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Imma be tht guy and ask what people think of my recent work...

 

Thoughts?

 

Very mid-cardish. You still haven't broken the glass ceiling. You're always close, but you never manage to break-through. It's enjoyable work, but go further with it. Don't just talk like Jim Jones and Charles Manson. BE Jim Jones and Charles Manson. I would say "but scale it back a little bit". But considering Suda set someone on fire, and Jay performed a re-imagining of "The Passion of the Christ" on air...anything can happen.

 

 

I think they think that we think that they're big names or something. Rookies would have worked so much better. This isn't the nwo, this is the bromans turning up on smackdown.

 

 

I agree. I think the impact would have been greater than just two guys from "the other place". I'm still interested to see where it goes though. Personally, I would have liked to see an invasion of sorts. Have the guys from "TNA" join up under false rookie names, compete for a while, and then during Cody's reveal, the two rookies being played by Wheeler and the D get revealed. You could have even made it so that OCW gets scared as more and more rookies reveal to be members of the other place. Unsure who to trust. Unsure where to turn. It could have made for a great story with a little more planning.

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I agree. I think the impact would have been greater than just two guys from "the other place". I'm still interested to see where it goes though. Personally, I would have liked to see an invasion of sorts. Have the guys from "TNA" join up under false rookie names, compete for a while, and then during Cody's reveal, the two rookies being played by Wheeler and the D get revealed. You could have even made it so that OCW gets scared as more and more rookies reveal to be members of the other place. Unsure who to trust. Unsure where to turn. It could have made for a great story with a little more planning.

 

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Very solid I like the direction of your character since our feud ended.

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The world title storyline seems to be lurching around without any real end game on the horizon. The fact that more and more people are being added means that the storyline feels incredibly diluted given that this is supposed to be the build up for the main event of Wrestlution. This should be personal between Cody and Tobin, and at the moment it feels like too many people are being added to the fray. I get having people on the periphery helping to build shit, but like has been mentioned already, the reveal was a damp squib.

 

As for Trance. Three months ago I didn't enjoy your company or your content (just being honest). Now you seem to have a more positive outlook on stuff you seem to have traded in your whining for just having fun, which makes for a more likeable person on the boards, in parties etc. Your stuff is getting to the point where I actually care about it (just shake Raze up a little and maybe you've got a sleeper match at Lution or something), and this week we had a pretty cool match.

 

I still think you need a cutting edge, but you're definitely on an upward curve and its not just me who thinks it.

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I think Trance's 'look' has a great deal to do with the glass ceiling, as even after 6-7 years, you still look like an Aries tribute, I think you need an entirely new look.
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I think Trance's 'look' has a great deal to do with the glass ceiling, as even after 6-7 years, you still look like an Aries tribute, I think you need an entirely new look.

 

I'm a Skoda to his Lamborghini :(

 

I'm pretty much goin to go for the shaggy evangelistic type look, just can't show up with axe murderer beard and scissor dodging hair just yet...

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As far as the world title scene goes we were thrown a curve ball weeks ago and we've figured out a way to steer things where they need to be. What you are seeing now is called tying up loose ends so that everyone is set on their right path. Like most paintings they look like garbage at the start but by the end you see what the artist wants you to see. So just be patient.
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I'm a Skoda to his Lamborghini :(

 

I'm pretty much goin to go for the shaggy evangelistic type look, just can't show up with axe murderer beard and scissor dodging hair just yet...

 

I'm a Lamborghini? Well, maybe if you're referring to the sheen of a new Lamborghini, then yes. I do shine quite well.

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I don't hate trance Wyatt.
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