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I appreciate y'all. You have the ability to make things happen at a moments notice. I appreciate y'all. Enjoy!

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 15-06, 18:20 Tiberius Dupree make him tap with brownie mix

 

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Mmm. Mmm. Mmmmmmmm! That intro is amazing. Hopefully we can sprinkle in some house shows here and there. Will be tough with Ambition coming back but amazing work either way!

 

That ending title card looks pretty great too.

 

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Thanks for the work, Jay.
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That's pretty sweeeeeeet. Only suggestions would involve the "LIVE ON TWITCH" text: it's so brief and small that it's hard to read, and your eyes are distracted by Flojo's dancing, so it could have said "MAY CAUSE OCULAR HEMORRHAGING" and no one may notice.

 

Also, the time between "OCW Presents" and "Live on Twitch" at the start of the video, compared to the final revel of "OCW Live", is about 20 seconds, so maybe have a bigger time gap between "OCW Presents" in the beginning and "Live on Twitch" so they're all evenly spaced (8-9 seconds)... or have more text tossed in... like "In caHOOTs with Haus of Hoot"; "In collusion with CCW"... "Inside your mom's vagina with a capacity of 30,000 people", just to keep the build-up relevant.

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