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R2D2 was jettisoned into space, fired from OCW..

 

Much better RP from KD. For a man who doesn't care what I think he certainly proof read this week... Shame he did not liason with his tag partner again though, as Jookie talks about a non-existant match.

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Looking for some feedback on Phoenix' direction and character.

 

Trevor makes a good point, which is a shame. A very reliable person is Leon, but it is always the same thing...

 

Not saying his content is not appreciated though. Will have a proper show read at lunch.

 

When i said the euros killed it RP wise, I meant you too. That rp was awesome, loved the atmosphere, and the content matter was intriguing, yet dark and twisted.

 

EDIT: I like where your going with the character, just keep with his development going, don't stray. It's going to be interesting to see where you go with it.

 

Good shit!

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Looking for some feedback on Phoenix' direction and character.

 

Trevor makes a good point, which is a shame. A very reliable person is Leon, but it is always the same thing...

 

Not saying his content is not appreciated though. Will have a proper show read at lunch.

 

Reminds me of old school ECW Raven promos where he used to sit on a park swing and shit like that.

 

Also : Smythe's first video was cool as shit ey, the voice over was perfect....you have more nicknames than Apollo Creed....HOWEVER...do not give yourself more accomplishments than you have! You were NEVER OCW Champion!! ey, It was a fake belt..or you stole it off Guy or some shit I cant remember!!

Thought you'd slip that one through the net did you ey???!! :p

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Just for you Elbow's I will update the archives.
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Matsuda "The Original Coat owner" vs Paul " has shirts in all colors" Pugh

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Best first 40 sec of a match ever. <<<< . Unfortunatly for us all the match couldnt keep up that high quality of awesomeness troughouth the match. Infact the middle of the match became quite awkward.. it seems there is such a thing as to much roleplaying/showboating/taunting in the match as the match pace almost died out to a compleet standstill at one point and allot of whips to the TB. The ending was alright, Matsuda hitting his finisher twice to make sure that it seals the deal was something i liked. Greatest start of a match ever,to bad it didnt maintain. Still a good match but had a chance of pure epicness.

 

Mark out moment of the match : First 40 sec of the match

Rating : *** 1/2

 

 

I agree with you here, there were some points in the middle which were a little off, but I don't necesarilly think it was because of the ring psychology, more a acombination of that with the fact that Pugh and I don't play very often in DMs. We went through the match literally calling spots throughout, (ie: "you want it? okay throw me off the turnbuckle... shit you missed!") I feel like if we were to do it again, it would have went much more smoothly, but I still think it was a good match.

 

If it was Matsuda v. Dupree 5, we would have brought the house down, its all about the DMs!

 

So what do you guys think about LSD's return? I for one am pretty excited, we're going to see a return to that darker, brooding, brawler Lucas Dimsmore that we used to see on Ambition. But who will his first target be? Hm...

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Rp's were pretty good, but it'll feel cheap if i say that,since i say that pretty easy and i'm not up to date yet on most rivalry's etc. Illuminati looks freaking badass, the rivalry between Matsuda and this guy seems to have a large history,wich the only backstory i get from it is what posted a few days ago. Should be interesting. Da man with a thousand and one nicknames makes it return. I can imagine Smythe go and create himself at WWE 12 and he's finally finished after 30 min or so...goes to the finalise screen ..and has to fill in "nickname" and goes...WTF it doesn't fit?!
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Yeah the Smythe vid was pretty dope, had me hyped for his return. So when he showed up later in the show made me immediately mark.

 

My match with Dane definitely wasnt my finest work. and tbh i dreaded doing the match, it was nothing against Dane, just doing a match while your greiving a loss of a close friend made it frustrating and meaningless.

 

i commend Douche for putting up with my attitude, and making the match somewhat enjoyable to watch.

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"Let me make myself clear: you work for me. If I tell you to fight Blaine, you fight Blaine. Hell, if I tell you to fight a lion, you WILL fight a lion and still thank me afterwards for giving you a job." - Mr. Sensation

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I agree with you here, there were some points in the middle which were a little off, but I don't necesarilly think it was because of the ring psychology, more a acombination of that with the fact that Pugh and I don't play very often in DMs. We went through the match literally calling spots throughout, (ie: "you want it? okay throw me off the turnbuckle... shit you missed!") I feel like if we were to do it again, it would have went much more smoothly, but I still think it was a good match.

 

 

This ^.

 

Potentially, Matsuda and I could put on a MOTN(Y?), but i dropped the ball in this match. Hopefully, at some point in the future, i'll find myself opposite him in another match, and when that happens... OHHHH BROTHER, WE'LL BE RUNNIN WILD

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Yeah the Smythe vid was pretty dope, had me hyped for his return. So when he showed up later in the show made me immediately mark.

 

My match with Dane definitely wasnt my finest work. and tbh i dreaded doing the match, it was nothing against Dane, just doing a match while your greiving a loss of a close friend made it frustrating and meaningless.

 

i commend Douche for putting up with my attitude, and making the match somewhat enjoyable to watch.

 

Whatever is going in your personal life,i wish you the best.. but you could have left the things i made bold out and you would have delivered the same message. I know people seem to hate Dane but ..somewhat enjoyable match ? Could be less entertaining for you in your situation but i dont see why you would descredit your match, just because its Dane ? I skim trough somewhat enjoyable matches, i write a few lines about somewhat enjoyable matches. Hate the guy you fight all you want but dont be an idiot and discredit your match.

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