Road 2 Glory 2010

[K.Dangelo]

Nice ppv.The Air started off messing w/ Ice then Carson introduces himself.

Then here comes the EX rush I liked it.

I didn't see him winning.VV loses it (very cool).Ice vs Air gave another great TV title match. VV and Trips damn!Someone needs a blood transfusion and the ending I was like wow!

Leon ,Leon,Leon you know can entertain.Nice pick and the ending I wanted to see.

The EX title match could have went either way fantastic match guys.Mayhem gets his get hype speech (like he needs it).

Ouch and wow for the ME.The finale was extremely mark worthy on so many levels.

On the FI match ,if you haven't done a 3 or 4way in this years you wouldn't or don't know how difficult it is to do much of anything.I don't have a problem w/ fighting either one of those guys again for that FI spot.:cool:

[Iceberg LeTuce]

Nice ppv.The Air started off messing w/ Ice then Carson introduces himself.Then here comes the EX rush I liked it.I didn't see him winning.VV loses it (very cool).Ice vs Air gave another great TV title match. VV and Trips damn!Someone needs a blood transfusion and the ending I was like wow!Leon ,Leon,Leon you know can entertain.Nice pick and the ending I wanted to see.The EX title match could have went either way fantastic match guys.Mayhem gets his get hype speech (like he needs it).Ouch and wow for the ME.The finale was extremely mark worthy on so many levels.On the FI match ,if you haven't done a 3 or 4way in this years you wouldn't or don't know how difficult it is to do much of anything.I don't have a problem w/ fighting either one of those guys again for that FI spot.:cool:

 

 

For the love of god and for the good of my eyes, format please

[Craig Casey]

Nice ppv.The Air started off messing w/ Ice then Carson introduces himself.Then here comes the EX rush I liked it.I didn't see him winning.VV loses it (very cool).Ice vs Air gave another great TV title match. VV and Trips damn!Someone needs a blood transfusion and the ending I was like wow!Leon ,Leon,Leon you know can entertain.Nice pick and the ending I wanted to see.The EX title match could have went either way fantastic match guys.Mayhem gets his get hype speech (like he needs it).Ouch and wow for the ME.The finale was extremely mark worthy on so many levels.On the FI match ,if you haven't done a 3 or 4way in this years you wouldn't or don't know how difficult it is to do much of anything. I don't have a problem w/ fighting either one of those guys again for that FI spot.:cool:

 

How about you put that FI spot on the line against me and hallows, if you're up for it. ;)

[Nathan Gaines]

Highly doubtful you'll be in that one Sir Casey

[Jookie Marley]

damn i went in and out like santino

[Craig Casey]

Highly doubtful you'll be in that one Sir Casey

 

 

Awwwwww :(

 

 

but I'm the prince of ocw and all...

[Mayhem]

Disapointed in one thing really, i'll touch on that later or I might not even bring it up.

 

I like Carson's RP on the 1st page. The way your discriptive in your ACTION Naratives sets it apart from normal actions in other RPs.

 

Nice work, keep it up.

 

 

Craig Casey reminds me of a young Ric Flair.

[Iceberg LeTuce]

Awwwwww :(

 

 

but I'm the prince of ocw and all...

 

 

Who are you?

[Davide Daniels]

That is one of the best shows i have ever seen. Congrats everyone!

 

And my name is Davide....not David.

[Mayhem]

THE MONSTER's REVIEW

 

page 1

The Theme opens up the segment for the night in a classical bit which turns into some Rock. I'm a sucker for classical pieces being a MetalHead and all thats where most of it all derived from.

 

We get the normal break down from Scaggs and my obsessive fan Al poling. Which is good & i'll touch on something small quickly & just say there could have been more commentary but this happens every now and then so it's not a big deal in my eyes.

 

Opening up with the 1st RP of the Night, We have Le'tuce. waking up in strange places are we, that's called living the good life normally. Not in this case.

 

Tuce wakes up bound and gagged and gets a Cruz shirt that could have been used for god knows what blown into his face.

 

Spotting a old man with a got on a rope, Tuce finds out he's in lucha libre land.

 

Getting his keys out for the famous pune wagon he is about to hall out of there.

 

find Eva in the back making noises, Tu'ce tries to have a conversation with her forgetting she's still gagged *Ding*.

 

Tuce takes out that gagger and EVA says "THEY" got her after Tuce.

 

So who is "THEY" in this case which makes it interesting.

 

The one downfall is this and it's another small thing about the PPV and this RP, a 10 hour drive in America will take you say from Georgia to about past half of Texas. So you wouldn't be able to make the show regardless.

 

Now a minor detail left out of this whole thing, where the hell is this PPV being broadcasted from.

 

I'll assume Texas because it was never said and Tuce is in Mexico, so just putting two and two together I'll say Texas. Great Margaritas there to BTW, Morrison you ass you didnt show up to my show at NMFest II.

 

Oh one thing that made me laugh and this is because i'm a pervert and freely admit that i'm a male shovenist.

 

When Eva asked TUCE to "TIGHTEN" the rope around her wrist and the goes Oh Yea.

 

Thats right you dirty little slut you can come see Mayhem later to.

 

anyhow moving along

 

 

 

 

Carson Black rp

 

I hate to take back a compliment about how you did your narrative lines but I have to take that one back as that belongs to some one else. Not saying that your RP wasn't good just thats a compliment of a different nature.

 

Carson is happy that he is now offical in OCW yet during this RP I find it hard to figure out if your character is stupid or country.

 

He has Jim Black telling him whats up and yeah the matches you had which if you lay off the peyote you could remember.

 

I just have a hard time figure out if your Character is dumb, and if he is country you need to do some research on the lifestyle and mannerisms of country western, Rednecks, Country Rock people to develope this character.

 

 

 

 

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Nathan GAINES RP

 

This Rp is suttle, to the point with good Formatting and easy to read, regardless of whats said here I'm just saying it's easy on the eyes.

 

Stacy Clark is backstage waiting on Gaines to come out of the closet i mean locker room.

 

Gaines makes a shot of humor at himself and in general spoofs of trademark phrases.

 

Nathan makes a rap out of no where and I am figuring out that we are in Anaheim now. Hmmm.

 

Not sure if The rap was nessicary but it is Gaines and he's playing a face card there for crowd receptiveness so i can let it slide and move on with the feel of it.

 

Now this is something here and I want some to take notice that are trying to be face at the moment. Gaines is humble throughout this whole RP.

 

It comes across face but not I'm a puss ether. No real swearing at all.

 

Gaines basically tells that he is worn from that assault that happened to him and he's up against stiff competition *Calm down BAXTER*

 

OA good RP Gaines.

 

 

 

THE EX RUSH

 

I heard this got done about a month ago, well ok but you had a week and this was simmed is there any way it could have been redone with the right arena, and if the out come was already done and the match already taken place with Trance then just play the winning person and turn off the HUD.

 

Anyhow Simming is cool, I actually wanted to sim a Elimination Chamber match when I was champ back in the day. I like the idea and I think for rare ocassions I like it very much so.

 

Sometimes that one match with the one wrong arena happens, I dont care I know FORMAT is something looked big upon but it happens every now and then and it isnt a title match.

 

So meh not bothering me at all just a short lol.

 

Pugh which soccer team are you on? That outfit is ridiculous SRY just my opinion.

 

Then We also have Carson Black to start it off and he could have fooled us all with that stature of his, he looks like a HWY.

 

so Carson and Pugh slug it out and shortly there after Hazard makes his way in the fight.Then Recon, wait RECON! *LOOKS @ volume of whiskey in glass*

 

David DiCanio comes down to the ring while Hazard takes out Pugh sending him over the top with a jumping calf kick.

 

Wesley joins the action shortly after as Carson Black eliminates Recon.

 

At this point I want to say that I was very happy with the tempo of this Match

 

Baxter joins the mutiny in the ring and eliminates Wesley shortly after while Brandon Hostile joins the match while the action is picking up.

 

Carson Black eliminates yet another person proving to be a threat.

 

Narrowing this down to the end loling a Marley for is fast exit we have

have Nathan Gaines to my suprise left against Brandon Hostile with Nathan dropkicking him out.

 

Rather suprised because my bet was on Baxter or Hazard when this whole thing started.

 

OA this wasn't bad to watch, it was injoyable. Kudos for the idea.

 

 

 

 

Craig Casey RP

 

Don't let your ego swell on what I'm about to say

When I was talking about RPs and the Narrative sequences this is the person I was referring to.

 

He is descriptive on the actions and fine with details that grab my interest.

 

If some remember last season I had this 3rd person narrative to my RPs during my fued against SETH IRVING.

 

This has a very similar feel to it and I injoy this RP very much because of this detail more than what he says because what he does say here is very little.

 

I can sense the young heel attitude very easily with mocking stacy.

 

This type of RPing is easier done with 1 person or 2. Anymore and it becomes a bit more complicated to create atmosphere which this did a nice job of.

 

 

good job man.

 

 

 

 

 

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Valmont RP

 

This Rp is a good Heel push for Vince.

 

He makes a point to comment about the two finishers to put him away etc and starts making more claim to the #1 contendership come hell or high water who ever is the champ at the end of the night has to deal with him.

 

Vince is pissed off and wanting what he and others also think is rightfully theirs.Being the OCW title

 

 

 

 

 

 

Mayhem video rp

 

Ok yeah aside from me saying how awesome I am with my attire :D I can say this.

 

This is my fault for the placement of this video RP. I asked for it to be page 2 or 3 and I got page 3.

 

the unfortunate thing is it's right after Valmonts RP in the ring.

 

It makes no sense for Valmont to be out in the ring then have Mayhem come out.

 

The two would practiclly kill eachother at this point.

 

This could have been placed on page 4

 

that's all & I said it 1st.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Television title match

 

 

 

TUCE vs Evil RYU... Air

 

Tuce come out with the champion change over being 1st to come down to the ring which is always a bad omen.

 

The match is underway, I honestly thought Tuce was going to come out strong for a good while but both men exchange pretty well.

 

BTW I love the LEX Luger forearm smash.

 

Tuce gives Air a nice shuffle in the corner.

 

Ryu comes out and misses his tornado kick and gets a flury from TUCE only to be judo slammed.

 

Then Ryu lands his senpukyaku kick, Tuce tries to get back to his feet swinging with lefts and right and misses his jiggalow punch only to get another senpukyaku kick from Ryu.

 

RYU is on the onslaught Barlog must have made him mad to go after VEGA so far in we are in ROUND 2!!! FIGHT!

 

Air just starts unloading on TUCE here, then only gets whipped in the corner and gets taken to the air

 

Ok I know that song in the middle of that match, is this Dream Theater Panic Attack right? Good shit. If you like that song guys go listen to the song Metropolis ***** . BTW this is Prog Metal the genre Halcyon Way falls under.

Education children

 

 

Sry at this point I start jamming to the song more than watching the match watching my fingers type as fast as this music is going a 220 BPM with 16th notes is very awesome sauce.

 

As many matches this goes back and forth AIR had his finisher but got knocked to the ring apron, This happens alot in 2010 and is so frustrating. I believe AIR could have finished if this didnt happen.

 

Unfortunately for him that isn't the case. TUCE starts building up momentum and lays the pimp slap on AIR followed by the HeJohn Donkey Punch

 

Now this is something on the matter of moves that fit. It's been talked about on Tuce about that punch. Does it fit sorta for men the size of Tuce..

 

Ok

Could it be changed yes, but he likes it and it's not completely out of his character, just the renaming of it would be good like I said the HeJohn Donkey Punch is a good1 and slightly funny.

 

It's almost on the level as some say Hey Mayhem your spear looks like a finisher, yeah but... no one even has used it as one and for a guy my size dont you think it would take you off the ground.

 

I've had the moves sense 06, it's like me losing the electric chair,judgement slam, camel clutch slam, STO. and then getting rid of one of those.

But i've seen much worse with people using overdrives or finisher neckbreakers ina regular move set.

 

regardless i was going down a different path there, my point is that sometimes people like their move and your not going to convince them otherwise to change it unless it is REALLY EXTREMELY out of place, or they have something that REALLY EXTREMELY looks like a finisher and you have more than 1 person to prove such.

 

other wise it's kind of a waste of breath and just let the person continue.

Tuce it looks good on ya, maybe a better name for it.

 

 

 

 

TREVOR RP

 

Thank God you RPed. There is some many fuckers MIA on this PPV it anoys the hell out of me.

 

Trevor explains he has been injured but has been cleared to wrestle and yea, he's pissed at Valmont and wants to whip that ass.

 

Short and to the point.

 

This is a prime example people of if you dont feel like writing a essay you can put something out like this. It's better than bloody nothing!

 

 

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