Jimmy Henry Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 (edited) Notes: Abbott vs Henry this Sunday at The Clash!!! Loki McGregor is a cartoon leprechaun. Aries needs help, LOL. Dennis Black lost, before I even see his fight! Wrong order! Psychic spoilers. Hi Sophia! How you doin'? Daryl Bradley you meanie! Loki vs Black, here is the aforementioned phantom fight. Good match. Poor Dennis kept missing springboard moves, haha. His health deteriorated quickly, needs more vitamins. Held on well, considering. Loki can fight. B-17, don't be tempted by fine whisky from Glorius Glorius Scodland!!! Jimmy v Jackson! Pyro, oops! Enjoyed the match, my best so far. Jackmo is badass, not sure that crowd will be booing for much longer. Keep him feuding Tank and he is going over. Austin Lee is a despicable human being. Good main event! Both guys look like superstars. Could have went either way, except I sort of knew otherwise (thanks guys). Should be a good final on Sunday. Both of Tank's RPs were good, bit homophobic, but OK. But I agree with B-17 about continuity. Must have borrowed his car from The Monster. Haha Bradley, karma. Overall, good show, better than 107, sets things up nicely for Sunday. Ron was not missed. Edited January 29, 2016 by Jimmy Henry originally written in notepad 4
Jacob Trance Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Continuity was a bit off again. Tank is in the woods only to drive back later for an rp? Sometimes less is more but that was a rapid bit of craziness that seemed on the wrong show to the wrong build. But kudos I liked the writing. There wasn't really many places for me to put that. If he had done the attack then went to the woods it'd still be wrong. As for Black his instructions confused me and said to put it before the match, that's his only instructions and in hindsight it must have been referring to the divas match.
Administrators Mr.Sensation Posted January 29, 2016 Author Administrators Posted January 29, 2016 Notes: Abbott vs Henry this Sunday at The Clash!!! Loki McGregor is a cartoon leprechaun. Aries needs help, LOL. Dennis Black lost, before I even see his fight! Wrong order! Psychic spoilers. Hi Sophia! How you doin'? Daryl Bradley you meanie! Loki vs Black, here is the aforementioned phantom fight. Good match. Poor Dennis kept missing springboard moves, haha. His health deteriorated quickly, needs more vitamins. Held on well, considering. Loki can fight. B-17, don't be tempted by fine whisky from Glorius Glorius Scodland!!! Jimmy v Jackson! Pyro, oops! Enjoyed the match, my best so far. Jackmo is badass, not sure that crowd will be booing for much longer. Keep him feuding Tank and he is going over. Austin Lee is a despicable human being. Good main event! Both guys look like superstars. Could have went either way, except I sort of knew otherwise (thanks guys). Should be a good final on Sunday. Both of Tank's RPs were good, bit homophobic, but OK. But I agree with B-17 about continuity. Must have borrowed his car from The Monster. Haha Bradley, karma. Overall, good show, better than 107, sets things up nicely for Sunday. Ron was not missed. Monster was in Connecticut, the ride from CT to the arena 8:30-900PM ESt. Would give him about a 40 to an hour minute drive if he takes the west side Highway from the I95! However monster is reckless so he woulda gunned it. 3 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix "Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got Our Hero: uploadafraud.com Jookie: fuck u boricua "I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh "I'm 5,9" - Ry "I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen
Jacob Trance Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Monster was in Connecticut, the ride from CT to the arena 8:30-900PM ESt. Would give him about a 40 to an hour minute drive if he takes the west side Highway from the I95! However monster is reckless so he woulda gunned it. You've put a lot of thought into this... Planning on torching Parkers bike?
Austin Lee Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Notes: Austin Lee is a despicable humane being. Hey least I wear pants #SkirtBoy 2
B-17 Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Major thing I want to say here. The face/heel dynamic is being disregarded here. Tank attacking Bradley makes no sense. It has created confusion. Should we cheer Tank. Should we be happy? Should we pity Bradley. Where do we go from here? It was such a quick pay off that the only logical step is to Suspend him. But that does not make much sense because now it limits options and paints both of them as either very unlikeable, which serves no one, or it forces one to be sympathetic which really does not help either one as Tank is too far heel and Bradley is fucking with B17 who I would argue is the biggest Face of Turmoil. I get that characters need grey to them but a bit more identity to one side is sorely needed after that. Great writing will save this and flip the script but two major heels should be on the same page or in different books until established. 4 "Amatuer cheat hunter, Resident OCWFED historian, Lover of spreadsheets, data and HOI, MASTER OF THE GOKART" *I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANGE MY PROFILE!*
Seth Morrison Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Tank: Well, I guess since you don't like my language, we'll do it the old fashion way, a swear jar! Here we'll get through the first few now! You c**k gobblin' son of a b***h! You butt f***in' coward, probably hang around f*g clubs, waitin' for some big butch f**ker to pop a load in you a**hole! Bet you squeal like a f***in' pig for it to you c**t! Lmfao! Reminds me of old OCW roleplays.. 1 Dane Xavier: cyber bullying is not only illegal, it's pathetic "I swear to go if you call me a Liberal again you RETHUGLICAN, SEE WHAT I DID THERE. This is america, if you want to throw your hard earned sweat money on a videogame gambling site and thus deny you and your family food and shelter THAN BY GOD DAMMIT YOU CAN, BECAUSE THIS IS AMERICA YOU COMMIE SOCIALIST. Now then when Can I expect your next donation? "- Jay Jay Double A is "The Weapon Of Mass Consumption"
Tank Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Hmmm, maybe I didn't write this the correct way... I guess people think Tank is in the woods in his first segment. He's in the parking lot of Turmoil, calling Jackson's bike "Kindling." So when Tank drove off, it's completely plausible for Tank to simply circle the block, park somewhere else, then walk back in and assault Bradley. The angle is simply this, Tank is indeed a heel. He's not trying to be liked. He's trying to be a Thug. The bully. So it doesn't matter who exactly he's beating, it's the way he's beating them.
B-17 Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Hmmm, maybe I didn't write this the correct way... I guess people think Tank is in the woods in his first segment. He's in the parking lot of Turmoil, calling Jackson's bike "Kindling." So when Tank drove off, it's completely plausible for Tank to simply circle the block, park somewhere else, then walk back in and assault Bradley. The angle is simply this, Tank is indeed a heel. He's not trying to be liked. He's trying to be a Thug. The bully. So it doesn't matter who exactly he's beating, it's the way he's beating them. Ok so he is a heel that just fucks shit up, my only concern is a feud with Jackson is more important than Bradley, I would deem, and I don't want to see the dynamic get messed with as you two going at each other will be dramatic. If you feud with too many ppl it will be too much to juggle and that rp leads me to believe you two are going to be bitter enemies. B17 had a promo with him earlier and now there is no need for me to pursue him because he already got his shit pushed in. It just seemed too definitive for a week old story. 3 "Amatuer cheat hunter, Resident OCWFED historian, Lover of spreadsheets, data and HOI, MASTER OF THE GOKART" *I DONT KNOW HOW TO CHANGE MY PROFILE!*
Tank Posted January 29, 2016 Posted January 29, 2016 Ok so he is a heel that just fucks shit up, my only concern is a feud with Jackson is more important than Bradley, I would deem, and I don't want to see the dynamic get messed with as you two going at each other will be dramatic. If you feud with too many ppl it will be too much to juggle and that rp leads me to believe you two are going to be bitter enemies. B17 had a promo with him earlier and now there is no need for me to pursue him because he already got his shit pushed in. It just seemed too definitive for a week old story. It's not a feud with Bradley. Just an argument. At the end of the day we cannot forget that our characters are people with their own issues and bills to pay. Tell me, if you worked for a 12 hour shift, got all beat up, and then told you won't be paid, how would you react? I just thought that to myself, if my boss didn't pay me, even though I worked I would be pissed, Tank is an over exaggeration of this sentiment.
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