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Review Time!

 

Kale Lockhart vs Omerta

 

Kale Lockhart, not bad of a charachter, like the overall feel of the guy, lose the soccerball kicks though, they dont fit. I for one dig the Torture rack finish.

Omerta...unique look i guess. While looking at the match i just hope that Omerta is playing a charachter with an identity crisis, that he thinks he's a superheavyweight or something. Or that he's a substitute for whoever Kale was suppose to fight. Cause if not i quite frankly pretty much hate every move that got executed by Omerta and kinda hope i dont have to see him ever again. Choke toss, Choak slam...big boot Oklohoma slam's ...triangle chokes and bearhug...really? Even if its for a gimmick,it just looks plain awfull, the guy not being muscled or tall enough to do any of the moves

 

Brian Lee / Justin Green vs Mez Murdoch Omar Gibbs

 

Start with the 2 technical guys. I like Mez Murdochs moveset, his strike combo is fits very nicely. Nice spot where Bryan Lee escapes to the outside,taunts, Murdoch chases, Lee punches, gets blocked and eats a boot. This match is pretty damm long, i think i watched 15 min of the match and it was on half so skipped trough the rest.

 

Ace "The Jaw" Angel vs BEDLAM

 

Classical music intro,lack of theme for the guy or is that his intro ? Classical music for the match is a little meh though,feels like im falling asleep:p Pretty one sided match, Angel seemed to not be able to reverse much, match took probably longer then it should have. The nutgrab was a bit weird but heh,not judging their lol. Ok match.

 

Jay FX vs ???

Ha! That was nice,i marked for this.

 

Jookie Marley vs Dane Xavier

 

This was a good match. Nothing fancy happend, enjoyed watching Dane allot more now that he mixes stuff up and let's people get a breather once and a while, Dane dominated with style taunting and setup up his spots,nice.

D.Jack / Hazard vs Paul Pugh / Dorian Arnaud

 

D.Jack/Haz,the tagteam of ever changing attires,huah. Dig Hazards red outfit. Match starts out pretty even . Marked out for Hazard's reversal of Arnauds brainbuster into sig> finisher. Match was alright, gimmick and tag matches will always end akward so..not bother by it.

 

 

Aries vs Pato/Leon

 

There is no need to comment much for this match. Since it this match being a very story driven one. Till the story kicks in the match is good,Aries getting somoan'd like a ragdoll lol. And Pato's shins being kicked to shitz.

 

K.Dangelo vs Iceberg

 

This match was very lagy and ended with one finisher so not really fair to review or comment much on the matc.

 

Ill review the last few matches tommorow

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I thought Gibbs and Murdock could make a good tag team. Both playing the role of the stereotypical black man in America. One laid back, enjoys smoking, while the other is just plain angry. It's a great dynamic.

 

I don't know much about Greene or Lee other than Lee was a poor sum bitch, but they LOOK like a team. I will say this though...Greene kind of looks like Arnaud >_>

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Definitely worth the wait ! A mid week ppv! 10/10 !

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Omerta...unique look i guess. While looking at the match i just hope that Omerta is playing a charachter with an identity crisis, that he thinks he's a superheavyweight or something. Or that he's a substitute for whoever Kale was suppose to fight. Cause if not i quite frankly pretty much hate every move that got executed by Omerta and kinda hope i dont have to see him ever again. Choke toss, Choak slam...big boot Oklohoma slam's ...triangle chokes and bearhug...really? Even if its for a gimmick,it just looks plain awfull, the guy not being muscled or tall enough to do any of the moves

 

If I made him bigger would it work?

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I can't tell you who had match of the night . Every match was top notch. Four days and everyone got their match in. Pugh , Suda definitely had two of best rps . Really didn't see a bad one .

 

One I didn't like was ..... Nope loved it all !

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K.Dangelo : 1 TV champion 2x Hardcore Champion 1X North American Champion 2x Tag Team Champion, 1x Pride champion

Espado : 1x Light Heavy Champion

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Review of characters/feuds in chronological order.

 

Leonheart: You're only around to save yourself from having a last moment of me whooping your ass. Your role plays are boring and generic and seem half-assed at times. You are doing nothing now but riding Pato's coat tails and seem to have no real direction, rhyme, or reason. You submit an overabundance of content and sometimes you seem to do it in spite of me. I don't like you, and at the same time I don't hate you. I just don't give a fuck about Leon B. Heart IV. Die a painful and pathetic death in the ring.

 

Patolomai: You're fucking awesome, but Leon is holding you back. I think this time around, Aries might beat you and take the title back. But you're definitely a presence in the ring and I like everything about your character. I'd like to see more RPs from you though, because from what I remember about the Ambition days and after, you put out some amazing writing work. Keep it up Fato.

Mr. Reese: I like you as the GM, and as an on-screen character. I laugh every time you talk because you're speaking in jive, but I want to see what your character looks like so that I can put a face to the words. Greatest GM in some time.

Omerta: You're a scarey lookin dude that reminds me of Mordecai AKA Kevin Thorn from the old SmackDown days. I like your moveset but your guy needs to be bigger. Fix that and don't let anyone let RPs for you, and you'll do alright.

 

Kale Lockhart: I really like the creativity used in your debut. You came out to no music and made your debut seem impromptu, it was awesome that you had to wear some other rookie's attire. Nice win, continue doing what you're doing.

Bryan Lee: You know more about ghetto than Mez does. Compared to you, Mez is a high class nigga that sticks his pinky out when he has his tea and crumpets. If OJ Simpson were you, then there would be no doubt that Bryan Lee did it. If you were a flavor, you'd taste like chicken grease and cocoa butter. If you... alright enough of that.

 

Omar Gibbs: Probably the best rookie in OCW right now. I love your RPs, you know how to set up your environment and keep things not so monotonous. One thing we can both agree on, green is gold.

 

 

 

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Leonheart: You are doing nothing now but riding Pato's coat tails and seem to have no real direction, rhyme, or reason.

 

 

Maybe that is the direction that he wants to go in. Leon (In character) realizes that he may not be able to be in the lime light. Maybe he can't be the headliner that he once was or wants to be. So he has alinged himself with someone that, with his help, can get him what he wants and that's the OCW title.

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If I made him bigger would it work?

It depends what you try to portray really. Nothing wrong with how your caw looks but do you want to keep the look or the moves ? If your gimmick or thing is that you have un natural strenght, there are some power moves you can take, but there are limits. I mean a Bearhug and an Oklohoma slam are moves that require some muscle and strenght and weight lifting, where a Chokeslam or Choketoss can be sold more believable. But yeah like i said, nothing wrong with how your caw looks in general, its just the moves that dont fit. Making him bigger will look akward i think.

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