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You won by a the skeen of your teef, b. Settle what it is the fuck down!

 

First two words said it all... I won!!!

Signature 1 - The Alpha Heel

Signature 2 - Spear 5 (F) - Stargazer

 

Finisher 1 - Flapjack 2 (F) - The SDW

Finisher 2 - Reality check (G) - Dawonderful Dream

 

Finisher 3 (i'm cool enoigh to claim 3 moves) - The Darkside - THe Million Dollar Dream

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Not this week #streakender

 

OH YEA, forgot no one mentioned it. #elbowstaydown

 

Im on a streak, its great.....wait....lost...not so..great!

Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness

"I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe

CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative

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[09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now?

"Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099

" makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha

welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker

"This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital

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I've already beaten this Turmoil champion you speak of... I have an almost unblemished record this year... Don't put yourself on the list Tre!!!

 

Wait till I see Leon... Just you wait!!!

 

I blemished your record in the first week.

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I gotta real talk for a minute. Because we at 9 pages of actual discussion and that fills me with joy.

I am very torn on Kass and Tre joining Ragnarok, part of me thinks its really good to have rookies collaborating together. But then the other half of me thinks its crash TV shotgunning everything for the sake of fuck all. I know in hindsight Cartah sauce did the writing as if you read the show you would see Xander was sort of oblivious (had to edit his rp) and so was cobra (didn't have to edit but it would have flowed diff if he knew) and Kass (was pleased with the writing but obv didn't know). This is very important, do not go into business for yourself, I had to make some subtle tweaks but in the end, I didn't change the narrative because that's not my job.

 

This should be in a desk but fuck it why not.

 

Essentially at The Clash, Kass has just defeated Ragnarok with Cobra. He's amping himself up for the Tmoil main event, he mention's how the Wolves should join his coven as it will be in they best interest. He then goes unto becoming the First Turmoil Champion in History. Now I know for all of the little edits, and artwork, and creative caws Kass has, RPing and writing is not his true forte. This is fine he writes when he needs to and he makes relays his message clear and concisely, not everyone has to be a Mugen or B17 on the writing tip.

 

What kind of irks me (and this should be clear even if I don't like something im not going to hamstring you, you need to fuck up royally before I take your toys away). I don't really understand Kass joining the Wolves, They should have joined his Coven, they would be better for it since he is now the Focal point of Turmoil and the most solid on the sticks out of all of them on Ps4 and XB1. I mean you could say its a collective, but it read to me more like an act of submission rather than cooperation.

 

Now for Tre, Tre. He was gaining traction as a face, I know I know he HATES BEING a face, he would rather be heel. But by hook or by crook in the short time he has been on ITV he has been slowly edging forward as a solid face, a huge win at PPV, a sympathetic albiert BRUTAL loss at Riot, a good look a solid foundation for a move-set he was moving forward. But instead, fuck it Ima be a heel! Feel like he took the easy way out. I mean its fantastic for rooks to work together but he could a built a feud with xander to nathan to both, and if it was just Kass he could have built a fued into all 3.

 

Now Carter. At Clash while still being super wierd he entered into an almost face ish promo. building up to the inevitable battle with Matsuda who is the Alpha Heel End Boss of EX. We could have had a likeable, wierdly edgy face type guy vs the Boss Heel. Instead its just heel vs heel. Why even write the sympathy angle at clash? could have easily just took a dick route and pulled some shennagins? if you planed to flush any sympathy down the drain 48 hours later.

 

I get its rookies so trial and error, but things like Xander with new tats when that awful Defender of Man tattoo was actually kind of over. Example Pugh has just the worst Back Tattoo but he's kept it because its his caw. When you make such DRASTIC changes it shows you're not confident in your caw, or maybe just experimenting, I don't know. But I see a lot of Chris Mania in Xander, and thats not a bad thing.

 

I'm just not huge on everyone cliqing up since it means when we have to do intercliq matches things will get wierd. Well fuck yall, cuz yall did that not me!

 

I mean on the plus side Cobra is now like #1-#2 Babyface, he can now over come the odds on 4 jamokes including the jamoke who betrayed him, so if he flounders now, he ain't got no one to blame but himself cuz he got at minimum 6 months worth of fueds with 4 diff ppl, not including the Hardcore TV Championship.

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Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness

"I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe

CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative

[10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga

[09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com

[09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now?

"Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099

" makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha

welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker

"This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital


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