Brandon Hostile

Matsuda better beat the crap out of you half blood. You're light enough to be ex division, but slow enough to be a heavyweight. I do not support Lotus, but as Matsuda being a great Ex Division wrestler I hope he beats you, impostor. Jookie would represent the Ex Division better than you would and as for your buddy Judas: he's hardly a champion.

No Hostile point of view this week... I had a whole review typed up and accidentally got deleted.. I didnt like this Riot.. So thurr..

This thread needs more posters... Cuz I really wanna post A Hostile Point Of View!

Matsuda is gonna winnn xD How epic would that be?! if Matsuda wins and I were Cody I'd cash right after the cage match.

"Finally" THE ROCK HAS COME BACK! thats all I ever think when i hear finally. This match will be good. I see a Mr. Code Storm using FI after.. depending on the match.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLkp7Bj-wHw

No you did not. xD No wonder his body looked so pudgy and stubbish. I honestly didnt even notice until I just looked over it again.

If I dont have to do it how come you do? The only time its understandable is when its ABSOLUTELY necessary. Even then you could always just put a strike on your guy that goes that far(that elbow you have could work). I'm rewatching your match over and I see you reverse Lucas from the ground by an eye poke, you get up and run at him while he's still in animation, stop, and grapple. Thats what I mean by unnecessary. Or that time you reversed his second corner strike ran at him then did a strike combo. You were literally a foot away from him, you coulda just struck him without even moving or at least walked forward. The only reason I could see anyone doing that is to throw off someones timing in little league fashion. Don't get all pissy with me man. We're all friends here. I'm not trying to single you out here or bash on you specifically because I know there are a few people who use that "tactic". Try doing a couple dm's without running like that.. because from what i've seen you havent had to do it at all. Your reversals are enough self defense.

As I see Jacob Trance get skinnier and skinnier barely noticable as each day goes onn.. ;) I'm just messing with you man. You said it first. xD

A Hostile Point Of View Live from Hollywood, South CAroLInaFORNIA! Poling starts off the show being alone. LeonLotus's entrance is sick. Mr. Man there with the title walking down to the ring. Leon doing commentary should be cool. I just hope that they take a funny light side approach to it and make it interesting. "Aint no get ready for the smackdown!" Storms street attire is pretty good. Dunno what the tape is for. I think thats an accident. Nvm its not an accident. Good job sir. xD "That, that wasn't very nice. In face, it was quite not nice, some would even say downright despicable." This line.. very awkward to me.. sounds like you kinda pause the writing and forgot what you wrote before.. The close to Storms RP is very very strong and well written. Great RP dude. HAZARD VS MIDORI: 2-0 VS DEBUT Not sure who Midori is, I haven't seen him in any Dm's at all. But I'm gonna wait for his entrance to be sure on this, nvm I know. Good name for the caw. I specifically like this Asian caw. Its strong, fits the whole new asia style for hair. I have a feeling by the beginning of this match that hazard will lose. Midori is on top and controlling other than the few random spurts of offense for Hazard. If Hazard can pull out 3-0 I feel he'd deserve a title shot or at least a non title match again Judas Hallows and if Hazard can manage to win there then he should be the number one contender easily. Pulling 4-0 into a title match would give Hazard the upper hand and to come back and win it fairly following the rules is a good statement for him. This match is very fun to watch as we're coming to the end hazard is in control. I'd guess about one more minute in the match. I'm actually rooting for him a lot. Midori gets his finisher and connects after a missed toe kick and Hazard falls to 2-1. I wanna see a rematch next week. Overall: ***** 4/5: Congrats Midori We go back to Fat Trance and Jim Black for the first interview of the evening. I don't believe trance is retiring but I hope he is.. I'd rather have Josh Diamond return. Trance takes us through a pretty average history lesson of his life. Touchy feelings over his financials at the end to conclude a well written rp with decent content. good job trance PAGE 2 THE FIRE!!! I cant help but tap mah feet to the song. I agree, my favourite wrestler. The intro of Hanna Kyo is well played off. I wouldn't expect her to make an actual OCW slated appearance with an entrance.. Especially not with music like that xD Its like the fucking Road Warriors should be walking out to that haha I guess it fits with her really aggressive "No". Justin………… (sigh)………………….. On to KD and his Philanthropy work. Good little piece of work nothing more.. could been better tho. Leon's comments after sum it up well. Iceberg Le'Tuce!!!!! kinda feeds his girl to Pato then feeds himself to Pato. Pato>All but it looks like Pato might be pulling a bit of a Kharma:Kelly angle here. PAGE 3 Fat "Retiree" Trance troubles his mind with a decision of coke or pepsi.. You like punk so go with Pepsi or be a traitor!!! You suck… This RP is gold all the way through. Fatty is seeking a new beginning and Storm is the right person to give it. The domino affect. Tip one over and they all fall. LSD VS DANE $ XAVIER: DRUGS AND MONEY I see Dane walking out with the win here. As a fan of Dane I hope he wins. If not I could see Dane extremely frustrated seeing as how he needs to try to get back up on the main event side of things here. So far halfway through the match LSD is taking it to Dane. I'm really starting to hate seeing people run up to their opponents and grapple. Specially when you don't have to and for follow ups its dumb too because you can just walk up to someone and strike them to follow up. I talked to a few of the guys that agree. Another notable time when Dane does it is right after his punch sig.. He runs over to LSD to drag him.. theres just no need to. It kills matches for me seeing a big guy like Dane do that and I think anyone not just Dane that does it needs to stop. It's not realistic at all. Congrats Dane on the win and you're forward progress back to ME status. Overall: ***** 3/5 Stars Dupree and Hanna with a personal meeting in the middle of the show shoulda been for a backstage type promo. I guess the whole body bag deal would be worthy of a show.. But I think in realistic terms that a fan interaction thing would happen off to the side and not during a show. Good RP wrong setting in my opinion. PAGE 4 At the end of Dane's promo I'm left thinking about Mayhem and Leon.. Is Dane unaware that Leon is shooting for the same thing he is? I feel like this conflict should be there, but it isn't.. Maybe I'm thinking too in-depth here. But there's Lotus and Dane which is closer to Lotus than anyone. I'd think there'd be some heat between him and Leon if they both are going for the same thing. And once again the only, viable solution to current shorelines, is another 4 way for the title. Smythe, Dane, Leon and obviously Mayhem. AL POLING VS NATE ORTIZ: 'NUFF SAID Ahhh I shoulda seen this coming. Leon and Poling team up on Ortiz and literally jump him like he's the border. Course Nate looks a bit out of shape. Overall: ***** 3/5 Stars: Good Ass Beating. Worse than Irving and Jookie. Pato got this bitch on lock more than Le'Tuce.. hahahaha Dane paying for a translator is good I enjoyed Pato's mic work it fit him well. PAGE 5 Side note: if you look at the beginning of the video without playing it in the upper right quarter of the player, kinda resembles the face of a baby. MAYHEM VS LOTUS: MOTN This match is by far the best match up of the evening. Even the sound of it is just amazing. I see Mayhem sneaking one out. If not Pato puts him away or they jump him and get DQ'd. Suda does wonders and avoids Mayhems DVD. Mayhem does a great job of working in his center half of the ring. Of course he gets sucked into lotus' corner a few times but other than that amazing work. Of course.. Lotus gets DQ'd. Leon and Smythe joining together is interesting.. Smythe stealing the title from Leon is just amazing xD Mark out moment. Overall: ***** 4/5 Stars Good Riot, few things I woulda tweaked with but nothing detrimental to the show. good work guys.

A Hostile Point of View coming tonight @ 7pm PST.

Shit... hahaha xDDD

Thanks Mayhem. The Riot's we've had since Lution have just been amazing. I'm really enjoying reviewing the shows.

No I get what you mean. Translation: You got your ass handed to you. >:D

A Hostile Point Of View: Newww Jerseeey!!! And right away we have Nate Ortiz making his way down the ramp. This RP is really well written. Couple stupid grammar errors but nothing bad. I like the energy behind the rp for me reading it was really fun. I was expecting after the face off to have a planned match come out of it but they found a way to drag it on with suspicion for another few weeks if they want. Good work Smythe and Nate. Sounds like we have a murder plot in OCW by Dane and Leon. Leons "Thats for you to figure out, I am not here to hold your hand." made me laugh so fucking hard. I could only imagine the look on Danes face after that. Also sounds like Lotus may have acquired some big money here. JUSTIN ROCKSTAR VS WESLEY ADAMS POE: TROY PALOMALU So Lotus Law seems to be ignoring Creeds match card here. Matsuda and Pato coming down to the ring to fight you instead of just Poe would suck. Looks like they really meant that Rockstar wouldn't get away. This match seems pretty good so far. Well played with the pre match attack. Theres a lot of tylers that come with a match like this. Especially from Rockstar since he's on his own. But he's battling pretty good. He's still not damaged half way through the match props for that. Gotta love that targeting system. Now JRocks is going onto the steel steps and Pato almost samoan dropped him on them xD That would hurt soo bad! Wesleys music hits as he makes his normal match entrance. After Rockstar gets his ass kicked. Poe lays down and pins Rockstar and Dupree comes rushing to the ring. Poe bails out through the crowd as soon as Dupree gets to the ramp. Rockstar and Dupree maybe? Dupree's role-play to end page one is really fucking amazing. Its clear that he is going to be an amazing writer n OCW for many years to come or however long he stays jumping through the mic at people. For such an angry person maybe writing is his release? haha but no therapy time. Good work. I look forward to this progressing and how he finds Marie. PAGE 2 KD and Jim Black stand together for another interview. KD should call his 2nd finisher the Black Attack. Only if its like the spear or something tho. KD gives a shout out to god, family and friends. Thats cool and a good face move. The ending of the RP was pretty funny.It got a good laugh out and changed the mood of the rp for better. Improvement for KD here. Next we go back to the ring Jookie Marley's making his entrance not in wrestling attire. First time I think we've ever seen Kofi.. Jookie in regular attire. I'd like to see a show vs show match. Dupree vs Jookie. Oh and btw Jook im pretty sure working with drugs during a show is kinda a one way ticket to being fired… Ryder and his twitter account is hilarious but he jumps the gun thinking Al is behind him when in fact its Lotus. Leon and Patolomai are thee to talk business too. What is this? One heel faction cashes in on all of OCWs heel's.. Can we get at least one face turn out of this? lol Lotus showing a funnier side this RP is good. I can see Pato coming back with a table of food instead of a single plate. I think we've found OCW's Television Champion his weakness. I hope Ryder cons the shit out of LOTUS at some point in this. Cody Storms RP was well written. He continues to progress with Roleplaying and it should pay off for him well. I love this whole LOTUS thing and how everyones everywhere. Itsreally cool and I think that this is gonna be one of those memorable times in OCW. PAGE 3 Ryders entrance video is damn amazing. Best in OCW easily. Great fucking job on that man. A third "show" on riot now is much granted this week neither Jook or Ryder knew the other was coming up with a show. I mark for the Al question. Riots pretty funny today. Scaggs could nbe such a dick to Al if he wanted after that. Holy crap and it gets better. Too bad Ryder didn't catch Al with the three accounts. That could potentially be a 'funniest moment'. Good play on the Nate Ortiz deal by Ryder. Buy my t-shirt such a great close for him. SRT Challenger nice. Dale and KD will be a good match. KD hates how Dale plays. Dale's role-play is pretty good short and sweet to the point. I'm looking forward to his second loss and many more to come on Ambition ;) Dane feeds hazard with a powerbomb into the lockers. Nice xD And he used Lotus' entrance music. Foreshadowingggg.. PAGE 4 Jim and "The Day In The Life" creator Trevor McManus talking thoughts on T-Macs match- up against Patolomai later this evening. Requesting a match with Lotus… so thats what I gtta do. I like this segment here from Trevor. Talking strategy is always good. DALE ERNSMORE VS K.DANGELO: BLACK RACK Well its kinda obvious to me that KD is going to win this match. 3/4ths through the match its like a dinner buffet for KD. He hits his black bomb rather quick and F-5's Dale. Hopefully this will lead to a Black Rack here in a few seconds. Yep. This was pretty much an ass kicking match. I wish we could seen more offense from Dale but hell, just gotta improve champ. I smell new ambition champion here soon. Overall: ***** 3/5 Next we move on to Dupree. Dupree makes a tiny heel turn telling of his camera man that was fucking hilarious with the Dr. Phil bit. Fucked up man. The new camera girl seems… odd… Damn Ryder attacks the shit out of Jookie! I'm surprised Pato wasn't still in the room feasting on a fucking water buffalo or something. Again Lotus music in the video. Its obvious that Ryder chooses Lotus Law. PAGE 5 Dane's music hits and he makes his way down to the ring. I really see Dane fading from the main evener spotlight now. Losing too many matches as of late and you can only hold on for so long. Dane addresses his actions at Ambition and earlier in the evening. Its really gross that Pato ate Mayhems skin… specially with it being so old if it wasn't burned. This is a good RP. Dane officially sides with Lotus in words as part of a financial way to evolve. Add another member to Lotus. T-MAC VS. PATO: GOLDEN RETRIEVER VS. WATER BUFFALO This match is fucking 30 minutes long i can already tell by how slow this ticker moves at the bottom. Maybe even longer. I hope that this is just a struggle to get finishers instead of KickoutMania XXXVVII42XXQW2. So far the match is pretty good. I like it. Trevor seems to have the upper hand but Pato has some good timed reversals and offensive spree's. Over time this pays off for Pato as he gains a great upperhand. Trevor kicks out and stays alive. The two continue battling for a good amount of time after Pato's finisher. Trevor gets a sig after about 4-5 minutes and struggles to connect until a nice corner reversal. He sets up in the corner and hits a spear and pins pato. Great match overall good back and forth action and good perserverance. Lots of reversing :) Overall ***** 4/5 Page 6 Mayhem comes down to the ring and lays down MAYHEM Law really well. Smythe's interruption is a big fail xD The video editing after Smythe is a bit jumpy but there was probably no way to fix it. Smythe beats the crab out of Mayhem and taunts him. Cody comes out by Smythes call. I sense that Smythe wants Cody to win the Championship because Smythe cant beat Mayhem. Cody walks out on Smythe's offering. Mayhems recovery in the ring is fucking beast.. It's definitely an "Oh shit!" feeling. Leon walking away with the title is epic. Poling announcing theres a new champion is a good way to end the evening. haha Overall This Riot was really good content wise. It was a really fun Riot to watch as well. Good job all.

A Hostile Point of View Coming Sooon! ETA Page 2..

thank you man much appreciated. I'm looking forward to you bashing Sheldrake on Riot! XD

Intercom: "Ladies and gentlemen passengers of Southwest Airlines flight 163: Welcome to San Diego, California. Temperature of about 68 degrees, calm winds, partly cloudy skies and about 8 miles visibility. On behalf of myself and my crew I'd like to thank you for flying Southwest Airlines and we hope to see you again." A subtle ding reverberates throughout the plane as passengers take off their seat belts and pick up their carry-ons and the few with stow-aways as well. Man: "Hey buddy! Wake up the flights unloading." Brandon Hostile fidgets and opens his eyes. Brandon: "Thank you." Man: "No problem." Brandon pulls himself up and grabs his small suitcase out of the upper bins. As the exiting traffic moves forward slowly he peeks out the windows observing the airport terminals and run ways. He approaches a flight attendant at the exit he nods back to her thank you and makes his way up the cat walk to the terminal. Flash backs of times with his brother repeat in his head as he walks through the glass door to the lobby. He stops and observes the crowd around him and lets off a small sigh. Brandon: "I need to go to a show tonight…" Hostile makes his ways through the airport to the exit. He never stops for a larger suitcase at luggage. As he walks out the door a girl runs up to him and jumps on him laughing. The girl is about 19 years old. Blond hair, tattoo's a pierced lip and septum. He embraces her tightly and kisses her cheek. She extends her legs and Brandon puts her down gently. He holds the side of her face and kisses her. Brandon: "God I've missed you so much." Girl: "I've missed missed you too. You wouldn't believe.. You've been off for nearly two months now its stupid that you still had to follow them around that whole time.. Then you just get kicked down again and sent to Ambition???" Brandon: "Calm down babe.. Its not that bad. I would have liked to have spent that 2 months with you and you know it. But wrestling is my life I gotta learn and I'm still really young." Girl: "Well its time they started showing some appreciation.. I know those hot shots there wouldn't have done that.." Brandon: "Korra, its okay.. Don't worry about it. I have a couple days off now so lets use our time together and have some fun." Korra: "Okay sweetie. What do you wanna do?" Brandon: "Hmm… Who's playing at Soma tonight?? I haven't checked up on their shows lately." Korra: (Laughs) "I knew you'd say that. Well, guess what?! Its actually the band that made your theme song! We Came As Romans!" Korra smiles at Brandon as he lets off a big smile as well. Brandon: "We must go to this. Even tho I've been thinking of something way different to use now. We should still go. That song means a lot to me." Korra: "Yeah I know! Here the shows about to start soon I'm sure we can make their set." Korra and Brandon get into a car and drive to Soma. As they approach the venue more and more hardcore kids are walking around. Long hair, skinny jeans, beanies and fake Ray Bans. Heavy music playing in random cars. Korra parks the car and the two get out and walk up to the venue entrance. Security guards instantly recognize Brandon and give him hugs and shake his hand. Being a regular at a venue at some point in time pays off. Security lets the two in and they walk into Main-stage the mainstay area. After the song they walk to the back of the room and take a seat in a random corner. As The band starts moving their stuff and the next band starts setting up. Brandon: "Korra, things have been changing a lot in the past 5 months.. I feel so alone out there on the road. I lost my brother and you did an amazing job helping me out with that situation. Specially since mine and Trey's mom left. I just hope that with this new Ambition deal I can find myself again and get back on track." Korra: "Yeah baby I know. You'll get going again. You were on a tear in the ring. I'm surprised all the crap on the out hadn't affected your in ring performance really. You've been a top contender for a while now." Brandon: "To me the top isn't good enough I want more… I want to be that guy that everyone has respect for. That guy that everyone loves. I know I'm not that big and to accomplish this I have to pull a lot of weight for a long time. Its just gonna be so difficult." The next band finishes a quick sound check and kicks off their first song in the background. Hostile and Korra stand up and move behind a wall and sit again. They just listen to the music play. As the song ends Brandon repeats a line: "I said its time you believe in me." He turns to Korra. Brandon: "Its time they believe in me. I may be small but I can accomplish so much. I hope they're ready for the fall and what's to come. We smash ourselves, live fast and break it all for the ones. Stand by me, through all we see. I know we live fast and break it all. I'll break it all. Cuz I've got strength in here." Hostile looks around at the venue as his domain and his home. The music plays on as the scene fades.

I would be too if I did 4 finishers on a guy and he comes back and does 1 to win the game..

A Hostile Point Of View: PAGE 1: Live from Grand Rapids, Michigan!!! This Rot I'm looking forward to seeing Lotus in action and if they can continue their dominance run. I want/hope to see Tiberius Dupree in action and possibly come out with a win. Hazards follow up on his return. More words between Cody Storm and Mayhem, hoping we get some action in between that so we get some serious fire going. Trevor gets moved down to Ambition. Pato In action and KD in action. Just things I'm hoping to see. Oh and maybe something from Dane. Scrolling down I see we have Pato vs. Storm. That should be an amazing match no doubt. Leon and Trevor has serious potential of MOTN. LSD vs Hazard could go either way as well. So to start off the night we have Lotus making their way down to the ring. To be more exact, Pato and Leon. Leon to me feels like Pato's little hand held chihuahua that does all of the talking for him. Since its kinda necessary when Pato speaks god knows. Leon straight rips on Dupree and Trevor. Very good role play so far. Mayhems interruption is awesome. I would laugh my ass of to see him and Dupree as partners again Pato and Leon. xD It would be a good match tho, two big guys and one small guy and an even smaller guy. Mayhem gets to the ring and Leon cowers behind Pato and then taunts the monster. Mayhem has a problem with Lotus. I support this. Leon wants Mayhem to adapt that would fucking blow… Lotus basically couldn't get any better. I can see a few catches coming out of this Mayhem/Leon thing… I'll let you all to think and make predictions but I wont say mine for now. HAZARDOUS MATERIAL VS DRUGS: NO CAPTION. So basically a potentially good match has turned into a squash match. Hazard is generally untouchable this match. LSD lasted a whole, 6 minutes? Looks like someone needs to DM more hahaha. The scene after the match is interesting. I was expecting an attack or something. Hazard makes a 2-0 speech. He rips on Creed in a creative way. Hazard builds some good Ex Division heat in this calling out Judas(Hasn't been done yet). I'd like to see our Ex division get stronger. Overall ***** 4/5 Stars. I was pleased with everything in this match and the scene after. Good work Haz. I assume the scene cuts back stage. KD plays up to the damages in Alabama and offers his earnings. Lucky timing for his face turn. Royce's bits in the RP are really good. KD and Royce would be a good feud for NA in my opinion. Good little heat building RP. Not Spectacular but its somewhat interesting. PAGE 2: Smythe has new entrance music again. Not bad. I like this more than whatever the hell the other music was. I'm calling copyright infringement on the use of the word and name "Hostile" in this RP. Smythe does his typical bitch and moan in good fashion. Pretty much calls out Nate Ortiz and brings up the Sensational family. Smythe isn't gonna stop making the family's life a hell. This will turn interesting. Good RP. Next out is Tiberius Dupree!!! Which means more lotus! Yay! DupreeTV Debuts RIOT in Michigan. Coooool. The fans being the camera crew is awesome. Dupree introduces his aunt but is cut off by Wesley. Seems like someones got a hostage. Dupree makes fun of Wesley as he responds with his first words in a while. Wesley ends DupreeTV and spits off a lot of hate towards the fans and builds on Lotus. Dupree demands to know where his Aunt is and it cuts to backstage with Pato and Leon. This is for sure to include Mayhem. Least I'd hope Mayhem and Dupree collaborated. The Pato and Leon segment is separate from Dupree and his Aunt Marie missing. The video is good. Maybe a little unneeded. From there we go to Dane Xavier who awkwardly took a leave of absence last Riot backstage for the first time in a really long time actually. The Dane and Nate back and forth seems dead.. Smythe and Nate will overshadow Dane and Nate. The RP is pretty good. Dane addresses Rockstar and his loss at Lution and Mayhem. A lot of stuff is mixed up right now.. I wonder how everyone plans to collaborate with all of this.. you have Mayhem and Dane, Mayhem and Lotus, Poe and Dupree, Smythe and Nate/Sensational Family, then Dane and Nate. A lot is kinda jumbled up with split angles between people and one faction. PAGE 3: Ryder makes his entrance holding his television title. Glad he's still supporting his injuries. Ryder has a big announcement that is aimed to pay back all the support from his loyal followers. Congratulations he figured out how to use a computer and sign up on twitter. Next we go back AGAIN to Leon.. Too much content from them for one show.. They shouldn't have done the video and kept it at two appearances. Granted this is for an angle and a pretty decent one but 3 times is too much. specially after 3 pages.. The video is even more unnecessary. Next Iceberg Le'Tuce makes his presence known by making his way out to the ring. Iceberg complains about how D.Jones attacked him at Lution and how he deserves a chance to shine. Good little RP here. Page 4: Mayhem's fatass dodges a speeding car to open the page. Cat like reflexes for the big man. Maybe we can expect a moonsault by him some day soon. He's been doing that plyo. Trevor stands in the ring. Obvious to get cheers for an opportunity to defeat a member of Lotus tonight. I hope he really does beat leon. The only way to shut Lotus down is to defeat them to the pot where even when they say Lotus is law they still lose week in and week out. Good RP from Trevor best of luck. T-MAC vs LEONLOTUS: TALK VS STREAK Before I play this match I do not this the ending of Trevors RP should have been him walking up the ramp.. If he was already in the ring gm should have just edited the RP and made it to where Leon had his entrance to the ring and we go. But already know I'm gonna see Trevors pointless re entry to the ring. Leon bails before the match starts and Dane comes to the ring. This is interesting…Dane vs Trevor will be good if this goes down. Oh thank god I didn't see Trevors entrance. Good i'm happy now! Dane and Trevor will easily be a reversal fest I see Trevor coming out the victor despite not knowing who his opponent was. After Trevors and Dane's little collaboration at Lution this should be interesting. Trevor is the first to strike with his signature in the match about half way through. This isn't good news for Dane. He needs to come back and hit a sig of his own quick or the odds will continue to go downhill for him. Trevor as expected picks up the win over Dane Overall : ***** 4/5 Stars. Good reversing this match. Next Jim Black is with Cody Storm for pre-match interview. I laughed at Cody's opening lines. When Cody runs into Smythe it should just be filled with boo's. Smythe assumes the mentor position and considers himself Cody's friend is interesting.. Add Smythe and Cody to the previous list of mixed feuds and angles. I hope Storm doesn't get screwed here. Page 5: Guy Fausto! In a wheelchair! Ha-ha. He whines and complains about the epic ass beating and getting garbage tossed off the cell. He gets interrupted by Sensation. Sensation says he's not firing anyone, good. This segment is hilarious. I see a good mix between a funny Jericho promo and a DX promo. Fausto's 2nd to last words are brilliant. I can totally imagine some weeny ass voice saying that. CODY STORM VS PATOLOMAI: LONG MATCH Very long match… I can tell because we're barely half a quarter way through at the end of the entrances. I feel like saying that I really love Edge's theme music… In this match I honestly don't know who will win. By the looks of it Cody puts a better fight up than Dane did last week against Pato. Both of these guys are pretty good and both will be force's to be reckoned with later in there quickly progressing careers in OCW. Little over halfway through the match it seems very even I haven't seen anyone take dominant control yet in these match. Cody I believe is the first to get his sig and rolls the triple germans. He hits the pedigree and pins Pato who is quick to kick out. Cody should have altered his move set a little to be more non lifting based this match obv due to the size of himself compared to Pato. Shortly after he hits again another Pedigree and Pato kicks out again. Now this match is starting to be all Cody Storm. Pato needs a come back quick. Few moves later again and Cody rolls the triple germans and hits a THIRD pedigree. Pato needs to be done…….. but he kicks out. Now this match is starting to be unrealistic.. Cody should have won. No more comments on the match.. Overall: ***** 4/5 Stars. Pato shoulda let the match end at the third pedigree. If you're getting your ass beat stop playing please…… No wonder this match was so long. Page 6: After Pato's ass kicking he stays in the ring and Mayhem comes out to the Ring. Being attacked by Leon is a good move. Didn't see it coming. Liking Leons attire. Leon attacks mayhem with a sledgehammer. Mayhem begins to bleed hello SvR 10. Looks like Leon wants the OCW Championship. Overall good Riot. Don't like the million appearances with leon and pato. too much going on in one night when you are on every page. Match's were good except for the neverender between pato and cody. Lotus may be shut down here if they keep losing. Looking forward to next week.

A Hostile point of few coming soooon ;)

I'm actually okay with it to be honest.. I was pissed when I found out because it seemed like i was getting kicked further down every 3 weeks with a new announcement on what Hostile will be doing/not doing.. But I'm looking forward to taking Ambition to the top. I know something special will happen soon. I have ideas I want to see become reality. And someone said something about me going to Ambition is good but I will crush everyone.. Yeah.. Probably.. but its okay. I get to reangle Hostile and come up with new stuff for him. I dont know if you noticed either but you hit 2000 posts on this thread. Grats.

I think Pato should get his own special colour... Jay: "And a special shout out to Mr.Hostile for pointing out my inadqequcies and inconsistencies on quickly written RP's at work. A collective sigh on my part, but when you right you right. You can expect me to use my intro youtube video pretty much all the time, due to the ease of use. Unless its something special thats pretty much what im going to use." You are something... you really are something xD Right = Write inadqequcies=Inadequacies Its okay bro.. we understand you. <3 and just to show support: .......trevor..............................

A Hostile Point of View: Yes Ladies and well scratch the ladies out, just Gentlemen.. Anyways its that time again. Wooooooooo! Page 1: Smythe's a Luh hooo zuh herrrrrr!! Live from Phili! I love this place! We start off with damnit I guess we're momentarily in Toronto…? Really Smythe? You that lazy you cant fly 2 hrs to Philadelphia for a show? New-Jack is ABM not you! The beginning 3 paragraphs of the role play are pretty alright. Not amazing but decent. I don't agree with you pulling a rock via satellite. After the pop from the crowd the RP starts to pick up. Good dialogue comes into play. Marks to Tiffany is good, but you don't bring the Nate's girl into this boy. You will get fed. Overall pretty good starting RP for Riot. This feud better not pull a wrestlemania and continue on after this.. i hope… its a good feud but I think Wrestlution should be the cap to feuds. Next we move onto Mr. Sensation troll his way down to the ring. No apparent bruises or injuries for big guns. Pretty good. OCW Staff should have the ring set up before you enter tho buddy. You never see crew set up the cutting edge on air. You only see Edge and whoever destroy it ^.^ Rookie asking if the mic's on too. C'mon lobster head! I've noticed a few botches on dialogue and action in the RP. Nothing too serious but I'll point them out. There are no action caps for Poling when Sensation *Points to BIG Al Poling and Al looks left and right as if "Me?"* And Sensation was already wearing sunglasses when he came out to the ring. So now he's wearing 2 pairs of glasses at the same time! Double shady. Sensation keeps his business between Smythe and Al short. Thats good. You are the boss you have a show to run, not just one little angle and your problems. OCW Riot is moving to Wednesday! Thats good! This benefits me because now I have more than just monday to do the matches and RP's with my schedule. Next Sensation brings up the graduation of two Ambition stars! The first is none other than "Your Girls Favourite Wrestler!" AKA "The Fire" Tiberius Dupree. I think Dupree is a great addition to Riot. He has very good writing skills and could be an intense competitor in the Ex Division. OCW Ex is for sure, ON THE RISE! As Sensation s about to announce the second graduate he's interrupted by the tron. Riots intro, and, oh no.. Static and falling leaves. Adapt or Die means ones simple thing. LOTUS! Illuminati, Matsuda, Wesley Adams Poe, Patolomai followed by a suited Leonheart! So technically this is one graduate. Cuz I'm sure they could easily just crash riot every show if they wanted to. Someones gonna have to take this guys down and put them in their place. I'll do it myself if I have to. ;) Leons piece in the RP is pretty good. Well played follow up RP for the Heel turn. After Tiberius' line Leon really turns the heat up. It turns out to be very good. Luke S. Dimsmore appearing out the crowd is different. I like that it was a different interruption approach. The little interchange between LSD and Dupree was fucking hilarious. It sounded lke something I'd hear in a Live party. Leon announces Patolomai as a graduate to Riot. Sensations response is very very good. I'll really enjoy watching Pato vs Dane later this evening. I smell 1st support for Main Event. PAGE 2: We start page two with FAT Trance! Stacey Clark getting her work in for tonight. Good use of her other than Jim Black for once too. Jacob's RP is very light and has a good vibe to it. All positive. Is it true that we may see the lighter side of Trance for a long while? I guess we'll ind out. Next Dorky music means Judas Hallows our NEW Ex Division Champion.. That better not last a long time… I Swear. D-Jack needs to unsheathe and stab his ass. Judas' RP is rather hot. Making a small semi-inspirational thank you speech. An Open challenge goes out At the youngest OCW champion at history at 20 looks like he'll easily have a few contenders to break that. After all, Hostile is only 19. DANE $ XAVIER VS. PATOLOMAI: THE DOUCHE VS THE SAMOANNNN! Haven't started the match but I can totally see Pato sitting in a bamboo tenths thingy sitting on Dane's Road To Glory poster and just laying off a gnarly ass fart and going "Huhhh?! O.O" I can almost taste itttt!!! Dane loses the Lution remix that sucks. I think all Lotus needs is a black guy and they cover pretty much the entire colour wheel of the human species. xD Okay the match pretty much starts with Dane on his back right away. Not a good sign from one of OCW's World Heavyweight Championship contenders. Lets go Dane! Keep his ass of Riot! Its our chance to lessen their numbers. Side note, I've never played Pato in a card match but he's straight ripping on Dane here. I must be missing something about him. I assume he doesn't play anything like he does on the card as he does in DM's. We're a quarter through the match and Dane's about connecting with 1 punch and thats it lol Half way through the match now Dane's offense has some what picked up. He's showing obvious damage to the rib cage. This match is just a pure great showing for Lotus. The power of the new guys is amazing. I can see Dane's controller is still broken due to his shenanigan running around thing in the bottom left corner. Pato still reverses the running move LOL. Pato wins in the end via finisher. He pretty much creamed Dane. Overall: 3 1/2 out of 5 ***** Reason: Dane got worked…. but Pato plays off Lotus well. Dominant. After the match we go to commercial break and come back with Vimes in the ring. Vimes talks mad trash on the GM's of Riot but is quick to change the subject to Ambition matters. Vimes is hinting at Ambition being a stronger show than Riot. If he had his way he would crush Riot with Ambition superstars. Ambition trades Dupree and Pato for myself and Dorien Arnaud. PAGE 3: We start off with a strong interview from K.D. Seems rather happy about defeating Jookie. But he shoulda used the black rack. KD spits out plans for NA Championship run even tho its not there. Why no WHC Boy?? Good rp overall. TIBERIUS DUPREE VS HAZARD: KEEP THE FIRE FROM HAZARD PLEASE…. his name is Hazard for a reason lmao. Match starts off pretty fast pace. This is a great Ex match and should turn out very good in the end. Didn't like hazards attempt at a running corner from 2 feet away. good for Dupree on the reversal. Good back and forth action. HAZARD CHANGE YOUR EDGECUTION ITS MY SIG. Dupree's fighting off hazard really well in this match. Hazard seems to have the ultimate upperhand throughout. Hazards fail attempts at top rove moves are pretty funny. I'd like to see more variety from hazard with his move set. I think he had a regular move that looks like a more stylish version of his front finisher too. Hazard steals the fire. Overall 3/5 stars ***** PAGE 4: Not gonna review my own piece. From there we move Mayhem STILL our World Heavyweight Champion. Good rp. Dark no doubt. Seems very Roman Empirish but like evil roman empirish. T-MAC VS KD: YOUR MAIN EVENT! So I think Trevor will pick up the win in this. If not it'll be lose by black rack for obvious submission finisher reasons. KD's music doesn't really fit.. The match has been relatively back and forth KD probably has control 60/40 and pays off by hitting a sig. Trevor does a good job in keeping out of the black rack. But to no avail KD straps it in after the second powerbomb signature and claims a win. Overall 3/5 ***** PAGE 5: The BIG NATE RETURN! Great RP. Hands down best one of the evening. I think its funny how Nate and Dane look so similar. Nate stepping into the ring again is awesome. He should face Cody Storm ^.^ I expect lotus may get involved in this now that they have made their way to Riot. We shall see. Good Riot overall. Not amazingly spectacular. Several good Rp's and sone pretty decent matches. Looking forward to the future. :)

231 1/2 % btw, 3.935/5 can be reduced sir!