Mayhem Posted January 20, 2008 Posted January 20, 2008 *Cameras open up with Mayhem pulling up in his Chevy Suburban to a Marriott Hotel in Indianapolis, Indiana.* *Pulling up to the front valet parking Mayhem steps out of the SuV as he open to side door to pull out his luggage.* *The Valet gives Mayhem his ticket for the car as he proceeds inside.* *Walking into the Hotel Mayhem stops for a moment to see the surroundings of the local enviorment. Seeing the lobby where there is a seating area with a wall mount LCD tv for guest to view while waiting, the check in desk with a attractive hostess and a bar room across the hallway with a few visitors indulging in general conversation.* *Mayhem walks up to the check in desk.* Hostess : Hello How are you doing? Mayhem : Good so far just a long plane flight in but I'm sure I'll be better with the company here. *Smiling at the Hostess* Hostess : Oh *Giggles*. Well checking in a presume? Mayhem : Right you are.... Hostess : And what is your name sir? Mayhem : Kris Maltenieks.... So let me ask you something? *The hostess looks up at Mayhem.* Mayhem : How good is your bar in here, is it the quality of a good pub? Hostess : Yeah it's where I spend my time after work to loosen up. My favorite drink is chocolate cake. Mayhem : Ahhhh so they have good enough liqueur to make some good drinks. Well how about you stop on in after work and I'll buy you a drink. Hostess : Well I'm not supposed to have drinks with guest but I guess this time it could be worth it. *Mayhem looks back over his shoulder and then looks down at his luggage.* Mayhem : I tell you what, if you could get a bell boy to bring my stuff to my room I think I'm going to go ahead and have a sit down at the bar. Hostess : Ok I'll Have him bring the luggage right up when he gets back. Mayhem : Thanks .... *Mayhem looks at her nametag* Bethany. I'll see you later. Bethany : *Flitingly * Buh Bye.. *Mayhem turns around and heads into the bar as the phone is ringing as the bartender attends to the phone Mayhem sits down.* Bar tender : The big man sitting at the bar now ? * turning around to look at Mayhem* Sir you have a important phone call. *The bar tender hands Mayhem the phone has mayhem grabs it he covers the mouth piece with his hand.* Mayhem: I'll have a Sam Adams Winter Lager ... *uncovering the phone * Yeah Kris Maltenieks here? Voice : Mr: Maltenieks we have a urgent situation here in Georgia down at Kennesaw Hospital regarding your cousin Ministry.... *Mayhem stands up out of his seat.* Mayhem : Whats the situation is he ok? Voice : Well thats just the thing we... we don't know... Mayhem : What do you mean you don't know, obviously you do know something or else we wouldn't be talking right now so why dont you stop beating around the bush and just tell me!!!! Voice : Ok I'm sorry it's just that your cousin you see... He is missing.... Mayhem: Missing!!!? What do you mean Missing?!?! Voice : I mean no one could find him in the hospital or around any where at his residence .... Mayhem: What!!!!! What the F*&$, are you telling me that a near seven foot man in a coma just vanished!!!! Voice : Sorry sir but thats exactly what I'm telling you. Mayhem: What's you name sir? Voice : My name is Dennis Floyd. Mayhem : Ok Dennis is there anything else you want to tell me? *As Mayhem is talking on the phone the bar tender walks up to him and hands him his Sam.* Dennis : There is one thing.... His accomplis Luther Kriest has broken out of Fayette County Jail and is missing as well. *Mayhems face freezes as he is about to drink his beer.* Dennis : I'm Sorry Mr: Maltenieks but thats all the information I have, I'm sure you will be notified later if any changes occur. *Mayhem puts down the mug as he hands back the phone to the bar tender, with his hand on his fore head with a concerned yet amazed look on his face grabs the mug and downs the beer trying to ease the stress and frustration of the call he had just received as cameras fade to black.* https://t.me/pump_upp
Josiah Cross Posted January 20, 2008 Posted January 20, 2008 The Monster has escaped LOOK OUT! Nice read. THE DEAN http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i41/bombsquad07/barb.jpg
Adrian Bold Posted January 20, 2008 Posted January 20, 2008 good promo I wish you just don't use your real name because it kills the monster image for me :( http://i.imgur.com/zP10f.gif
Mayhem Posted January 21, 2008 Author Posted January 21, 2008 good promo I wish you just don't use your real name because it kills the monster image for me :( I'll take it into consideration, was trying something different. I appreciate the feed back https://t.me/pump_upp
Vincent Valmont Posted January 21, 2008 Posted January 21, 2008 I'm very interested to see, more of this, and how it plays out. Very good RP, and also, I don't think using your real name, doesn't take anything out of it, IMO. OCW's 2008's Most Improved Wrestler 2x OCW Heavyweight Champion2x OCW Hardcore Champion
Seth Morrison Posted January 21, 2008 Posted January 21, 2008 I'm very interested to see, more of this, and how it plays out. Very good RP, and also, I don't think using your real name, doesn't take anything out of it, IMO. And I think, you, seperate, your, sentences, too, much, with, commas. Kinda like Smythe,.....Likes......To seperate..... his sentences.... with multiple periods..... Dane Xavier: cyber bullying is not only illegal, it's pathetic "I swear to go if you call me a Liberal again you RETHUGLICAN, SEE WHAT I DID THERE. This is america, if you want to throw your hard earned sweat money on a videogame gambling site and thus deny you and your family food and shelter THAN BY GOD DAMMIT YOU CAN, BECAUSE THIS IS AMERICA YOU COMMIE SOCIALIST. Now then when Can I expect your next donation? "- Jay Jay Double A is "The Weapon Of Mass Consumption"
Vincent Valmont Posted January 21, 2008 Posted January 21, 2008 And I think, you, seperate, your, sentences, too, much, with, commas. Kinda like Smythe,.....Likes......To seperate..... his sentences.... with multiple periods..... I never did like my english teacher... OCW's 2008's Most Improved Wrestler 2x OCW Heavyweight Champion2x OCW Hardcore Champion
Mayhem Posted January 21, 2008 Author Posted January 21, 2008 I never did like my english teacher... LAWL https://t.me/pump_upp
DJ Chino Posted January 21, 2008 Posted January 21, 2008 Real names as the real names of wrestlers is cool, I use it for mine. 500 bucks for the first guy who can figure it out BESIDES JAY AND GUY
Seth Morrison Posted January 21, 2008 Posted January 21, 2008 Real names as the real names of wrestlers is cool, I use it for mine. 500 bucks for the first guy who can figure it out BESIDES JAY AND GUY Jose Valenzia Dane Xavier: cyber bullying is not only illegal, it's pathetic "I swear to go if you call me a Liberal again you RETHUGLICAN, SEE WHAT I DID THERE. This is america, if you want to throw your hard earned sweat money on a videogame gambling site and thus deny you and your family food and shelter THAN BY GOD DAMMIT YOU CAN, BECAUSE THIS IS AMERICA YOU COMMIE SOCIALIST. Now then when Can I expect your next donation? "- Jay Jay Double A is "The Weapon Of Mass Consumption"
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