Useless Dane Xavier Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 MVP of Lution? But I got fucking DESTROYED!! http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g289/jlethridge1/DaneCard.jpg http://wrestlinglol.com/photos/14n34sp.gif
Brandon Hostile Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 A Hostile Point of View: Yes Ladies and well scratch the ladies out, just Gentlemen.. Anyways its that time again. Wooooooooo! Page 1: Smythe's a Luh hooo zuh herrrrrr!! Live from Phili! I love this place! We start off with damnit I guess we're momentarily in Toronto…? Really Smythe? You that lazy you cant fly 2 hrs to Philadelphia for a show? New-Jack is ABM not you! The beginning 3 paragraphs of the role play are pretty alright. Not amazing but decent. I don't agree with you pulling a rock via satellite. After the pop from the crowd the RP starts to pick up. Good dialogue comes into play. Marks to Tiffany is good, but you don't bring the Nate's girl into this boy. You will get fed. Overall pretty good starting RP for Riot. This feud better not pull a wrestlemania and continue on after this.. i hope… its a good feud but I think Wrestlution should be the cap to feuds. Next we move onto Mr. Sensation troll his way down to the ring. No apparent bruises or injuries for big guns. Pretty good. OCW Staff should have the ring set up before you enter tho buddy. You never see crew set up the cutting edge on air. You only see Edge and whoever destroy it ^.^ Rookie asking if the mic's on too. C'mon lobster head! I've noticed a few botches on dialogue and action in the RP. Nothing too serious but I'll point them out. There are no action caps for Poling when Sensation *Points to BIG Al Poling and Al looks left and right as if "Me?"* And Sensation was already wearing sunglasses when he came out to the ring. So now he's wearing 2 pairs of glasses at the same time! Double shady. Sensation keeps his business between Smythe and Al short. Thats good. You are the boss you have a show to run, not just one little angle and your problems. OCW Riot is moving to Wednesday! Thats good! This benefits me because now I have more than just monday to do the matches and RP's with my schedule. Next Sensation brings up the graduation of two Ambition stars! The first is none other than "Your Girls Favourite Wrestler!" AKA "The Fire" Tiberius Dupree. I think Dupree is a great addition to Riot. He has very good writing skills and could be an intense competitor in the Ex Division. OCW Ex is for sure, ON THE RISE! As Sensation s about to announce the second graduate he's interrupted by the tron. Riots intro, and, oh no.. Static and falling leaves. Adapt or Die means ones simple thing. LOTUS! Illuminati, Matsuda, Wesley Adams Poe, Patolomai followed by a suited Leonheart! So technically this is one graduate. Cuz I'm sure they could easily just crash riot every show if they wanted to. Someones gonna have to take this guys down and put them in their place. I'll do it myself if I have to. ;) Leons piece in the RP is pretty good. Well played follow up RP for the Heel turn. After Tiberius' line Leon really turns the heat up. It turns out to be very good. Luke S. Dimsmore appearing out the crowd is different. I like that it was a different interruption approach. The little interchange between LSD and Dupree was fucking hilarious. It sounded lke something I'd hear in a Live party. Leon announces Patolomai as a graduate to Riot. Sensations response is very very good. I'll really enjoy watching Pato vs Dane later this evening. I smell 1st support for Main Event. PAGE 2: We start page two with FAT Trance! Stacey Clark getting her work in for tonight. Good use of her other than Jim Black for once too. Jacob's RP is very light and has a good vibe to it. All positive. Is it true that we may see the lighter side of Trance for a long while? I guess we'll ind out. Next Dorky music means Judas Hallows our NEW Ex Division Champion.. That better not last a long time… I Swear. D-Jack needs to unsheathe and stab his ass. Judas' RP is rather hot. Making a small semi-inspirational thank you speech. An Open challenge goes out At the youngest OCW champion at history at 20 looks like he'll easily have a few contenders to break that. After all, Hostile is only 19. DANE $ XAVIER VS. PATOLOMAI: THE DOUCHE VS THE SAMOANNNN! Haven't started the match but I can totally see Pato sitting in a bamboo tenths thingy sitting on Dane's Road To Glory poster and just laying off a gnarly ass fart and going "Huhhh?! O.O" I can almost taste itttt!!! Dane loses the Lution remix that sucks. I think all Lotus needs is a black guy and they cover pretty much the entire colour wheel of the human species. xD Okay the match pretty much starts with Dane on his back right away. Not a good sign from one of OCW's World Heavyweight Championship contenders. Lets go Dane! Keep his ass of Riot! Its our chance to lessen their numbers. Side note, I've never played Pato in a card match but he's straight ripping on Dane here. I must be missing something about him. I assume he doesn't play anything like he does on the card as he does in DM's. We're a quarter through the match and Dane's about connecting with 1 punch and thats it lol Half way through the match now Dane's offense has some what picked up. He's showing obvious damage to the rib cage. This match is just a pure great showing for Lotus. The power of the new guys is amazing. I can see Dane's controller is still broken due to his shenanigan running around thing in the bottom left corner. Pato still reverses the running move LOL. Pato wins in the end via finisher. He pretty much creamed Dane. Overall: 3 1/2 out of 5 ***** Reason: Dane got worked…. but Pato plays off Lotus well. Dominant. After the match we go to commercial break and come back with Vimes in the ring. Vimes talks mad trash on the GM's of Riot but is quick to change the subject to Ambition matters. Vimes is hinting at Ambition being a stronger show than Riot. If he had his way he would crush Riot with Ambition superstars. Ambition trades Dupree and Pato for myself and Dorien Arnaud. PAGE 3: We start off with a strong interview from K.D. Seems rather happy about defeating Jookie. But he shoulda used the black rack. KD spits out plans for NA Championship run even tho its not there. Why no WHC Boy?? Good rp overall. TIBERIUS DUPREE VS HAZARD: KEEP THE FIRE FROM HAZARD PLEASE…. his name is Hazard for a reason lmao. Match starts off pretty fast pace. This is a great Ex match and should turn out very good in the end. Didn't like hazards attempt at a running corner from 2 feet away. good for Dupree on the reversal. Good back and forth action. HAZARD CHANGE YOUR EDGECUTION ITS MY SIG. Dupree's fighting off hazard really well in this match. Hazard seems to have the ultimate upperhand throughout. Hazards fail attempts at top rove moves are pretty funny. I'd like to see more variety from hazard with his move set. I think he had a regular move that looks like a more stylish version of his front finisher too. Hazard steals the fire. Overall 3/5 stars ***** PAGE 4: Not gonna review my own piece. From there we move Mayhem STILL our World Heavyweight Champion. Good rp. Dark no doubt. Seems very Roman Empirish but like evil roman empirish. T-MAC VS KD: YOUR MAIN EVENT! So I think Trevor will pick up the win in this. If not it'll be lose by black rack for obvious submission finisher reasons. KD's music doesn't really fit.. The match has been relatively back and forth KD probably has control 60/40 and pays off by hitting a sig. Trevor does a good job in keeping out of the black rack. But to no avail KD straps it in after the second powerbomb signature and claims a win. Overall 3/5 ***** PAGE 5: The BIG NATE RETURN! Great RP. Hands down best one of the evening. I think its funny how Nate and Dane look so similar. Nate stepping into the ring again is awesome. He should face Cody Storm ^.^ I expect lotus may get involved in this now that they have made their way to Riot. We shall see. Good Riot overall. Not amazingly spectacular. Several good Rp's and sone pretty decent matches. Looking forward to the future. :) 6 You don't mean anything. You're insignificant and you will never know what hate is.
Dale Ernsmore Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 The Roclk in WWE and now Nate in OCW....2011 is lookin good! Great RUIT, congrats Pato and Dupree you both deserve it. Dane couldn't reverse shit, not the norm from what I've seen.
Jacob Trance Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 The Roclk in WWE and now Nate in OCW....2011 is lookin good! Great RUIT, congrats Pato and Dupree you both deserve it. Dane couldn't reverse shit, not the norm from what I've seen. It may have had something to do with the camera angle, I know he has a problem in those situations. Don't see why Leon HAD to be there considering Dane can record, but hoo hey, them's the breaks. And yes, in his time off Nate Ortiz has been doubling as a Dane Xavier body double! Some of the roleplays felt a bit long with random, strange errors but it happens when you're writing long stuff. Props to the HippoPatomai on busting out a win on his first Riot, and props to Hazard for cleaning up his act. You could almost taste the panic when he was smashing cancel on that leverage pin roll up. As previously stated, it was a good Riot
Useless Dane Xavier Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 I said a long time ago when I did my facial hair, that I KNEW one of these days someone would point out that Nate and I look alike. Damn me for calling him out! 1 http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g289/jlethridge1/DaneCard.jpg http://wrestlinglol.com/photos/14n34sp.gif
Tiberius Dupree Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 Thank you Dale! very very good show. had some great rps, especially Nate's. Pato showed up in his debut, I on the other hand did not lol Gotta step my game up! "You either die a hero or live long enough to become Nate Ortiz" - Drago Cesar "Let me make myself clear: you work for me. If I tell you to fight Blaine, you fight Blaine. Hell, if I tell you to fight a lion, you WILL fight a lion and still thank me afterwards for giving you a job." - Mr. Sensation
Leon Valentine Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 Pato showed up in his debut, I on the other hand did not lol Gotta step my game up! This is exactly why you should have stayed on Ambition... You're weak. You need to Adapt, just like Patolomai did. Matsuda and Illuminati should have been the other two guys to graduate and not you. You better Adapt Dupree or you will DIE! 1
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