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Since this is so late and another show is right around the corner I'm gonna try and keep this on the shorter side. I won't be reviewing my own stuff.

 

P3 Segment -

I've said this before but, it's a P3 Segment either you enjoy them or you don't. I find the very entertaining. I like this one seems to have a possible story behind it. Looking forward to seeing what happens to Mugen going to jail and If Drago can run the Bonanza without him.

 

TMCJ Promo -

Since Jay said on the stream how it pictures TMCJ talking that stupid voice has been stuck in my head while reading this promo. TMCJ calling for universal judgment on Jackmo. TMCJ has decent promos for being an oddball. Just hope he doesn't fall too deep down the oddball hole I think we have enough of those.

 

Joshua Tucker vs Alex Asher -

I'll be honest this wasn't a great match. Not that it was a bad performance from either man. It was just very one side to the point where you just wanted it to end. It felt like Asher was just playing with him. Well hopefully, Tucker doesn't take the loss too bad and keeps at it. His Caw looks a lot better but, I agree with Jay he kind of reminds me of Cobra. Maybe it's the hair.

 

Rey, La Hiena, Mistico Promo -

This was a solid Rp, in my opinion, The only thing i have a problem with is every Luchadore a face? Why do they feel the need to connect just because they wear a mask? I don't know maybe it's just me. Something about a group of luchador's that are all good guys hanging out screams WWE Lucha house party. I would rather they have a Bad Luchas fighting against two Good Luchas or something. All in all, I'll wait to see before making a full judgement.

 

Second part -

Was mostly just Hiena and Mistico beating the living shit out of Leo Grimms. I find it weird he said nothing that entire promo even while getting hit. Maybe Leo wasn't available to write anything at the time or something. I would have made Leo more of a threat and have him start getting up pissed and have the two lucha run like hell. The end of this promo just makes him seem weak. I hate to say this but, He should have pulled a fiend where it took 6 or whatever curb stomps to put him down type of thing.

 

Valkyrie Video -

I like to see that Valkyrie is making use of 2k20. This was a good video showing Valk's frustration with Kasstainity. She'll come around. She just needs more time to see we are family now.

 

JackMo Promo -

This was a very funny RP from Jackson. This is my first time reading an Rp from Jackson outside of his apology RP at Devils Night. So this gave me a better idea of his character and from this RP I have come to the conclusion he's dumb as a brick. lol I'm kidding I feel like I will get a laugh from his RP's I look forward to seeing more.

 

Trucker Promo -

Something about this promo gives me the impression we will be getting a new version of Trucker but, maybe that's just wishful thinking on my part. Trucker going into the ruthless aggression era.

 

Alex Asher -

I don't have much to say about this Promo mainly because it's been so long since I have seen Asher do anything that I'm not even sure what is happening with hospital stuff and everything. But, if he sticks around I wouldn't be against seeing him fight Benji.

 

TMCJ vs Jackmo -

This was a pretty good match that had a little bit of a rough start. But, as it went on it got better. Jackmo showed to be a bit rusty with one or two crapples doing the match and that acceptable given time I can see some good shit coming from him. But, today was Joopitor's day. Jackmo appearance reminds me of Wrex and Cort mixed together.

 

KD and H20 promo -

This was a great promo from KD and H20 and an amazing build to their match. I don't care what you want to say KD is coming off more like the face in this fight. H20 has fucking heel written all over him. It's impossible to roll up in a limo flexing during KD's church time and not come off as a heel.

 

Solomon Caine promo -

These promos weren't bad. Not really much to say about it.

The continued slow build to Lee vs Caine. Find it kinda weird he would go for a killshot in a brawl. Just beat the hell out of him no time for moves like that. Unless your move is something like a sweet chin or something quick. You do a killshot after you beat the hell out of him so he can't fight back.

 

Judge Promo -

This promo seems to have more going for it. Judge throwing down the glove to open challengers. Which in retrospec sounds cool but, honestly, at least in my eyes, the judge is not anyone that beating him would give anyone more of a push. When the judge becomes a bigger draw I could see this working out better.

 

Blaine vs Zoe -

Great match put on by Blaine and Zoe, Kinda like the Tucker fight was heavily one-sided for a large portion of the fight. Blaine wants to get her hands on Valkyrie and she shows it as she came to win the whole tournament. Very good work put in by Zoe but, Blaine is on a whole other level.

 

Doc,Everrett, Cobra, and Ryu promo -

Go build to the upcoming match. But, something about this who cow gang thing doesn't make sense. There was no real build to this whole cow gang thing outside of discord and all of a sudden it's a thing. Okay sure I can live with that. But the Uncrowned going from being serious to two people yelling "Bro" at each other and talking about "delete that". Just takes you out of the Rp. What happens in Discord should remain a discord and out of the show. Just seems out of character. If it was a P3 segment that different.

 

Flojo vs Heather -

This was a very good match. Like the fact, Flojo took everyone's advice finally. I like the new serious entrance with the music. There were a few times Flojo came off looking thirsty. But, the match as a whole was great and what a surprise. I don't think anymore really expected Flojo to come out on top but, she toppled Heather. Congrats Flojo. Don't get me wrong happy Flojo one especially with it helping push the new attitude but, I would still like to see Blaine vs Heather at some point as well.

 

Troupe Promo -

Decent promo showing the Troupe trying to build up a possible protest against Kasstainity. It seems like something they would do. While Terra continues to be a leader and tries to keep the group focused.

 

Mantis, Tucker, Reese Promo -

Maybe I missed something when did Mantis and Reese start hanging out? Maybe I forgot about it. Anyway, it's an odd couple if they are teaming up or something but, If it helps get Mantis on a path I say I'm willing to give it a shot. As for Tucker I said this about the previous RP he did but, I'm sensing heel turn. This isn't a bad thing but, not a good thing because Tucker hasn't done much as a babyface to have an impactful heel turn in my eyes. I'll wait to see it.

 

Ashley Moore and Estrella Promo -

Estrella coming to Ashley's Add. Hmm...another unlikely duo of people I wouldn't have expected. I nice to see Estrella making contact with others outside of the Riot (XBOX) even if she can't have matches with them it keeps all the shows seeming like one universe. Too bad, she's teaming up with the wrong person.

 

Flojo Promo -

Very nice follow-up promo by Flojo. Blaine wanted the serious Flojo back well it looks like she'll be getting her in the finals. Keep up the good work.

 

Parca vs Tre -

Very exciting match. Put on between these two. But, Tre was gonna show why he is the pride champion and was not going be put down by a rookie. Probably one of the better matches I've seen Tre in. Honestly, I feel like Tre should be going for a world title right now but, that just me. Good show Parca but, if you are gonna beat Wrex you better get your head in the game because Tre just showed you aren't ready.

 

Telos,Cort,KD match -

This was a very entertaining match to watch something about cort being the smallest guy in the ring between too giants was great. I love the spot where KD is looking at Cort and Cort does that please don't hurt me taunt. This lost didn't hurt Telos or KD. They both put on a great show.

 

 

Ryu and Bobby promo -

Nice back and forth btween Bobby and Ryu. Not a lot to say about this other than it makes me excited to see the match.

 

 

Cort's Attacker Promo -

Finally we get to see who has been attacking Cort. Who has been helping out TY sparks? Who? ..Red Harring!!....I mean Elliot parker! What! Ellot parker is working with B17 and TY sparks. Elliot Parker is the new recruit to Kasstainity's B17 lost boys. Wow.. I didn't see that coming. Let's see if parker has what it takes to be a Lost boy. I love Cort's reaction to finding this out just to get the crap kicked out of him. You gotta keep your guard up Cort you of anyone should know that.

 

Archer and Danny Promo -

Solid promo from both Danny and Archer but, Archer takes the cake in this promo completely destorying Danny on the mic. Mark it down on your calander Danny come December 14 your personal trainer Archer wants to introduce you to leg day.

 

 

Cow Gang vs T4 -

I love the syncing up of everyones attires. Also love the picture in picture. Amazing use of that option. I'm happy to see someone use that for once. I really think that should be used more often for stuff like that as long as it doesn't become too much of a problem or block anything important. But, great work. As usually with any Tag match this was insane to keep track of but, it was a very good match. If this match is anything to judge anni by things don't look good for Uncrowned. But, I also feel like they took more damage trying to keep Cobra out of the match as much as possible.

 

Ending Video -

That Ending! Jay and Jake's excitment explains it all. Can't wait to see where things go from here.

 

It was a great show and a excellent build to anni from all people involved. Great work everyone I love it Can't wait for Anni.

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I've said this before but, it's a P3 Segment either you enjoy them or you don't. I find the very entertaining. I like this one seems to have a possible story behind it. Looking forward to seeing what happens to Mugen going to jail and If Drago can run the Bonanza without him.

 

It's not that I dislike the rps. I just prefer them working against each other instead of with each other and as they are it comes off as too cute and funny when Drago is and could be a killer and Mugen is fucking crazy.

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Joshua Tucker vs Alex Asher -

I'll be honest this wasn't a great match. Not that it was a bad performance from either man. It was just very one side to the point where you just wanted it to end. It felt like Asher was just playing with him. Well hopefully, Tucker doesn't take the loss too bad and keeps at it. His Caw looks a lot better but, I agree with Jay he kind of reminds me of Cobra. Maybe it's the hair.

 

The losses mean just about nothing especially to rookies. Being seen is the most important thing for both of them at this point.

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Cort's Attacker Promo -

Finally we get to see who has been attacking Cort. Who has been helping out TY sparks? Who? ..Red Harring!!....I mean Elliot parker! What! Ellot parker is working with B17 and TY sparks. Elliot Parker is the new recruit to Kasstainity's B17 lost boys. Wow.. I didn't see that coming. Let's see if parker has what it takes to be a Lost boy. I love Cort's reaction to finding this out just to get the crap kicked out of him. You gotta keep your guard up Cort you of anyone should know that.

 

Yes, yes, yes. My Lost Boys grow.

 

Bingo protects Kasstianty, but The Lost Boys protect me. It's a good deal.

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KD and H20 promo -

This was a great promo from KD and H20 and an amazing build to their match. I don't care what you want to say KD is coming off more like the face in this fight. H20 has fucking heel written all over him. It's impossible to roll up in a limo flexing during KD's church time and not come off as a heel.

 

I fucking told everyone months ago. H20 is the heel.

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As a general note to heels in no particular order.

 

It is very very important to "Lift Up" or whatever the word is maybe "elevate" your opponent or opponent. If you constantly call someone a failure or a loser or dumb, or a mamao and then you go ahead and lose. Well you just lost to a dumb failure loser mamao...... And you look silly.

 

It's a nuanced art to putting your opponent over but still being mean.

Here let me use Stupid Cobra as an example. Promo Mode In 3 2 1.

 

A.C. Cobra is a loser, he is a gamer, he is a live streamer. Instead of spending time in the gym trying to reach his true potential he is live streaming his beatings on twitch for all the world to see. By the way I am pretty sure that is a TOS Violation, and I know a thing or 2 about TOS Violations! You see at OCW 15, A.C. Cobra is going to learn a harsh life lesson, that all the potential in the world means nothing. We know, we know you climbed that mountain and did the unthinkable and proved everyone wrong. But we also know you fell right off that mountain! At OCW 15 this will not be your climbing that mountain again, we will skip the joy and adulation and go straight to the fall and I will be there to watch you crash!

 

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As a general note to heels in no particular order.

 

It is very very important to "Lift Up" or whatever the word is maybe "elevate" your opponent or opponent. If you constantly call someone a failure or a loser or dumb, or a mamao and then you go ahead and lose. Well you just lost to a dumb failure loser mamao...... And you look silly.

 

It's a nuanced art to putting your opponent over but still being mean.

 

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I'm sure this doesn't just apply to me. But, In my defense regrading this I was informed by Ashley to be ruthless and She wanted me to be unforgiving in our rps so I was. I admit maybe I went a little overboard but, with that being said This wasn't just a feud for an FI case this was a level of pure hatred. So I didn't see myself speaking kindly about Ashley after she turned on me and I was her best Friend.

 

But, I understand what you mean and in any other case I would make sure to keep it more 50/50.

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