Turmoil 225

[B-17]

Flojo really has become lost. It's not just the losses anymore but lack of direction. And I know she has a story with Emperess (kinda) but it's lacking.

[B-17]

Also. I know everyone wants to work with Valk, but she needs space to tell her own story. That's not to say don't approach her, but there are a ton of other characters to work with until you have a direct reason to work with the top female character

 

For clarification this is a general thing that I've seen the past few weeks.

[EMP]

Also. I know everyone wants to work with Valk, but she needs space to tell her own story. That's not to say don't approach her, but there are a ton of other characters to work with until you have a direct reason to work with the top female character

 

For clarification this is a general thing that I've seen the past few weeks.

 

A minor defense to this on my part. I'm more working with Belle than Valk. I haven't really done anything to her or had any interactions with Valk. I just hate Belle. And since Belle is friends with Valk the stories just kinda happened.

 

Valkyrie + Ashley's

 

The Fat one (Belle) + Empress

 

As for Flojo, I'm not done with her just yet but, I can only insult a Treasure Troll Doll so many times. Now it's just getting a match together.

[Valkyrie]

I think B17 was referring to me being in multiple RPs at once (4 on this show) which is too much and I agree. The Parker one was written ages ago, I appreciate the effort of a Rookie reaching out and getting involved, plus I like both of his characters. We should've used the promo Room or Riot instead to avoid saturation.

I was in the Belle x Blaine one because I noticed Belle sometimes doesn't write (completely understandable), either because of the language barrier or whatever and I wanted to help out because she is the number one contender and everything. In hindsight, I could've ghost written part of it without being actually involved.

 

 

About Drago, I agree that often people sleep on his work, I legit hoped we were going to blow the roof of the arena this week but perhaps it's the Valkyrie curse of never being Motn or rpotn material or whatever. All I can say is that I wrote my first few lines then sent him the doc and went to the movies (Captain Marvel was awful btw). I got back and noticed two doc pages of Law shooting on Valkyrie. I've read it and it was just so perfect in so many ways, as if he knew exactly what was going on in my characters mind, her direction and everything even though I never told him what to write. That's what differentiates people that only care about their content and those who are truly active and informed, so big props to him.

[B-17]

A minor defense to this on my part. I'm more working with Belle than Valk. I haven't really done anything to her or had any interactions with Valk. I just hate Belle. And since Belle is friends with Valk the stories just kinda happened.

 

Valkyrie + Ashley's

 

The Fat one (Belle) + Empress

 

As for Flojo, I'm not done with her just yet but, I can only insult a Treasure Troll Doll so many times. Now it's just getting a match together.

 

Previous weeks as well. Valk risks becoming over exposed.

[Quartz]

All I can say is that I wrote my first few lines then sent him the doc and went to the movies (Captain Marvel was awful btw). I got back and noticed two doc pages of Law shooting on Valkyrie. I've read it and it was just so perfect in so many ways, as if he knew exactly what was going on in my characters mind, her direction and everything even though I never told him what to write. That's what differentiates people that only care about their content and those who are truly active and informed, so big props to him.

 

THIS! So much this.

[Cort Marshall]

Will post full thoughts when I read the show tomorrow, but I think Drago gets "slept on" because he's like never the best writing on the show but is also never worse than 2nd or 3rd best. The curse of the bassist kind of deal--a job done very well goes less noticed than one done exceptionally or badly. Kinda hard to comment on comedy stuff besides "haha what a story mark," but I've been liking the hints to Dragana's past and such on the past few shows. Also appreciate the VGM music even if I end up muting it to play whatever album I'm listening to over it lol. In the ring of course he's definitely a cut above, the 100% cleanest high-skill player IMO.

[Lotus FloJo]

Flojo really has become lost. It's not just the losses anymore but lack of direction. And I know she has a story with Emperess (kinda) but it's lacking.

 

I don't understand.

[B-17]

I don't understand.

 

Everytime a new female joins you get pushed aside. The flojo character needs a shake up or more time invested in her or something.

[Cort Marshall]

Solomon is a decent caw, little simple on the look but a british indie vibe. Nice theme. Simple ent, not much lighting and motions, blends well with the theme for that no nonsense fighter feel.

 

I think Tayy’s ent needs more upbeat/fast lighting to fit the beat of the song, maybe not quite strobe but like that hardy boyz flashy rainbow or Naomi’s club stuff.

 

Nice theme, CAW and moveset, Mark. I think Tayy went a little easy on you there with the rev advantage he had, but…

 

We’ve already gone over the typos in that one promo but please let “SEXY MAN ALIVE” become a meme shirt like “He hate me.”

 

Empress’s CAW and attire are amazing, like almost looks real levels. That psychotic grin makes me feel funny feelings.

 

Moore fabricating things again… nice video content, despite of course the wackiness of visualized fake flashbacks… also I laughed at the enema line.

 

Valk/Johnny Law was amazing here, he really hit the nail on the head with the doubts, whereas valk also brought up valid points. The thot plickens.

 

Like sparks’ attire and ent theme of monochrome… not sure bout the burger king crown. Better luck next time, B17 takes no prisoners. Theme song kinda reminds me of Vengeance by BOC.

 

Blaine’s scary and mean… but she’s in the right. The following murder is the responsibility of Valk incorporated.

 

DDP ALERT: THAT’S NOT A BAD THING! WAIT, NO, IT IS! WWE BOOKED ME LIKE SHIT!

 

Ace/Dragana was also very good, the feud has been a bit… cartoony weird kinda stop and start to me but this segment was good. Another cliffhanger, which is wrestling booking 101, leaving the fans with a question they have to tune in to have answered.

 

I hope JT isn’t another alt, I like the idea of this weird guy running around emphasizing words like a 50’s superhero comic. Fucking joggers and their energy. I bet he’s a morning person.

 

Jesus Monte Chris Rock that HIAC. I agree with the match type being overboard… and the 2nd climb being debatable choice… but wow, the spots. Brutal. This loss also helps the “Ace is in Dragana’s head/Dragana loses her mojo” storyline.

 

This promo went postmatch despite being a prematch interview, but oh well. That steaks line is gonna be a good catchphrase. I also like that he’s nervous and does the Sid Vicious live gaffe. A grounded character, the humbleness should help make sure anyone he suplexes into a coma doesn’t get buried TOO hard.

 

Jacob Trance going back to his more psycho roots. Good segment. The deal is made… retirement is within his grasp… unfortunately Wrex will probably paralyze him before the retirement just to be a dick. Enjoy the home, gramps!

 

Damn that promo after the cell. Like I said, very subtle storytelling--for wrestling that is. Johnny, Dragana and Valk all have reasons to feel the way they do. Emoshuns.