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Why the fuck did ya both pick B17?

 

 

WHY THE FUCK does he ... look like osme kind of parody of YMCA stripper Chippendale nightmare?

 

 

 

I legit cringed and not in the HEAT cringe, more like a Father finding out his Son whom he thought for the longest time is a smart cookie a good kid. Is really just 2 shades for making glue based pizza with lead paint pepperonis. Like as a 1 time PPV attire sure haha cheap pop/heat. As regular schmegular gear... sigh

 

 

Ya'll couldnt call lightbulb head to fill in? seeing how Rey Misterio Jr Jr the 3rd would hold up against 2 of those fellas woulda been interesting.

 

 

I thought ME was supposed to be a tag but alas no..

 

 

The Yakman Hendi match not being used for obvious reason's didnt help either.

 

 

 

No lights in another match....I know I let a lot of stuff fly A LOT, cuz I try not to get worked up over things. But CMON son...... the whole show kinda reeked of going through the motions even though we haven't even hit Jan.

 

 

Y'ALL DID WAY MORE with WAY LESS. I'm just gonna chalk this up to being a perfect storm of horseshit. Because lord knows that does happen from time to time. But man....when it rains boy does it rain.... if it was just 1 thing then sure, but it just 1 after the other then a 3rd lol I couldn't take it.

 

 

 

This is what I get for yelling at yake to reel it back. I did this, this is my fault I take full responsibility for this.

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Confirmed. Jay doesn't like booty.

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you want booty, join the caw community and have a camel toe whilst you are at it

 

I draw my line at camel toe.

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Here's my notes for Turmoil 216, this one isn't going to be as long as not so much noteworthy happened on the show:

 

1. Real shame that this stupid game put a damper on Constance Fury vs Ace. Constance looks great, but so do all of Aries' CAWs, however this match soured on me a bit as I couldn't see past the glitch and by the end I was glad to see it had finished.

 

2. Good to see Ashley Moore adding wrinkles to her character consistently, but I just think she needs some direction to really get her off the ground this season. This promo was fine, and lets us know she's still around, but ultimately will become a forgettable one once she gets something to do (hopefully) soon.

 

3. My God did B17 look strong in this show or what lol. Firstly, he managed to not lose to the CCW champion and was actually closer to getting back in the ring than Trance was when the draw was called. Then, later on in the same night, beat the number one contender to the CCW Title with minimum health to start off with as well as a red and yellow body part. Obviously, this says something about B's ability on the sticks, but if I'm honest watching this made me less excited to watch the CCW Title match. Think of it this way: How am I going to believe JackMo has a chance against Trance if he can't even beat B17 who was already beaten up? I would've liked to see some kind of power-of-editing post-match stuff so JackMo didn't look like a complete mug, maybe a DQ finish or something like that purely just because of how badly the comp match went for him.

 

4. Jehst v Archer is for me consistently the best thing on Turmoil. This was a great continuation of their feud and probably the highlight of the show RP-Wise.

 

5. I noticed with the Bourne v TLBS match that between the entrances and the beginning of the match Damian's magically fluctuating tattoos disappearing and reappearing between cuts. Also thought it was worth mentioning that the song used for the match reminded me hard of SvR 2007, I think it was on the soundtrack lol, but I still popped. It's always worth looking over your edit when you think you've finished it, but other than that this match was pretty good, a bit long but probably Matteo's best match since starting. Also, Damian I counted a couple of claimed finishers you still have in your move-set, particularly the Hip Toss/Knee which Antonio Everrett uses and the TKO which Jehst still uses as far as I'm aware.

 

6. Expectedly, the ME was probably match of the night. Since I mentioned it with Bourne, it's worth noting again I noticed a weird switch in attire for Aries but with both him and Bourne I'm nitpicking, I thought this match told a good story and the post-match angle, while we could all see it coming, was a nice progression in this story to close the show.

 

And that's all from me folks. For the most part, this show was fine but I felt like little issues here and there really plagued this show.

 

My grade: 6/10

 

P.S Here is another reminder that (especially the new) Turmoil rookies need to step tf up and DO SOMETHING, please.

 

P.P.S Sorry that this write-up seems so negative so I'm just going to quickly list off a few good things about this show which I've already mentioned before: Nice Dillinger story progression, Yake is really coming into his own as a writer especially with Dillinger I feel, Some nice intrigue surrounding Valk and the mystery caller, Cort v Shep in Extreme Rulez is a yes pls and I hope it only gets more insane from there. That'll do it from me.

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Shorter review because I'm late and have a small penis.

 

Man oh man. There is a lot to dig into here. A LOT of bad (we can do better) but I think a lot of good that is going un-recognized in reviews so far.

 

- B17 as a godfather for the B-Community/OtaKRU is hilarious.

 

- Very disappointing to see the PS4 bullshit make it onto a TV show. I won't point fingers, just sucks to see, especially during a women's debut. I like Constance's moveset a lot! Give her a proper debut next show.

 

- Meh RP. Code is a fucking weirdo... and I'm looking forward to seeing him in the B-Community.

 

- My only RP of the show between all 4 characters. I'll just leave this here:

 

I will say some of you guys might be in danger of burning the candle at both ends. While I do enjoy a good Dupree Impression, one can burn out quickly if spreading oneself too thin. Thats basically for Yake.

 

- B17 being both opponents is a power move. Say what you will about it, but it's interesting. This man inserting himself into the mix and actually WINNING the 2nd match despite being orange and red at the start.

 

- Dragana proving she doesn't need the mouthpiece to cut a dope RP. She's pressing on Valkyrie (hehe) as a lovable draw in OCW. Underrated RP

 

- RP of the night! Archer and Jehst's angle is very interesting and in a lackluster show, this RP sticks out!

 

- Such an improvement on the sticks from TLBS. He is flying under the radar as a rookie in OCW. He may not be a perfect English speaker, but his effort on both ends of the OCW spectrum have not gone unnoticed! HUGE WIN!

 

- ohhhh snap. Usually I just markout for Valk RPs, this one has my super interested in her story more than a cheap pop. DEVIL'S NIGHT!

 

- As already mentioned, absolutely no representation from like 5 Turmoil rookies. No effort week after week is disappointing to say the least.

 

- End of ME makes more sense. I saw Loki on the card and was confused. Was really hoping an interference/surprise ent made this a tag match, and the production on the video could have been better, but it did it's job. Devil's Night is coming and Austin is back baby!

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The production on the video could have been better, but it did it's job.

 

It could of, but considering I put it together after deadlines and Jay was telling me to get him the match. I was doing the best I could.

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5. I noticed with the Bourne v TLBS match that between the entrances and the beginning of the match Damian's magically fluctuating tattoos disappearing and reappearing between cuts. Also thought it was worth mentioning that the song used for the match reminded me hard of SvR 2007, I think it was on the soundtrack lol, but I still popped. It's always worth looking over your edit when you think you've finished it, but other than that this match was pretty good, a bit long but probably Matteo's best match since starting. Also, Damian I counted a couple of claimed finishers you still have in your move-set, particularly the Hip Toss/Knee which Antonio Everrett uses and the TKO which Jehst still uses as far as I'm aware.

 

 

- Such an improvement on the sticks from TLBS. He is flying under the radar as a rookie in OCW. He may not be a perfect English speaker, but his effort on both ends of the OCW spectrum have not gone unnoticed! HUGE WIN!

 

I appreciate the fact that the small improvements I'm putting in place are visible. Ty. About the video, i didn't noticed the tattoes on Damians arms. It was my first time editing and i had to do only 1 hour before the timeline, cause Damian had not noticed to have saved only half of video. About english, yea i know that i'm not perfect, but i will try to employ in that aspect too during my stay here. :D

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