Turmoil 123

[Matsuda]

I know you guys are new, but usually after someone writes a five page essay picking at people, this is the part of the threat where you pick out your parts and argue with me. It's how you get discussion you see.

 

I mean I know I'm right, but I'm not God. Feel free to share your opinions. You don't get better in a circle jerk.

[Sophia]

Finally getting a chance to get caught up on some ocw stuffs, including this week's turmoil. Just gonna keep it short and sweet so here's a few things..

 

Nightmare, good to see ya. You seem like a cool guy and the caw is pretty cool so looking forward as always to see where you take the character. As some have mentioned before, hoping you'll be able to match your type of character with skills on the sticks, or at least be able to back it up and run with it if you have losses.

 

Jackson is here and he's picked Daryl Bradley's office as the best spot to watch the show! Just wondering where Bradley has been and what his role, if any, will continue to be on turmoil- hasn't been seen in quite a while. Nice to read of a "Bill Ding and his Appetite" sighting as well. Maybe he can be an employee of the newly founded B-17 Gas Company.....

 

The RP with Madison/dennis and trance was interesting to me because it kind of showed how in-between Dennis Black is... Is he heel? Is he a face? He is certainly impressionable and it's clear that Madison has him wrapped around her finger. But perhaps there is hope for him, as that little interaction with trance may have made him realize exactly what he has been so blind to this whole time? The seed has been planted, perhaps Dennis Black will start thinking with the correct head soon...

 

More later, because I have to finish reading/watching and posting from my phone sucks ^_^

[K.Dangelo]

Did I see a finisher before red ?

[Big Ed]

Not in my match with jacky boy. No early finisher.

 

With Matsuda comments, I don't have much to say because I don't really disagree with you on most on the stuffs. We do have a lot of Biker looking guys, but I believe mine is the only biker gimmick, if that makes sense. I never considered Jackson, B17, or Joe to be bikers. Just a bunch of smaller white dudes that needed a leather jacket to look tough. So I do feel you that some standing out needs to be done. I've got some things in the work to change my look.

 

To nightmare, As a fellow big guy that has lost to smaller guys, I can say that it can be hard to recover from unless you can write it well. Ed's only saving grace is that I had help writing the recovery, and then Dennis, Joe, and Madison (Sophia) really put me over in my loss to Dennis at Lution. I appreciate that more than they'll understand. Not everyone is going to do that for you. But maybe nightmare has the skill to back it up, we will see. I'm rooting for you.

 

The only thing I really disagreed about was Joe. A lot of us feel that Joe has the look of a star, even with the leather jacket. He's got Sensation approval. Or he did at one point. A lot of us think Joe is a step or two away from being one of the big players on Turmoil. He's just had some things work against him. For starters, he started getting interested in the TV title when Dennis got hot, and lost to Dennis 3 times in a span of like 2 months. He didn't do well against Bray and then lost to nightmare this week. I think all he really needs is a style change. I think Joe needs to focus more on being a ground guy. While the high flying stuff is cool, I think it gets you in trouble. With your new finisher, take a week or two to perfect your style and become more of a technical guy? You've got the figure four now. with Jimmy gone, that spot as Turmoil's number two face is yours for the taking if you want it.

 

As for the black and white match. I really like wat you wrote about the match being close, but I don't think it was as you close as your character thinks it was :( little black has a way of making his opponents look like stars. But now that he's training with Riot guys and chasing after the great white buffalo, that might stop and he'll return here with some savagery, and much less interested in looking out for folks. But I'm hoping your style of match appearance above all else doesn't change, caramel.

 

Malu is a monster. And I like both Jackson and kass, but I feel like he molested and then put y'all over to prove sensations point about steel sharpening steel. Not dissing either of you; I think malu would have me in red before I got him in yellow. But those two matches show thaT turmoil has a long way to go.

 

The ending should have been the beginning , to me. But maybe it was out there because kass and malu wrote nothing for post match?

 

I hope we see more bombshell x as she looks for a midget under the ring.

 

I know a lot of people on the site had doubts when turmoil started a women's division and that it would just be on playing local matches with Dennis and I. But she's proven that she's all about the division and wants to work with all. Leon last month, willow and bombshell x this month. While we may be the B show, hands down -The women are one of the few things Turmoil does better than the A show. Sophia carries the title well and represents Turmoil. But once I create a biker broad for Ed, all tatted up and shit, it's over, if willow don't beat you first.

 

Last point. Rather than kass vs Jackson, I still think the money match is still a three way with B17. Like this episode, more of the feud was with b17 vs Jackson, yet Jackson is defending against kass. All we needed was a different match type for a three way. But maybe that's just me. Im very much old school. Title feuds should mostly be a face vs heel. While we all like these two guys as peeps, the story of one heel defending against a heel with even more locker room heat is hard to pull off. We still have two weeks to go, but as Jack said earlier, it's easier to be invested in TV title match, and the match ain't even official yet.

 

Wow. Went longer than planned. Don't take any of dis personal, just Adding to he discussion.

[Matsuda]

Not going to try to cut up a quote because I'm on my phone, but this is to Ed.

 

I've really got nothing against Joe, like I said I'm coming into this show with just about 0 knowledge on almost everyone involved here. So without bias, having not spoken to you guys or heard any plans and based solely on his match and short promo this week, I had assumed he was an alt. Like I said in my review, his caw doesn't look bad, it's just very plain. Well made but doesn't stand out. I'm glad I apparently lot a fire under him, but it's like I told Jay, if you don't have much character, you better be winning like a young Cody Storm. If you've got neither, then it becomes hard to come back every week.

 

I also agree with you on the Kass Malu match. That's a very Nate thing to do :P

[Mr.Sensation]

Not in my match with jacky boy. No early finisher.

 

With Matsuda comments, I don't have much to say because I don't really disagree with you on most on the stuffs. We do have a lot of Biker looking guys, but I believe mine is the only biker gimmick, if that makes sense. I never considered Jackson, B17, or Joe to be bikers. Just a bunch of smaller white dudes that needed a leather jacket to look tough. So I do feel you that some standing out needs to be done. I've got some things in the work to change my look.

 

To nightmare, As a fellow big guy that has lost to smaller guys, I can say that it can be hard to recover from unless you can write it well. Ed's only saving grace is that I had help writing the recovery, and then Dennis, Joe, and Madison (Sophia) really put me over in my loss to Dennis at Lution. I appreciate that more than they'll understand. Not everyone is going to do that for you. But maybe nightmare has the skill to back it up, we will see. I'm rooting for you.

 

The only thing I really disagreed about was Joe. A lot of us feel that Joe has the look of a star, even with the leather jacket. He's got Sensation approval. Or he did at one point. A lot of us think Joe is a step or two away from being one of the big players on Turmoil. He's just had some things work against him. For starters, he started getting interested in the TV title when Dennis got hot, and lost to Dennis 3 times in a span of like 2 months. He didn't do well against Bray and then lost to nightmare this week. I think all he really needs is a style change. I think Joe needs to focus more on being a ground guy. While the high flying stuff is cool, I think it gets you in trouble. With your new finisher, take a week or two to perfect your style and become more of a technical guy? You've got the figure four now. with Jimmy gone, that spot as Turmoil's number two face is yours for the taking if you want it.

 

As for the black and white match. I really like wat you wrote about the match being close, but I don't think it was as you close as your character thinks it was :( little black has a way of making his opponents look like stars. But now that he's training with Riot guys and chasing after the great white buffalo, that might stop and he'll return here with some savagery, and much less interested in looking out for folks. But I'm hoping your style of match appearance above all else doesn't change, caramel.

 

Malu is a monster. And I like both Jackson and kass, but I feel like he molested and then put y'all over to prove sensations point about steel sharpening steel. Not dissing either of you; I think malu would have me in red before I got him in yellow. But those two matches show thaT turmoil has a long way to go.

 

The ending should have been the beginning , to me. But maybe it was out there because kass and malu wrote nothing for post match?

 

I hope we see more bombshell x as she looks for a midget under the ring.

 

I know a lot of people on the site had doubts when turmoil started a women's division and that it would just be on playing local matches with Dennis and I. But she's proven that she's all about the division and wants to work with all. Leon last month, willow and bombshell x this month. While we may be the B show, hands down -The women are one of the few things Turmoil does better than the A show. Sophia carries the title well and represents Turmoil. But once I create a biker broad for Ed, all tatted up and shit, it's over, if willow don't beat you first.

 

Last point. Rather than kass vs Jackson, I still think the money match is still a three way with B17. Like this episode, more of the feud was with b17 vs Jackson, yet Jackson is defending against kass. All we needed was a different match type for a three way. But maybe that's just me. Im very much old school. Title feuds should mostly be a face vs heel. While we all like these two guys as peeps, the story of one heel defending against a heel with even more locker room heat is hard to pull off. We still have two weeks to go, but as Jack said earlier, it's easier to be invested in TV title match, and the match ain't even official yet.

 

Wow. Went longer than planned. Don't take any of dis personal, just Adding to he discussion.

 

Criticisms aren't ever personal, unless its Parker because he was raised by wolves. At this juncture we function as both the lockeroom and the fans so when we get to see things we like or we talk about things we don't it uplifts the whole product because the more watchable it is as a whole, the more invested people get, more investment=more discussion = everyone going over.

[Dennis Black]

Mugen is a nice man, letting you post from a dungeon and what not.

[Mr.Sensation]

Mugen is a nice man, letting you post from a dungeon and what not.

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[Kassidy Hayes]

I would disagree on that ed, Nate and I was close through and through

 

I feel like B-17 and Jackson want B-17 and Jackson, they don't really want me around, shrug. Id rather not do another multiman match, id drop out and just work a fued with someone like Bray and help him get over into main title picture. I'm more tweener then heel and I tried painting kass in that light, with the promo right after lution and Jackson getting a free attack on kass. Kass fighting to give the people Kass Vs b-17 for the title. but yea

 

I have been enjoying gentlemen jack, dude it pretty hilarious.

 

Haven't watched the full show, too much photoshop and capturing

[B-17]

I would disagree on that ed, Nate and I was close through and through

 

I feel like B-17 and Jackson want B-17 and Jackson, they don't really want me around, shrug. Id rather not do another multiman match, id drop out and just work a fued with someone like Bray and help him get over into main title picture. I'm more tweener then heel and I tried painting kass in that light, with the promo right after lution and Jackson getting a free attack on kass. Kass fighting to give the people Kass Vs b-17 for the title. but yea

 

I have been enjoying gentlemen jack, dude it pretty hilarious.

 

Haven't watched the full show, too much photoshop and capturing

 

 

Swing and a miss.