Riot 415

[A.C. Cobra]

Written wise this show has stepped it up. While admittedly not over bloated with RPS. The ones that we got to read where very well crafted. I love Monsters work but towards the end he went into Marvel Sub Villain Territory. But knowing that this was posted 2 weeks ago I know his next submissions will still be good albeit a lil toned down.

 

A minor note, with Sean's opener when he came in and tried to speak to be drowned out by the crowd I would have liked if he audibley told them to SHUT UP, suddenly. as opposed to a post action mention. It's the little things I guess.

 

I've come to notice if a show starts off strong it will hold my attention for the rest of the show if a show starts off with a horeshit opening rp I have to fight with myself to trudge on lil by little.

 

I would have liked if Cobretti had an RP. I know your gamer gimmick isn't winning anyone over but win or loss you should still do something. It's the little things. I mean Nathan has painted the numbers for you and kass, but you coulda grabbed the mic and dropped something not even a full RP while you where holding the chair, but like a threat etc, a little bit of a initiative goes a long way in the creative process.

 

Almost missed the champ's RP. But he had one simple and too the point. Take that as a lesson rooks, you don't need to be a mic wizard like Monsta and Carta, you can still convey your thoughts quickly, efficiency and push forward your angle.

 

I thought the Rain RP with me in it would cover for mr also. I faced Nathan the start of this season so didn't have much to say to his punk ass lol. I'm now obviously working towards a feud so hopefully people will enjoy my stuff more.

[B-17]

I thought the Rain RP with me in it would cover for mr also. I faced Nathan the start of this season so didn't have much to say to his punk ass lol. I'm now obviously working towards a feud so hopefully people will enjoy my stuff more.

 

I'd like to see your gimmick develop.

[Xander Rane]

I'd like to see your gimmick develop.

 

Don't worry, he's in good hands.

[Pugh]

Just so everybody is aware, this was my last riot as gm and I'll no longer be staff. I'd go into the details, but it's long and boring. The short of it is, my vision for ocw isn't the same as other members, so rather than keep fighting a losing battle, I'm cutting my losses and not wasting my time anymore.

 

I'd like to say ocw is in good hands now, but we'll see. Hopefully it keeps the same momentum, but again, who knows.

 

I look forward to kicking you all in the neck as the eternal world champion.

[Bloom]

Just so everybody is aware, this was my last riot as gm and I'll no longer be staff. I'd go into the details, but it's long and boring. The short of it is, my vision for ocw isn't the same as other members, so rather than keep fighting a losing battle, I'm cutting my losses and not wasting my time anymore.

 

I'd like to say ocw is in good hands now, but we'll see. Hopefully it keeps the same momentum, but again, who knows.

 

I look forward to kicking you all in the neck as the eternal world champion.

 

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[The Monster]

That Sean RP was a huge step up in his written game I think. Which is great, since you probably need that to be a M.E. player.

 

Nathan's first RP was probably my favorite RP of the night. As was mentioned earlier he had a number of one liners that were pretty great. I think my personal favorite was: " But you, Matsuda, I have had the biggest crush on you for quite sometime." He stated his intention to eventually challenge Matsuda but did it in one of the creepiest ways imaginable. Things that make you go Ick.

 

I was hoping Buddy was going to pull that comeback off on Jook, he pretty much did I guess since Jook was out for like a 10 count. It was a pretty fun match to watch.

 

Oh, I did think Nathan probably had RP of the night, but that hipster segment with Buddy Burns was fantastic. "Buddy: What about you....do you have a walkman? Boombox, something to play this damn thing." I can't tell you the last time I saw a boombox. I think I had one when I was like 6.

 

The Rane/Hayes match was pretty good, but Rane got super aggressive. I know we have that pin on other moves post-finisher rule so that matches don't drag, but that doesn't mean pin after every move. A few pins attempts makes a match look good/distinguishes your power moves, but that many pins makes you look a little try-hard I think.

 

So, uh, what's up with this line? "Trance: Jumping through hoops... Nay, not for the God King, all true immortals are tested..." So are you not a true immortal or are you going to jump through hoops? Cause it read contradictory to me.

 

Good to see a feud brewing between Ragnarok and Hayes/Cobra. It's also good to see a face get some backup once in a while. When a heel gets jumped he always has backup standing by somewhere. But when a face gets jumped in WWE it's like all of his friends aren't right backstage watching it happen 75% of the time.

 

Pugh's probably taking on a challenge he doesn't have to since Sean's FI has been tampered with. Fighting champion, that's an admirable trait. Hope it doesn't come back to bite you......

 

I saw Tre talking in the shout box about not really loving being a face, but I'd suggest you stick with it. I think there's more room for faces on the roster currently. That and to change so quickly after debuting would be odd I think.

 

Cross Bones looked like he was ready to win that match, but the wakeup taunt kind of goofed up on him. So he goofed up on it in return, fair play. But uh, you really had to milk a cat?!

 

Mugen successfully defends his title by count out. K.D.'s gotta play that one smarter and get into the ring and reset the count to avoid putting himself in that situation. I can't imagine this one's over permanently. But maybe it's being pushed for now to make room for this Drago-Mugen challenge that seems to be brewing?

 

I thought this was one of our better Riots. The written content was really good, which is awesome because the writing should carry the Riots and the wrestling the PPV's I think.

[Jacob Trance]

Trance is meant to be hypocritical and contradictory, it's part of being a little crazy

[The Monster]

Ok, I can live with that. Probably the best explanation you could have given for it.

[Mugen]

So, this is the gimmick that Smythe is going for now right?

 

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[Mr.Sensation]

So, this is the gimmick that Smythe is going for now right?

 

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Well there goes my dinner.