Michael Morrison Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Kang needs to go back to his old theme or throw in the Kings back intro part on the igen themeYou just can't help yourself, can you?
Trevor McManus Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Justin starts page 2 off with an RP. This hit me in different spots. He did something that Smythe also does and when Smythe does it I don't really like it but here I hated it. When they used the yellow text to tell us something. When Smythe does it he doesn't SAY it himself which makes it work more. But Justin saying "I thought rock stars...." not cool. If he said "Rock stars are supposed to get cheap pop not Justin Rox...." then it would have been better but the way he did it was too personal for yellow text which IMO should only be used for actions. HOWEVER when he said about people saying he went too far putting Flem through a ladder I fucking marked. I dunno if it was deliberate or not but it fucking worked. He used the negative feedback about his ladder move on Flem and turned it in his favour, fucking loved it man. GET RID OF ALTER BRIDGE! IT DOES NOT WORK AS AN ENTRANCE THEME! And as for YOU, you're name is KANG it's an A not an I fix it! KAng starts this one out with a big flurry and I get the feeling he doesn't plan on sticking around for long here. Trance gets right back into his face though, he aint gonna lay down. One other comment I will make on this is that when Trance used his springboard attack to counter Kang's whip he followed up with a ground move. I didn't really like this especially since Kang wasn't the one that executed the whip he only did it because he reversed Trance's whip attempt. Another thing I noticed slightly after this. Kang hit Trance twice and Trance counters Kang's long grapple with a quick grapple, this is what Nate was talking about in the other thread, thisisn't cool use your triggers. Decent match but the weight different took is toll I think. I worry about Trance's chances of beating the winner of Wesley vs Aries. Next we have Nate and Deano and more typos. Nate: Last week I did something I didn't want to do. But I was pushed into a corner, and when pushed into. But I'd like Deano to give me the chance to explain myself so come on out. Say what nate? When pushed into...? Wow Deano you're looking mighty queer tonight. Liked the RP though. Deano is in the early stages of becoming Nate IMO or at least what Nate used to be. Looking at Nate and Deano interact is like watching the new and old. http://positivesharing.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/08/complaining.jpg [23:39] locoNY911: You get solace in the fact you arent a fuck up. 2k9's better than 2k8. Like being shot in the knee is better than being shot in the head. - Guy Fausto [18:40] locoNY911: I mostly aggree with your statements
Wesley Adams Poe Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 argh, still watching the show and stuff...but i see alot of gramatical mistakes in my rp...sorry folks hope you can muscle through and get the point of things. http://www.threadbombing.com/data/media/2/Hooray2.gif 2009 Season: Singles Record:3/2/0 Tag (Including Handicaps):0/0/0 Gimmick Matches:Trip.Threats:0/1/0 Championship Matches: Total:3/3/0 Career Achievements: Dual Champ. Best Feud Nomination in 2008
Michael Morrison Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 argh, still watching the show and stuff...but i see alot of gramatical mistakes in my rp...sorry folks hope you can muscle through and get the point of things.As long as it doesn't put anyone in brave danger, it should be alright.
Seth Irving Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 You just can't help yourself, can you? no not really, but in that case new MMM sucks
Trevor McManus Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Smythe interacting with Sasha is....interesting. They have a good sexual tension between them. Although it kinda weirds me out considering my dog's name is Sasha. DAMN that douchebag's entrance is markable. Kip busts a nut on Poe, I laughed just because it made me think of PEE STEE's rather entrertaining pre match picture. Kip's aeroplane spin>top rope move which knocked Poe out the ring was awesome liked that one. Liked Ryder taunting him after it and getting kicked. The flying closeline to Ryder was cool also even though I get the feeling he never meant it. Poe tylering Kip when Kip has a finisher was kinda bad although I'm sure he never meant it. Felt bad for Poe all the way through cause he was getting beaten up a bit despite not doing that good but I holy shitted at how close it was at the end. Cried a little when he got kissed. :( Seth is on fire with his recent promos so I feel I should appologise for this as I'm about to make him look like an ass. You're making fun of Mayhem saying "brave danger" yet you say "You're the reason responsible for this" it should have been either reason or responsible not both of them. And holy god how many times do I need to say this to people. "I COULDN'T care less" not "I COULD care less". The phrase implies that because you care so little it isn't possible to care less. I COULD care less means you care to a degree where it is possible for you to lose some of your caring. I COULDN'T care less means you do not give a flying fuck. English lesson over let me deal with his actual RP. I liked it. ------------------------------------------------------------- Leonheart: See Stacy thats how easy it is... One second and its all over and tonight that is how i will retain my pride title. Still think i am going to lose now? *Stacy is shuck up as she nods her head.* Leonheart: Good... ------------------------------------------------------------- Huh? If she nods her head she's saying yes. You mean she shook her head. Other than that Leon playing the heel works a heck of a lot more than I thought it would. The use of CAPS LOCKS works and he seems to be more deranged than calculated until he stops just before the kick which shows he's still got his head. Liked it. http://positivesharing.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/08/complaining.jpg [23:39] locoNY911: You get solace in the fact you arent a fuck up. 2k9's better than 2k8. Like being shot in the knee is better than being shot in the head. - Guy Fausto [18:40] locoNY911: I mostly aggree with your statements
Kip Conrad Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 Poes's girlfirend allowed him to get kissed by me. even if she didn't it was gonna happen anyway :) http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g289/jlethridge1/kiss.gif The NoHomo Club Members Justin Rox Smythe D. Wonder x2 (3rd times a charm) M.M.M Leonheart Deano Horse (Given and Taken) Poe
Administrators Mr.Sensation Posted February 5, 2009 Author Administrators Posted February 5, 2009 I thought brave danger was Seth pulling the classic Mayhem is a big dummy card. As we all know that mayhem and spelling mix about as well as Satan and Jesus at the local Religion mixer. 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix "Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got Our Hero: uploadafraud.com Jookie: fuck u boricua "I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh "I'm 5,9" - Ry "I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen
Trevor McManus Posted February 5, 2009 Posted February 5, 2009 VFM starts off page 4 for us and good god he's still funny as hell. He's about as funny as Ronald Reagan...well not quite. VFM: Yeah, it's VFM....can we get some cleaners up here, this place is a sty....5 minutes my ass, they better be here by the time I hang up. Classic line. I marked. Smythe your music sounds like something you'd play to a guy before you gave him the "anal tap" rather than the "spinal tap". Deano's entrance on the other hand has the most energy in all of OCW. Diggin' Deano's attire also. Liked the spot when Smythe ran at Deano and got caught with a flying forearm. Seen a lot of toe kicks from both guys, if one of them got the strike reversing down I think it could have been quite one-sided but then again with guys like these they adapt. Nice win for the man who's been gaining the reputation of glorified jobber in my books recently and couldn't have kicked a better man to do it against. Poe's RP is very well written as usual. The way he plays Stacy for a fool with the number of questions thing is hallarious. And the little hint at the end about the officer forgetting to put cuffs on Poe is genius. http://positivesharing.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/08/complaining.jpg [23:39] locoNY911: You get solace in the fact you arent a fuck up. 2k9's better than 2k8. Like being shot in the knee is better than being shot in the head. - Guy Fausto [18:40] locoNY911: I mostly aggree with your statements
Administrators Mr.Sensation Posted February 5, 2009 Author Administrators Posted February 5, 2009 show done 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix "Booking Wrestling is the most thankless no-win position anyone could ever be in. When things go well it's the talent that makes it work. When they go badly, it's because the Booker doesn't know what he's doing." - Eric Bischoff Jookie: what website do we upload to againi for got Our Hero: uploadafraud.com Jookie: fuck u boricua "I'm like Smythe, except Good" - Matsuda OCW works best when it’s a melting pot of different ideas and opinions coming together to create some cool ass shit. It’s at its worst when people are only invested in their own/their pals’ content." - Paul Pugh "I'm 5,9" - Ry "I'm sorry if this sounds mean but OCW shouldn't be allowed to vote" - Jake Allen
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