B-17

Bray Is looking to break into the main event. It took some time but you are much more ready for it than you previously were. Your look is better, your move set is better, your RPs are better and you just rubbed shoulders with Hulu Plus. Things are looking up for you.

Dennis was on the aggressive side. We can all agree that while we may hate him, he has done well.

Saturday would work.

There is a difference between lack of aggression and passiveness. But you're right,,that's coachable, it does speak volumes that he picked up Cruz near the end and the. Allowed him to become ungroggy and then actually get hit buy a move that completely changed the momentum of the match.

Yeah. It's called FpR testing. It's just me showing you what rules we have in place to ensure fair play.

Dustin White you went toe to toe with Carlos Cruz. I actually though you were going to walk away with the victory. You kinda let it get away from you with some minor mistakes and lack of aggression. No worries you will get better with time. Two things I want to address: 1. I hate pick up resets, looks eh to me. If you're going to pick someone up, hit me with a move. Go for more pins if you want more resets. 2. I don't know what the designs on your tights are, they don't stand out. I like the cosmetic layout of the tights to knee pads to boots but maybe the incorporation of some designs around the waist would help. As it stands those designs look like some sort of Jerhico thing. Oh and a positive, I like your move set, feels very Aj Styleish to me, we have a few like that now.

Btw you and I have some testing to do.

Mugen and I be like Bill Nye and his Asian stockbroker up in here.

Platinum is dense, malleable, ductile, and highly unreactive.

My trash is still golden. You just gold plated.

Maybe if I change my name to A17 things will be different....

Am I acting defense again?

Likely a grey area. Just be aware that someone who becomes a wrestler first may claim it.

I can see that Nightmare is going to take my old position, jolly good.

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When sensation pisses dust from dinosaurs escapes.

How do you know I'm white?

Thank you.

No.

Thank you, Pugh.

Your girlfriend gave you a 3 minute blowjob. You didn't leave enough time to detailed.

#Influence Rp Good to see activity with you guys. I understand that there is some RL things going on so no rush. Sebastian RP Cars and beverages seem to be problematic on Turmoil. Ginger lol. What, don’t join forces with those ugly fucks! Big E vs. Jacke Jack you look like a rookie. But don’t worry, you have a blank slate to develop your guy’s look. Moveset look ok. I found the FPR to be good. Was this your first match? Damn, had to face a giant racist biker. But don’t worry his knees will give out within two years and then he will end up lumbering around like Kahli. Match was brutal until you made a comeback, good for you. Ed has yellow teeth, not surprised. Trance Black Madison RP Mutual respect, ok I like it. He did the same for me a few months back. I like Trance as a face, I think. I don’t know. I had Madison, that I know. The Orphanage is becoming a serious problem? Um, yeah. Loki knows all about that...attacked THREE TIMES. Joe RP Joe is on a slow descent into anger, suffering, hate. These are the path to the darkside. History buff enjoys Hadrian’s wall reference. Clowns RP Seb paid you guys right? I was confused. Zeb Melrose vs. Joe Good to see Joe get a win and some momentum going into his match with Big Ed. @Ed he could be a group member, yes. Loki Axton RP An example of why I love working with these two characters. Sophia RP Why even mention Alex. Poof. Gone. Good bye. RP went a bit long. Also what does “crowd reacts mean” do they cheer, groan, moan….The history lesson was quite interesting. Really works in your favor to know history. Gent Jack RP You’ve been doing great RP work since you started here. Keep up the great work. Dennis Madison Rp Disappointed. Implied BJs? I had heard rumors about this for quite some time and you do implied BJ? Come on, THIS IS OCW. I’m so disapointed. Willow RP Long and dense, but informational. I like backstory and therefore see the necessity, especially for her first RP on Turmoil, correct? Trance vs. Clowns I like that it became a two on one, but clowns. Guys. Cheat to win, please. It’s Trance! You can’t play him straight up, beat that scruffy looking nerf herder with a chair next time. Fuck the dq, beat his ass. Dennis lol. Sleepy, sleepy? Madison RP RP of the night. It was sharp, well written, kinda shooty and very emotion filled. Great job. Cruz Sheldon match Good to see Sheldon back. That match was good fun. The ending especially was good because of the finisher reversal finisher. Malu RP “Pee Pee Pants city” You win, sir! Thanks for the build, really needed it. Sheldon Ding RP Sheldon being a dick to Bill is a great way to get some heel heat. Seriously, you son of a bitch. Why you giving him shit! Good RP. Cruz RP Concussion? Crazy? I laughed. I’ve had a few concussions in my life. Usually they follow with complete disbelief of anything I’ve done in the past 24 hours. And Anger. Jackson B17 match/RP Much love and respect for working with Jackson. New guys. You should aim to work with this man in the future. Is is a good writer, good in the ring. He will help you and working with him will make you look like a million bucks. Kas has his own shit, still. Ed was right. Jack vs. B17 overshadows Jack vs. Kass.

Sounds like a good reason.

I will give a full review. For now I just want to say that it felt like a very well rounded, strong show. I especially liked Madison to Trance Rp. Felt powerful with a hint of truth to it. What id didn't like is no Kass. Did I miss it?

pff. She likely just touched it and he blew it.