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Couple of notes.

 

KKK - This doesn't bother me one bit. Mainly, because it's not real! It's very edgy and you know what, everyone is talking about it. In my eyes, mission accomplished. I can live with this.

 

Jimmy Henry/Sebastian Abbot - I love these guys. Great job Jimmy on getting your character out there. Nice video package with the limited resources in this years game.

 

Tank - Damn you.

 

Unless I missed something because I'm on my phone, there was no ending. After the last match, that was it. Kinda fell flat.

 

Overall, this was a great Turmoil. Everyone did a great job.

 

Parker Stevens is a Jackson Montgomery Guy shirts will be on sale at future OCW events.

 

I giggled at that merch. I was like OH NO HE DIDN'T!

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Watching Turmoil tonight... I skimmed it quickly... Look really good!!!

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Signature 2 - Spear 5 (F) - Stargazer

 

Finisher 1 - Flapjack 2 (F) - The SDW

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My notes:

 

* Daryl Bradley could be a useful addition for RPs. And a belt!

 

* Odessa Ebony, don't like her surname. Is MOM the new thing? Preferred bombshells.

 

* Ron Portman looks smart, makeover seemed quite instant though. Like this section of the show, sort of roundup of events thing.

 

* Finally a match. Not a big fan of women's wrestling. The Roxy Rose CAW looks good though, and I liked the end to the match. A genuine upset.

 

* B17 & Jackson, doing their APA / military buddy thing was cool till Kass showed up then all hell broke loose. Who's responsible for attacking Turmoil's 3 best rookies? Gotta be Trance, you'd think he'd have enough to worry about with Crowe. Maybe this is backlash from the Monster after people didn't rate his CAW?

 

* Strider vs Shelton: Really like Strider, just gets on with it. Even if you don't like his gimmick, gotta admit Shelton can wrestle.

 

* KKK: Lynch Mob? Haha, scared to criticise for fear of what they might come up with next.

 

* Jimmy Henry: Created my whole promo on PS4's ShareFactory & no other software, worth a play with if you have time. Takes a while though. Chuffed with how it came out. Big up to Seb for doing his earlier RP, didn't know about it, it helped everything come together real nice.

 

* Aries: Haha, pissing on any legacy you may have. Brilliant. I love Fat Mac from It's Always Sunny...

 

* Jackson: Well done man, capturing a decent cut-scene can be a painful process (I know). Wouldn't blame you if you used it every week. Loved the entrance attire with the t-shirt & bandages. And what a match, which brings me to...

 

* Tank: Superb debut, well played. Brilliant CAW, brilliant actions. The match itself was a brawl, which is exactly what it should have been. How did it even go on that long, couldn't believe the kick out at 14:30ish. Loved it, match of the night. Nice work on the beating at the end. Just watch, your reversals look high - bit of a hot topic just now.

 

* B17 vs Kassidy: I said it after Riot this week, Kass can wrestle. Dealt with the WOTM quite easily. He looked less injured than B17, and that kinda added to it. 2 dirty pin show finishes in a week?

 

Overall I thought this was a great Turmoil, best I've seen so far. Really encouraging, and I'm super-chuffed to be a part of it.

 

TURMOIL NEXT-GEN ROOKIE TAKEOVER ERA 2k16!

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Just got done rewatching and it was a very rewarding show overall to work on. And it will only get better.

 

Not too sure what I think of the new girls. But once we get up and running with the division things should even up. I've got two bombshells (?) ready to go and I encourage people make some as well.

 

Ron Portman needs to leave the name behind. It's a symbol of the garbage man. Leave it behind and become a wrestler. Not sure how he went from no mic time to his own show.

 

Took a bit for a match. Yet it was a strong match.

 

APA was indeed the inspiration. Big shout out to Kas and Jack. We all worked closely to create this promo and we've been going back and forth building a story I think ppl will like. They are great guys to work with. As for the promo itself lots of fun. I liked it and I'm enjoying experimenting with my writing style to shape a intriguing character. The attack was fun to write. I feel it added some intrigue, that was overall stole by a certain Rookie. More on him later but storyline wise we have some much content and options to run with that eve we don't know the full outcome of this. Maybe it is the monster. I was not kind....

 

I like Matt and Strider. The looks are great. The move sets are solid. I loved the match. It was to the point and that is how a match in the mid card should be.

 

KKK. I've said my bit, now that it's out there I'd like to congratulate on creating such an uproar, that what was intended and it succeeded, great!

 

Jimmy, Jimmy, Jimmy. You stole the show. Welcome to Turmoil. With content like this continue to wear those eyesores because I couldn't care less after that wonderful video. Round of applause. Your character will quickly find a home here.

 

Aries, hahahahahahahahahahahahaa. Are you lovin' it? Are you having it your way?

 

Jackson, mad love for you. Our bromance is unbreakable, until you snap......and don't listen to Sen. Your bald head and full beard is an inspiration to us balding men who can't grow facial hair!

 

Tank, the look. Is 80 percent there. The face looks a bit generic (just me?) otherwise I like him. I don't particularly like the move set as you have a lot of high impact moves in there....the elbow drop sig really looks out of place. I see what your going for but I believe better moves could bring the entire thing together.

 

B17 v Kass is tied 1 to 1. Dirty finish......this is almost as bad as when you hit me square in the nuts you cheater! But I loved the finish, really did.

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I'm so glad Turmoil is starting to come into it's own. All of the guys on the PS4 are great and deserve so much credit. I feel going forward, people like B-17, Jackson, Kass, Jimmy Henry, Tank and Abbot will be the cornerstones of the show. Daryl Fuckface...your face is literally filled with fuck. I hate you. I hate your stupid hair and your stupid mustache. I hate your stupid IWC remarks. I want the Women's Division to get more air time. More RP's and such. It could be a great division for Turmoil with the great minds who are behind it.

 

Judging by this week's Turmoil, I have a feeling Abbott and Henry are going to give us some fantastic feud work. Abbott's promo and his CAW are bloody fantastic. That fucking mustache! And Jimmy Henry? I mean...as everyone's been saying, this guy stole the show with that video. I was dying of laughter simply watching it. This guy is the ultimate underdog if I've ever seen one, and I'm sure has a brilliant time ahead of him here.

 

I got to be honest, I'm really digging Smythe and Ron. The KKK is utterly hilarious, and not because of the name. Smythe being oblivious does. It's what sells the idea and makes it awesome. Ron Portman just reminds me of a poorer version of DDP. An average joe with a big dream, and I like it. It's different. You're not the best. You're not the sexiest. You're just some guy off the street with ambition, and that's good. It sets him apart from everyone else in OCW. Smythe's ideas are always hit or miss. There is no in between, but when they hit, they hit hard.

 

Matt Sheldon...you're my dude. Sometimes your writing leaves something to be desired, but I always enjoy your matches. Always. And even though your writing may not be the best (and it doesn't have to be), you always put in work. No one can take that away from you. Finally, though. Someone got a hold of Sean Strider :P. I hope to see mroe Strider in the coming weeks. These two are always up for a good match.

 

Jackson, Kass and B...you guys are pretty much the future. Great CAW's, great writing and great matches. I haven't played Kass yet, but I've enjoyed every match with B and Jackson. These guys, along with Jimmy, Tank and Abbott are going to carry this show. I really enjoyed the APA style RP. It was well written, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you guys can do and where you can bring this feud.

 

A quick shout out to Trance for my RP. I wouldn't be here without you, man. And yes, Jimmy. The inspiration for the gimmick started with Fat Mac from It's Always Sunny. I also intend on adding a little Dennis in there. I also wanted to be different. Since being a face is near impossible considering no one likes me, I figured being a heel would be easy. The gimmick was easy to think of as well. I thought of Guy Fausto (an awesome OCW legend) and how he made himself stand out with his cowardice. Scared of his own pyro. I didn't want to be like him, so instead of being coward...why not be a slob? Someone utterly disgusting and repulsive. Let's face it, everyone in OCW (almost everyone) wants to be the edgy face/heel. They want to watch shoots or worked shoots and be cool. They want to be bad ass with a ripped physique. Why not be fat ass with no regards for hygiene? And honestly, I'm just here to add content to the show and help people if they need it. Maybe have a little fun with Aries for once instead of being vanilla midget #21.

 

Tank Williams, I love your look. You're a mix of Kevin Owens, and as Parker said; Bam Bam Bigelow. Watching your match, reading your RP's on the boards and the one on the show, it's obvious you're not going anywhere any time soon. You and Jackson will have one hell of a knock down, drag 'em out brawl, and I feel it's the appropriate time to say taht I think maybe it's time to bring the Hardcore Title back to OCW. Give Turmoil some pizzazz. It has a bunch of young and hungry talents. It has the Bombshell Division. Give it something to add some more flavor. Obviously don't give it a weekly defense clause. I think putting the HC Title up between this two would give us a great feud and match.

 

I hope this trend continues guys. We may not have the roster depth of Riot, but we have something. A bunch of potentially great and already great characters who can put on entertaining matches. Here's to next week!

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You know, being someone who's never done this type of thing before and hearing everyone rave on and on about how good your doing and how fun it is to watch you, really makes me feel awesome. I've been in efeds before where everything was based on RPs and to be honest, I'm not that great of a writer. At least this way, I can make up for in game.

 

Mushiness aside, it feels awesome being called the future and I hope everyone on Turmoil can live up to that!

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