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What about a spoiler alert as maybe some of us haven’t gotten to that match

 

The belt was vacant.. there was only going to be a new champ.

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I’m not saying he won’t. I am just saying give some of the alts a shot you may be surprised what comes of it.

 

I thought the point of the invitational was to not only help me with FPR but to bring in more bombshells to the spotlight. Just saying.

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I thought the point of the invitational was to not only help me with FPR but to bring in more bombshells to the spotlight. Just saying.

 

Okay but shouldn’t you be doing dms to help you improve with fpr? Just saying...

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I’ve got Speak Easy, it’s not a catalyst to stop me from training in DMs, nor is it going to help get me closer to a belt. What I do on the segment, helps the OCW, but most importantly others, while giving me more exposure. It’s not a meal ticket to fame.......I still want to work hard through DM, writing, and matches when they are due....
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What I enjoyed the most

 

- FloJo Invitational: I liked the idea of an on-going stage for others to get some screen time and fight. It's simple but effective, and most important, useful for everyone. The match itself was long, but the ending was great: I honestly thought FloJo was going to win it, right until the very end of it

 

- Main Event felt like an actual main event, intense and fast, even thought it could've last a bit longer (20 minutes match is ok for a title match)

 

- I watched Frankie vs Jett and to be fair it was good. Sure, there were a bit of random running and awkward stare downs, but overall it was enjoyable

 

What I think should be improved

 

- I agree when others say written segments could've been more balanced across the episode. It may not even be considered a flaw, but if I have to make some constructive criticism this is one thing I can point out.

 

 

As far as the womens division is concerned, I'm the rookiest of the rookies so my opinion should not be considered that important.

All I can say is that in my first two weeks here, I had the chance to talk to most of the others (FloJo, Stixx, Odonnell), I asked them/read about their characters and worked with them for a segment, which was a blast for me and I had a great time writing.

I think we all have some good ideas, we just need some time to develop our CAWs and tell the stories we have in our minds. We should communicate more between us, that's the only thing I wish we'd do a bit more often (brainstorming about segments or feuds, for example).

When you say we should step up as a division, I think of what I've done and see if there's something I can improve: the only feedback I had was about Valks appearence and it was positive, but honestly that's the least of my worries. My main focus is her personality and how she can interact with the others. The idea behind her gimmick was to create the right mix of Bayley and Alexa Bliss (when she debuted as a face, with the childish day-dreamer gimmick), while still adding some mythology references here and there because why not.

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That was a ton to get through, but that's a great problem to have. I didn't keep specific notes since it took me two days to get through, but everyone should be commended for the great content. Some of the stuff wasn't my personal vibe and was really long, but you can't knock good content that was nicely written. Not much of feedback for this show due to the length. Good show and congrats to the new champ. The last match was really good outside of that B17 entrance. ;)

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Have any of you considered not having an alt when your first character is as bland as soy milk? Probably the reason your alts aren't getting booked, or because your only interest in having a female CAW is because you want a title.
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Have any of you considered not having an alt when your first character is as bland as soy milk? Probably the reason your alts aren't getting booked, or because your only interest in having a female CAW is because you want a title.

 

I’ve considered it and actually think I’m one of the most active rooks besides Capo who writes write and peace segments. Maybe i am wrong but that’s just my opinion.

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