Turmoil 144

[Madison Cox]

I'm kinda already facepalming under the assumption this ba ba black sheep thing will result in the over used pulsating red lights or someone else using the kindred (Wyatt) lantern entrance.

[Kassidy Hayes]

we have some hot bombshells.

 

according to pugh, Madison ain't one of them. don't listen Dennis

 

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[Dennis Black]

according to pugh, Madison ain't one of them. don't listen Dennis

 

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I can't hear!

[Madison Cox]

"Hey you, you no come here! Jack say, nobody to come near this car, is Queen Madison's and you too urban."

 

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The Queen is pleased.

[Madison Cox]

god, why do i LOVE influence now? I haaaaated you last season. Wanted you to jump off a bridge. lol its the entrance. Great RP

[Dennis Black]

Jack: So I guess this means I'm not invited to Kwanzaa?

 

I don't know who provided the most hilarity.

[Dennis Black]

Just finished. Will review tomorrow. Good audible on the main event. Big thanks to Kass and Leon for stepping in.

[El Parca]

Well I'll be damned that part with Dennis wow.. Went from 0-100 back to 0 to 3000 good work on that part. Also why can't I be invited to these card games? The whole segment was amazing that was such an awesome way to kick off the show. Definitely got a kick out of that excellent work to everybody who put work into that.

 

Wrex v Vincent Winters, very nice opening match. Really cool to see how it played out with all the fighting outside of the ring, and using their heel play styles by taking out the ref and doing what needed to be done to win the match overall very nice match. Vincent Winters also reminds me of a more sadistic brood/wyatt cult leader so his character alone makes me kind of uneasy on how he can unfold in upcoming weeks especially with that big brute behind him. Wrex definitely nice seeing a fellow rookie take on a not so easy opponent give the man credit he definitely held his own in that match and can't wait to see his growth over this coming season as well.

 

The Loki and segment now that is a very nice segment. Going from comedic- to serious- to parent like when Trance sits down just sighing at Loki- to holy sh*t when Trance gets jumped is wow. I really liked how everything played out it went very smoothly and flowed with each other. Definitely good work to all parties who contributed to that and also Loki, pay attention to Trance once in awhile damn it your cotton candy can wait! Or at least turn the music down!

 

Mr. Regan.. SOMEONE GET THIS MAN TO REHAB. But the conversation between him and Mr. Takahari was very funny I loved how Regan just kept back going to the ratings and how they we're beating Riot; while Takahari also wanted him to show professionalism and decency. Oh and that Monday Night Football line? Was the best part of the whole thing.

 

Seb & Barry segment.. Didn't really understand it at all. If someone wants to perhaps fill me in that would be lovely or maybe I am just dumb and missed something ever so clear. But Seb man.. Went from organizing a bottle of whiskey to a car getting vandalized damn. Plus the extra touch with the kids was kinda dark and creeped me out but I mean I suppose that is the point.. right?

 

Kass don't kick dogs man.. Just superkick them if anything. Get out of the boat already.. It is just like five feet deep I think you will be fine I promise. Also #StopAnimalCrueltyOnTurmoil

 

Those fishermen really didn't stand a chance did they? I mean props to the chubby one for at least attempting something to try and stop Joe but yea no it wasn't happening.. Also I feel bad for whoever has to pay for the insurance deductible to repair Madison's limo you can already tell she is not going to be a happy camper when someone tells her that her precious limo is ruined.

 

I called it didn't I? Definitely wasn't happy about the whole limo thing. And did anyone notice how she was barely clothed and this fishermen just ran in like wouldn't she be kinda freaked out? Anyways.. hopefully Jack can make amends and find out the culprit who did such a crime.. Maybe he will be the one who pays the insurance deductible?

 

Jesus man. To think Wrex put on a great showing against Vincent Winters and just after the match gets absolutely dominated for no reason, someone needs to put a stop to Vincent and his folktale posse before they seriously hurt somebody. Someone send a card to Wrex for me when he's in the hospital and make sure the Prince of Wrestling commends him for his valiant efforts.

 

The Hattons section was also another segment I would appreciate being more filled in on. Or if I clearly just missed something in the obvious just tell me and I'll go reread it in past weeks Turmoil but they do seem a tad concerned and maybe they should be?

 

Jack E Quinn v Dustin White was a very sound match. Overall really good I enjoyed the hell out of it. I did notice one thing on how one second Jack couldn't reverse but then he taunted and it was gone. Is that a glitch or is that a legit thing to make it go away? But very technically sound as well, loved the constant arm and leg moves, the chain wrestling and the spots they had were also damn good as well. Excellent match guys keep up the great work.

 

Wow! The tension between Regan, Kass, and Leon is crazy! Very well put segment, loved how Kass just got out of a very bad predicament and also loved how Regan stepped up against Leon especially with Big Ed right there in the room with him. Was really impressed with the back and forth all parties did and can't wait to see how the main event plays out. Excellent job fellas.

 

Jeez, the promo cut by #Austin was very good. The deep insults to the crowd and just remarking about every stable and how each shirt had a different resemblance to the the crowd really was a harsh bullet to bite for the fans in attendance. Definitely would like to see how #Influence plays out and differs between the other groups in OCW.

 

Malu v Loki wow what a match! Really loved the completely different personas going on here. You have a tank and beast Malu going up against a more funny comedic looking Loki. Mind you they both held their own in this match and their looks don't undercredit their wrestling skills at all that was a high point that I laughed at during the duration of this match. I enjoyed the high flying moves from Loki and how Malu performed more brutish let me slam you all over the place moves. That damn ref getting in the way again! Very good match in my opinion there was a little bit of everything except some tables being smashed we need more tables being smashed people!!!! But nonetheless amazing match boys!

 

SHAM! Oh my god how wonderful was that. The Diamond interview was gold lol. I completely enjoyed it and now I cannot stop saying SHAM! God damn it Diamond but good work either way very much enjoyed it.

 

Jack you sarcastic bastard haha. That confrontation with the 5% Nation was very hmm how would I put it? Hilariously bold, Jack just not giving a shit and still trying to pull off a one liner as these two guys just want to break him is what really sold this confrontation. Hopefully the Gentlemen himself didn't get mucked up too much and can continue to party.

 

WOW! That attack backstage was brutal! MY god I wonder if Sophia is gonna be okay after that. Jeez taking a television to the back definitely isn't something the Prince of Wrestling would want to take (had to do it again oops) my goodness my wishes on a speedy recovery for her though.

 

B-17 I think you should retire trying to be a hero. It doesn't look to be doing good and we don't have bail money man.

 

Kass v Leon.. What a main event man god damn! That ending was absolutely crazy! Excellent match guys I can't even express how enjoyable of a match that was. 5/5 stars match of the night easily. Really can't wait now to tune into Turmoil and see how this will play out excellent Turmoil.

 

Great matches, great roleplays, overall excellent performance everybody great job! :)

[Big Ed]

Hated watching Loki beat malu. Schedules happen

[Jacob Trance]

*Takes a breath.*

 

Here we go then...

 

New intro coming over the seasonal break, so we don't need to touch on that.

 

So much swearing throughout the show, it's meant to be censored guys, please keep that in mind. Bleep your own shit so the GM doesn't have to, in instances were the server decides it's not going to play ball it's stressful enough without having to do that as well.

 

 

Drunken Dennis has to be one of my favourite things on the shows, along with the blatant racial profiling of those poor Vietnamese fishermen. Jesus, slavery on Turmoil, the 5% Nation will not be pleased.

 

 

I'll echo Madison's sentiment about another Wyatt Family entrance, though for some reason I severely doubt it's going to go that way, whoever's messing about seems to be good with video editing. If it turns out to be Mayhem I'm retiring.

 

Wrex vs. Vincent Winters

 

BLIND BOYS DON'T LIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I could see Wrex being in the Orphanage, quite liked his mask but I'm not a fan of the entrance music. I miss Lucas Crowe, get well soon Park. Fucking Bubba Mitchell's hair cracks me up. Two quickly burnt major reversals leaves Wrex kinda open to being smashed but he's still in the lead. Winters having the Autopsy scars is pretty wicked. Winters trying to back pedal to escape those fists of fury only to get dumped over the top rope was nice. Pretty even, but you could see times were Winters was just doing a random stomp to blow a Wrex reversal, and he kept falling for it. Literally a rookie mistake. Malu run in? Nope. That brainbuster outside was brutal. Wrex mauls the referee and it results in him eating a chair, hah. Impatiently waiting on a finisher attempt now. Solid match, feel like maybe the running finisher was a little close up, but it still falls on Wrex to reverse.

 

*****

 

Fuck. You. Loki.

 

 

I don't understand the Japanese businessman showing up, maybe he's an investor or something, but slavery = ratings.

 

 

It's not Turmoil if there's not a vehicle being vandalised, or previous vandalisation being discussed in some shape or form. Ling Ling... Ping... Sweet Jesus. It's nice to see something happening in the show between more than the usual suspects. Seb vs Joe could be an interesting feud, especially with them having came in around the same time, barring Joe's vacation.

 

Juice. Juice. Juice.

 

 

It's nice seeing Kass write stuff, he's not as bad at it as he seems to think. Poor fucking dog though. I was going to hope Kass fell overboard and drowned because of that, but commentary confirmed he made it to the arena.

 

 

More vehicular and Vietnamese destruction. Sweet Jesus guys.

 

Hello... Kitty...

 

It's Crowe! It's nice to see rookies getting stuck in and finding someone to work with.

 

 

Ugh, Axton Bravo mark 2 and the Baywatch guy... I'm curious to find out what astrology has to do with it though.

 

Jack Quinn vs. Dustin White

 

Quite like Jacks jacket, and the guyliner is different, not so sure on the tights, but if he likes it it's his thing to rock. I'm a big fan of Dustin this year so I'm looking forward to this match. Oh hey, it's my old theme... Am I coming out to kill Jack for taking my entrance? Probably not, I'm in hospital. WRESTLIIIIIIIIING! Ground move into a wake up into trying to hit a move is a no-no Jack. You've hit your move already, time for a reset. Bwahahaha, Dustin hits what used to be Smythe's finisher/sig, good on ya.

 

Jack if you miss a move and someone gets up, you are not allowed to grab them as they stand, that's still a hover. Cease and desist.

 

A strange amount of arm moves in that match, there's a pick up move into another wake up taunt into a move attempt. Losing snowflakes here. Match is crying out for a finisher. You've hit him with a ground move, a pin, and now you're picking him up and trying to beat him up Jack, Jesus man. You've been here long enough to know that doesn't fly, and been here long enough to not see anyone else doing it in matches.

 

Nice to see my son trying to hit the fivestar though. Next time kid! Ugh. Jack. You can't continue to be booked when you're hitting ground moves/pickups/dives/springboards then proceeding to continue attacking, I'm sorry. Props to the winner, but the FPR breaks ruined it for me which is a shame because I really like both guys.

 

Jack, please contact myself or Dennis Black if you require assistance understanding the rules.

 

*1/2****

 

It's nice to have a GM that's not "YES BAD GUYS HAVE THIS" for a change, and that main event becomes huge now. Only thing that keeps triggering my OCD is that is the book of the dead not the Necronomicon and not the Necromicon? Unless Leon's calling it that on purpose because 1) It's a Leonism or 2) That's what he's decided to call it, then I'm placated.

 

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I'll get to the last two (three) pages later on tonight once I'm done with my works Christmas night out. Very, very strong show writing wise so far though.

 

Hail Satan. Fuck Loki,

 

Jacob Trance.