Turmoil 124

[S.Abbott]

I need to know what the first track was during Big Ed vs Jack Quinn.

[Dennis Black]

I need to know what the first track was during Big Ed vs Jack Quinn.

 

Sophia or Mystery bombshell X could tell you. That was bombshell x's theme.

[Sophia]

#Austin Lee and Sid, come back soon! Seems those ruffians #austin encountered a few weeks ago really did some damage :(

 

There was a lot of history mentioned this week which is cool esp leading up to a ppv

[Cactus Gauge]

Well... that was an interesting ending.

[Dennis Black]

still think you guys should have recorded her doing a catch finisher on B:)

[Big Ed]

The Big Ed small review

 

It was good to hear from hashtag homie and Sid. I hope we get something next week involving the hastags and the 5% elite, otherwise i'm not sure why this is a ppv match. They have only had one interaction. Don't get me wrong. that one scene was great, but it needs more of a build.

 

Seb needs to make a Ginger alt and do a story line where the Ginger somehow gets forced to wrestle.

 

Won't comment on my own ish. But Quinn is a trooper, with a good look and music.

 

Zeb and Joe. I like Zeb's hat...that's might just be it. I can see him as an Extra in Ed's gang. Needed win for Joe and gives him some momentum into our PPV bout. Was hoping for a Seb win.

 

I'm digging the stuff with Loki and Axton. It feels like we are slowly building up to a group vs group feud. The Orphanage taking on Loki, Axton...and...? They need some help. Otherwise it will be a quick feud.

 

Jack had the best RP, male character wise, hands down. He's a treasure! Keep this guy around, bookers. With the wrestling not doing so well (not that I can talk. I'm just a big guy) I could see Jack as an on screen GM type character in the future, now that Bradley is missing?

 

There's no showing due to out of character site drama...

 

There's no showing due to schedules not matching up...

 

Then there's no showing because your character had the life sucked out of him. The vampire strikes. I enjoyed the comedy nc-17 segment that led to a handicap match that the challenger STILL won! Which leads to a serious promo / semi shoot from the TV Champion's valet. Props to Trance, The Juggalos, Madison and caramel. Felt very TV like. The match is set with more reasons to care about the outcome. I don't see the juggalos as buried. This is how it would happen on any wrestling show. Trance just looked strong and the juggalos just looked like heels that came up short.

 

Carlos and Sheldon. This confused me. Carlos was probably rusty? But to have a long promo last week and lose in his return is a bit rough. I did like the post match RP to recover though. Good shit.

 

Malu makes a legit point, and really, that's all we the fans needed in regards to his title shot.

 

Bill Ding....................................fat fuck.

 

Great ending to the match with B17 and Jackson. Their rivalry overshadows the title match, and B17 isn't even in it. I still say a rematch of the three way would have been best. Three ways, suck I know. Maybe Jackson faces the winner of B17 and Kass...in the same night. I also know kass has been busy with real life. Something would have been nice tho, even if its from a cell. With this scene, I almost forgot Jackson was defending next weekend. I think next month, whatever the combination is of malu, Irv, Kass, and Jackson is, we need some more detail with the actual title feud. Like Gentleman Jack said last week in a polite way, the world title feud is falling behind the Dennis and Trance feud. Even more so this week with B17 and Jackson being focused on each other. I hope Kass and Jackson give us something big next week so we get real invested in the big belt match.

 

I think Dennis and Trance need to dial it back next week. Your match is established. Myself and Joe. And Jackson and Kass have some catching up to do. Maybe just focus on the moustache match with Seb. I cant wait for. Is seb actually going to shave? I really cant see him beating caramel so close to savage lands.

 

I know b17 ain't booked. But I hope he does a run in or something at savage lands. even if he just confronts his girl.

[S.Abbott]

Hey I said I was a man of my word, if I lose I'll shave the moustache.

[Big Ed]

poor bastard...you REALLY want that title shot lol go for it man. Good luck. hope you win.

[B-17]

#Influence Rp

 

Good to see activity with you guys. I understand that there is some RL things going on so no rush.

 

Sebastian RP

 

Cars and beverages seem to be problematic on Turmoil. Ginger lol. What, don’t join forces with those ugly fucks!

 

Big E vs. Jacke

 

Jack you look like a rookie. But don’t worry, you have a blank slate to develop your guy’s look. Moveset look ok. I found the FPR to be good. Was this your first match? Damn, had to face a giant racist biker. But don’t worry his knees will give out within two years and then he will end up lumbering around like Kahli. Match was brutal until you made a comeback, good for you. Ed has yellow teeth, not surprised.

 

Trance Black Madison RP

 

Mutual respect, ok I like it. He did the same for me a few months back. I like Trance as a face, I think. I don’t know. I had Madison, that I know. The Orphanage is becoming a serious problem? Um, yeah. Loki knows all about that...attacked THREE TIMES.

 

Joe RP

 

Joe is on a slow descent into anger, suffering, hate. These are the path to the darkside. History buff enjoys Hadrian’s wall reference.

 

Clowns RP

 

Seb paid you guys right? I was confused.

 

Zeb Melrose vs. Joe

 

Good to see Joe get a win and some momentum going into his match with Big Ed. @Ed he could be a group member, yes.

 

Loki Axton RP

 

An example of why I love working with these two characters.

 

Sophia RP

Why even mention Alex. Poof. Gone. Good bye. RP went a bit long. Also what does “crowd reacts mean” do they cheer, groan, moan….The history lesson was quite interesting. Really works in your favor to know history.

 

Gent Jack RP

 

You’ve been doing great RP work since you started here. Keep up the great work.

 

Dennis Madison Rp

 

Disappointed. Implied BJs? I had heard rumors about this for quite some time and you do implied BJ? Come on, THIS IS OCW. I’m so disapointed.

 

Willow RP

 

Long and dense, but informational. I like backstory and therefore see the necessity, especially for her first RP on Turmoil, correct?

 

Trance vs. Clowns

 

I like that it became a two on one, but clowns. Guys. Cheat to win, please. It’s Trance! You can’t play him straight up, beat that scruffy looking nerf herder with a chair next time. Fuck the dq, beat his ass. Dennis lol. Sleepy, sleepy?

 

Madison RP

 

RP of the night. It was sharp, well written, kinda shooty and very emotion filled. Great job.

 

Cruz Sheldon match

 

Good to see Sheldon back. That match was good fun. The ending especially was good because of the finisher reversal finisher.

 

Malu RP

 

“Pee Pee Pants city” You win, sir! Thanks for the build, really needed it.

Sheldon Ding RP

 

Sheldon being a dick to Bill is a great way to get some heel heat. Seriously, you son of a bitch. Why you giving him shit! Good RP.

Cruz RP

Concussion? Crazy? I laughed. I’ve had a few concussions in my life. Usually they follow with complete disbelief of anything I’ve done in the past 24 hours. And Anger.

 

Jackson B17 match/RP

 

Much love and respect for working with Jackson. New guys. You should aim to work with this man in the future. Is is a good writer, good in the ring. He will help you and working with him will make you look like a million bucks.

 

Kas has his own shit, still. Ed was right. Jack vs. B17 overshadows Jack vs. Kass.

[Dennis Black]

you promised a DETAILED review!