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[EMP]

Empress getting a 2nd shot at the face of the company. Big match for Empress and a loss could mean a fall down the card if she can't be competitive. Empress was better in this RP than usual Emp RPs, I like the improvement. Empress also doesn't look like a desperate fool as she gets the jump, beating the dogshit out of Valk (where's Ashley to cash in! Bad timing on the face turn LOL)

 

First I would like to say thank you for the Review Yake.

 

Second I'm rather confused by some of this comment.

 

I get the going down the card thing if I lose can't be the only one fighting Valk for the title understandable. But, I don't understand the being competitive comment. Am I not being competitve? what should I be doing differently?

 

And thank you for the compliment on my rping being better? I haven't changed how I have been doing anything since I started that I'm aware? I did notice a few lines were edited by bossman but, I'm not complaining if he thinks it needed tweaking who am I to bitch.

 

I don't know just looking for some clearing up or something to help me improve if I'm missing something.

[Valkyrie]

Empress getting a 2nd shot at the face of the company. Big match for Empress and a loss could mean a fall down the card if she can't be competitive.

 

You are the booker so you know better than me but I don't completely agree with this comment, as I stated earlier on Discord. If a feud is good and the payoff match is entertaining then both should benefit from it. Empress in particular has proven to be the best heel in women's division and all around a very entertaining character (and most of all a chill person to work with), and this, in my super humble opinion, should matter more than nailing the kick out mini game at Summercide.

 

FYI the match hasn't been recorded yet

[Jacob Trance]

You are the booker so you know better than me but I don't completely agree with this comment, as I stated earlier on Discord. If a feud is good and the payoff match is entertaining then both should benefit from it. Empress in particular has proven to be the best heel in women's division and all around a very entertaining character (and most of all a chill person to work with), and this, in my super humble opinion, should matter more than nailing the kick out mini game at Summercide.

 

FYI the match hasn't been recorded yet

 

Your character work gets you 90% of your opportunities, but 100% of your game skill is how you take them.

[Valkyrie]

Your character work gets you 90% of your opportunities, but 100% of your game skill is how you take them.

 

I think we are all aware of this, but it's unrelated to the point I was making.

[Kassidy Hayes]

I think we are all aware of this, but it's unrelated to the point I was making.

 

 

its jamie

[Bloom]

Before I forget,

 

SALAMI don't wear fugging BLATENT WWE merch. That SCSA shirt pissed me off to no end. At least make or have someone make you some simple merch. Whats next a music change?

[Quartz]

First I would like to say thank you for the Review Yake.

 

Second I'm rather confused by some of this comment.

 

I get the going down the card thing if I lose can't be the only one fighting Valk for the title understandable. But, I don't understand the being competitive comment. Am I not being competitve? what should I be doing differently?

 

And thank you for the compliment on my rping being better? I haven't changed how I have been doing anything since I started that I'm aware? I did notice a few lines were edited by bossman but, I'm not complaining if he thinks it needed tweaking who am I to bitch.

 

I don't know just looking for some clearing up or something to help me improve if I'm missing something.

 

I never said you weren't being competitive. I never said you were doing anything wrong. I was literally just shooting from the hip, typing as I was reading/watching. Logically, the match at CQ was awesome and fits to the build as you've gotten more and more competitive as time has gone on.

 

I just meant, from a wrestling standpoint, to build to this point, if Empress were to get a mudhole stomped in her, it would be a bad look. I am not predicting that. I am not saying there's any reason it would happen. I am not saying I hope it happens. It was just a thought I had and I was typing as I was reading. I try to watch the shows as a wrestling fan and unless some FPR or weird shit takes me out of it, that's how I view them. Obviously there is no situation in kayfabe here where Empress suffers backstage. That is not what I meant. If she puts on a hell of a match and Valk still scrapes by like at CQ, then it would be great for both parties and would accomplish what Valk is saying.

 

As for the RP, there have been some of your RPs that have been over the top to the point where it's been cartoonish. That's not to say anything is objectively bad with them, P3 is cartoonish and I love them every week.

 

Whether you mean to or not, I personally think the writing has improved and I just noticed here that I was reading Empress as a more serious character, a more serious threat than the erratic, silly, foul mouthed version I saw earlier. I dunno. Maybe it's just been time and a separation from Ashley or something unconscious that I cannot articulate. Maybe it's just the position on the card going up against the face of the company. I don't know, that's just how I have seen it. If you think I don't know what I'm talking about, that's fine, I probably don't.

 

@ Valk - You two have not done things the wrong way. I was again, just watching the show and spouting off unfiltered thoughts. I am not implying anything has been done incorrectly. There have been times where I've not been in-love with the story, but that's some idiots opinion (and for the record, it has improved since the point where I thought that).

 

Obviously Empress has been the leading example of how to do OCW when you're new, which is why she's in this position in the first place. Everyone should take notes on how you've skyrocketed in such a short time.

[EMP]

I appreciate you explaining that. I hope I didn’t come off as pissy or anything. I wasn’t trying to. Just was looking to get a more clear understanding of what your were referring to. Sorry if my thoughts and concerns didn’t translate well into text.

[Quartz]

I appreciate you explaining that. I hope I didn’t come off as pissy or anything. I wasn’t trying to. Just was looking to get a more clear understanding of what your were referring to. Sorry if my thoughts and concerns didn’t translate well into text.

 

I can't help but laugh at your avatar as I read this message.

 

but no you're good, I said something, you responded, I clarified. Nothing controversial lol

[Tre Golden]

I appreciate you explaining that. I hope I didn’t come off as pissy or anything. I wasn’t trying to. Just was looking to get a more clear understanding of what your were referring to. Sorry if my thoughts and concerns didn’t translate well into text.

 

Listen here, don’t get short with Quartz.