels nicer when he writes something. Cool work, funny as always. -I half expected Cody to cry at the end of this promo. Sean has back up – the 38” pythons MUTHAFUCKA. Excited to see the Handi…. Oh -Shenanigans a plenty. Cool match, MUGEN YOU HAVE FAILED US. YOU DIDN’T KILL DUPREE ENOUGH, Sean picking up the win only solidifies his status as top dog (head) in Cerberus. -Tobin better not get mean. I don’t need a mean Tobin on the roster. He’s mean enough when he’s nice. -Commercial especially for you Kent \m/ -Suda holding my belt hostage is further evidence he’s the man at RPs. -Main Event was a good little go. Fully expected a Parker win due to no content from Trance, but he pulled it out. Aries coming to ringside in his dumb and dumber suit (Impact wrestling, month or so ago?) was weird. -Coach Neal made road agent? Did he ever wrestle a match? Jesus.

I'm going to say this because its deserved. As soon as I read the Minio promo I was invested in him. One promo. He's ready made. Well done.

Don't even think about abandoning your new gimmick after a week either!

Let's abolish all titles and fight for honor!

6 Man Ladder match for the World Title starring poeple who need their rematch?

Which is why you'll never be champion. Don't respect the heritage!

Nor did Dupree. Which puts you two above Cody. Technically... and Dimsmore has the FI case.

See. Now you're sounding like a whiny bitch. Do a storyline so that you're actually in people's minds when me and Pato are done. The fact you beat three people doesn't make you next in line. You have a shot, sure, but I honestly don't understand this "I'm next" mentality. Work for it!

Because top guys work with top guys. Lets go through history. It took Parker YEARS to get a look in on the World Title picture. Tibby was HUGE for 6-8 months before he got his shot against Aries. It took me nearly a year of working with main event guys to get my first shot. Thats the most recent three, but Aries was in exactly the same boat (But i don't know his history well enough to put timings on there). The crucial part of this. Not one of us asked for it. We were GIVEN it because we'd earned it. Gibbs didn't want to be in the world title hunt as Gibbs, so Pato made sense, since he's a former World Champion. Sean and Tobin are both consistently mentioned when staff talk about challengers. They haven't already, but they deserve it a damn sight more than you do at this juncture. When the time is right, you'll get your shot. Its just not right now, so you'll need to do something in the meantime.

...and thats exactly the case. The guys at the top - you included, are tough to beat. You have to take yourself to the next level by showing an ability to hang with the top people on the game and in RPs. Its that simple.

I firmly believe that HAD you stayed over the summer, you would have had your shot by now. Since you left, you can't expect to waltz into a situation where you're number 1 contender. Since you've been gone, Sean, Gibbs and Tobin all busted their hump and EARNED what you're telling us you're entitled to. Its on you to FORCE your way into the reckoning by having something interesting going on to make people take note. Jay dropped the ball by not dating it, like Tobin said, but your gimmick can't be "Im waiting for my title shot". Say you get your shot... then what? If you win, you're a champion with the "I want to be champion" gimmick. If you lose... you tumble down the card and you're back to square one. Nothing going on AND no title shot. People don't trust in your ability to be interesting. Thats the sticking point here. You need to prove them wrong. The people who are successful are the people who are constantly working with other people. Truth.

You can't have it all roads though. Its somewhere in between competition and story. You need both in order to be successful.

You know this isn't gamebattles right?

While jay may have forgotten about it, the other staff hadn't. We were just waiting for you to pick up steam again. Now we're in the murky waters of you having it, but not having done anything storyline wise for a while (outside of bullying Leon). Like has been mentioned already here, you can't just be world champ because you win matches, you need the full package. Show us you are.

Possible. If Cerberus had a full line up change.

-Leon and his brain transplant could potentially be an awesome thing. As long as he doesn't slip into his old Leon self, I can see decent things in the future. Having somebody helping you out is what you've needed (and you've admitted as much) for a while, so i'm glad its happening. -Raze. Please sort your character out. I get you're trying, but have somebody help you along and actually take their advice. You seem to be an amalgamation of thing you've seen work in wrestling, and because of that, you don't work. You need to define yourself - I'm still convinced you could pull off an OTT gimmick that defines you, and gives you something to write about. Right now you keep telling us you're going to dominate OCW, but you don't actually do anything toward it. This isn't me being mean, this is me trying to help you - please come up with something that you like, and you're willing to stick to... and make your head bigger. Other than that, you wrecked Seth. Poor Seth. -Sean proving that he knows his character inside out and can get whatever he needs to over FAST. Definitely the success story of last year, and definitely has a big year ahead. -Valmont, I don't get this RP. Where you say “By order of the general manager and management” you could have just said Leonheart… This would have quickly established that a) you know whats going on in OCW B) immediately you’d have some sort of heat with Leon C) You’re interesting. 6 security guards preparing to taze a paying fan is odd in the extreme. -KD being KD – RIP Arnaud -Dimsmore is an underrated RPer. When he finds the time, he delivers, no matter what he’s talking about. Just wish he’d find more time -Sean vs KD is a good match but both of you need to deal with your morphing. Sean looks like a brawlin buddy and KD is half ballerina with those tiny feet. SOMEBODY HELP THESE POOR DISFIGURED MEN. Also, here we have the inherent issue with the “Double check” for the viewer. When someone outside of the two fighting records, it doesn’t pop up and this is fine – as long as you STILL do the double check. Its about showing your opponent that they’re double red. After that its down to trust. If you’re communicating with your opponent, it isn’t an issue, but if you try to force a redo because you weren’t communicating, that’s on you – we all have headsets, and we should all be able to trust each other the follow the rules. The best solution is to buy a cheap dazzle and be able to record yourself. -Mugen and Tobin have a nice back and forth, and Tobin seems to love money. Look at those eyes lighting up! -Cody seems to be kicking dust and waiting for things to come to him, and that’s probably not the best way to get what you want. I get it, you won a tournament, but going on about it isn’t really a storyline. Before you dipped out for the summer you were starting to pick up a head of steam, and since you’ve come back you’ve been in Sean’s shadow. You need to do something to step out of Sean’s shadow in all honesty. I’m not saying your RPs aren’t well constructed, they are, but I’d like to see you have a decent feud with somebody so that you’re back into your stride. If asking for title shots got you title shots then Justin Raze would look like this guy: http://ilarge.listal.com/image/1824974/968full-ultimo-dragon.jpg -I hope we have a best friends sitcom on our hands here. I HOPE! -I feel like people are doing the Clark Effect wrong. Its not 60 minutes on ESPN, use it as a jumping off point, rather than a sit down interview. To me, it’s the closest thing we have to Piper’s Pit, Highlight Reel etc – and were always just platforms to get your feud over. Trance kinda does it right in this case though in the sense that he introduces KD into the mix. Could have done with a little less of the hairline humour, felt a little forced, but other than that it was good. It’s a well written RP, but now I know that I have KD vs Trance XXXVI to look forward too, I’m less thrilled. Hopefully they prove me wrong. -The Mugen vs Tobin deal was an excellent idea, something fun and interesting to start a new season. Both of these hoes can go, so it was entertaining enough. Expecting both to have sterling seasons -Matsuda firing everybody was good stuff. I hope his minions turn up at some point after their bioengineering stints with extra limbs etc -This. I really didn’t like. Its babyface Justin Raze abusing a handicapped kid(?). If this is the OTT gimmick you were going for, then bravo, you nailed it. Its not the work of a good guy though. It really doesn’t sit right, even as a heel I don’t think. If you can save this, please do, but if you’re gonna keep doing it you need to turn heel. Or just abandon the whole thing. Whichever works. Again, I’m not trying to be mean, just trying to help. -Ah Cerberus. We’re told they’re a stable out to get what they deserve. They deserve to head back to developmental and come up with something. Anything. They’ve been yelling amongst themselves for 2 months and 9 year looked like a pay off was coming… except now its not the payoff because everything is forgotten? I feel like going back to the original mindset they had of “Leon will help us get to the top” would help them. Leon can be the catalyst to so many feuds, because he has so many enemies in wrestling, but I don’t feel like that potential has truly been realised. To me, when Cody came back from his sabbatical, they should have pulled the trigger on a Cody vs Sean feud, killed the group and sent them both on their way. Leon could have still managed Cody and it would have all been nice. Leon’s turn on them might be the best thing that could happen to them though, so I hope it pans out. -Gibbs and Crowe is as mean as I was expecting. Kindred are coming 4 u suckas! I hope we get more gimmick matches this year, because some people are good at dreaming up nasty things on the fly. -Parker being Parker. Leon trying to style it out at the end is something I don’t feel like we’d have seen in the past, so bravo . -Gibbs always delivers. He takes you by the eyes and forces you into the scene without you even having to lift a finger. That’s a skill… and it’s a good RP to boot. -Cody vs Aries was gonna go one of two ways. Aries was gonna out do him at every step OR Cody was going to manhug him into submission. Unfortunately, it was the manhugs. Not the worst match in the world, but it was always Cody’s. Was genuinely shocked when Cody threw a combo – HAS HE FINALLY ADDED THE MISSING ELEMENT TO HIS ARSENAL? Having Aries back and motivated is hopefully a good thing. The attire deal has been addressed, so I won’t go over it, but I feel weird about Sid killing his momentum and becoming Aries’ right hand man (Which is kinda how the entrance, and the RPs at the end of last season were feeling). -Tobin and Mugen again with a solid RP. Nice to see everyone getting involved -Sid is Leon! -Matsuda is mean. Pato feels weird talking, but A BEAST HE STILL IS. The villain always goes over (almost more than Leon!) Stacy Clarke thinks she’s on The Amanda Show. DON’T BREAK THE FOURTH WALL STACY -Main Event went down nicely (The Villain always goes over). Parker with some decent work on the video and Dimsmore got his head smashed in. Hollywood wandering back in completes the group. Hope he's strong because he's helping carry OCW again (\m/). Perfect night in my eyes. #CHAMP

IN MINIO WE TRUST! Good work. This is how you should introduce a character.

Which is the mistake i just said i'd fixed. Dick. Nice to see we're starting the new season how we mean to go on.

The top of page 4 and 5 have been switched around, as I'd made a mistake there. That's all i've got i'm afraid.