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I'd also have to add that a few of the long matches were turmoil matches which just went way too long. There was no reason for it. Guys need to learn when they have lost the match. One of the matches was total domination and then some how at the end the other guy came back after 25 minutes.

 

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Let it go, theres another match coming down the road for you to try again.

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Podcast tonight.

 

Show I give 6.5/7 maybe outta 10. I know we can do way better. I KNOW THIS.

 

Violation wise like 5-6 PPL on the LIST. And a few warnings going out. We didn't get to 12 years half assing, we got to 12 years being IRONSIDE and no bullshit. Yall really really don't want Bossolini to return. I mean some of yall do, but to be honest I can't live my life like that anymore.

 

The silver fking lining of this show however is those amazing shots of brilliance, not having Majin around ATM is hard (We miss u , b) But we compensated. I lost it at Dupree's RP set and Entrance, but then again I am an ultimate Dupree mark, Rps and style always put a smile on my face.

 

Graham hatton caw not matching his render? what the shit? dummy

 

Rookie 3 way wasn't awful a tad long, but everyone other then hatton had a style. I dig SHF caw but music and motions felt lil odd.

 

Dustin Corey couldnt be used, wrong arena. Wrong arena, Wrong arena, WRONG ARENA. WRONG FUCKING ARENA. Dustin apologized so im fine but bruh pls. Pls. PLS <#

 

Joey Z had an If and RP, I swear it was up before the one with the merch stand but I can't seem to find it might be lost in a haze, in the future, don't front load, also NEVER post in the ppv that "X is missing" let me know privately sometimes shit doesn't refresh right and after spending hours on a project for someone to go (YOU MISSED THIS). Sort of sends me into a frothing rage, additionally down playing it also pisses me off. But just to be clear JOE, we cool so dont get all sad or nothing, I appreciate you writing just I don't know make that shit fluid.

 

Speaking of writing, mad rookies booked, and mad rookies added to the fold how many rookie RP's on this show? if you said Zero you would be 100% correct. You get what you give in OCW, the fact that out of I dont know 10 ish rookies NO ONE submitted so much as a sentence? KNEESUS CHRIST, Dennis, Trance? Bingo wtf are yall doing? guide these greens.

 

Jacky finding his groove in the 3 way was incredibly pleasant, I see the training kicking in. The fact that he sort of reminds me of COMPETANT CHRIS MANIA, can only mean good things. I can almost see Jack on the sly taking Turmoil by storm while not being the GREATEST being someone who ppl dig, I really dug that match a lot, and grats to the winner!

 

Tag match I popped for Trance and Loki...and I hate that I typed that so much...god dammit. That entrance forget about it PERFECT. Trance looks like he cooks meth, and Loki looks like he uses the meth trance cooks before Trance gets to sell it. Seal of approval, Tag match was great coulda been a little shorter, might make it single orange just to keep them frantically paced.

 

Loki fucking sucks at rps, please no spaces.

 

TJB Samsin: you already know its a hybrid league i know your excited but im not going to sit through 30 fucking minutes. That goes for EVERYONE if your match isnt significant? its ok to be 15 mins with ENTS, you can speed up (not hyperfighting) OR OR OR OR OR OR you can cut the match up and keep it 15 mins with ents the latter takes a cunt hair more effort but will enamor you to the lockeroom so its worth it.

 

Mugen Drago: JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZUZ this is what happens when you don't play because the game is fugazi!

 

Smythe entrance was long and stupid, but the actual WWE footage was amazing with music. And that once scene 2:21 is going to be in a video its fucking iconic, HEY KASS REM WHEN I SAID I WANTED HD EPIC MOMENTs, THERES ONE YOU STUPID FK, IM GLAD YOUR HAIR WAS SLAPPED OFF YOUR HEAD ASSSSHHOLE!!

 

Dennis, Im sorry for taking your thunder :(

I can promise you it isn't a subliminal thing, but it always seems to happen. :(

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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riot and turmoil roster (my big ass included) need to step up. The same main event from septmeber 2 remember was the same main event for this ppv. Ya'll can't even complain about any of them having resil. These 4 showed they belong where they at. review comin later
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Openers for wrestling are supposed to get the crowd enthused not make them curse and order a pizza while at the arena.

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K.Dangelo : 1 TV champion 2x Hardcore Champion 1X North American Champion 2x Tag Team Champion, 1x Pride champion

Espado : 1x Light Heavy Champion

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THE BUBBA REVIEW

 

Purge RP: Liger and Time is probably one of the longest running feuds in OCW history. And Time always goes over. How dare Mugen laugh at me while I'm ded. Poor Baker didn't even get a word in, I'm sure he'll get some mic time in the future....If he raises his grades.

 

Samsin vs. TJB: I'm digging TJB's look and entrance. I'm sure his dad is proud of him. Not so much of a fan of Samsin's character as he's trying to be a badass heel like the large majority of the roster, and that doesn't really work when you're beaten in a manner like this. TJB's finisher should be a punch combo! WHO'S GONNA CATCH THESE HANDS B?!?!?!? When you've been hit with a finisher and your opponent's not even yellow, then you should just put the controller down. Match went waaaaaayyy too long.

 

Cactus RP: The search for Jack continues! Madison is the very racist, bubba. Need to teach her to calm down with that.

 

Wrex vs. Henry vs. Hatton: Mister Francis, I sure hope you have enough money to pay for all that fancy fog. Is that supposed to be Hatton's Halloween costume? I dig it. Wrex has a good look, but I'd have to guess that he's another attempt at a badass heel, which means he'll get lost in the shuffle. I'm not sure what to think of Henry. I was expecting some sort of steampunk-ish attire just judging from the name, but I get something else. This was a decent match that I feel didn't drag for too long. A few things could be cleaned up here FPR-wise by the rooks, but that should (hopefully) come with time.

 

#Influence RP: Why would you say a title doesn't matter to you if you got a title match coming up next?

 

Quinn vs. Bray: I have to start by saying that the audio quality is awful. My ears died a horrible death. Bray's got on some pretty neat tights, but I don't know what to make of his face paint. This was actually a pretty good match that was shat on by terrible, terrible lag. You couldn't have redone it or sped the video up?

 

Cactus RP #2: Cactus/Gentleman Jack have been a constant source of entertainment with their RPs, and this one is no exception. Jack drank too much of that pisswater. Yimmy cameo :D

 

Skwad RP: I really don't wanna know what Carter and Majin were doing. Shudders

 

Loki/Trance RP: I enjoyed reading this one. Loki might be a dope, but dammit, he's a dope with a heart of gold. Wait, is Loki trying to recruit a lifeguard to the OCW cause? Didn't we just see one compete in a match? Oh dear.

 

Jackson vs. Jack vs. Cactus: Now this was pretty damn fun. Jackson's attire and theme had me rolling, and that tattoo on Jack's back brought a smile to my face. I've heard that Jack's been training with some of Turmoil's best, and holy crap does it show here. While this match had some length to it, it didn't feel like it was 20 minutes at all. I was constantly entertained throughout. Jackson somehow manages to come out and get the win, which is going to make things very interesting.

 

Skwad RP #2: That room where you receive insults and Truth Sirens from Parker......I think that's only reserved for Justin Raze. Warlock Penguin is interesting. Maybe he'll cast a spell to FIX THAT DAMN TITLE. THAT'S MY BABY B!

 

Smythe RP: Smythe being Smythe. You respact the facken legend or he break your face with Flapjack. Nobody kick outta dat shet bubba

 

Jookie/Jim Blek RP: I think Jookie's a pretty damn good writer, and quite underappreciated in that area. Why does Jim not wanna smoke the hashish with the Jookie? It's not like he died last time. The GIF of Jazzy Jeff getting thrown out had me dying. We'll see how Jookie does in his match or matches later tonight. WHA'GWAN?

 

Smythe vs. Baker: Not gonna lie, Smythe's entrance was awesome, especially with that shot of the crowd lighting up their phones. Baker looks like Dr. Doom with that mask, and I love it. Seems as if these guys forgot it was a hardcore match until halfway through, and even then when weapons were thrown into the mix, not much went on. Only one table was destroyed? C'mon b! This was pretty good though. I told you that nobody kicks outta the Flapjack! Smythe getting a nice win here.

 

#Influence vs. Loki & Trance: Influence's entrance theme doesn't really fit their characters at all. Despite that, I like their attires. Sid looks like he ate the old Sid. Chill with that Buff Blaster, b. Loki & Trance's entrance should not have worked, but damn, they made it work and it was spectacular. This is another lengthy match that didn't really feel that way at all, as it kept a fairly good pace and there were some cool spots. Props to Loki/Trance for retaining.

 

Spoder vs. Kass: Now this is something I can appreciate: A short, sweet, and to the point video. Roo shaking those hips was a little strange, but I laughed regardless. That finish was kinda cool!

 

Dimsmore vs. Ter: #Tre4NA. NOT AVAILABLE. Good on Dims for burying that young talent. I wonder if he's going to fite someone el-

 

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Dims/GOAT RP: Oh dear NATE'S GONNA HOLD DOWN MORE PPL!!!!

 

AC vs. Jookie: This match seemed to be all Jookie. Good on him for picking up the win.

 

Skwad RP #3: I think Malu with Dupree's hair would be too much for my brain to handle. Dupree firing shots at Turmoil ooooof. So is Big Ed a Pokemon now? The thought alone terrifies me.

 

Faction 4 Way: This match was awesome. Dennis did a good job of being Boobie (didn't even forget the scumbaggery). Legit thought Bewbs was gonna steal this at one point but no! This had a lot of twists and turns; it kept me engaged from the start. KD picks up a well-deserved win after F5ing the dookieshoes outta Minio.

 

B-17 RP: I actually liked this one a lot. B having a Christian Bale-like meltdown was pretty damn funny. Though I was hoping for him to say "WE'RE FUCKING DONE PROFESSIONALLY!"

 

Poo vs. Tibby: Dupree's entrance is amazeballs. Not really much to say about this one other than damn, Tibby whooped some ass.

 

Darryl/Madison RP: Dunkin Donuts is much too urban for this couple.

 

Bertha vs. Sophia: BERTHA MATCHKAAAAAA. Sophia got the soul powerbombed outta her multiple times, JEEAAAZZZUUUSSSS. That finish was way too controversial! What the hell happened there?

 

Dimsmore vs. GOAT: This is much better than what the original match probably would've been. While Dims fought valiantly, the inevitable still happened.

 

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Bertha/Overlord RP: Boooooooooooooooooooooooooo

 

Jookie vs. Kass: A Jookie match can't be a Jookie match without him either busting his shit through a table or botching a springboard. And I'm glad we got to see the latter here. That stomp from the top rope looks SICK. Honestly thought this was Kass' match to win, but it seems I was proven wrong. Congrats to Jookie for winning dat title.

 

Dupree/Kass Video: RIP Kass' hair. It will be missed. (Not really)

 

Malu vs. Dennis: That opening montage was really good. Makes me wish I could do one. When Malu was floating in the air after getting kicked in the face, that made me go like :O. Denny scoop slamming Malu should've been an OMG moment, kinda like Andre and that Hull Cogan guy. Malu might have a concussion after that Pele kick. OH SHET, MALU'S GONNA WIN THE S-CUP!!! 1-2- Oh wow. Way to no sell his finish b. Savage. Least Malu kicked out at like 2.6. This was another classic in their long line of great matches. Congrats to Denny for winning another tourny. #Underdog

 

Finale: :(

 

Overall, this show was decent. I'm extremely disappointed in the lack of RPs by any of the rookies or some of the more established names. Hopefully that will all improve sooner rather than later. I want this season to be even better than the last one.

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not having Majin around ATM is hard (We miss u , b) But we compensated. I lost it at Dupree's RP set and Entrance, but then again I am an ultimate Dupree mark, Rps and style always put a smile on my face.

 

:(

 

A big shout out to Dupree though. I been really sick this past week and still am now. Sickness bug plus bronchitis has wiped me out. A few of our members are having real life issues but Dupree really stepped in and took care of everything. Hopefully we will hear from Majin soon as we do all miss not having him around. I do especially because a lot of my motivation and ideas come from that man.

 

You don't realize how good you have it until it's gone :( and Majin is just simply one of a kind. I seen the commitment, money and everything else he put into this place and he is the sorta guy that will help anyone out.

 

Hope to get to a review later on but good seeing guys like Mugen get to the level where he's at now. Before the season ended he was on a role and beat Drago twice along with Dennis which not many people can say they done right now. I think Mugen has proved he is legit champion.

 

Speaking of Drago, big GZ to you and Dennis on winning the S-Cup. I hope we get to see that match at Devils Night.

 

I was really pulling for Kass, another guy who has been putting a lot into this place and jokes aside has done a fantastic job with the graphics. I feel his character has grown more in the purge. I was gutted that he didn't win the LHW championship. Now we just need to put Jookie in a match involving ladders.

 

We did the tag match and then I listened to the desk and died because Jay pretty much called our tag match spot on haha. Just not our night Austin :(

 

That's all I have time for right now and it was good seeing Dimsmore vs Nate and Tibby picking up a victory for Skwad.

 

P.S...

 

 

Baker...

 

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so!

 

I won't touch on everything, Drago did a great job with his review.

 

There was a turmoil match that was recorded in the wrong arena. I was bummed to hear that. But they apologized, and I know they are two stand up guys. So it won't happen again. At least for a long time. No one is perfect, other than my manager and Kass.

 

I don't know why samsin and thad dying reshoot. Why submit a one sided match that was that long? I think it ended up being longer than my match. It didn't showcase either character very well. I believe samsin would be served better as a heavy. You're a stocky dude with power bombs. I also think (in my humble opinion) you should reconsider the type of character. With the update meme in discord, why not use that to your advantage and build off of it. Like a young college guy that's obsessed with Twitter / social media and constantly needs to update people. Imagine there being a serious promo during a feud taking place in the ring….and samsin comes on stage, phone in hand,-!: interrupts the entire thing by having to update the OCW universe. Something like this…

 

https://youtu.be/H-_fsMTdazs

 

And

 

 

https://youtu.be/pNGZE71T2DM

 

That's just one idea. I respect your hustle and how much work you put in here so far, and KNOW you would kill a gimmick like this. Again, only you can decide what's best for your character. Looking forward to seeing what you do.

 

Dims, Tre, and the goat. I was looking forward to Tre and dims. I like both guys personally. This was a big opportunity for you, Tre. Real life happens to us all. But, this also why vets also don't really bother working with newcomers. I think being reliable is probably the most important thing anyone can bring to OCW. You could have built a feud off of tonight with a future hall of Famer, someone who main evented Lution. If you won in a good match with him, that's one hell of a skull you could have collected for your character. Instead, Nate, who already had to deal with me for 5 hours on Malu (so sorry about the splits), and an hour on a fatal four way as Tobin, filled in to help the card. I'm sure he had no problem recording three matches, but he shouldn't have to either. I hope you guys can work something out, and I hope a sincere apology was given to dim. He could have possibly missed being on such a historic show. If you missed this for real life, I hope things are well either way.

 

Turmoil three way for the TV contender. I was torn watching this. Doesn't happen often. On one hand I really like cactus and want to see him reach great heights on Turmoil. Jackson is the best turmoil champion we have had, and a fellow rev inc member. G Jack has been sparring with me. I feel it paid off. Either way, this win was well deserved as Jackson took most of the bumps. I hope booking keeps cactus and Jack in the hunt for the TV. Looking forward to our match Jackson, could be interesting for the stable.

 

Bertha and Sophia had ending of the night, hands down. I don't know if it was a glitch or what, but that was perfect and organic. Doesn't get much better. Pretty much guarantees a pay per view bout.

 

Dupree and Kass had me cracking up with that back stage segment.

 

Drago is terrifying and Mugen has the best entrance in OCW right now. And anyone who knows me knows….that pained me to type.

 

Heading to work, so I'll post more later. Looking forward to the podcast...sorta.

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I really appreciate the feedback Im getting from both ends.. Samsin is still a work in progress and any and all feedback and input is greatly appreciated and encouraged. I do have a few ideas for him currently but I do really dig the RNN update idea too lol.

 

Matches of mine WILL be shorter in the future. I apologize for those who had to endure my assbeating for as long as I had to.

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Aaaand... in my defense over not having an rp for the show... i was making an attempt to do one but someone here of higher power than myself, recommended that i not worry about writing an rp until I have more matches under my belt.

 

However, I DID make an attempt and hopefully that person can vouch for me if needed.

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