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Just got done rewatching and it was a very rewarding show overall to work on. And it will only get better. Not too sure what I think of the new girls. But once we get up and running with the division things should even up. I've got two bombshells (?) ready to go and I encourage people make some as well. Ron Portman needs to leave the name behind. It's a symbol of the garbage man. Leave it behind and become a wrestler. Not sure how he went from no mic time to his own show. Took a bit for a match. Yet it was a strong match. APA was indeed the inspiration. Big shout out to Kas and Jack. We all worked closely to create this promo and we've been going back and forth building a story I think ppl will like. They are great guys to work with. As for the promo itself lots of fun. I liked it and I'm enjoying experimenting with my writing style to shape a intriguing character. The attack was fun to write. I feel it added some intrigue, that was overall stole by a certain Rookie. More on him later but storyline wise we have some much content and options to run with that eve we don't know the full outcome of this. Maybe it is the monster. I was not kind.... I like Matt and Strider. The looks are great. The move sets are solid. I loved the match. It was to the point and that is how a match in the mid card should be. KKK. I've said my bit, now that it's out there I'd like to congratulate on creating such an uproar, that what was intended and it succeeded, great! Jimmy, Jimmy, Jimmy. You stole the show. Welcome to Turmoil. With content like this continue to wear those eyesores because I couldn't care less after that wonderful video. Round of applause. Your character will quickly find a home here. Aries, hahahahahahahahahahahahaa. Are you lovin' it? Are you having it your way? Jackson, mad love for you. Our bromance is unbreakable, until you snap......and don't listen to Sen. Your bald head and full beard is an inspiration to us balding men who can't grow facial hair! Tank, the look. Is 80 percent there. The face looks a bit generic (just me?) otherwise I like him. I don't particularly like the move set as you have a lot of high impact moves in there....the elbow drop sig really looks out of place. I see what your going for but I believe better moves could bring the entire thing together. B17 v Kass is tied 1 to 1. Dirty finish......this is almost as bad as when you hit me square in the nuts you cheater! But I loved the finish, really did.

Let me be the voice of reason here, Septic. Any time anywhere. Be prepared I'm gonna drag you through your name.

You better have some friends because Jackson has me.

It was definitely writing happy but that's a good thing for people learning more about characters. I definitely learned more about Jimmy and I like him more for it.

Lol....I think I know what you mean.

It was cool. Very cool....but did Ron just do what I think he did?

This explains a lot.

I like you.

My thoughts: I'm white so take my opinion as seen regarding the stable,I hate the name, I'm a progressive person and regardless of who is in the stable it is a name that would never be used in or on a respectable program. I believe in tolerance not obviously charged racial tension which is what this would create irl. Edgy would be a black stable claiming they are held down, over the line is tossing around KKK casually, as the KKK is responsible for horrible crimes in the past. Cobra is going to be lost in the shuffle without making a move. Change it up a bit. I agree about the crowd popping for Pugh. I don't think they actually would. If your a heel be a heel. If your a face make that clear, but I feel you come off as too much of a douche to be face, although I do like the character. I just want him to be more clear. I was disappointed with the monster and didn't like the mask. I had actually started to view him as an evil genius, not a generic heel monster. I want to buy a Drago shirt, can we make it happen? I like the dirty pin. But I'm just a rookie.

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You lead.

Some of the show felt convoluted. I'd post my review but it's nfl time.

Clearly turmoil is safer.

Hmmm.....The Game of Thrones has begun. ...

Am I making friends or enemies? Huh?

Am I winning you over?

They have been left off the card because you don't want us to use them or because you want us to explore possible avenues with them?

Jimmy Henry is a bit eh, the kilt with the blue knee pads an eye sore, wish he would have won his match but the alts should get victories here and there. Sid looks vicious, and I like the move set. Nice win, Carter. Loving the character, he creeps me out. C4 Sports Agency first signing B17....intriguing. Austin Lee, I didn't know what was happening but I liked the promo vid. I like how Jackson flips everyone off. I'm not a fan of Abbott's move set, especially the springboard stuff. Actually just take them out or tone down and everything would look better. The match had a lot of running around and they both look like brawlers.The look of Abbott is solid. Drago is just my favorite just because of his music. But damn I love the character I would buy his merchandise especially the "Draaaaaggggooooo" shirt. Kas as always looks good, I'm happy to see that his gimmick from last night (the man of 1001 ways to get in the ring) was left at home today. Ron is not a cult favorite. A cult would not even accept him. He is adrift in your determination to ignore that he needs a completely new direction. I was a fan briefly, but I gave up on him like wwe gave up on Scotty 2 Hotty after Too Cool broke up. Buy hm black trunks for gods sake. The match with Trance was the best match I've had online with anyone. It was a lot of fun, but I can agree it was too long. The flogsplash is not long for this world because everyone keeps freaking countering it.....or catching it. Still that ending was awesome. Trance and Crowe.....I've heard that speech before. Revenge of the Sith anyone? That promo was just gold, I loved it. ME was good fun. I like both characters. Our hero and Warrior was hampered due the known reasons, but it still managed a solid watch.

The match was long but it didn't feel quite that bad in game.

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A homeless Shakespeare?

Hello, do you speaka de inglish?

I too shall be in NY this summer....

I'd like to see your gimmick develop.