RV's OCW Turmoil 03-10-2009

[Kang James]

Why, Aries WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII.

 

Achievement Unlocked X3

 

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Fucking achievement whore he is.

[Chris Ryder]

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It seems that Ryder didn't finish the job of taking out Trance, but he did injure Trance. I wonder what will happen in their match tonight?

 

Trance vs Ryder 3/5- Ryder...Ryder...Ryder!? I believe you'll know what I mean by that. I like how the match starts off with Trance and his legs are red to sell the beating. That shows me that yall are committed to even do the little things that means alot within feuds. Personally it should've been your head red and not your legs, but the legs still works. The match itself was back and forth. I was disappointed at two things. This match didn't feel like a ex-match. It was a good match, but when you have a match with two ex-wrestlers it supposed to feel like a ex match and it personally didn't for me. The other thing that disappointed me was with how the match ended. With all the hard work already been put to use on the show so far and yall end the match with that? Atleast have a written RP at the end or could've had Aries come to help. After Ryder owned Trance early in the show, it just made Ryder look weak when he had to face Trance 1on1 and not defeat him, imho. However I am not trying to tell you guys how to run your feud, but I'm interested in this feud, so therefore you'll hear my criticism.

 

Believe it or not, Aries coming down to the Ring was the idea, but for some reason, it was never written up and submitted, I thought it was all finished after I did the match with Trance, but that wasn't the case.

 

We intend on continuing the Storyline nontheless, we have a lot to make up for, but we're willing to work on it, for the sake of the EX Division.

 

That was a very nice review by the way Valmont, as always.