Ambition Episode 34

[Matsuda]

Report cards are in!

[Mr.Sensation]

Aiden Ryan

 

Entrance: A

Good energy, looks great once again can't tell about music as WWE music got mixed up with your song for some kind of amalgamation in music.

 

Attire: A

Looks great, and tells a story, the bionic knees lead me to believe your weak-spot is legs, subtle yet effective. The attire itself looks complex and great. You can swap the whites for A Red-Blue-Green-Yellow, and just like that you have striking alternate attires for your matches.

Look: A

Aiden looks like he belongs, from the aged tattoos the silver hair and attire. He fits in with the scheme of things in OCW.

Presence: B+

He looks like a competitor and between high risk moves, and "Dat Arm Drag" you can't go wrong. Seemed to adapt to the OCW Style quite well.

Moveset: A

Every thing worked, I would gather to say maybe add some flash to the set one or two moves, or maybe some varying Arm Drags to go with my preconceived notion of you being "Dat Arm Drag" The use of Sliced Bread was a nice touch as I haven't seen it in ages.

[Mr.Sensation]

Damian Kain

 

 

Entrance: B-

While I am anti effects for rooks, the subtle shock thing is acceptable in my eyes. Again with the music I have no idea what to think since it's MIZARK's music I can judge better when we can actually hear it. Also for the size, build and look, not sure you want to use The Rock's ent, maybe something more High Octane. Emphasis on being a beast.

Attire: C+

If you where a light weight it would be a B+, you got kind of an AJ Styles thing going, if I try to think I remember Bobby Lashley wore something similar cept in all black. So for that you get a C, but still a +. The attire doesn't look bad by any stretch but it doesn't look like its yours, you should spend some time in Paint Tool, or have someone hook up a DSK logo set for you to replace the Captain Charisma C,s all over. Also what is the S for?

 

Look: C-

Your tatted up like a random win AJ Styles pants. The tattoos are ZERO BLACK, that is a huge no no. You can get to a B or B- very easily by simply shading the ink. The copious amounts of ink isn't even the problem as most of OCW is inked up, I would garner to say your the most inked up. So just touch them up and make sure the ones you have mean something in essence to the caw and you will be set. The face tattoo is a 1st and could really work for the caw if its shaded properly and not like a random ovr 100

 

Presence: C

DK is a big dude, you asked about SHVY status and I told you to come back in a month. If you make the changes above I am ok with making you super heavy as you have the look of a big guy.

Moveset: NA

I cannot make an assessment properly as you rarely got any offense in. I'd suggest a version of the F5 which looks painful but not over the top ZOMG OVR 100 sell. I'd also just add anything that says, Suplex or Slam in it to your moveset. Keep it simple ground and pound.

[Mr.Sensation]

Michael Hollywood

 

Entrance: C+

Lose the Jericho start at the front, I know it represents Hollywood, but you would be better served using the Movie Star CAM in game, works out better. The music is confusing as I had assumed it was "Party Like a Rockstar" but "Superstar" played. I prefer superstar in my ears, but then again I am an old person and I have no taste. Hollywoods actual entrance looks very face like. I'd switch some of the moves and camera angles to depict arrogance. Hell if its in there use parts or try to use the MNM entrance, I know Melina's is in.

 

Attire: B-

The attire is to the point, I have no issue with it persay. The - comes from the over use of WWE logos for the robe and tights. Hit paint tool or have someone help you out and make something that says "I am Hollywood" shit I'd put an emmy on your tights! or a golden globe!. Speaking of robe i'd recommend the NEW Y2J jacket, it is sufficently gaudy, but Pugh would cry like a bitch. I'd then recommend the Mink Coat, but Matsuda Ninja'ed that immediately, so your next best bet is either, what you have now, or Ham it up and Bust out the Ric Flair Robe. Nothing screams elegance like a Ric flair Robe.

 

Look: B-

Hollywood can talk the talk, and walk it (Saw the match). But something is missing, he doesn't look like an A list guy. He doesn't look like someone who would be cast in anything other than an extra. Do some research and make this sucka look like Brad Pitt or something. As it stands now minus the changes Hollywood looks like he belongs for the most part.

Presence: A+

From the writing to the match, Hollywood can backup what he claims, guy is playing is part to damn near perfection. A few tweak here and there and Riot is on the Horizon.

Moveset: B+

Very athletic heel, I'd add a few more old school heel moves to the mix, and something very flashy to call your own. Maybe a picture perfect top rope elbow or leg drop, or a flashy down state sig. Recommendation (Sandows Elbow of Disdain, if its avail). Codebreaker as a finisher while quick could use some work, I don't mind it but I am sure you can create or find something that speaks to the type of guy Hollywood is.

[Mr.Sensation]

Ricky Mendihaze

 

Entrance: B+

Music could be cued up different but the entrance and tunes are to the point. I liked the setup I did not like the look (more on that below)

Attire: D

You mentioned this is your first rodeo, so I can't hold that against you. However other than the face paint, the attire is a train wreck. Not sure where your going. But your wearing a plain jersey over tights with shoes, and face paint. Best bet would be lose the shirt or make it part of the outfit by going Kurt Angle, or MVP, or Ryback which means the top and bottoms are an attire together. Or you could lose the shirt and then recolor your pants to match your face paint. Add some Wrestling boots, or kick pads and you can go from a D to an easy B- / B+ . I would actually unlock your caw and let someone like Dupree or Vega take a look at it.

Look: B

Ricky looks like a Randy Orton / Benoit build, it works and if you fix the attire he fits right in.

 

Presence: B-

More or less picked up the OCW Style, a few hiccups here and there but with more practice you are now one of us.

Moveset: C+

Got a rough idea because Hazard is a jerk who reverses, I did notice that you need to remove Springboard from your vocab. If you want to model a moveset id say shoot for Randy Orton, which means a bit of power, some high athletic slams, and drop kicks, and solid impact moves. I also heard your finisher is like 12-18 seconds long, id stick with something way shorter.

[Michael Hollywood]

Michael Hollywood

 

Entrance: C+

Lose the Jericho start at the front, I know it represents Hollywood, but you would be better served using the Movie Star CAM in game, works out better. The music is confusing as I had assumed it was "Party Like a Rockstar" but "Superstar" played. I prefer superstar in my ears, but then again I am an old person and I have no taste. Hollywoods actual entrance looks very face like. I'd switch some of the moves and camera angles to depict arrogance. Hell if its in there use parts or try to use the MNM entrance, I know Melina's is in.

 

Attire: B-

The attire is to the point, I have no issue with it persay. The - comes from the over use of WWE logos for the robe and tights. Hit paint tool or have someone help you out and make something that says "I am Hollywood" shit I'd put an emmy on your tights! or a golden globe!. Speaking of robe i'd recommend the NEW Y2J jacket, it is sufficently gaudy, but Pugh would cry like a bitch. I'd then recommend the Mink Coat, but Matsuda Ninja'ed that immediately, so your next best bet is either, what you have now, or Ham it up and Bust out the Ric Flair Robe. Nothing screams elegance like a Ric flair Robe.

 

Look: B-

Hollywood can talk the talk, and walk it (Saw the match). But something is missing, he doesn't look like an A list guy. He doesn't look like someone who would be cast in anything other than an extra. Do some research and make this sucka look like Brad Pitt or something. As it stands now minus the changes Hollywood looks like he belongs for the most part.

Presence: A+

From the writing to the match, Hollywood can backup what he claims, guy is playing is part to damn near perfection. A few tweak here and there and Riot is on the Horizon.

Moveset: B+

Very athletic heel, I'd add a few more old school heel moves to the mix, and something very flashy to call your own. Maybe a picture perfect top rope elbow or leg drop, or a flashy down state sig. Recommendation (Sandows Elbow of Disdain, if its avail). Codebreaker as a finisher while quick could use some work, I don't mind it but I am sure you can create or find something that speaks to the type of guy Hollywood is.

 

Thank you for the evaluation and I will for sure work on the things you critiqued. I appreciate the help with my character on my quest to be one of the good ones here in OCW.

[Tiberius Dupree]

While bossolini is dropping report cards, I'll just spit mine in a not so orderly fashion, because most of you guys I've talked to on Live.

 

Congrats to those who officially made their OCW Debuts, Mendihaze, Tanner, Hollywood, and Aiden Ryan. You guys made the first step in hopefully many here in OCW. From rooks to veterans a like, we all strive to advance and develop our wrestlers. Make sure you absorb as much advice as you can, members of the community have a good way of inspiring creative ideas.

 

I didn't give myself the nickname Tibby, OCW Legend Guy Fausto did.

 

Everybody started singing my theme song religiously, so I claimed the moniker "The Fire".

 

As for the gameplay aspect of things, make sure you learn your move set. Your moveset should reflect your character to the fullest extent. Some of the better players spend hours tweaking and perfecting their move sets, which makes kicking ass that much more entertaining.

 

Great Job to you all, if you have any questions, or want more personal advice, feel free to hit me up.

[Matsuda]

Mendihaze, I have a few more ideas for youre caw, so wait for an update before you use the one I made you. I can also help you with your move set, I didn't touch it last time.

 

Hollywood I have some ideas for you too if your around tonight we can discuss them.

[Michael Hollywood]

Mendihaze, I have a few more ideas for youre caw, so wait for an update before you use the one I made you. I can also help you with your move set, I didn't touch it last time.

 

Hollywood I have some ideas for you too if your around tonight we can discuss them.

 

Sounds good I should be on there a little later.

[K.Dangelo]

Hazard still using the comeback perk smh .I just knew Ricky was gonna come back and take that one .It's not hovering when someone misses a top rope move .Reverse hovering should be worked on .

Allot of very good matches and I see things getting better .Will go more in depth when I finish some stuff around the house .