Trevor McManus

Was there any point in that thread asking to pick Leon's opponents? Blade got 0 votes. Didn't see Cruz's name a lot. Parker was the only one that seemed to appear in that thread. I noticed Frank Smith getting a lot of votes. So did Aries. So did Kang So did Deano. Seth got more than Blade Mayhem got more than Blade. I'm not sure if I'm the only one that feels this but I'm just going to come right out and say it because that's how I am. I'm sick of Blade getting a push cause he's yall's buddy.

Why the hell does Leon have the wrong belt with him?

VFM starts off page 4 for us and good god he's still funny as hell. He's about as funny as Ronald Reagan...well not quite. VFM: Yeah, it's VFM....can we get some cleaners up here, this place is a sty....5 minutes my ass, they better be here by the time I hang up. Classic line. I marked. Smythe your music sounds like something you'd play to a guy before you gave him the "anal tap" rather than the "spinal tap". Deano's entrance on the other hand has the most energy in all of OCW. Diggin' Deano's attire also. Liked the spot when Smythe ran at Deano and got caught with a flying forearm. Seen a lot of toe kicks from both guys, if one of them got the strike reversing down I think it could have been quite one-sided but then again with guys like these they adapt. Nice win for the man who's been gaining the reputation of glorified jobber in my books recently and couldn't have kicked a better man to do it against. Poe's RP is very well written as usual. The way he plays Stacy for a fool with the number of questions thing is hallarious. And the little hint at the end about the officer forgetting to put cuffs on Poe is genius.

Smythe interacting with Sasha is....interesting. They have a good sexual tension between them. Although it kinda weirds me out considering my dog's name is Sasha. DAMN that douchebag's entrance is markable. Kip busts a nut on Poe, I laughed just because it made me think of PEE STEE's rather entrertaining pre match picture. Kip's aeroplane spin>top rope move which knocked Poe out the ring was awesome liked that one. Liked Ryder taunting him after it and getting kicked. The flying closeline to Ryder was cool also even though I get the feeling he never meant it. Poe tylering Kip when Kip has a finisher was kinda bad although I'm sure he never meant it. Felt bad for Poe all the way through cause he was getting beaten up a bit despite not doing that good but I holy shitted at how close it was at the end. Cried a little when he got kissed. :( Seth is on fire with his recent promos so I feel I should appologise for this as I'm about to make him look like an ass. You're making fun of Mayhem saying "brave danger" yet you say "You're the reason responsible for this" it should have been either reason or responsible not both of them. And holy god how many times do I need to say this to people. "I COULDN'T care less" not "I COULD care less". The phrase implies that because you care so little it isn't possible to care less. I COULD care less means you care to a degree where it is possible for you to lose some of your caring. I COULDN'T care less means you do not give a flying fuck. English lesson over let me deal with his actual RP. I liked it. ------------------------------------------------------------- Leonheart: See Stacy thats how easy it is... One second and its all over and tonight that is how i will retain my pride title. Still think i am going to lose now? *Stacy is shuck up as she nods her head.* Leonheart: Good... ------------------------------------------------------------- Huh? If she nods her head she's saying yes. You mean she shook her head. Other than that Leon playing the heel works a heck of a lot more than I thought it would. The use of CAPS LOCKS works and he seems to be more deranged than calculated until he stops just before the kick which shows he's still got his head. Liked it.

Justin starts page 2 off with an RP. This hit me in different spots. He did something that Smythe also does and when Smythe does it I don't really like it but here I hated it. When they used the yellow text to tell us something. When Smythe does it he doesn't SAY it himself which makes it work more. But Justin saying "I thought rock stars...." not cool. If he said "Rock stars are supposed to get cheap pop not Justin Rox...." then it would have been better but the way he did it was too personal for yellow text which IMO should only be used for actions. HOWEVER when he said about people saying he went too far putting Flem through a ladder I fucking marked. I dunno if it was deliberate or not but it fucking worked. He used the negative feedback about his ladder move on Flem and turned it in his favour, fucking loved it man. GET RID OF ALTER BRIDGE! IT DOES NOT WORK AS AN ENTRANCE THEME! And as for YOU, you're name is KANG it's an A not an I fix it! KAng starts this one out with a big flurry and I get the feeling he doesn't plan on sticking around for long here. Trance gets right back into his face though, he aint gonna lay down. One other comment I will make on this is that when Trance used his springboard attack to counter Kang's whip he followed up with a ground move. I didn't really like this especially since Kang wasn't the one that executed the whip he only did it because he reversed Trance's whip attempt. Another thing I noticed slightly after this. Kang hit Trance twice and Trance counters Kang's long grapple with a quick grapple, this is what Nate was talking about in the other thread, thisisn't cool use your triggers. Decent match but the weight different took is toll I think. I worry about Trance's chances of beating the winner of Wesley vs Aries. Next we have Nate and Deano and more typos. Nate: Last week I did something I didn't want to do. But I was pushed into a corner, and when pushed into. But I'd like Deano to give me the chance to explain myself so come on out. Say what nate? When pushed into...? Wow Deano you're looking mighty queer tonight. Liked the RP though. Deano is in the early stages of becoming Nate IMO or at least what Nate used to be. Looking at Nate and Deano interact is like watching the new and old.

Quickly the opening show. Nice match between Flem and Judas there and props to them for getting something done. Hope Flem keeps it up cause we've seen these little bursts of activity from him before and it just dies away, keep going man. Also props to Flem for doing so well against Judas. I know how tough Judas can be and this was a lot closer than I thought it was going to be. It SICKENS me that only 5 fucking people took advantage of this great opportunity that Jay gave us to get something in even if we weren't booked. To everyone not either on the preshow or the main show, you should all be fucking ashamed. Getting that out of the way onto the main show. Nice opening page there. I marked my ass off for the Bloodline entrance. They cut one hell of a promo also. They all stick to their characters well during them and don't get caught up in the moment. I noticed sometimes that people can lose their own characters when they're in a team RP as they just take on the feel of the group overall but these guys don't do that. I just noticed they do a lot more talking than they do....well, doing. I sense that should be changing soon with what they're saying and I can wait to see it. HOWEVER: Parker -I had you dammit! I had you at vengance, it was all set..you were going to burn! The plan was flawless...or so I thought.... Someone thinks he's in WWE. Aries' RP is good but as a Scotsman myself I notice mistakes in his attempt to talk as we do. He refered to himself as "I" we would "a". Not "I'll be comin' for ya" but "A'll be comin' for ya". Silly Aries.

I lost to Aries. He's the best EX wrestler EVER in my opinion not just currently.

Not by the hair on your chinny chin chin.

Well everyone bought into the hair vs hair aspect of it. They just didn't know that it wasn't ever going to happen. Like watching a movie. You buy into it but there's only ever one outcome.

Didn't you see me vs Aries? I no sell getting my hair cut.

I agree with Seth there it does sort of make your finisher seem less important. I'm not a fan of the ladder being used backstage anyway. And Valmont as for my hair best leave me alone. :( As for the main event Regan. I did watch the match but I found the Karim bits more interesting to be honest. Didn't really get drawn into the main event at all. Had a kinda "meh" feel to it.

We start off with an RP of Frank Smith being called QUEERBATE whoever did that is a legend. Then we have Frank’s submission match against Wesley. This match was surprisingly one sided for so long then there was a nice turn in there. Good effort from the loser but the result I pretty much expected. Then we have my own submission match. Fucking props to Judas Hollows for a fucking fantastic match. You had me shitting in my pants and I enjoyed that one a lot. Then we have an interview turned assault. I like the fact you guys are putting in a shift and getting work done and I liked the video. But the ladder dive was too much IMO. Vindicator is scary. Regan puts Rox against PEE STEE, I sense an ass kicking. Next Regan is in the guy training. He got from his office to the gym DAMN fast. Leon is a puss now apparently…wait wasn’t he always? Marked for Park’s entrance. His attire reminds me of Majin, he has that whole hardcore feel Majin used to. I like Rox’s attire and his music works quite well also. BUSTED NUT LMAO! Rox started quite well but after that it seemed like Parker was saying “Die noob I’m a midcarder and I‘m above you!”. Rox went yellow VERY fast indeed. Props to Rox for the sig move counter, nicely done especially sicne it was a corner move, no such luck the 2nd time as he BUSTS A NUT. Finisher counter by Rox also. And another finisher counter. I’d be starting to worry just now if I was Parker. Rox hits his sig move and an ass whipping has turned into a close finish. Parker hit’s the elbow and it’s done. Hell of an effort Rox but I hate you for IMO out-doing my match. Wonderchild in the house. He cuts a nice promo about his losing streak being over. Before he is interrupted by what can only be described as himself in drag. Smythe kissing this woman cause the crowd to ‘moo’ her apparently. That’s either very clever indicating they think she’s a cow or it reconfirms the theory that Smythe cannot spell. Mayhem cuts an Undertaker like dark promo, say what you will about Mayhem he’s probably one of the best at writing dark promos. He gets jumped by Seth who attacks him with a weight. This is how an attack video should be done, sharp and crisp. Nate and Smythe have a locker room altercation. I like the feel between these two. Smythe plays the almost “unserious” heel role well. Not to say he isn’t a rapper you don’t want to fuck with. But the way he just treats talking like Nate as a joke. Everyone’s watching this “six” rather than their back. Just little things that make his character work. I hate Leon for his markable entrance and song. Karim makes the biggest impact in his recent OCW career during Guy’s entrance by signing on to live. Nice reversal battle at the start. Leon putting the ref down then throwing Guy to Regan was nice. Karim pops up again inviting us all to a party! Maybe we can see him dance. The match kinda dragged for me. The outside brawls made sense but there was too much. Although the end was awesome. I dunno how or who did those camera angles but I marked the fuck out.

Hey if there's a fast track to the shot I aint above that. :p EDIT - My choice of emoticon in that situation could have been better thought out.

For the world title? :)

I don't understand why you book people other than myself and expect them to get it right.

The way I see it if you RP enough you should be booked. However a little word in the GM's ear, a PM pleading your case, isn't going to do any harm. Lay out what you want to do with Kavito and discuss it with the GM. That should get you booked more often in my opinion. I'd like to see you do that because as much as I hate myself for saying this I'd actually like to see you and Kavito more. You clearly have enthusiasm even if you do lack guidance and direction and when kavito puts something together once every 6 months it actually doesn't suck.

Make it a battle royal. I can slap KD for thinking he should be booked despite sitting on his ass. I can slap Justin for having me record him vs kavito. I can job to Valmont since I stole his title shot.

Queerbate!

You have THEE most AWESOME birthday ever.

Looks like it Pee Stee but it isn't. If you see before the ending the guy is hobbling around holding his head so he was infact red. And as for my theme music I appologise to Ryder for not getting it to him fast enough. Had to get my ppv match done, nobodies fault. To sensation: you'll just have to wait and see if I edit it or not.

That's one of the funniest things I've read on here in a good while. Kudos to you.

You put that far too close to your reference to me. He's tlaking about Craig Neal there to be 100% clear on this one.

It's a very good idea but like I said to you on AIM the music is drowning it out. EDIT - If I mute the left speaker it's not so bad actually.

Liking the Faith No More in Kip vs MMM. I put "Epic" on Rox vs Kavito just there on Turmoil as well.

Just coz u is from da hood jee. Eye iz wite so gives me sum shlak! p.s. I still retain the right to use QUEERBATE!