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Brandon Hostiles Review:

 

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Riot Intro. I don't know if its been said yet or not, but it sorta needs to be updated a little. Its not that big of a deal. But it would be cool for the creator to save side project file that way when theres a new champion he just has to replace the old champions spot in like 2 seconds.

Suggestion thats all. Its really not that important I just know a lot of people like up-to-date stuff.

 

So we kick off Riot with Parker. Parker's addresses Mr. Sensation as Jay and complains they haven't had much 1 on 1 bonding time recently and that 'Jay' isn't paying attention to Parker. This is a great RP so far and Parker has great mic work.

 

The mid way video consists of the lights dimming and Mayhem appearing behind Parker. Like any smart man he got out the ring before his feet could catch up to him. But only to end up trading blows with Smythe who throws him back in the ring so Mayhem could eat dinner. Just as Mayhem about to drop Parker on the steel steps from the 3rd rope Mr. Sensation interrupts with his fancy shmancy limo.

 

Mr. Sensation announces that Lution's World Championship contenders are: Smythe D. Wonder, Trevor McManus and Aries. As Smythe turns to just walk out of the arena as he received what he wanted Mr. Sensation then booked a Lution contenders match between Smythe and Parker because of Smythes arrogance. He proceeds to get counted out after Parker boots him off the apron at the 9 count. Smythe SDW's, Parker and ref(should help Ryder).

 

Page one overall had great content. I was surprised to see that there wasn't a legit Parker vs Smythe match. But surprises are good. I'm actually very pleased to see Parker in the WHC boat. I hope it stays this way.

 

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We start off with Mr.Yamaguchi. Love the entrance music. Sounds like the band Loyal To The Grave. Couple Japanese friends I have in a hardcore band in Japan. Build up Lotus as an indestructible force that brings balance. Evil and balance to change OCW and never make it the same. Yamaguchi brings up Nate…. :( so much for Lotus… ha. Leon and Pato will be such a good match a Lution. Hopefully they hit some amazing spots and don't have too much trouble with servers and lag. +1 point for Leon attacking Yamaguchi successfully and avoiding Pato. Tho no points given for outrunning Pato.

 

Border war seems cool. I mark for it. I also mark for Arnaud using Captain Clowny. TI remember when that kid said that to him during a 3 way DM. Sooo funny. With this Rp it looks like Arnaud is building more personal hype than tag team hype.. I hope the Canadians don't disappear in time and just fade to singles competitors.

 

 

ARNAUD VS WALKER 2: Gravity Blasting

 

Great match. I really enjoyed the back and forth and the outside work. The match waste really at all boring. Arnaud always has great taunting after the right moves even tho the no-sells get him sometimes haha Was a great match and a good win for Dorian Arnaud. ***** 4/5

 

Immediately after the match we are sent backstage with Chris Ryder lounging on his sofa.

Ryder is talking to his belt.. more like confiding in it. Which i guess is actually a good thing. Sickening plot of revenge against the referees. He is interrupted by none other than the OCW officials. The referee's attempt to bail out of the match for 'safety.' Cant blame em referee's are scrawny little spit-fucks. Cept for Earl Hebner. The referee's are sadly denied and left in the room.

 

 

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Justin Rockstar and Dane Xavier.. good combo. What doesn't a rockstar want other than money to spend on drugs and boose? Dane has a problem wit the Rockstar on his couch but Danes lost his edge, his on-topness, his muchness and lets it slide. Rockstar asks what he's gotta do and Dane goes over his match with David Jackson. Rockstar is pleased with this match and continues on fearlessly with Dane. Dane still, does not care.

 

DJACK VS ROCKSTAR: Captain Clowny

 

I personally love watching DJACK in the ring. One of the best established wrestling styles in OCW and one hell of a reverse trigger. I'm only a third in the match and its great back and forth I haven't seen anything that doesn't really fit the match not even with the moveset. I mark for the music for the beginning of the match. I mark for the ddt, to mayoral to the running knee drop by Rockstar. Great move sequence and it looked smooth. DJack and the Rolling Salvate = WIN. Lots of failed top rope moves for sure in this match Good win for Rockstar. ***** 3/5

 

After the match we go to Stacey Clark with K.Dangelo. Despite his recent low, I expect Dane to be Black Racked. K.D goes down the reckless path not caring about the injuries of his opponents and silikes that management tries to protect its employees. tsk tsk we should sick Mayhem on K.D ;)

 

RYDER VS MCMANUS: Crazy vs Crazier

 

This match is a good all out wrestling match. Ryder does a good job of getting his sig/fin hit early in the match and is clearly dominating as he gets another sig shortly after. It seems that Ryder and McManus have conflicting fighting styles. Lots of telexing and striking at the same time. Every encounter kinda leaves the viewer open to who will win the draw.

 

I mark for Trevors reversal on the top rope and then hitting the diving spear. Dislike the movement of the cam ninja. Who recorded??? I usually like the outside irish whip over the steps but this has been used in all 3 matches tonight so far. Theres no way for anyone to know that the other matches used it but it sucks seeing it 3 times a night.

 

Mark for the ADTR song. Chris Ryder wins via submission for the end of a great match. Dunno why trips quit out at the very end but we'll say thats svr servers. ***** 3/5

 

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Nate Ortiz returns! OH MY GAWD!!! He's gone facial reconstruction surgery as well! He looks exactly like Dane. This is exciting people. He is a legend if only Recon was here too!

 

So Dane tries to pull a Nate. This could hurt him in the future. As the fans chant bullshit too bad Sting isn't here to agree. Dane tells people that its time for people to move on. To show respect to the new cows on the farm and that Nate wont actually come to Riot. He claims he will take the torch at Wrestlution.

 

From there we move only to the perfect smile of OCW DJones. Ohhh no smiles…. nvm.. Looks like we have some marital problems here with DJones… thats bad. He's completely unsuspecting Pato's attack. But the big man cant find the buffet so I'd be on my toes from now on if I were DJones.

 

SYTHE D. WONDER VS CODY STORM: The Perfect Storm

 

I completely expect Cody Storm to win this match from the git go. Smythe has a few pounds on the grappler but thats okay. Smythe probably hasn't scouted this match too much. I feel that Storm will catch Smythe slipping and will do it rather quickly. There are some really good timed reversals in this match that stop the opponent from getting sig moves. Smythe's the first to break through and hit the SDW. Storm kicks out and continues on to take control.

 

Random thought I could see Storm pulling the man of a thousand and 4 holds. xD Nearly all of his ground moves are holds of some type. Oh look I signed on. ^.^After the SDW Storm has really taken control for a turn in tides of the match. Noticing his bar isn't moving at all tho… that sucks. Smythe hits 2 moves and gets a sig hits that and a finisher and we have ourselves a winner. Good job Smythe. ***** 3/5

 

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DANE XAVIER VS K.DANGELO: II

 

Good match to start off page 5. I like KD's entrance music. I can almost taste it.. (Nate) I would mark so much for a Nate interference in this match but I kinda wanna see a battle of the Brute's/ Half way through the match and this is going rather quickly. KD has noticeable control and has had control since the corner reversal. He hits the powerbomb sig and the spear following. Dane kicks out a split second before three.

 

Gets a nice ground reversal and gains control for a split second then is consumed by KD again. Despite Dane's momentary control gains he's met with a reversal. We're now close to the end and KD smells blood. Up goes the Black Rack and Dane taps out. Good match. Not Main Event quality competition on Danes part. K.D delivered a straight up ass whooping and the beast lives on. ***** 2/5

 

After the match Smythe appears from behind the curtain dragging Birdie, Mr. Sensations assistant. This is just uncalled for. Dragging a girl like this. Don't we have sexual harassment laws in this place? Smythe blames everything on Birdie. Smythe rage. Sensation appears at the top of the ramp. Sensational Saviour! Sorta Not… Birdie gets speared and Smythe gets his number 1 contendership back. Smythe leaves the building a winner at all expenses.

 

 

Great Riot. I give Rp's a combined 4 stars. and the matches I have to give 3 stars. Undercard put on great matches. I was pleased with all but the Main Event. Maybe it shoulda been redone to at least made it go back and for a bit more. But oh well. I'm sure some people disagree with me.

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Comp grad, I know what it actually is. I called it the FTP as it's commonly referred to that, but sure, the server on which the FTP is having issues, perhaps your bandwidth is being throttled due to a rather high traffic turnover.

 

 

 

As for what Parker said, I called it, sort of. I called a far more light hearted scenario which could have had midgets.

 

Network Sci Grad, Your wrong. FTP is a protocol, used between Client- IE YOU and Server IE OCW.

 

The Server is what hosts the files, whether it be linux, cisco, windows etc.

 

Only instance i've heard FTP used to describe a server is for pure downloads, from the old sites in the late 90s

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 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix

 

"Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff

 

Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got

Our Hero: uploadafraud.com

Jookie: fuck u boricua

 

"I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda

 

OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh
 

"I'm 5,9" - Ry
 

"I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen

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Smythe was meant to be Main Event, however due to an error on my part and for continuity purposes (lol costume) we had to bump it down one. In hindsight could have just said, Smythes runs to the back and quickly puts on his suit then runs back out! But that woulda been silly!
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 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix

 

"Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff

 

Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got

Our Hero: uploadafraud.com

Jookie: fuck u boricua

 

"I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda

 

OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh
 

"I'm 5,9" - Ry
 

"I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen

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D-JACK VS ROCKSTAR: Captain Clowny

 

Really? It's not bad enough that I hear 'Captain Clowny' from KD and his kin, but now I get to see it in a review?

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Quick note and probably last for now.

 

The new Main Event, Guys Guys...Guys. We are supposed to look at you two as the new up and comers. The Mid Level near top, the match was pretty awful and very disappointing. You guys can most certainly do better, I know it and you know it, so step it up. I know you can, if you sit on your haunches I can promise you, what little shine you may get will be eclipsed by the likes of a Japanese midget with a Asian Sensation Mngr, An asshole who curses on live TV, An obese Samoan, a witch doctor with hood pants, and a man from the greatest hometown in the history of hometowns.

 

Just saying.

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 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix

 

"Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff

 

Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got

Our Hero: uploadafraud.com

Jookie: fuck u boricua

 

"I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda

 

OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh
 

"I'm 5,9" - Ry
 

"I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen

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Really? It's not bad enough that I hear 'Captain Clowny' from KD and his kin, but now I get to see it in a review?

 

I was there when captain clowny was invented. I laughed my ass off at that little kid for sayin that xD

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What else can I say? KD straight up whooped me! He was on it with reversals, every time I'd reverse he'd get me right back. He's on a roll and I think he should keep that music I gave him!
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Smythe what the fuck is wrong with you??? I can't believe you of all people would hit a woman? I thought that goes against everything Smythe Dawonder stands for?

 

The Video was awesome. Sensation and Smythe stole the show with that last page.

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I liked the show not that theme music Dane gave me.Had totally different music.

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THE ALPHA !

Dorien Arnaud :1x Ambition Champion, 1x hardcore champion

Kat : 1x BombShell Queen

K.Dangelo : 1 TV champion 2x Hardcore Champion 1X North American Champion 2x Tag Team Champion, 1x Pride champion

Espado : 1x Light Heavy Champion


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