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That was great. Cactus breaks up the pin just to eat one.

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Ding's player wants to be turmoil champ lol

 

And Cactus paid for it.

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Jimmy Henry's Positive Page 1 Review:

 

- Cool new intro, good work guys. Some nice editing there with the opening to the arena.

 

- I liked how Gloryhole opened the show (has become a very strong feature of Turmoil the past few weeks), good hype builder for the show's ME. You get the impression Cactus is genuinely smitten with Sophia here, and not in a creepy, lurky Randy Rice way. There is a face turn in Cactus, somewhere down the line.

 

- Adam Adams, eh? What a dude. Been here a few weeks, already becoming Mr. Reliable. Thanks to Jordan for the wee allusions to our RP later on in the show.

 

- Strong win for Adam, which makes me happy. Shane Scott, I don't like being negative to new guys, but I'm not sure what's going on with your character. He just seems random as fuck. Fan of Adams, like his old school get-up & his no-nonsense personality he's building.

 

- Dennis with a bit of backbone? Respectful to opponent who he put through a table last week. Smell that face turn approaching? Beat Malu at Summercide -> flying knee to Madison after the match -> embrace new life as people's champion -> vacate TV title for the good of lower Turmoil roster.

 

- Bit of oddly placed Stuntman, because why the hell not. I like the idea of using other games (briefly) throughout the show, and not just GTA. Think of the possibilities? A 4-week drama explaining Jackson's PTSD and his imaginary friend Davie, through the medium of carefully edited Call of Duty cinematic cutscenes.

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You did bend in the cox journal .

 

And then he verbally bitch smacked her.

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its time for that big Ed shmall review!

 

That intro. Damn.it was long for an intro, but I liked it. Cactus December and Leon got most of turmoils active roster up in there. So dey in dere.good contribution. Now do one for riot. They book ur light skinned ass too.

 

Cactus is in love with Sophia. I still say Alex and lacy is the best. But what do i know. I'm sure Ed could stomp out Leon and dims to take them. We shall see. He's my stable mate and he's cool people. But if anyone is gonna get that orton treatment of getting Kicked out of evolution, it's cactus. He's got the charisma to be a good face. And he's one of my three picks to take a shot at the tv belt that may be up for grabs.

 

Adam and jax have good chemistry. Big win for double A. Double is my second name for a potential tv run. He's new, but he's different. Which is good. I'm

Not sure if he could hang with Malu or caramel with the spot light on in a title match. But if there's a vacancy, give this man a shot.

 

I want to hate Dennis and Madison. But I enjoy them. If she can ever turn him full heel, it will be a sight to behold. Run with the internal struggle as long as you can.

 

Did Ashley approve b17 getting into an OCW film? This segment was great. Thoigh I want to see some gun fights. Give us violence. Looking forward to Jackson vs Malu. But I feel it's coming so late. This is the match we shoulda had atLution , for the gold.

 

This was dustins best scene yet. In story the man has some legit gripes. Keep building on it. I actually wana see Dustin and present Malu again to set the record straight. Was it survival or did Dustin just win.

 

Idk man. I was rooting for Jackson here. I miss face Jackson. Why u go heel Jackson? Why! I don't know why but I hate his finisher. I think Jackson would look great doing the fame asser. And then do the top rope fame asser from the top rope. Make it yours. Claim that shit. The current finish looks too much like the pedigree.convoy putting in work. Now they get Jackson and b so serious 17 at the same time next week. Barn burner I say.

 

With madi’s journal, it has made these Loki and trance segments that much better. Push the envelope. Give us a romance! Be bold! Brave. All that shit GLAD would post. Trance got a big win over kass showing he's still in dere.

 

Bill Ding, bubba, and drago…

 

And unbeatable trio. Felt more like a promo room

Rp. Why is Bill ding at a diner during an episode. An episode where he's booked lol great shit tho.

 

I gotta agree with Jimmy on SS. I like the moveset. Even the music. Not feeling the pyro.Not sure about his look. What is he? We have vampires, juggalos, and cosplaying cuck who treats ppv like Halloween. (Will be dissapointed if there's nothing for Cide btw).

 

jim had rp of the night.shit, rp of the week. He roasted the club. The ninja turtles one was the best. Club is under siege. From Jimmy's alliance AND from the convoy. The part timer, the beast of turmoil returns next week. Whatever ever jack points at gets crushed. The club won't take this laying down. Who do you think we are, sugar skull?! On to the match. Bill dig has gone from

Jobber to mid card hero. Hungry times. Anyway. G club members need to be coming to the ring as a team. Didn't look United, and lost to Ding. That hurts. Considering the player is the biggest shit talker turmoil has!!! And no one believes it. :(

We will step it up. Bill ding is my third pick for a tv title contender. Needs to be ppv. That, and I know the tension will be through the roof knowing what I know about the players.

 

Want to see Jackson fight his demon in a dream sequence.

 

I was hoping for a double turn. But, we are sticking with heel Malu and black face. (Get it?)

 

Good promo and good sell on what Dennis did last week. I think they've done this feud the right way. Dennis gets one over on Malu, and then Malu gets one over on Dennis. Best possible scenario was Dennis losing the handicap match and hitting a finisher on 3? Or 2? And holy shit that was hilarious. Who hits a finisher on someone that isn't the legal man lmfao. I know you be 9/10 on the annoyed scale that your knee was changed to a finisher, but it makes more sense. Ye put down a lot of people with it. Much like I said to Jackson earlier. That knee is yours now. Run with that and the gts for years.

Good win for the skulls. All we need now is to close the show next week with Malu and caramel holding up their belts while being nose to nose. Textbook go home for a title / title match. Turmoil’s first time being the last match, guys. Maybe our first and last of season 11. Make us proud. No pressure. This match benefits the entire roster regardless of who wins.

 

Sophia and Willow pillow fight on the horizon? Still don't trust Willow. She LOOKS evil. Happy for them for getting invited to rev inc. a war is coming. Can feel it.

 

Main event time. Turmoil is progressive, giving women a chance n shit. I figured this would end the way it did. Kind of had to. Was still a good match. What I didn't expect was that ending rp/ willow and Casey. Trouble trouble trouble!

 

Good show. Turmoil gets me amped. That wasn't always the case.

 

The negatives:

Try out those finishers Jackson! Let us know what you think.

 

No seb or Ed. Ed is a part timer tho, so f u.

 

No reveal of our new on screen boss. Hope to see it at Cide.

 

Give marvelous a match damnit. His long awaited return should put him against the guy he mocked, abbot.

 

No resiliency used by caramel. Come on man! Felt like you weren't interested. Normally very evasive and bouncy. The big skull had Smythe reach tho! Lol

 

Want to see some story of Shane and why he is the way he is.

 

Let's end next week with a bang. The turmoil roster should be hungry. I think a shift in power and standing is coming for some of you. Be ready if your name is called.

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