Smythe D. Wonder Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 I've said it 1000 times... Best year ever for OCW... Parker and Majin together is kinda scary!!! Also this is what a Main Event scene is supposed to look like... Awesome read and watch!!!! Good job all this week!!! 3 Signature 1 - The Alpha Heel Signature 2 - Spear 5 (F) - Stargazer Finisher 1 - Flapjack 2 (F) - The SDW Finisher 2 - Reality check (G) - Dawonderful Dream Finisher 3 (i'm cool enoigh to claim 3 moves) - The Darkside - THe Million Dollar Dream
Anthony Baker Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 the large Edwin (cuz riot guys don't review) review: Baker and Carter. I thought this was a no brainer. But holy shit man. Big win for baker. Don't get me wrong, was less excited that match ended on a non finisher or sig. But it is what it is. Baker is on the come up and may have something to say about Carter being the future of OCW. Him and his cupcakes! Cide has me amped. Baker stole the show for me with the unexpected as fuck win. The move I wanted to pin him off if he reversed the pin and I was so confused. And with the reversal he started kicking my ass and I wasn't tryna lose after only one finisher when I already hit two. Yeah. It was a bad ending. But in my op I took it as Baker mocking Matt Sheldon because it's Sheldon's sig.
Bloom Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 So Majin wrote all of this with hep C? Does that mean we all have it afte readin?No disrespect but Why uou losing motivation! Majin is IRL super duper sick. I thought he got better but he hasn't. Long story short he shouldn't have submitted an RP let alone all that he did collaboration wise. Testament to the Old Country Way, like when Versus got hit by a fucking car his GF at the time sent me a message he was at the hospital but would be back in time to "handle his obligation", or when Parker was literally murdering people with a claw hand as both the tendons in his elbows where destroyed "requiring major surgery" to the point where parker could murder for 15 minutes then not able to pick up a controller for a week plus. Or when I slashed my heel and bled out like a stuck pig but I was working on a PPV so I made sure it was done before going to hospital. Actually...in retrospeck non of this is to be commended, we are all psychopaths!!! 7 Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Bloom Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 My promo made it on!! This is badass i love it If you submit content for a show as long as its before the deadline it will be used. Also to note I sort of downplayed the spookyness of promo. Theres no Witches, Warlocks, Spooks and Holy Ghosts, MZA restarted the host! So just keep that in mind, you went META Taker I took it Dungeon of doom. Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Bloom Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 (edited) The move I wanted to pin him off if he reversed the pin and I was so confused. And with the reversal he started kicking my ass and I wasn't tryna lose after only one finisher when I already hit two. Yeah. It was a bad ending. But in my op I took it as Baker mocking Matt Sheldon because it's Sheldon's sig. It looked brutal as fuck its fine. And also a fuck you to sheldon. Gigantic Enrique: The HC gets defended pretty much weekly. Despite Smythe being a dolt, he did win. I mean he won in Mehtacular fashion, but its the HC Belt. And he also provided video proof and backstory!!!!. If Smythe can hold unto the HC I Can see it becoming interesting I mean Bones was interesting as hell, but a Championship Smythe is sort of dangerous. Also Smythe you lost the bet I will expect that donation by Sunday. And don't even think of trying to turn HC into Legends....championship. As for Drago I won't repeat what I said "I think tobin actually said it" on the whole double champ thing. In fact going into 17 I am going to go back to the old way whenever possible, it's easier that way. If Drago takes back to back loses it won't effect him in the slightest. he is still only whatever and 1 in singles competition. And who doesn't love an underdog on the come up! All in all this Riot was superb top to bottom, even the skull kids. Didn't know Tre knew how to write. The story is convoluted as all hell but I'm sure both will put on a good fight. And as for KD the reason he doesn't get booked to PPV's he doesn't fued! at this point I can just throw KD at people, but with 14 matches I don't need to. KD knows this and in essence he is still on the show! Edited August 24, 2016 by Bloom Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Cerberus Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 If you submit content for a show as long as its before the deadline it will be used. Also to note I sort of downplayed the spookyness of promo. Theres no Witches, Warlocks, Spooks and Holy Ghosts, MZA restarted the host! So just keep that in mind, you went META Taker I took it Dungeon of doom. i gotcha i gotcha, im not really gonna go for a taker like character or supernatural person, i just thought it was creative and related to his name, his real gimmick will progress with more promos and what not 1
Versus Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 Parker, I don't know about you, but I don't let my best friend hold my dick. Not even if I'm gonna take it off to do something dangerous. "Here man, hold my dick, Ima hop this moving car." Oh shit, "here man, hold my dick, Ima go get me an NA title"...wait a minute, everyones dick is getting held for the NA title match. If Leon's up in it, then who's gonna hold all the dicks? CARTER!! Lots of guessing going on in the end of this RP. Fantastic job though, way to build a match. With that being said, there is a strange difficulty, sometimes, to build a multi man match, and get the reader/watcher involved, or get behind a character. This RP shows that you can take heat from two main people in the match, and spread the heat evenly, and get everyone involved. Really well done. _____________________ Summercide poster, Sophia's Revolutionary C-Cups out n about. _____________________ I like the idea of Kat's entrance, and her look, but the music just doesn't fit. Willow & Sophia reppin Rev Inc to the fullest. Gotta love it. I know I do! If I've learned anything in the past few months, it's never roll out of the ring early in the match, unless you're an olympic sprinter and the the F outta dodge quick. Otherwise you're catching a diving something in the face or ankle. This is a hell of a match honestly. Curious about the editing at the end, I'm sure it was legit reasons, absolutely not questioning it, just curious how the servers or twitch screwed someone else this time. haha _____________________ The Cerberus RP, I'm not gonna lie I liked it. I also thought, halfway through that Zuul the Gatekeeper was gonna be on the other side of the gate, then the camera would pan back and it would be Dana Barrett's fridge. I was wrong. _____________________ Welcome back to the Garden! Breakin time, sissies! _____________________ STEVE, ROSES AND BALLOONS MAKE PEOPLE FEEL BETTER! CHOCOLATE IS FOR CELEBRATIONS! You can't eat chocolate when you're hands are covered in salve, you just can't! Great RP, too bad it's all for not. _____________________ How do people still have videos of their matches from years ago? I don't even know where my match with Carter went, and that was like 2 weeks ago. Either way, a solid RP build up to Reed/SDW. _____________________ There are very few people who, when I see that they've writtin an RP, that I actually look know I can expect something good/great. Minio is that guy on Riot and Jack is that guy on Turmoil. Always, always, always deliver something good. The subtlety of the "Plurals" line, absolute gold. _____________________ 2nd time I've read this RP by Troy. Glad he has something to say, hopefully he can back it up and not piss too many people off. Also, his gamertag is familiar, I'm pretty sure I wrestled this guy back in the day. ____________________ What's a 'stank' look? Is that like being around Bill Ding after a bean burrito buffet? I like the '1,2,3 eyes on me' line better than the Miz's line to get the crowds attention. Annnnnnd the crowd wins, they always do. Lacy is so artic...artic..horrible with words, it's awesome. Dimsmore vs Trump, BOOK IT!! Lacy with the swift kick to the nuts...that's a finisher, no matter where you're at. Dupree's gonna collect that insurance money on that hair, for sure! On a side note, I didn't know that Vs default 01 was gonna be the hair style of the summer. Trend setter!!! _____________________ So many chains! When will we see Dawonder Unchained by Quentin Tarrentino? Can't wait til they fix the 'any cloth can penetrate metal' bug. SDW...the only man in OCW who can tie his shoes without bending down. Dafuq happened here? Ed Reed ded...he ded. http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d103/JDVS/Ed%20Reed%20Dead.jpg Congrats to the new champ, I'm interested to see where it goes from here! _____________________ Friggin Gary...pshhhht, always Gary. _____________________ More glorious Minio. Gotta love it. _____________________ Skull kids, better as toilet paper. _____________________ Minio made it! Through the trials and tribulations of Ubers and OCW failures...he made it. Phew! Kinda watching this match, kinda working, but it seemed really balanced and if it wasn't for that finisher reversal, I think Cereal woulda had it. _____________________ When Scallywag is used in an RP that's not Crossbones', I get confused and excited, and Drago talking to a cardboard cutout of Pugh, is gold every time. Excited to see this match at SC. _____________________ Why would your boots sparkle Kass? Is that a Twilight reference that I don't get? I like the personal slave clause of this match...that's how you garner interest, and that would make for some awesome RP's. I'm interested for sure. _____________________ Wow, what a CLOSE ending in that NA title match. Well done guys, Leon, congrats brutha. _____________________ SDW repping, SDW. How it is man, how it is. _____________________ ToP, I told you asses that I made calls. Told you. Welcome to the Revolution my man! _____________________ 8 http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d103/JDVS/footprints_1.jpg
Bloom Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 Parker, I don't know about you, but I don't let my best friend hold my dick. Not even if I'm gonna take it off to do something dangerous. "Here man, hold my dick, Ima hop this moving car." Oh shit, "here man, hold my dick, Ima go get me an NA title"...wait a minute, everyones dick is getting held for the NA title match. If Leon's up in it, then who's gonna hold all the dicks? CARTER!! Lots of guessing going on in the end of this RP. Fantastic job though, way to build a match. With that being said, there is a strange difficulty, sometimes, to build a multi man match, and get the reader/watcher involved, or get behind a character. This RP shows that you can take heat from two main people in the match, and spread the heat evenly, and get everyone involved. Really well done. _____________________ Summercide poster, Sophia's Revolutionary C-Cups out n about. _____________________ I like the idea of Kat's entrance, and her look, but the music just doesn't fit. Willow & Sophia reppin Rev Inc to the fullest. Gotta love it. I know I do! If I've learned anything in the past few months, it's never roll out of the ring early in the match, unless you're an olympic sprinter and the the F outta dodge quick. Otherwise you're catching a diving something in the face or ankle. This is a hell of a match honestly. Curious about the editing at the end, I'm sure it was legit reasons, absolutely not questioning it, just curious how the servers or twitch screwed someone else this time. haha _____________________ The Cerberus RP, I'm not gonna lie I liked it. I also thought, halfway through that Zuul the Gatekeeper was gonna be on the other side of the gate, then the camera would pan back and it would be Dana Barrett's fridge. I was wrong. _____________________ Welcome back to the Garden! Breakin time, sissies! _____________________ STEVE, ROSES AND BALLOONS MAKE PEOPLE FEEL BETTER! CHOCOLATE IS FOR CELEBRATIONS! You can't eat chocolate when you're hands are covered in salve, you just can't! Great RP, too bad it's all for not. _____________________ How do people still have videos of their matches from years ago? I don't even know where my match with Carter went, and that was like 2 weeks ago. Either way, a solid RP build up to Reed/SDW. _____________________ There are very few people who, when I see that they've writtin an RP, that I actually look know I can expect something good/great. Minio is that guy on Riot and Jack is that guy on Turmoil. Always, always, always deliver something good. The subtlety of the "Plurals" line, absolute gold. _____________________ 2nd time I've read this RP by Troy. Glad he has something to say, hopefully he can back it up and not piss too many people off. Also, his gamertag is familiar, I'm pretty sure I wrestled this guy back in the day. ____________________ What's a 'stank' look? Is that like being around Bill Ding after a bean burrito buffet? I like the '1,2,3 eyes on me' line better than the Miz's line to get the crowds attention. Annnnnnd the crowd wins, they always do. Lacy is so artic...artic..horrible with words, it's awesome. Dimsmore vs Trump, BOOK IT!! Lacy with the swift kick to the nuts...that's a finisher, no matter where you're at. Dupree's gonna collect that insurance money on that hair, for sure! On a side note, I didn't know that Vs default 01 was gonna be the hair style of the summer. Trend setter!!! _____________________ So many chains! When will we see Dawonder Unchained by Quentin Tarrentino? Can't wait til they fix the 'any cloth can penetrate metal' bug. SDW...the only man in OCW who can tie his shoes without bending down. Dafuq happened here? Ed Reed ded...he ded. http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d103/JDVS/Ed%20Reed%20Dead.jpg Congrats to the new champ, I'm interested to see where it goes from here! _____________________ Friggin Gary...pshhhht, always Gary. _____________________ More glorious Minio. Gotta love it. _____________________ Skull kids, better as toilet paper. _____________________ Minio made it! Through the trials and tribulations of Ubers and OCW failures...he made it. Phew! Kinda watching this match, kinda working, but it seemed really balanced and if it wasn't for that finisher reversal, I think Cereal woulda had it. _____________________ When Scallywag is used in an RP that's not Crossbones', I get confused and excited, and Drago talking to a cardboard cutout of Pugh, is gold every time. Excited to see this match at SC. _____________________ Why would your boots sparkle Kass? Is that a Twilight reference that I don't get? I like the personal slave clause of this match...that's how you garner interest, and that would make for some awesome RP's. I'm interested for sure. _____________________ Wow, what a CLOSE ending in that NA title match. Well done guys, Leon, congrats brutha. _____________________ SDW repping, SDW. How it is man, how it is. _____________________ ToP, I told you asses that I made calls. Told you. Welcome to the Revolution my man! _____________________ So Like The Better Than G.O.A.T The Icon 2nd Generation Star The #1 Women in Turmoil and Champion and The Current TV and quite possible Turmoil Champion. Rev Inc is kind of cheating................. Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
Nate Ortiz Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 So Like The Better Than G.O.A.T The Icon 2nd Generation Star The #1 Women in Turmoil and Champion and The Current TV and quite possible Turmoil Champion. Rev Inc is kind of cheating................. They had numbers so we get numbers. 10 years ago me and V could do it ourselves. As the two longest tenured here we are way to old for this shit. 5 May 29 2005 - Present Took Dupree's Summer
Bloom Posted August 24, 2016 Posted August 24, 2016 They had numbers so we get numbers. 10 years ago me and V could do it ourselves. As the two longest tenured here we are way to old for this shit. This is some Star Trek GENERATIONS SHIT!!!!! I dig it! Actually holy shit, the possible matches...... Welcome to OCW, keep tough skin, speak your mind, and most of all have fun.-Betterness "I'm going to be brutally honest here guys... all we really need for a good Riot is a few RP's from Our Hero himself... he's an awesome writer!!!" - Smythe CCWJustinTime: just funny how the shit i do goes un appreciative [10-01, 00:19] Jookie Marley: fuck u nigga [09-01, 23:50] Mr.Bentley: uploadafraud.com [09-01, 23:45] Jookie Marley: what website do we use 2 upload now? "Summercide was 2 white girls away from being a cook out" - Cyberbully 2099 " makes me laugh how its gone from all ambition era holding the titles, to 3 guys from 07 holding the main titles..haha welcome to the 'Pensioner Era' - Parker "This is all part of my plan to equalize the playing field until we have a roster of people I can actually BEAT" - Bobby Digital
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