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Dear Brandon Hostile, KD and Anyone else who insists on destroying my language in RPs,

 

I'm sick of reading your awful grammar, convoluted metaphors and haphazardly assembled wordplay. I don't mean to be rude, but what the hell is a "Notch in the stone"? Do you mean a notch on the bedpost? Notch on the belt?

 

Notches be damned, I've decided to make you all an offer. My offer is good for one free copy of English Grammar for Dummies. I don't mean to sound arrogant here, but I'm desperate for one solitary Riot where people aren't shitting all over the English language. If you can speak it, you can write it. If you can do neither, then attempt to write the RP in Microsoft Word or similar, hit F7 and watch in amazement as it CORRECTS IT FOR YOU. It's a win win - You win because you'll be proud that your RP no longer looks like it was typed by a pissed up hippo with only a basic grasp of English, and we win because we can actually understand what you're saying.

 

Love Always,

 

Dan

 

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PS - I'm deadly serious, I will teach you English.

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I don't care how many "cheques" he signs. Have you seen the RP's he puts together? I've seen Hazard put together more articulate sentences than this clown.

 

Speaking of clowns...fuck Clownshoes.

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That's not fair Pugh.

 

How could you NOT include Jay in your English lessons? Tsk, tsk, tsk. Shame on you.

 

...because Jay signs my cheques.

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I enjoy reading RP's but aicsnt view vids at work. Based on commentary I assume the Phoenix Rox skit happened in the ring for reasons unknown.

 

I couldn't use what you gave me to put my vision together, so I had to make some creative adjustments to make it better fit what I wanted to do with the segment. I blame backstage sucking and not having freedom to do stuff without the backstage match ending or even being able to friggin TAUNT for that matter. It is what it is and it works for what it's worth.

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Dear Brandon Hostile, KD and Anyone else who insists on destroying my language in RPs,

 

I'm sick of reading your awful grammar, convoluted metaphors and haphazardly assembled wordplay. I don't mean to be rude, but what the hell is a "Notch in the stone"? Do you mean a notch on the bedpost? Notch on the belt?

 

Notches be damned, I've decided to make you all an offer. My offer is good for one free copy of English Grammar for Dummies. I don't mean to sound arrogant here, but I'm desperate for one solitary Riot where people aren't shitting all over the English language. If you can speak it, you can write it. If you can do neither, then attempt to write the RP in Microsoft Word or similar, hit F7 and watch in amazement as it CORRECTS IT FOR YOU. It's a win win - You win because you'll be proud that your RP no longer looks like it was typed by a pissed up hippo with only a basic grasp of English, and we win because we can actually understand what you're saying.

 

Love Always,

 

Dan

 

http://www.ocwfed.net/recapshow/special/OCW%20Awards%202012/OUTSPOKEN.png

 

PS - I'm deadly serious, I will teach you English.

 

That's cool but I really don't have to say anything just body little bitches like yourself .

 

PS - I'm deadly serious, I will teach you to tap .

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I'm going to give some thoughts here on the show, but first a few things (I'm going to do a thread in the introductions section later so I'm not saying everything here but I will say a few things).

 

 

First: I've been watching the last couple of shows (on time, not retroactively) and you all put on a fantastic 'Lution. The second reason I made this point was so you all know I do have a slight clue as to what storylines are going on, I'm not just jumping in blind here.

 

 

Second: Sorry about the face Vega. I've been playing these games with the same character since 07 (technically 06, but I didn't play online), albeit in a different E-Fed. I started when I was 13 and I was fairly incompetent. I was actually scared of touching the face morphing for fear I'd completely ruin it all. So I've had this "generic" face for ever, because much like everyone else, I'd be ruining the semblance of continuity if I didn't. On top of that, I still don't mess with face morphing, because I'm still rather incompetent, and while I'd take you up on your offer to teach it to me, I still don't want to mess with his face as it's been pretty much the same since 07.

, it's technically 08, but it's February of 08 and the oldest video I believe I have of my character).

 

 

Pre-show:

 

I'm fairly surprised K.D. is still doing this gimmick of "saving" the people through violence (or at least that's how I've been interpreting all of this). It's been nearly a year, and he hasn't quite succeeded thus far, so I'm shocked to see it still going. I also think that bomb on the valet was a bit overkill, but I mean it's your character.

 

I like Angel's look and his moveset looks like fun. Djesus is the Djones handler of old I assume right? Either way the Caw definitely looks different, like Parker said, and especially with that hair, I got a definite Kat Williams vibe. I do enjoy his nickname "the water walker" though, that made me laugh.

 

Spider was all over this episode of Riot. He pulled the definite heel move at 'Lution taking the advantage with a finisher right after that ladder botch. Not that that's a bad thing, gives Marley an excuse to keep pushing if he's looking for one. And one that actually makes sense, as the move that ran him into the ladder was a sig, so he very well could have won mere seconds later had everything played out right.

 

I'm disappointed Aries is leaving the arena, I was hoping to see him wrestle tonight.

 

Like Jookie, I hit page 2, believing the pre-show was page 1 and I spent 3/4 of the show baffled by the fact that Dimsmore was International Champion xD.

 

The intro to Riot was fantastic, including the streak vs career match, the actual Riot intro which I've yet to grow tired of, and the fireworks (it's a nice touch that most would be too lazy to add is my guess).

 

I feel like if you have a knack for making jokes controlling Poling and Scaggs must be a lot of fun.

 

Poor Dupree was just about all powerful before this segment, now he's on the ground and minus a belt. I loved that match at 'Lution by the way, sad that the ending cost you a belt.

 

I think Jay's contribution to this part felt real. It's like when a wrestler gives a speech that comes from somewhere other than just the storylines, and despite the fact that you may hate them with your very soul, you have to cheer for what they've just said. That's how I felt when he started talking about how no one is above OCW. On a more serious note, I read what happened in that pre-show as well and if I had to place money down I'd venture to say that things will be patched up sooner rather than later.

 

Dane's entrance made me laugh. I've never seen anyone actually have a good reason for using the Zombie entrance, and he was even smart enough to give reason as to why he would be trying to bite the camera.

 

I would like to apologize, as it must appear (at least to Dane) like I'm already being fairly useless. I wasn't aware I was to do anything for the show until I was already hours away from home yesterday (not the one that drove either) and I didn't get home until late this morning. So thank you for taking care of things Dane. And I'd like to point out that that's not my OCW attire (it's actually a stab at remaking the attire in the video at the beginning at this post.), it's just the only attire that I had up at the time so it's the one that Dane ran with, but he was nice enough to change some of the moves so that it seemed more OCW.

 

His post match promo was a nice touch. Working for nothing and promising to run the toughest schedule imaginable is a nice touch.

 

Glad someone else loves Old Spice too. They will always have my business simply because their commercials are hilarious.

 

I thought the best part of the Rockstar promo was how well he conveyed the child's difficulty with speech due to his lack of teeth. I'm not huge on the kid stealing cigarettes, but I understand it leads somewhere.

 

Hostile, I'm glad to see you back even if a lot of people don't seem to be. But I do have a question, what exactly is a passive military approach? You seem to be actively searching out a fight, and hating people, that doesn't seem very passive to me. But maybe I'm just confused.

 

The KD Hostile match was pretty good. It was pretty back and forth, and I thought for a while it was going to go to Hostile to be honest. But KD pulled it out.

 

I'm not familiar with the Tyro Girls, but I definitely dug the FF reference, because it's the first thing I thought of as well when I saw the name Rinoa (8 was by far my favorite).

 

I'm glad to see Dimsmore is a champion again. He's WAY different from the LSD I'm more familiar with. I didn't expect to buy into his character so quickly, but from the first match I saw him wrestle about three or four Riot's ago I was sold. The whole Dupree/Dimsmore dynamic was great, and I think it made you both look amazing. I'm excited to see the International title defended here tonight.

 

Peeta sucks huh? last semester my friend did an english paper on Peeta, and found that while doing his research that some of their money is actually involved in the same funds and places as some people known for terrorism. It's kind of freaky, and I think this interaction with Marley only adds to that, Peeta's evil.

 

I kind of wish I knew more about OCW's history than I do, because I feel like I'm missing some of the heat that Smythe got from attacking Wesley. I liked his buildup with Tyro however, and I thought you all put on a great match. I'm pretty excited to see Smythe go one on one with The Champion next week.

 

the International Title match was a decent match. Dimsmore definitely made a point by hitting Cruz with two finishers to get the win. It was a dominant ending, and you know Dimsmore is just angry right now.

 

I don't have much experience with the Cruz character, I see him as somewhat of a Santino/Eddie character. I'm not usually a fan of the totally comically, so I'm happy that his RP lent a serious note to his character, and I feel like I can get more behind him now. I'm sorry your FI moment got ruined, but at least you didn't get the dumpster treatment ;).

 

I would LOVE to see Pugh vs Spider. I'm actually very into the Pugh character, which surprises me because I have no prior experience with him. I think some of that can be attributed to the fact that I laugh at the majority of the posts he makes on here. The title belt line isn't something I've seen done in a while, and I think it was done pretty well. I think if anything, due to his main event shot later in the night, I think Marley kind of detracted from the moment, but now it has the potential to become a triple threat so that's nice.

 

I for one am sad that Leon is gone. Leon as a person was one of my favorite guys in OCW, and one of the few guys that I talked to from time to time even when I wasn't here any longer. For that reason alone, I was rooting for him to win out against Parker (no offense meant towards you Parker, I just don't know you all that well, and since this was a career ending match, I let sentiment get involved in my judgement).

 

Parker's loud mouth cost him a potential title shot. That really sucks too, cause you'd think after pulling off what no one else has been able to do, he'd be pretty much guaranteed one. I'm sure we'll see him get what's coming to him sooner or later, but I suppose for right now he just gets a lesson in why sometimes it's probably best to hit the power off button on the siren.

 

Jookie has gotten SO much better. He actually looked pretty great in this match, and until the very end I thought that it was possible he was going to take the W and the belt along with it. I'm borderline shell-shocked at the improvement here Jookie. Spider gets involved though, and Dupree ends up being able to come back and slam Marley to the mat to retain.

 

The A-Team spot was very nice. They stand for something, something rather unconventional, and it was good to see that they were able to hold onto that and even use it to win the titles. Definitely the right team to win the returning belts. By the way, I'm ecstatic that the tag team titles are back. Good tag team divisions are so much fun to watch, it's a totally different dynamic than singles competition.

 

I'm not 100% certain what the point to the interaction between Pugh and Dimsmore was, but it's building to something in the future, and for all intensive purposes it was well written.

 

Another guy I'm not very familiar with is The Steve. I think in this match I was rooting for Tyro as the wrestler, but I like the combination of Steve vs Dupree more than I like Tyro vs Dupree. I think that Tyro and Dupree have more similar movesets than do Steve and Dupree so I was more excited for the later matchup. It was a very good match though. Tyro had control for the majority of it, but The Steve was able to reach down and pull out a W.

 

Very nice Riot everyone, and I'm glad to be back, whether you're glad to have me back or not ;).

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I would like to apologize, as it must appear (at least to Dane) like I'm already being fairly useless. I wasn't aware I was to do anything for the show until I was already hours away from home yesterday (not the one that drove either) and I didn't get home until late this morning. So thank you for taking care of things Dane. And I'd like to point out that that's not my OCW attire (it's actually a stab at remaking the attire in the video at the beginning at this post.), it's just the only attire that I had up at the time so it's the one that Dane ran with, but he was nice enough to change some of the moves so that it seemed more OCW.

You have nothing to apologize for. Trance told me you were just going to write the part and I said no, a return shouldn't be in writing, it should be in video. So I suggested that I'd record the spot for you guys and I was more than happy to do so.

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