Riot 8-20-2010

[Jookie Marley]

so far riot is on point..wha happen to xcal's rp? i think its in the wrong spot

[Useless Dane Xavier]

Dane Xavier presents: The Real Talk Review

 

Okay, so this is going to be a little half-assed, nothing like what I've done in the past but I'll save the massive wall of text for Summercide.

 

-PAGE 1-

 

KD and Jookie! Putting together a very entertaining RP. I'm glad you guys decided to take my advice and stretch it a bit. You guys are getting better and better every week, keep up the good work.

 

Okay, couple things. My Pick Your Poison match was supposed to be much different. I had an opponent set up at the beginning of August and he said he'd be there. Low and behold, I PM him this week, he's been on the boards, but he doesn't respond. I won't name names, but I ain't too happy with the lazy stoner.

 

Also, my RP that is on page 3 would make more sense if it had followed my match, so my segment is all fucked up. Oh well, so much for a "go-home" on this feud.

 

Justin Roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx! Off the drugs, back to his sanity, and back to doing what he does best. It brought back memories seeing him and Jim Black back together again.

 

-PAGE 2-

 

There's been a lot of returns lately, and Dylan Jones is the latest to do so. He's dressing like me and acting like me, I'm starting to think he's making fun of me! I might have to do something about that. In all seriousness, I like it. Excited to see what he brings to the table.

 

K.Dangelo vs. Justin Rockstar: Entertaining match, short too! Good!

 

This thing with Smythe is making me very curious. I can't wait for Summercide.

 

-PAGE 3-

 

Holy markout Batman! I didn't think I'd see Pee-Stee back in 2010! I noticed him on the boards more than usual and the thought had occured that maybe he'd come back but I laughed it off and forgot about it. But the roster is getting a little beefier lately. I hope the trend continues, and all the people that are returning plan on NOT FLAKING!

 

Hatachi vs. Jookie Marley: What else do you expect when it comes to EX action? PURE AWESOMENESS! Jookie did a lot better than I thought he would but he just couldn't pull it off. You're getting better rastaman, in the ring and in your RPs, just keep it up!

 

And yeah, my horribly timed RP. Sorry Bloom, I don't mean to bash you, don't hit me please!

 

-PAGE 4-

 

Vincent Valmont deliveres yet another looooooooooooooooong RP before kicking Liam Williams' ass, then a continuation on that RP. It's getting pretty repetitive, just talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking with no end in sight. Mix it up, talk to someone other than the camera and the fans. I'm bored.

 

-PAGE 5-

 

Trance is reassuring Gaines that they have a bigger problem now and it seems that they're on the same page for now. I like how this both hyped the Main Event and the Summercide match. Something interesting should develop in both matches.

 

Hostile vs. Gaines: This was an entertaining and fast-paced match. Gaines let go of the pin after a finisher but it made sense, they were pushing the match to it's limits as a Main Event match. It ended smoothly as well with Gaines scoring the W off a crucifix pin. Excellent match, I didn't know you guys had it in you for the Main Event. But oh wait, Hostile isn't happy about this and he wants to put Gaines away at any cost. I guess that's someone else for Hostile to cross off his growing list. I'm looking forward to their match at Summercide, it should be a good one all around.

 

-M.I.A.-

 

I'm kinda disappointed that Mayhem & Fausto didn't at least RP with each other to "go-home" for Summercide. You'd think this would be the chance for the two of them to clear the air and put everything out there verbally before the World Championship match at Summercide. I felt like that was missing from the show and it left a big hole that needs to be filled. Either way, their Summercide match should be the MOTN.

 

-Other PPV hype-

 

I'm assuming that KD will have a grudge match against DJack at Summercide, and the build they've made dating back to the night they helped me turn on Baxter has made for a good feud between them. I'm curious to see how this goes and how Jookie will get involed.

 

Even though I hated on him earlier, I am looking forward to seeing what Vincent Valmont has planned for Summercide.

 

I'm also interested to see what involvement Parker Stevens will have at the Summertime Spectacular.

 

There's been a lot of EX division hype lately, and I know Justin Rox has that open challenge out, so I'm curious to see what happens there. I also hope to see other EX guys like Hatachi and Jookie involved as I mentioned earlier.

[Vincent Valmont]

Vincent Valmont deliveres yet another looooooooooooooooong RP before kicking Liam Williams' ass, then a continuation on that RP. It's getting pretty repetitive, just talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking and talking with no end in sight. Mix it up, talk to someone other than the camera and the fans. I'm bored.

-PAGE 5-

 

will be up later or tomorrow. :(

 

 

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Is this the same OCW?

[Useless Dane Xavier]

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Is this the same OCW?

 

It's just that every week it's been very repetitive with you, YOU'RE BORING!

[Vincent Valmont]

It's just that every week it's been very repetitive with you, YOU'RE BORING!

 

 

I bet I wouldn't be boring in a match.... but speaking of this what's this like my 3rd appearance on Riot, 1st match? What the hell you want me to do, shit out a "epic omgz that's amazing" type of storyline editor bs? Bare in mind everything I said comes with a purpose, but I have learned it's better to prolong something, build on it, and then deliver instead of just going overkill. Of all people you're giving me grief? Exactly what's your gimmick again, and what you're doing that's so worthy of my time that it's so much better than what I have in store?? You don't just throw everything on the table and expect perfection, it takes time. Remember this.

 

You my friend is beating a dead horse on this one. As of Riot, havent watched it, but was spoild on a return in shoutbox so I just keep it with a welcome back.

 

EDIT: Lets keep this on Riot. I dont mind criticism, but felt like I had to explain on this one. Not angry, annoyed, but not angry just keep this thread on Riot. hopefully more reviews from others will follow.

[Useless Dane Xavier]

I bet I wouldn't be boring in a match.... but speaking of this what's this like my 3rd appearance on Riot, 1st match? What the hell you want me to do, shit out a "epic omgz that's amazing" type of storyline editor bs? Bare in mind everything I said comes with a purpose, but I have learned it's better to prolong something, build on it, and then deliver instead of just going overkill. Of all people you're giving me grief? Exactly what's your gimmick again, and what you're doing that's so worthy of my time that it's so much better than what I have in store?? You don't just throw everything on the table and expect perfection, it takes time. Remember this.

 

You my friend is beating a dead horse on this one. As of Riot, havent watched it, but was spoild on a return in shoutbox so I just keep it with a welcome back. Lets keep this on Riot. I dont mind criticism, but felt like I had to explain on this one.

 

I'm just going for some positive reinforcement, no need to jump on me like everyone else does when I try to help.

[Iceberg LeTuce]

I don't think you actually help dane, i think you just look to talk to people like they are somthing you found on the bottom of your shoe.

 

If you think someone is boring:

 

1. Don't talk about them

2. Tell them in a PM or on AIM

 

 

No need to cause another argument braugh.

[K.Dangelo]

Really liked Riot.The matches were great.People are putting in work going into the PpV.Can't wait to see what happens on page 5

[K.Dangelo]

Oh yeah with him back I know they are bringing back the HC title

[Useless Dane Xavier]

Oh yeah with him back I know they are bringing back the HC title

No KD, they aren't.