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LSD V Illuminati

I don’t think I’ve ever seen that ladder animation for putting it in the ring, and then LSD punches you and ruins the new found animation. Yow, poor LSD, you kept running into the ring but it wouldn’t let you in because you were running into the spot where nati was jumping. I’m digging this first song you picked Warren. Nice powerbomb off the ladder by Nati, but LSD is just up anyway. The boot dodge into the springboard blockbuster was great. (if you all can’t tell I’m writing this as I watch it, hence why I actually remember move combinations xD). I’m with you LSD, I have a simple push off the ladder, I figure that why you can, if need be, push them off and grab the prize (I prepared for the FI with logic damnit). A commercial for the new Fran Drescher show just played on my tv, I’m not certain if my spouse told me they were gay after years of marriage that I’d be able to just accept that…. Anyway, back on track. What a stomp on the throat by LSD. If he’s try…. SPEAR! Spear onto LSD from the ladder knocking him off the turnbuckle, not astounding in the game,, but the idea itself is impressive. I do love that apron big boot, you knocked his head right onto the other side of the apron, it’d be cool if you could have walked to the other side and done the boot again. T-bone into the ladder, nice LSD. Hey btw, someone said that grapples on the ladder when it’s stuck sideways into the turnbuckle are not able to be reversed, anyone know if it’s true? I’m just curious. LSD standing high above all, nice Austin elbow. I think I’m going to stop commenting on every move I like and go to the big ones from now on, because this is simply too much for you all to read. I really like the Vince Stunner on you LSD, it looks nice, I’m a little curious as to why you’re not climbing after it though, it looks like it was edited so I suppose that’s why. GTS and that’s all she wrote.

 

 

Great match you two, had a lot of good spots, and I loved the attempted spears off the turnbuckle by Nati…. Pheonix splash…. He already won, you douche xD.

 

 

Hostile's promo

Flashing off his strike combos, Hostile sounds more MMA than OCW xD, you need a punching bag or something. I’m sad to be one of Ryder’s three followers, ashamed even.

 

 

Brandon Hostile vs Justin Rockstar

I love both of your themes, though since putting To Move on is to Grow on my ipod I’ve grown to REALLY love it! It’s only at about 3 minutes and already a decent way through, this match must not last too long. Hostile looked like he pulled some nightcrawler shit, kicking Rockstar in the back of the leg and then teleporting to kick him in the back of the head (it’s the video, I know, but it still looked good). Hostile’s moving the stairs, setting up for the kick out of the ring I would guess. Should of edited out the connection lapse, well it was small, probably forgot it happened. NICE! That running elbow into the springboard forearm was great by Justin. How are you going to dodge the turnbuckle kick and not go for another springboard forearm? It was a Per…..nice Shooting star Hostile, didn’t see it coming. You just dropped the springboard set up again…. You have failed me Rockstar, and for that I hope you lose >:o. That kick just always looked like it bends strange to me, I liked it better in the older Smackdowns, but good finish to a good match guys.

 

Nice job Hostile; now go get the belt!

 

Leon Arrives

Suda screwed Leon? Oh shit! Pato’s down?! Must have been hit by a bulldozer, just about the only thing that could do that job. Ya know, besides the Son of God ;).

 

Dupree vs Poe

So this video is doing the whole “I’m going to tell you I’m buffering but I’m actually not doing shit so that you can stair at a black screen for all of eternity” I’ll come back to this match at another point in time.

 

 

 

Dorian Arnaud RP

There are far too many “A’s” in this promo and I have a headache already from playing Portal 2…..WAIT!!! Dupree vs Poe Loaded somehow. TO THE MATCH MOBILE……

 

 

Dupree vs Poe Round 2

Another Great addition to my Ipod “THE FIRE!”. I’m digging the new tat and the attire. Look at that smile! Poe’s so happy to be here! I’m digging the kick pads, the rest of the attire looks nice too but kick pads to me are always cooler looking I can’t lie. Clothesline and a miss! I like that triangle choke too Dupree, but I feel locking that in for a simple single elbow strike seems anticlimactic, not to bag on your moves, it looks good on you. Same with your dozens of signature moves xD. Speaking of which, it’s Duplicity! Poe trying to get in and Dupree just punches him off the apron, NICE. And a nice feed of the leg into the single leg crab. Grapevine the leg and strap on the Ankle lock Poe, I’m with you, that’ll cripple him for sure! ….. what is this, a slingshot senton to a standing man, look at Dupree not thinking (Or SVR being broken as usual, I’ll chalk it up to Dupree fucking up because it makes me laugh). The Curb stomp, haven’t seen that in some time. It’d be a bad ass move to hit on the stairs. Super rana onto the steps, NICE! NOOOO. A standing rana forehead first into those steps, now that was SICK! So I just remembered the stipulation to this match, and I’ll cry if Dupree loses, just saying. Dupree is lucky he caught that lock up or it may have been all over and a career is saved by a hair. He comes back to life with a nice dropkick off the turnbuckle. A bulldog onto the steps, also sick. You two are going to be concust after this one. The Snuka combo looks great on Dupree. DUPREE WINS!

 

 

After match events

Poe isn’t going to tell him? Instead he’s installing doubt into Dupree, that’s not good. Future Endeavors, HA I get it! Calling out Hanna, and her theme is a big reference to Manson, what a fitting song………. She actually did it…….! NO! That’s FUCKED UP! BREAK HER! And there’s a “HE”? Are “THEY” coming too? xD. Oh, but she escaped, damn she’s got som……. Old Marie Dupree is HERE!!!! Kind of surprised you found her on the same night you found out Hanna had her, but at least “he’s” still a mystery. I’m excited for this now.

 

 

Ok back to Arnaud’s promo

How are you going to diss on Dupree after what he’s been through, you suck! But I do like the Asshole reference.

 

 

 

My Shit

I had absolutely nothing to contribute to this PPV so I made a video, sorry it only has clips from three matches but my computer hid my files after a system restore :/.

 

 

KD promo

That’s what this is! They’re holding the black man down! Forget that stealing is a felony, it’s all racism xD. Didn’t you just switch from heel to face? Now heel again, damn you work fast! I will smack you SO HARD in the head with my case, so very very…. Very very very hard! I’m surprised you know what an anomaly is (Probably had to use a dictionary before you hit the ring :P). I am FAR too jewish for the end of this promo!

 

 

Dorian Arnaud vs Dale Ernsmore

I’m very glad this match ended up going down without a hitch. I would say, without a doubt, that of the contests these two have had, this one is the best by far. A good defense, and damn right I gave him pageantry, we go all out when the gold’s on the line BITCH! Specially with a title as sexy as the intercontinental championship.

 

 

Here comes the main event……..

 

 

Mayhem© vs Leonheart

Champion vs Motherfucker of the year! I’m actually quite excited for this one, regardless of a beaten Smythe having to bow out. I know this may sound geeky but that angel bleeding makes me think of the stone angel things in Doctor Who xD. And heads make me want to puke.

It kind of makes me laugh that Mayhem was hanging upside down within the first few seconds of the match xD. Damn that tap A game, even I can’t beat him, superheavies>all at the tap A game. Two shoulder blocks and then a grapple into a ground grapple…. That’s a shit ton of momentum loss. See it’s that kind of thing that makes me laugh that we back away at all. Why should you have to back away after one ground move if you can find certain situations where you can hit ridiculously long combos? (Not trying to knock on Mayhem personally, just reminded me of something I had been thinking about, and also I’m not saying we shouldn’t be able to hit combos, I’m just bringing it up). Anyway, back to the match. Nice clothesline bulldog by the challenger……..mid match scene, well alright, I like this scene anyway xD Leon deserves to eat tables. You have control of Mayhem and you go for the turnbuckle smashes? More balls than I have my friend……. He beat Mayhem at the tap A? I’m calling shenanigans! Wait what?! He goes for the LKO....

 

 

 

and gets jumped…. We almost had a new world champion! Leon got fucked! I… I just… I don’t know how to react to this. The Tormentor is the leader of the pack now. I have one hell of an uphill battle now (Yes, I’m that self centered that I’m thinking about my title shot, bite me)…..

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A Hostile Point Of View

 

Welcome to End Games ladies and gentlemen! I expect tonight, Tiberius Dupree makes an impact on Lotus by sending Poe home, Mayhem Retains his World Heavyweight Championship, Cody Storm, LSD pins Illuminati or Illuminati kicks LSD's ass in the name of the Ex Division, Arnaud and Dale put on a good show, and some good motha fuckin RP's faggots. Lets GO!

 

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I wish I could have seen a video of pyrotechnics at the arena along with the theme song played on it. Would have been more showy to myself and maybe a few others. Nothing wrong with how it is now however. I really like the theme song and it seems to have a good tone to the pay-per-view.

 

Scaggs introduces OCW and the pay-per-view well alongside 'Big' Al Poling. Our first superstar making an appearance of the evening is 'The Fire' Tiberius Dupree. Great way to start off the pay-per-view seeing as house Dupree has the most head behind his angle and feud with Lotus. I'm diggin the new tattoo on Dupree and he does a good job of introducing the scene. There's a good meaning behind the tattoo as well. Its not just a random tattoo used because it looks cool. I like it when OCW characters have meaning behind their tattoo's. Hostile, Mayhem and Dupree and even Rockstar are the ones that have tattoo's based off real meaning to their caws.

 

Dupree has some good writing and great word choice in his Role-play. He picks up in-ring performance he could be headlining the Ex Division in a Main Event of pay-per-views to come. The Fire is certainly bringing the fire tonight in his out of ring contributions and I hope he puts on an amazing show in the match!

 

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Justin Rockstar kicks off page 2 with Jim Black in a pre-match interview. Rockstar gets straight to the point and states he's going to "fly high" to become the Ex Division's Number One Contender. Good RP quick and to the point. Good Job.

 

Next a video airs on the End Games Xtron and the first Summercide match is announce. The Ex Division Championship will be on the line against the winner of 'Devil' Matsuda vs ©Judas Hallows which will take place at Riot in 2 weeks.

 

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Holy crap Matsuda is kicking Smythe's ass with a led pipe. Jesus, I assume that taking Smythe out on a stretcher will mean that he wont be competing tonight in the main event. I'm happy with this actually. I don't like Smythe's character.

 

LUKE S. DIMSMORE VS ILLUMINATI

 

Illuminati looks buffed as fuck coming out for the match. I still love the mask none the less. One of he sickest attires in OCW. La da da da daa daa da dah dah dadadah. I will admit lately a lot of OCW Entrance themes have gotten stuck in my head. Its really awesome but it sucks at the same time haha.

 

I didn't like Dimsmore punching Illuminati as he was trying to slide into the ring with the ladder in the beginning of the match. Other than that so far this match has been really good. Illuminati hits a sick Phoenix off the middle rope to the outside and a great sunset flip powerbomb off the ladder to LSD. Illuminati has been working on the shticks. The two put up a great battle on the top. Dunno why the falling animation is glitchy. LSD Hits a great diving axe off the ladder. Little pay back for Nati.

 

These guys are doing serious damage to each other and we're not even half way through the match. That spot with the Nati on the ladder and LSD on the turnbuckle would been cool if they both jumped at the same time. There's great use of ladders in this match. Props to both of the guys for using them in a non-spammish way. Not liking LSD's breaking of FPR at the end though. The knee drop attack on the ground to pick up to fin attempt. Other than that the match was amazing. Real long too but good job.

 

Overall: ***** 4/5 Stars

 

Next the camera goes backstage to Mayhem. I only had one problem with the RP and that is Mayhem saying "etc." To me the word doesn't fit. Takes out of the dramatic effect of the words he choses to use around it. Great syntax and shows that Mayhem means business as usual.

 

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Since its all Hostile and the #1 Contender match I'm not gonna comment too much. I really enjoyed writing that Role-play and I'm curious to peoples comments on it and the match. Shouts to Dane for getting that shit done with me as fast as we could.

 

Page 5

 

Leonheart arrives at the arena and speaks rather quickly. Leon sounds suspicious, but at the same time, if it wasn't part of his original plan that was cool. I don't see Smythe and Leon working together.

 

THE FIRE VS WAP

 

The loser leaves OCW. While we haven't had an insane amount of content from Poe, Dupree has been working hard and getting multiple RP's in per show! I'm rooting for Dupree obviously as the Ex Division will take out yet another heavyweight.

 

Poe has such a stand out caw in my mind. I love the facepaint and the rest of the attire. I'd like to see him as a champion in OCW. Even WHC if he can submit good content and stuff that'd be cool and good for Lotus.

 

THe match has good back and forth however Poe has the upper-hand through out. Dupree is still bringing it compared to his other days at the office. WTFis the match in super slow-motion for? Warren or Kent you guys should check that shit out with your settings or something. It makes the matches hard to watch.

 

Dupree's been liking his face in them steel steps lately xD He does some good work getting Poe dumped on them as well earlier in the match. The post match Rp is amazing. The split between the finisher and the ground move could been a little better. But still amazing.

 

Overall: ***** 5/5 Stars

 

After Dupree and Poe, we move backstage with Jim Black and Champion Dorian Arnaud. 'Did you see the way his arm hang like a loaf of bread?' CHECK THAT SHIT MAN! The whole two cents bit doesn't make sense it looked like you wanted something else for that. Arnaud shouldn't be a face and the crowd reaction shouldn't be that good. I think the RP is decent and Arnaud has a great gimmick but the RP's and direction with the fans needs work.

 

The Cody Storm hype video is awesome. Great song use, and great editing. He should make a new updated version of the Riot intro video.

 

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The KD role-play is really good. Good way to get back on track with this. I wouldn't talk shit on the Ex Division though. The Ex Division will feed on your ass.

 

DORIAN ARNAUD VS DALE ERNSMORE

 

This match should be an awesome 5 star match. I see Dale coming out on top however. But you never know. I just hope it doesn't turn into a cheese fest. If it does I'm gonna stop watching the match and skip to the end. As an Extreme Rules match for the beginning theres not a whole lot of work with weapons. I'm surprised neither man used them as much. After the second chair gets introduced to the match the extreme rules starts to show. While I still wish it'd be more of an ass kicking fest, its still pretty decent.

 

Arnaud is being annoying with his running around as he places Dales head on top of another chair. Lots of unnecessary running done there. The playing possum in the corner was a little cheap too. Any decent player would think that you aren't there and would leave you alone. So when Dale gets up and runs at Arnaud he kinda deserved it. The back drop onto the steel ring bell is awesome. I really hate it when people try to kick out of running attacks.. :(

 

Overall: ***** 4 out of 5

 

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MAIN EVENT TIMEEEEEE

 

I think that Mayhem will retain against leon. It would be interesting to see Leon pull an upset however. The match seems like its gonna go pretty quick. Leon gets first strikes off and needs to keep on him and stay out of mini games if he honestly plans on beating Mayhem. LAWL at Leons fail at a run up stop and grapple haha

 

The table piece is amazing! Great fucking job on that. As this match goes on I see Leon pulling an upset win over Mayhem which would align Cody Storm vs Leon which would make to cap the feud with those two.

 

Lotus turning on their leader Leon is fucking epic. I don't know why they did, or where this comes from. But its great! I hope that Pato stays on Leon's side. driving Lotus right down the middle. Matsuda will take control of Lotus. Tibby can finally right back a bit easier against Lotus as well as Storm and Hostile. yaayyy

 

Overall: ***** 5/5

 

GREAT FUCKING PAY-PER-VIEW!! I loved it. I wish the Ex Title match could have happened but all is well as it is. Good work guys, I cant wait for Summercide! :D

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I'm not going to write a long ass review, I'm simply going to say job well done to everyone involved, whilst the majority of the results went as predicted, it was still a fun one to watch.

 

It's a shame about the EX title match, and the problems that arose when that was attempted to be resolved. See you all on riot everybody :)

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Btw Hostile, Matsuda has always been the leader of LOTUS.

"You either die a hero or live long enough to become Nate Ortiz" - Drago Cesar

 

"Let me make myself clear: you work for me. If I tell you to fight Blaine, you fight Blaine. Hell, if I tell you to fight a lion, you WILL fight a lion and still thank me afterwards for giving you a job." - Mr. Sensation

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Not many matches, but still very much a ppv feel. I have an announcement regarding teh future of teh industry coming up.

Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness

"I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe

CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative

[10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga

[09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com

[09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now?

"Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099

" makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha

welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker

"This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital

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Deception.
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Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness

"I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe

CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative

[10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga

[09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com

[09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now?

"Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099

" makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha

welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker

"This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital

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Good short little ppv . That ladder match was kinda lengthy as ladder matches usually are.The ending was I don't know just yet.Was still alot of good stuff.Some guys who were missing and not calling any names I wished you would have dropped something. All around nice rps and matches 8.0/10

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