Riot 5-04-2011

[Brandon Hostile]

A Hostile Point Of View:

 

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Live from Grand Rapids, Michigan!!!

 

This Rot I'm looking forward to seeing Lotus in action and if they can continue their dominance run. I want/hope to see Tiberius Dupree in action and possibly come out with a win. Hazards follow up on his return. More words between Cody Storm and Mayhem, hoping we get some action in between that so we get some serious fire going. Trevor gets moved down to Ambition. Pato In action and KD in action. Just things I'm hoping to see. Oh and maybe something from Dane.

 

Scrolling down I see we have Pato vs. Storm. That should be an amazing match no doubt. Leon and Trevor has serious potential of MOTN. LSD vs Hazard could go either way as well.

 

So to start off the night we have Lotus making their way down to the ring. To be more exact, Pato and Leon. Leon to me feels like Pato's little hand held chihuahua that does all of the talking for him. Since its kinda necessary when Pato speaks god knows. Leon straight rips on Dupree and Trevor. Very good role play so far.

 

Mayhems interruption is awesome. I would laugh my ass of to see him and Dupree as partners again Pato and Leon. xD It would be a good match tho, two big guys and one small guy and an even smaller guy. Mayhem gets to the ring and Leon cowers behind Pato and then taunts the monster.

 

Mayhem has a problem with Lotus. I support this. Leon wants Mayhem to adapt that would fucking blow… Lotus basically couldn't get any better. I can see a few catches coming out of this Mayhem/Leon thing… I'll let you all to think and make predictions but I wont say mine for now.

 

HAZARDOUS MATERIAL VS DRUGS: NO CAPTION.

 

So basically a potentially good match has turned into a squash match. Hazard is generally untouchable this match. LSD lasted a whole, 6 minutes? Looks like someone needs to DM more hahaha. The scene after the match is interesting. I was expecting an attack or something. Hazard makes a 2-0 speech. He rips on Creed in a creative way. Hazard builds some good Ex Division heat in this calling out Judas(Hasn't been done yet). I'd like to see our Ex division get stronger.

 

Overall ***** 4/5 Stars. I was pleased with everything in this match and the scene after. Good work Haz.

 

I assume the scene cuts back stage. KD plays up to the damages in Alabama and offers his earnings. Lucky timing for his face turn. Royce's bits in the RP are really good. KD and Royce would be a good feud for NA in my opinion. Good little heat building RP. Not Spectacular but its somewhat interesting.

 

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Smythe has new entrance music again. Not bad. I like this more than whatever the hell the other music was. I'm calling copyright infringement on the use of the word and name "Hostile" in this RP.

 

Smythe does his typical bitch and moan in good fashion. Pretty much calls out Nate Ortiz and brings up the Sensational family. Smythe isn't gonna stop making the family's life a hell. This will turn interesting. Good RP.

 

Next out is Tiberius Dupree!!! Which means more lotus! Yay! DupreeTV Debuts RIOT in Michigan. Coooool. The fans being the camera crew is awesome. Dupree introduces his aunt but is cut off by Wesley. Seems like someones got a hostage. Dupree makes fun of Wesley as he responds with his first words in a while. Wesley ends DupreeTV and spits off a lot of hate towards the fans and builds on Lotus.

 

Dupree demands to know where his Aunt is and it cuts to backstage with Pato and Leon. This is for sure to include Mayhem. Least I'd hope Mayhem and Dupree collaborated. The Pato and Leon segment is separate from Dupree and his Aunt Marie missing. The video is good. Maybe a little unneeded.

 

From there we go to Dane Xavier who awkwardly took a leave of absence last Riot backstage for the first time in a really long time actually. The Dane and Nate back and forth seems dead.. Smythe and Nate will overshadow Dane and Nate. The RP is pretty good. Dane addresses Rockstar and his loss at Lution and Mayhem. A lot of stuff is mixed up right now..

 

I wonder how everyone plans to collaborate with all of this.. you have Mayhem and Dane, Mayhem and Lotus, Poe and Dupree, Smythe and Nate/Sensational Family, then Dane and Nate. A lot is kinda jumbled up with split angles between people and one faction.

 

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Ryder makes his entrance holding his television title. Glad he's still supporting his injuries. Ryder has a big announcement that is aimed to pay back all the support from his loyal followers. Congratulations he figured out how to use a computer and sign up on twitter.

 

Next we go back AGAIN to Leon.. Too much content from them for one show.. They shouldn't have done the video and kept it at two appearances. Granted this is for an angle and a pretty decent one but 3 times is too much. specially after 3 pages.. The video is even more unnecessary.

 

Next Iceberg Le'Tuce makes his presence known by making his way out to the ring. Iceberg complains about how D.Jones attacked him at Lution and how he deserves a chance to shine. Good little RP here.

 

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Mayhem's fatass dodges a speeding car to open the page. Cat like reflexes for the big man. Maybe we can expect a moonsault by him some day soon. He's been doing that plyo.

 

Trevor stands in the ring. Obvious to get cheers for an opportunity to defeat a member of Lotus tonight. I hope he really does beat leon. The only way to shut Lotus down is to defeat them to the pot where even when they say Lotus is law they still lose week in and week out. Good RP from Trevor best of luck.

 

T-MAC vs LEONLOTUS: TALK VS STREAK

Before I play this match I do not this the ending of Trevors RP should have been him walking up the ramp.. If he was already in the ring gm should have just edited the RP and made it to where Leon had his entrance to the ring and we go. But already know I'm gonna see Trevors pointless re entry to the ring.

 

Leon bails before the match starts and Dane comes to the ring. This is interesting…Dane vs Trevor will be good if this goes down. Oh thank god I didn't see Trevors entrance. Good i'm happy now!

 

Dane and Trevor will easily be a reversal fest I see Trevor coming out the victor despite not knowing who his opponent was. After Trevors and Dane's little collaboration at Lution this should be interesting. Trevor is the first to strike with his signature in the match about half way through. This isn't good news for Dane. He needs to come back and hit a sig of his own quick or the odds will continue to go downhill for him.

 

Trevor as expected picks up the win over Dane

 

Overall : ***** 4/5 Stars. Good reversing this match.

Next Jim Black is with Cody Storm for pre-match interview. I laughed at Cody's opening lines. When Cody runs into Smythe it should just be filled with boo's. Smythe assumes the mentor position and considers himself Cody's friend is interesting.. Add Smythe and Cody to the previous list of mixed feuds and angles. I hope Storm doesn't get screwed here.

 

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Guy Fausto! In a wheelchair! Ha-ha. He whines and complains about the epic ass beating and getting garbage tossed off the cell. He gets interrupted by Sensation. Sensation says he's not firing anyone, good. This segment is hilarious. I see a good mix between a funny Jericho promo and a DX promo. Fausto's 2nd to last words are brilliant. I can totally imagine some weeny ass voice saying that.

 

CODY STORM VS PATOLOMAI: LONG MATCH

 

Very long match… I can tell because we're barely half a quarter way through at the end of the entrances. I feel like saying that I really love Edge's theme music…

 

In this match I honestly don't know who will win. By the looks of it Cody puts a better fight up than Dane did last week against Pato. Both of these guys are pretty good and both will be force's to be reckoned with later in there quickly progressing careers in OCW. Little over halfway through the match it seems very even I haven't seen anyone take dominant control yet in these match. Cody I believe is the first to get his sig and rolls the triple germans. He hits the pedigree and pins Pato who is quick to kick out.

 

Cody should have altered his move set a little to be more non lifting based this match obv due to the size of himself compared to Pato. Shortly after he hits again another Pedigree and Pato kicks out again. Now this match is starting to be all Cody Storm. Pato needs a come back quick. Few moves later again and Cody rolls the triple germans and hits a THIRD pedigree. Pato needs to be done…….. but he kicks out. Now this match is starting to be unrealistic.. Cody should have won. No more comments on the match..

 

Overall: ***** 4/5 Stars. Pato shoulda let the match end at the third pedigree. If you're getting your ass beat stop playing please…… No wonder this match was so long.

 

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After Pato's ass kicking he stays in the ring and Mayhem comes out to the Ring. Being attacked by Leon is a good move. Didn't see it coming. Liking Leons attire. Leon attacks mayhem with a sledgehammer. Mayhem begins to bleed hello SvR 10. Looks like Leon wants the OCW Championship.

 

 

 

Overall good Riot. Don't like the million appearances with leon and pato. too much going on in one night when you are on every page. Match's were good except for the neverender between pato and cody. Lotus may be shut down here if they keep losing. Looking forward to next week.

[Patolomai]

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Luke S.Dimsmore

First point of interest I would like to touch on is the evolution of Lucas into Luke S. Dimsmore (Im assuming the "S" is for schizophrenic at this point). Ive been fortunate enough to have a first hand perspective on Luke's growth from the scrubby face nesquhoneing to one of the more in depth characters in OCW. The conclusion of his marriage and the presumed promiscuity of his ex cause a mental collapse but also the birth of a much needed face in the ranks of Online Championship Wrestling. The assumed figment of his imagination Tigerman is the ying that out ways the yang of bad intentions. Every aspect of Luke S. Dimsmore has developed from his character,attire,entrance and ring skills. Keep doing your thing I really enjoy your work.

Hazard

It was nice to see Haz step out off the box and give us a different angle from what I have seen in my tenure in OCW. Hazard was able to remain humble with his punishment while still showing some balls and giving a few verbal barbs to Cash Creed and proclaim his place in the hunt for the Ex Championship that he feels should still be rightfully his. This RP was unexpected just like Al said and was much enjoyed as well. Good job Haz.

 

K.Dangelo

First and for most I would like to give props to KD. He has shown a dedicated effort on improvement. Each and every week I feel he has been setting a new bar for himself content wise. Good work KD. KD starts off with a nice heartfelt RP addressing the tragedy and the lost of many in his home state of Alabama further boosting his status as a up and coming face in the company. KD even further offers to donate his purse for the month of May to those in need and encourages the other employees of our fine company to do the same. The RD Money slight was a little out of left field in my opinion. After working hard improving his status with the fans as some one they can get behind and represent the good of the company he manages to tarnish that. I am assuming its for the good of the angle with the next series of events.

 

Royce Bentley

1st Royce on Riot. Royce matches KD's face move with a shout out and condolensces to the state of Alabama and to those he knows at the University. This is the moment we have all been waiting for, Royce has finally got to his agenda... He is going to put every one in check that has disrespected the family "Greatness". Nope, Royce adds another wrinkle informing us that there are hired "representatives" that are handling that piece of family business. Royce has more important matters at hand...LOTUS, or so we thought. Royce makes it just as clear as KD that their priority is on a title thats whereabouts are unknown...The NA Title.

[Cody Storm]

Ok, fuck a linear style of things. Technically it makes it easy to read but this is a review of a full show so lets just go with a natural thought process.

 

First off, LOTUS (really Pato and Leon, though Poe showed up with his game face on as well) were ALL OVER THE PLACE. A little bit much for me as well Hostile. It was good, all of it was well done, but it's like Ken Anderson on TNA. I LOVE Anderson, doesn't mean I want him on my screen before and after every commercial break. The pieces were all very good though. I obviously understand that the point of Leon cowering was to make Mayhem seem very opressive and impressive, but with the whole adapt or die concept I personally don't think the newest guy to adapt should be cowering in a corner. Just my thoughts.

 

Dimsmore vs Haz was a good match, I was really sad we didn't see more offense from Dimsmore. Hazard did put up a very good showing though, and as everyone said it was nice to see him promo. While it was a little rough around the edges, and I had to pause the video frequently to finish reading lines, anything is an improvement from nothing.

 

I agree with Pato that KD is getting better and better on the mic every week. I'm still having a hard time seeing him as a face so quickly but that doesn't detract from the writing at all. Royce with a great tie in. I stil think you shouldb e doing more to help your father, even if he says not to, but some gold would be nice.

 

Specially with this damned title being out of commission for so long, it needs to come back soon and I'd say these two look like front runners for it.

 

Ps... I'm going to black rack you KD, it will happen ;).

 

Smythe I loved your promo. I don't know a whole lot about the history of this place so the comment to Tiffany about being her big brother was a little over my head, but I think that's part of what makes a promo good, the little nuances that you have to think about. I can't wait to see what comes of you and Nate. I can't wait to see what comes of Nate in general. Nice entrance theme by the by. And if you touch my case I'll come at you so hard you won't know what hit you (except you will because as a courtesy I'll leave a post-it on your chest with my name on it. I'm too poor for real calling cards).

 

Chris Ryder that shit was hilarious! I was trying to figure out whether or not the twitter was real or not (and by trying to figure it out I mean I was simply pondering the question as I was trying to get through Riot before going to dinner with my friends). Your new theme is nice but it makes me sad faced because I really liked the old one. Always funny, and always talented, but I will eventually come back for that belt my friend ;).

 

Dupree is always entertaining. I thought the use of technology (I know Ryder used it to but Dupree's use came first and was ingenious I thought) to get the fans involved in your segment was, again, ingenious. It's too bad that it got shut down very quickly, I suppose it's good for viewers DVR hard-drives though, more free space. I hope your aunt's ok! Poe's kind of a douche.

 

Mayhem is looking like a rag doll this show. No offense dude, but you almost got run over, Leon pulled one over on you (though not a very big one, all he did was get away), and then later on you got jumped and LKO'd (that's the big one).

 

Fausto, you are always funny dude. I actually lol'd at your promo, the idea that the biggest whiniest bitch finally got what he deserved and no one believed his real injuries (though we should have, you kinda got tossed 20 feet to the ground), so the boss just tossed yo monkey ass out of your chair. Hopefully these injuries won't keep you out too long.

 

Speaking of the boss, I was kind of surprised at his lack of activity in the show. Hopefully that means he didn't think he had to supplement it this week.

 

I liked Dane's useage of Nate's explanation for not interacting with him as a way to set his own agenda. It pushed the issue with both Trevor and the Monster quite nicely.

 

BTW, Trevor vs Leon...... Leon's a bitch! Dane vs Trevor was a very good match though, I liked all of the reversals in it.... and the fact that it had a realistic finish....

 

OHHHH PATO. You fat fuck, stay down. You'd think with all that weight on you you'd be hardpressed to get up once knocked over. I am very sorry about my moveset, but since I shouldn't be changing sigs or finishers for just one match, I decided nothing could look worse than the effortless triple germans or the gutwrench bomb. So I was just like, fuck it! It was a very nice match, very back and forth until a certain point and I had fun. I just wish I didn't have to end it off the dragon suplex, seemed anti climactic to me.

 

Honestly that match I believe is a great example of why we need some kind of pin rule, that was ridiculous.

 

Anyway, in summation: I felt that all of the RP's were very well done, there was a whole lot of talking though, and what, three matches? By the way, Jay I love the new match announcement format, the fact that you get a teaser of a match or two and the rest (if there are any more) are PM'ed, as you said it keeps the wrestlers on our toes, and as viewers it means at any moment we could be in store for a hell of a match.

[Trevor McManus]

http://www.ocwfed.com/forum/showthread.php?11116-After-Riot-Intreview&p=85047#post85047

[Chris Ryder]

Chris Ryder I will eventually come back for that belt my friend ;).

 

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[Trevor McManus]

LOTUS being on every page is good IMO.

 

Kinda like Evolution. Gives you the feel that they own the show.

 

And them constantly being in your face is annoying, thusly, builds them as heels.

 

I like it personally. It's not like other submissions aren't going up because of them, if you want more people to be noticed, then submit something kick ass and overshadow LOTUS.

[Leon Valentine]

Before I play this match I do not this the ending of Trevors RP should have been him walking up the ramp.. If he was already in the ring gm should have just edited the RP and made it to where Leon had his entrance to the ring and we go. But already know I'm gonna see Trevors pointless re entry to the ring.

 

Trevor's Intro did get cut from the match as he was already in the ring from the rp, the video cuts straight to me xD

 

 

 

Don't like the million appearances with leon and pato. too much going on in one night when you are on every page. Match's were good except for the neverender between pato and cody. Lotus may be shut down here if they keep losing. Looking forward to next week.

 

 

The thing is, back in 2009 people were saying Leon was too much and was on every page, when I stopped we got 2 pages worth of content. This week, all though me and Pato were on most pages. Everything flowed the way it should. I know were not going to please everyone though and people are right to have their own opinions. Good reviews so far let’s keep the discussion going; the boss wants eight pages of worthwhile discussion lol.

 

I would defo say the last two Riot's have been the best ones we have had all year so far. That's because people are really stepping it up.

 

Edit: Just another note, the three finisher rule isn't in effect yet. Needs to be confirmed but right now people can kick out as much as they can.

[Patolomai]

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Smythe DaWonder

The man with a million monikers makes his first appearance on Riot since Lution, bringing it fresh with a new entrance and theme song. The beat and lyrics are tight and a good fit for you. I hope you rock this track for awhile. Smythe starts off doing what he does best in OCW, drawing heat. It seems Smythe may have come to terms with missing the window of opportunity to become 51% share holder of Online Championship Wrestling. But being the cunning villian that Smythe truely is, he implies that he may be able to effect "The Sensational Family" in more diabolic more painful ways...Mainly Mr. Sensations daughter Tiffany and son in Law Nate Ortiz. Quality content as always.

 

Tiberius Dupree

Tiberius Dupree,fellow Riot rookie and my front runner for Rookie Of The Year makes his 2nd appearance on Riot. Following up a Sunday appearance on the birth place of "The Fire" Ambition where he earned a victory over the intellect of LOTUS, Illuminati. Dupree announces a new innovation to Dupree TV. There is no need for his long departed cameraman any more, instead he will be relying on his Dragon Flies to broadcast via any technological device available to them. I like this alot Dupree. Very creative and I am sure this will give us a new and unique look at Dupree in the future. Well played card. Dupree wants to introduce us to part of his family. A wrestling lineage that runs deep...MARIE PIERRE!....Marie Pierre looks an awful lot like Wesley Adams Poe...

 

Wesley Adams Poe

I normally wouldn't comment on my own work or peoples work that I am currently working close with but I couldn't help myself. This angle is FIRE!!! Sorry Dupree...But it is what it is. WAP drops some knowledge about LOTUS Law that I will not get into, that is for OCW to interpet. The question is...Where is Marie Pierre? Does WAP Know? LOTUS? A outside party? Im looking forward to watching this story unfold in the next several weeks.

Dane "Middle Name Money" Xavier

The money man put in work as usual. Dane runs down his slew of bad fortune that has befallen him the past several weeks from Nate to Parker to Trevor to Mayhem. Even his digital artist Justin Rockstar has failed and possibly cost him his focus and opportunity for riches at Lution. I am not sure if Dane felt he needed to test him self but proclaimed he wanted to bring the Monster out of Mayhem and it appears he may have his prayers answered evident by the performance and demeanor of Mayhem as of recent. Dane states he has a status quo and is saving Mayhem for last. I am interested to see where Dane takes us as he has opened a bag of problems as well as enemies as of recent.

[Tiberius Dupree]

Review coming tonight!

 

In the mean time I finally figured out the mystery of who braids Pato's hair.

 

It's LEON!

 

And you can't deny it Leon, we seen how u bribed him with a bucket of KFC. Probably brought him to an all you can buffet to calm him before u braid euro style.

[Cody Storm]

Edit: Just another note, the three finisher rule isn't in effect yet. Needs to be confirmed but right now people can kick out as much as they can.

 

Didn't think it was, but I do think that there needs to be something done about it. That match could easily have ended five minutes or so earlier, and if Pato had won I would have shit a chicken, an angry, man-eating, chicken.